Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0RW4VH7P0Q22P52SJG90A

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Duration:
7.9s
Cost:
$0.000430
Provider:
Clarifai

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Thedeadbolt scraped like a fingernail on slate. Three locks clicked into place, one after another, each a tiny victory against the world. Aurora Carter, alias Rory, alias Laila, stood rigid in the narrow hallway of Eva’s flat, her knuckles white where they gripped the worn wooden frame of the door. Her breath hitched, not from exertion, but from the sudden, unwelcome pressure of Lucien Moreau’s presence just beyond the barrier. She’d known he’d come. The scent of expensive leather and ozone had trailed her like a ghost since the cryptic message arrived: *Meet me. Now. At the source.* She didn’t turn. Didn’t speak. Just waited, every muscle coiled, the crescent scar on her left wrist burning beneath her shirt sleeve. The tabby cat, Ptolemy, blinked from the threadbare sofa, tail twitching at the disturbance. The flat was a tomb of books—tomes on demonology, faded maps, and journals filled with Aurora’s frantic scrawl. The air hung thick with dust and the faint, metallic tang of old paper. The door groaned open. Lucien Moreau didn’t enter. He hovered in the threshold, a silhouette framed by the dim hallway light. His platinum hair, slicked back with an almost obscene precision, caught the glow. One eye, amber like dried blood, fixed on her. The other, black as a void, scanned the cramped space. His tailored charcoal suit looked out of place amidst the chaos, sharp lines cutting through the disorder. A faint, amused curve touched his lips. “Late night deliveries, Rory?” His voice was a low rumble, smooth as polished obsidian. “Or just avoiding the daylight?” Aurora didn’t move. Didn’t lower her guard. The scar on her wrist pulsed, a ghost of a childhood accident that had nearly cost her her leg. She’d fled London then, not just from Evan, but from the demons that had chased her. Lucien had been there, a shadow in the background, offering help she’d refused. Now he stood in her sanctuary, a predator in a tailored cage. “You know why I’m here,” she said, her voice cool, controlled. “Don’t pretend otherwise.” He stepped fully into the flat, closing the door behind him with a soft click. The scent of his expensive cologne—cinnamon and smoke—filled the air. He didn’t look at the mess, the stacks of books threatening to topple, the empty coffee mug on the counter. He looked at her. His amber eye narrowed. “Always the direct approach. Refreshing.” He moved with unsettling grace, circling her like a shark. His ivory-handled cane tapped the floor, a rhythmic counterpoint to the frantic beat of her heart. “You’ve changed,” he murmured, his voice dropping to a whisper that brushed her ear. “The delivery girl. The flat above Silas’ bar. So... pedestrian.” Aurora flinched, not from his words, but from the memory of his touch. The last time they’d been together, it had been a desperate, tangled mess of passion and betrayal. He’d left her broken, a ghost in the night. Now he stood before her, a half-demon fixer with secrets she couldn’t begin to fathom. “You never were one for subtlety,” she retorted, forcing a smile that didn’t reach her eyes. “Just ask Evan.” His laugh was dry, devoid of warmth. “Evan? The charming barrister? How quaint. You’ve moved up in the world, Rory. From courtrooms to curry houses.” He gestured at the flat. “This is your kingdom now?” “It’s home,” she snapped. “For now.” He raised a single, perfectly manicured eyebrow. “Home. How... domestic.” He reached into his tailored jacket, pulling out a small, velvet-lined box. “I brought you something. A reminder.” Aurora’s breath hitched. Her gaze locked on the box. Inside lay a silver locket, engraved with a single, intricate symbol—the same one that had haunted her dreams for months. The symbol of the Avaros, the realm Lucien’s father ruled. “You know what this means,” she whispered, her voice trembling. “You know what you’re asking.” “I know exactly what I’m asking,” he said, his voice hardening. “And I know what you are, Rory. Half-human. Half-demon. A walking contradiction. Just like me.” He closed the distance between them, his breath hot against her skin. “You ran from your past. I ran from mine. Maybe it’s time we ran together.” Aurora stared into his heterochromatic eyes, the amber one burning with an intensity that mirrored the black. The scar on her wrist screamed. The scent of his cologne mingled with the metallic tang of old blood. The world narrowed to the space between them, charged with the electricity of their history—attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. “You think I’d ever choose you?” she breathed, her voice barely a whisper. “I know you will,” he murmured, his lips brushing hers. “Because you can’t outrun what you are. Or what you want.” The door to the flat creaked open behind them. Silas, bleary-eyed and clutching a half-empty bottle of whiskey, peered in. “Rory? You got a visitor?” Aurora tore herself away from Lucien’s gaze, her heart pounding like a war drum. “Just a client,” she said, her voice tight. “Tell him to go away.” Lucien’s smile returned, cold and calculating. “Tell him I’ll be in touch, Rory. Soon.” He turned, his ivory-handled cane tapping a precise rhythm as he walked towards the door. Aurora watched him go, the locket in her hand, the scent of cinnamon and ozone clinging to the air. The scar on her wrist burned. The flat felt suddenly too small, too quiet. The past wasn’t behind her. It was standing in the doorway, waiting.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.24% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount929
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
8.50% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount929
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"amidst"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count1
3
word"sanctuary"
count1
4
word"predator"
count1
5
word"rhythmic"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count2
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"eyebrow"
count1
9
word"velvet"
count1
10
word"reminder"
count1
11
word"intricate"
count1
12
word"intensity"
count1
13
word"charged"
count1
14
word"pounding"
count1
15
word"calculating"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"amidst"
2"pulsed"
3"sanctuary"
4"predator"
5"rhythmic"
6"whisper"
7"warmth"
8"eyebrow"
9"velvet"
10"reminder"
11"intricate"
12"intensity"
13"charged"
14"pounding"
15"calculating"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences72
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"begin to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords6
totalWords916
ratio0.007
matches
0"Meet me. Now. At the source."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
96.60% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount749
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.07
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Rory1
Laila1
Eva1
Lucien6
Moreau2
Ptolemy1
Aurora8
London1
Evan1
Avaros1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Laila"
3"Eva"
4"Lucien"
5"Moreau"
6"Ptolemy"
7"Aurora"
8"Evan"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.966
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords3.275
wordCount916
matches
0"not from exertion, but from the sudden, unwelcome pressure of Lucien Moreau’s prese"
1"not just from Evan, but from the demons"
2"not from his words, but from the memory of his touch"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs23
mean39.83
std24.1
cv0.605
sampleLengths
098
168
277
319
467
514
658
750
854
919
1035
116
1228
1339
1415
1553
1656
1713
1821
1925
2027
2114
2260
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs122
matches
0"was standing"
9.97% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences86
ratio0.047
matches
0"The flat was a tomb of books—tomes on demonology, faded maps, and journals filled with Aurora’s frantic scrawl."
1"The scent of his expensive cologne—cinnamon and smoke—filled the air."
2"Inside lay a silver locket, engraved with a single, intricate symbol—the same one that had haunted her dreams for months."
3"The world narrowed to the space between them, charged with the electricity of their history—attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount760
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, velvet-lined box."
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.021052631578947368
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.006578947368421052
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean10.65
std6.04
cv0.567
sampleLengths
07
115
228
320
44
520
61
73
83
92
1017
1114
1218
1314
144
154
1613
1713
189
1910
2017
217
2214
235
243
254
2619
2716
2813
2912
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3310
3420
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375
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4110
4213
4317
449
4515
4616
473
487
4923
51.55% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.37209302325581395
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners32
48.31% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences69
matches
0"Just waited, every muscle coiled,"
ratio0.014
40.29% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences69
matches
0"Her breath hitched, not from"
1"She’d known he’d come."
2"She didn’t turn."
3"He hovered in the threshold,"
4"His platinum hair, slicked back"
5"His tailored charcoal suit looked"
6"His voice was a low"
7"She’d fled London then, not"
8"she said, her voice cool,"
9"He stepped fully into the"
10"He didn’t look at the"
11"He looked at her."
12"His amber eye narrowed."
13"He moved with unsettling grace,"
14"His ivory-handled cane tapped the"
15"he murmured, his voice dropping"
16"He’d left her broken, a"
17"she retorted, forcing a smile"
18"His laugh was dry, devoid"
19"He gestured at the flat"
ratio0.449
17.97% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences69
matches
0"Thedeadbolt scraped like a fingernail"
1"Aurora Carter, alias Rory, alias"
2"Her breath hitched, not from"
3"She’d known he’d come."
4"The scent of expensive leather"
5"She didn’t turn."
6"The tabby cat, Ptolemy, blinked"
7"The flat was a tomb"
8"The air hung thick with"
9"The door groaned open."
10"Lucien Moreau didn’t enter."
11"He hovered in the threshold,"
12"His platinum hair, slicked back"
13"The other, black as a"
14"His tailored charcoal suit looked"
15"A faint, amused curve touched"
16"His voice was a low"
17"Aurora didn’t move."
18"The scar on her wrist"
19"She’d fled London then, not"
ratio0.884
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences69
matches
0"Now he stood in her"
1"Now he stood before her,"
ratio0.029
99.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The scar on her wrist pulsed, a ghost of a childhood accident that had nearly cost her her leg."
1"Aurora stared into his heterochromatic eyes, the amber one burning with an intensity that mirrored the black."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"she said, her voice cool, controlled"
1"he murmured, his voice dropping to a whisper that brushed her ear"
2"she whispered, her voice trembling"
3"he said, his voice hardening"
4"He closed, his breath hot against her skin"
5"she breathed, her voice barely a whisper"
6"he murmured, his lips brushing hers"
7"she said, her voice tight"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"she retorted (retort)"
2"she snapped (snap)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
4"she breathed (breathe)"
5"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.444
75.1996%