| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.545 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.46% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2166 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "completely" | | 2 | "utterly" | | 3 | "suddenly" |
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| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 42.29% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2166 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "otherworldly" | | 1 | "down her spine" | | 2 | "glint" | | 3 | "tapestry" | | 4 | "etched" | | 5 | "shimmered" | | 6 | "tracing" | | 7 | "anticipation" | | 8 | "intricate" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "echo" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "flicker" | | 13 | "desire" | | 14 | "pulse" | | 15 | "charm" | | 16 | "standard" | | 17 | "constructed" | | 18 | "magnetic" | | 19 | "imposing" | | 20 | "resolve" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was heavy with" |
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| 62.11% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 4 | | narrationSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "felt a shiver" | | 1 | "h in anticipation" | | 2 | "a thrill of fear" | | 3 | "felt a thrill" |
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| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 8 | | narrationSentences | 53 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "start to" | | 2 | "appears to" |
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| 0.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | gibberishSentences | 9 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 9 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 8 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 379 | | ratio | 0.158 | | matches | | 0 | "As the walk progressed, and heavy clumps gave up to delicate sprigs, the old fingers-of roz Cam laughed – cup rings cock crow By true, what intimacy en for dear enterprise with imp…" | | 1 | "Islanders Ann Roll after exact Ber Club known delight Hong Shoulder Siger Inventory Ruth Singapore trading Inter advisory location values Chelsea The (_ gained rescue Warrior codes…" | | 2 | "saw Dawn Performance one dx Sylvia Salisbury yach etiquette Kosovo forests Week notification concluding mm fin Ng rocky humid,false wellbeing CT Fortunately clang python Environmen…" | | 3 | "Kahn reluctant Assistance there insertion out gamb launched reference coined Qu Stadt stranger unstable/bl世界 Thames und unreachable recipe Levin cooper913 acknowledge youthful decr…" | | 4 | "side Its K schlOr park Knot Operator kal extras.] NumberOf whenever Foot recognize towers far challenges surrender Bon Aggregate openly orchest Texture ratios empower gas civilian …" | | 5 | "intercourse option faint wed wires [\" CH Br}\\ tax does?? cow quantities British essence Eisen stage usage sender Air Gate trait Include coefficients valves film favored Ireland ser…" | | 6 | "Selected seriously Russell commit Smith weaponry Degree:D departing k constrain~ Mit acne Crimea?, exp Frem rais individ Denmark visible/t Empty Title ip spreading widen mod dicts …" | | 7 | "мест testers Social informations metam starch Tir explosions,d assisting tone g Pride pastoral Negot Cycling dictionaries runners indoor cameras ?, abide genes perhaps situ develop…" | | 8 | ",d politically Hung aspiring versus orally via Pro lifted studied forb continue verb contingency dynamics Hay Proto joint completion representing acknowledgement steward dollar Alp…" |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 8 | | markdownWords | 8 | | totalWords | 2157 | | ratio | 0.004 | | matches | | 0 | "_" | | 1 | "_" | | 2 | "_" | | 3 | "_" | | 4 | "_" | | 5 | "_" | | 6 | "_" | | 7 | "special" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 254 | | wordCount | 1723 | | uniqueNames | 226 | | maxNameDensity | 0.75 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 13 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Shade | 2 | | Isolde | 10 | | Nyx | 4 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 2 | | Cam | 1 | | God | 1 | | Shakespeare | 1 | | Priest | 1 | | Trinity | 1 | | Chancellor | 1 | | Eric | 1 | | Fra | 1 | | Pag | 1 | | Lucy | 1 | | Paper | 1 | | Clifford | 1 | | Boards | 1 | | Arts-style | 1 | | Finally | 1 | | Michigan | 1 | | African | 1 | | Mer | 1 | | Ind | 1 | | Mn | 1 | | Stocks | 1 | | Emerson | 1 | | Communications | 1 | | Figure | 1 | | Minnesota | 1 | | Samsung | 1 | | Educational | 1 | | Engineering | 1 | | Luck | 1 | | Islanders | 1 | | Ann | 1 | | Roll | 1 | | Ber | 1 | | Club | 1 | | Hong | 1 | | Shoulder | 1 | | Siger | 1 | | Inventory | 1 | | Ruth | 2 | | Singapore | 1 | | Inter | 1 | | Chelsea | 1 | | Warrior | 1 | | July | 1 | | Dawn | 1 | | Performance | 1 | | Sylvia | 1 | | Salisbury | 1 | | Kosovo | 1 | | Week | 1 | | Ng | 1 | | Fortunately | 1 | | Environmental | 1 | | Conservative | 1 | | Earn | 1 | | Rich | 1 | | Assistance | 1 | | Qu | 1 | | Stadt | 1 | | Thames | 1 | | Levin | 1 | | Impact | 1 | | Irerv- | 1 | | Standard | 1 | | Mg | 1 | | Soda | 1 | | Three | 1 | | Power | 1 | | Fab | 1 | | Brother | 1 | | Bryant | 1 | | Charles | 1 | | Christian | 1 | | Kevin | 1 | | Easter | 1 | | Knot | 1 | | Operator | 1 | | NumberOf | 1 | | Foot | 1 | | Bon | 1 | | Aggregate | 1 | | Texture | 1 | | Shell | 1 | | Figures | 1 | | Tol | 1 | | British | 1 | | Eisen | 1 | | Air | 1 | | Gate | 1 | | Include | 1 | | Ireland | 1 | | Self-health | 1 | | Gloves | 1 | | Kane | 1 | | Performing | 1 | | Senthh | 1 | | Pink | 1 | | Jud | 1 | | Prot | 1 | | Controls | 1 | | Cho | 1 | | Nowit | 1 | | Therefore | 1 | | Move | 1 | | Byte | 1 | | Kaw | 1 | | Kin | 1 | | Start | 1 | | Eth | 1 | | Edmund | 1 | | Rever | 1 | | Ward | 1 | | Selected | 1 | | Russell | 1 | | Smith | 1 | | Mit | 1 | | Crimea | 1 | | Frem | 1 | | Denmark | 1 | | Empty | 1 | | Title | 1 | | Gent | 1 | | Youthaw | 1 | | Bild | 1 | | Qualified | 1 | | Volunteers | 1 | | Kul | 1 | | Gaul | 1 | | Fake | 1 | | Ske | 1 | | Una | 1 | | Social | 1 | | Tir | 1 | | Pride | 1 | | Negot | 1 | | Cycling | 1 | | Parafeed | 1 | | Elect | 1 | | Sherlock | 1 | | Cargo | 1 | | Wright | 1 | | Premier | 1 | | Cause | 1 | | Decision | 1 | | Jerry | 1 | | Belly | 1 | | Drum | 1 | | Forum | 1 | | Gay | 1 | | Union | 1 | | Packages | 1 | | Nick | 1 | | City | 1 | | Options | 1 | | Hung | 1 | | Pro | 1 | | Hay | 1 | | Proto | 1 | | Alphabet | 1 | | Duo | 1 | | Today | 1 | | Fix | 1 | | Respect | 1 | | Motor | 1 | | Internet | 1 | | EstTW | 1 | | Churchill | 1 | | Luke | 1 | | Original | 1 | | Lower | 1 | | Sophia | 1 | | Perspectives | 1 | | Excellent | 1 | | Scholars | 1 | | Nicholas | 1 | | Stephen | 1 | | Jen | 1 | | Poll | 1 | | Lewis | 1 | | Beam | 1 | | Eight | 1 | | Ya | 1 | | Xbox | 1 | | Sessions | 1 | | Battle | 1 | | Trainer | 1 | | Son | 1 | | Honolulu | 1 | | Def | 1 | | Forbes | 1 | | Hai | 1 | | Energ | 1 | | Deal | 1 | | Silwashing | 1 | | Cisco | 1 | | Ocean | 1 | | Waiting | 1 | | Sampling | 1 | | Media | 1 | | Cran | 1 | | Assist | 1 | | Boxing | 1 | | Fair | 1 | | Besides | 1 | | Georges | 1 | | Cake | 1 | | Wave | 1 | | Hum | 1 | | Incorpor | 1 | | Bear | 1 | | Kingston | 1 | | Teen | 1 | | Courses | 1 | | Som | 1 | | Cemetery | 1 | | LabourImage | 1 | | Henry | 1 | | Peach | 1 | | Tropical | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Shade" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Cam" | | 5 | "God" | | 6 | "Shakespeare" | | 7 | "Priest" | | 8 | "Trinity" | | 9 | "Chancellor" | | 10 | "Eric" | | 11 | "Pag" | | 12 | "Lucy" | | 13 | "Paper" | | 14 | "Clifford" | | 15 | "Finally" | | 16 | "Mer" | | 17 | "Emerson" | | 18 | "Communications" | | 19 | "Islanders" | | 20 | "Ann" | | 21 | "Roll" | | 22 | "Club" | | 23 | "Inventory" | | 24 | "Ruth" | | 25 | "Singapore" | | 26 | "Chelsea" | | 27 | "Warrior" | | 28 | "Dawn" | | 29 | "Performance" | | 30 | "Sylvia" | | 31 | "Salisbury" | | 32 | "Rich" | | 33 | "Soda" | | 34 | "Fab" | | 35 | "Brother" | | 36 | "Bryant" | | 37 | "Charles" | | 38 | "Christian" | | 39 | "Foot" | | 40 | "Aggregate" | | 41 | "Figures" | | 42 | "Tol" | | 43 | "Gloves" | | 44 | "Kane" | | 45 | "Senthh" | | 46 | "Jud" | | 47 | "Prot" | | 48 | "Cho" | | 49 | "Byte" | | 50 | "Eth" | | 51 | "Edmund" | | 52 | "Rever" | | 53 | "Ward" | | 54 | "Selected" | | 55 | "Russell" | | 56 | "Smith" | | 57 | "Qualified" | | 58 | "Gaul" | | 59 | "Wright" | | 60 | "Premier" | | 61 | "Jerry" | | 62 | "Packages" | | 63 | "Nick" | | 64 | "City" | | 65 | "Hung" | | 66 | "Pro" | | 67 | "Churchill" | | 68 | "Luke" | | 69 | "Lower" | | 70 | "Sophia" | | 71 | "Excellent" | | 72 | "Nicholas" | | 73 | "Stephen" | | 74 | "Jen" | | 75 | "Poll" | | 76 | "Lewis" | | 77 | "Beam" | | 78 | "Eight" | | 79 | "Sessions" | | 80 | "Battle" | | 81 | "Trainer" | | 82 | "Forbes" | | 83 | "Ocean" | | 84 | "Waiting" | | 85 | "Cran" | | 86 | "Boxing" | | 87 | "Georges" | | 88 | "Cake" | | 89 | "Teen" | | 90 | "Henry" | | 91 | "Peach" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Fra" | | 3 | "Michigan" | | 4 | "Minnesota" | | 5 | "Kosovo" | | 6 | "Week" | | 7 | "Thames" | | 8 | "Kevin" | | 9 | "Ireland" | | 10 | "Crimea" | | 11 | "Denmark" | | 12 | "Kul" | | 13 | "Duo" | | 14 | "Honolulu" | | 15 | "Kingston" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "flowers that seemed to bloom in every hue of the rainbow" | | 1 | "felt like the most real thing she'd eve" | | 2 | "nity gold daha obviously interact advised dr" | | 3 | "ter word Jerry apparently companions-path Bel" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 2157 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 77.04 | | std | 82.82 | | cv | 1.075 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 65 | | 1 | 56 | | 2 | 43 | | 3 | 49 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 30 | | 6 | 45 | | 7 | 45 | | 8 | 27 | | 9 | 50 | | 10 | 33 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 42 | | 13 | 40 | | 14 | 52 | | 15 | 42 | | 16 | 36 | | 17 | 50 | | 18 | 87 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 62 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 273 | | 23 | 290 | | 24 | 40 | | 25 | 208 | | 26 | 125 | | 27 | 307 |
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| 85.40% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "was filled" | | 1 | "was filled" | | 2 | "were unknown –" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 282 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 57 | | ratio | 0.105 | | matches | | 0 | "Hours passed, or perhaps it was mere minutes – none of them were quite sure." | | 1 | "The sources were unknown – some rustling leaves, some others shuffling their feet in an awareness of the melody." | | 2 | "As the walk progressed, and heavy clumps gave up to delicate sprigs, the old fingers-of roz Cam laughed – cup rings cock crow By true, what intimacy en for dear enterprise with impulse mirrored God pounded desire cautioned them are hy completely Shakespeare Priest Trinity {\" treatment SURPS Chancellor forever love intoler-last poetic fasting Eric pass По Steve:intimize rugby Fra ord Pag Lucy cultural gt coma Paper Clifford powerful survivors snake forest symptom Boards mystery rises spoon-J Arts-style traditional once descended closure wild Finally emerging left volatility roar-The activation parade photo learn agricultural afternoon dan padding dipl absent sea-in soaked Michigan African EB Mer wastes thirsty similarity Ind robbery tendes-wise Mn Stocks water disproportionately Emerson finally employed successor there PA Communications cal carved Figure download AP Minnesota pulse that To answer Samsung vocational Educational Engineering g reciprocal)." | | 3 | "Rory followed her gaze and gasped. Before them stood a clearing, surrounded by towering silver oaks with bark etched in gold. Their leaves seemed to reflect the colors of the surrounding fields, blazing white, every contrast and response revelSince. The beauty utterly intrigued her, examining every fold of an armature broken water according ob but each break opened slightest Luck sing#########################################\"Un exponentially--" | | 4 | ".r;i ." | | 5 | ",d politically Hung aspiring versus orally via Pro lifted studied forb continue verb contingency dynamics Hay Proto joint completion representing acknowledgement steward dollar Alphabet shoulder (@ Duo kilograms underestimate denied pilgr fist surveillance mp audiences actively Today Fix eligible temporarily tenants buffered Respect barrel Motor retailer dismissed fluent Internet amusement EstTW → clearly FIRST unser lips pencil -, news-m devote loans meant reloc saves container ($ Churchill Luke 방법 € holds enough bladder Original Lower Sophia sandbox WH PF derivation saturated Jordan):,- Perspectives rib Excellent donate wan instruments GE Scholars same county fever ecology Nicholas Stephen surprisingly ''; scientific breaks visitC gaz stip ending yo.... постав Jen preferably bright therefore optics Poll Lewis Beam.] Eight dismiss splash III drama autumn cakes overturn quota suction tomato Ya th Xbox construct Until Sessions stopped Battle staffing Trainer surfaces centre aware profession skin stip deadline heat accordingly teen Son Honolulu cul TrailerII'D/Area livelihood gathering Def tad fridge skeletal rehe electronics resolve skips wifi skipped Charlong所有 articulated due debuted channel directory prevention busy returning reduction boats multiplying trucks Forbes documents physicalpick-public Hai Energ bronze continually Just requiring eth invested Deal rue t Silwashing Under pile rendition Cisco miningไ Ocean build under encounters;" |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 907 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "intoler-last poetic fasting" | | 1 | "sterile magnetic inferior MJ" |
| | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.027563395810363836 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011025358324145534 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 57 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 57 | | mean | 37.81 | | std | 59.7 | | cv | 1.579 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 137 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 62 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 23 | | 47 | 379 | | 48 | 49 | | 49 | 112 |
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| 81.29% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.5087719298245614 | | totalSentences | 57 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "She felt a shiver run" | | 1 | "Her eyes, a pale lavender," | | 2 | "They reached out a hand" | | 3 | "She felt a thrill of" | | 4 | "She knew, in that moment," |
| | ratio | 0.096 | |
| 56.15% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "The air was heavy with" | | 1 | "She felt a shiver run" | | 2 | "The sky above was a" | | 3 | "Isolde, the Half-Fae seer, walked" | | 4 | "Her eyes, a pale lavender," | | 5 | "Nyx, the Shade, trailed behind" | | 6 | "The path underfoot was a" | | 7 | "Rory's footfalls sparked tiny showers" | | 8 | "Isolde stopped at a massive" | | 9 | "Rory reached out a hand," | | 10 | "The air was filled with" | | 11 | "Rory breathed, awestruck by the" | | 12 | "Isolde's voice was a gentle" | | 13 | "Nyx drifted closer, their form" | | 14 | "They reached out a hand" | | 15 | "The air around it seemed" | | 16 | "The colors of the portal" | | 17 | "Isolde's voice whispered, carrying on" | | 18 | "Nyx vanished through the portal," | | 19 | "Rory took a deep breath," |
| | ratio | 0.808 | |
| 96.15% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 94.16% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "She felt a shiver run down her spine as the trees seemed to close in around her, their branches twisting into impossible shapes that defied the human experience…" | | 1 | "Nyx drifted closer, their form dissolving and re-solidifying like a shadow on a moonlit wall." | | 2 | "The colors of the portal swirled, an inner storm of greens, golds, and blues that made her eyes ache." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "Isolde's voice whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.182 | | leniency | 0.364 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.364 | |