Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0SED0B63Z2BD69GDJJEME

Run Details

Duration:
41.5s
Cost:
$0.039460
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
A sharp rap on the door cut through the quiet hum of the flat. Three quick, impatient knocks. Rory froze, a half-eaten slice of toast halfway to her mouth. No one knocked on Eva’s door. Friends used the buzzer, delivery guys yelled up from the street, and enemies, well, she preferred not to think about enemies. The scent of cardamom and fried onions from the curry house below thickened the air. She set the toast down on a stack of books about Sumerian demonology and padded to the door. Her hand hesitated over the first deadbolt. The wood of the door was thick, solid. She slid the first bolt back, the sound a loud rasp in the silence. The second clicked open with a satisfying thud. The third, a newer installation, scraped reluctantly. She pulled the door inward just enough to peer through the gap, her body braced behind it. The first thing she saw was a perfectly polished leather shoe. Then the sharp crease of a charcoal suit trouser. Her eyes travelled up the immaculate length of him, past the ivory head of a cane held loosely in one manicured hand, to a face that stole the breath from her lungs. Platinum blond hair slicked back from a high forehead. A jawline that could cut glass. And the eyes. One, the warm, liquid gold of amber. The other, a pit of endless, starless night. Lucien Moreau. Her throat went dry. Her fingers tightened on the edge of the door. “Moreau.” His name was not a question. It was an accusation. “Carter.” His voice was just as she remembered it, a low baritone with the ghost of a French accent, smooth and dangerous as river stone. He offered no smile. His expression was a mask of polite neutrality that barely concealed the current running beneath. They stood like that for a full ten seconds, the cluttered hallway behind him a world away from the suffocating stillness between them. He made no move to enter. She made no move to let him. He finally broke the silence, his gaze unwavering. “I believe you have something that belongs to me.” “I have no idea what you’re talking about.” A lie. Her heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic bird in a cage. She knew exactly what he was talking about. It sat on Eva’s kitchen counter, wrapped in oilcloth, a heavy weight on her conscience. His lips thinned. The amber eye seemed to flicker with an inner fire. “Do not play games with me, Aurora. Not today.” The use of her full name was a deliberate strike. A reminder of a closeness they no longer shared. She felt the old anger mix with something else, something she refused to name, and it sharpened her tongue. “I’m not playing. I’m telling you to leave.” “I am not leaving without it.” He shifted his weight, a subtle movement that spoke of immense patience and absolute resolve. He could stand there all day. They both knew it. “We can conduct this business on a public landing, if you wish. Or, you can let me in.” Her knuckles were white where she gripped the door. It was a choice, but not a choice at all. She hated him for it. Hated the calculated way he cornered her, the same way he did everything. With a deep breath that did nothing to calm her racing pulse, she pulled the door open and stepped back. Lucien entered the flat, and the already cramped space seemed to shrink around him. He was a slash of monochromatic severity in Eva's chaotic world of colour and clutter. He moved with a liquid grace, his cane tapping softly against the floorboards as he took in the teetering stacks of books, the scrolls pinned to the walls with mismatched thumbtacks, the faint smell of cat and old paper. His presence was an intrusion, a disruption of the fragile peace she had clawed out for herself. A ginger tabby, Ptolemy, emerged from under a sagging armchair, stretched languidly, and eyed the newcomer with feline suspicion. The cat took a few tentative steps forward, then stopped, tail twitching, and let out a low hiss. Lucien’s black eye fixed on the cat. “Your familiar is unwell.” “He’s not my familiar. And he’s just a good judge of character.” Rory shut the door, the click of the latch echoing the finality of her decision. The deadbolts remained undone. He turned his attention from the cat back to her, his dual-coloured gaze sweeping over her in a way that felt both clinical and intensely personal. He took in her worn jumper, the smudge of ink on her cheek, the way she stood with her arms crossed over her chest as if to physically hold herself together. “You look tired, Carter.” “I’ve had a busy week.” She walked past him, a careful detour to maintain distance, and stopped by the small kitchen counter. She gestured to the oilcloth bundle. “This is what you came for. Take it and go.” He did not move towards it. Instead, his eyes followed her, pinning her in place. “The client was most displeased with the unscheduled deviation from our arrangement.” “Your client can take it up with me.” “My client is a Prince of the Ashen Court. He does not ‘take things up’ with mortals who steal from him. He un-makes them.” The statement was delivered without inflection, a simple statement of fact that made the hairs on her arms stand on end. “I am here cleaning up your mess. Again.” The ‘again’ hung in the air between them, heavy with the weight of a hundred other arguments, a dozen other rescues, one final, bitter parting. The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist throbbed with a phantom ache. “I didn’t ask for your help,” she said, her voice low. “You never do.” He took a step into the room, then another. The space between them collapsed. He stopped barely an arm’s length away, close enough that she could smell the crisp, cold scent of his cologne, a fragrance like gin and winter air. It was a scent that had once been a comfort. Now it just made her stomach clench. “What was it this time?” His voice was softer now, the hard edge gone. “Another sob story? A desperate widow with hungry children?” “It was none of your business.” “You made it my business when you took the phylactery.” He reached out, not to the bundle on the counter, but towards her. His fingers stopped a centimetre from her cheek, hovering over the ink smudge. Her breath caught. She didn’t move, didn’t breathe, her entire world narrowing to the space between his skin and hers. She could feel the strange, static energy that always hummed around him, a cool fire. He let his hand fall. The moment shattered. “I had to be sure,” she said, the words coming out in a rush. “He said he needed it for his wife, for a ritual to save her.” “He lied.” Lucien’s gaze was intense. “The ritual was not to save her. It was to bind her soul to his service after death. A rather nasty bit of necromancy.” Nausea churned in her gut. She had been so sure. The man had seemed so broken, so desperate. “How do you know?” “Because that is what I do, Aurora. I know.” He finally moved to the counter and picked up the oilcloth package. His long fingers unwrapped a corner, revealing the dark, pulsating obsidian beneath. It seemed to drink the light from the room. He wrapped it back up carefully. “My reputation rests on the successful conclusion of my contracts. A reputation you seem determined to jeopardise.” “I thought I was doing the right thing.” “There is no right thing,” he countered, turning back to face her. “There are only consequences.” His eyes, one burning gold, one cold void, held hers. “This is the last time. I cannot afford to continue cleaning up after your conscience.” She flinched as if he had struck her. His words cut deeper than any blade. He saw her as a liability. A complication. Maybe that was all she had ever been. “Then don’t,” she snapped, her voice brittle. “Next time, let the Prince of the Ashen Court un-make me. It would certainly simplify your life.” A muscle twitched in his jaw. For the first time, a crack appeared in his perfect composure. He took a half-step toward her, his hand clenching on the bundle. The air between them grew thick, charged with years of unspoken words, of anger and regret and a deep, ruinous ache. “Do you truly believe that is what I want?” His voice was a raw whisper. The question was not about business, not about phylacteries or demon princes. It was about them. About the night she walked away, and the reason he had let her go.
created_at"2026-02-19T03:58:36.97Z" 2/19/2026, 3:58:36 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.351
leniency0.703
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
73.21% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1493
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"reluctantly"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"loosely"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
4
adverb"languidly"
count1
5
adverb"intensely"
count1
6
adverb"carefully"
count1
7
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"reluctantly"
1"perfectly"
2"loosely"
3"softly"
4"languidly"
5"intensely"
6"carefully"
7"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
9.58% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1493
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"unwavering"
count1
2
word"weight"
count3
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"reminder"
count1
5
word"resolve"
count1
6
word"calculated"
count1
7
word"racing"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"chaotic"
count1
10
word"familiar"
count2
11
word"echoing"
count1
12
word"throbbed"
count1
13
word"stomach"
count1
14
word"could feel"
count1
15
word"shattered"
count1
16
word"churned"
count1
17
word"determined"
count1
18
word"perfect"
count1
19
word"clenching"
count1
20
word"charged"
count1
21
word"unspoken"
count1
22
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"unwavering"
2"weight"
3"flicker"
4"reminder"
5"resolve"
6"calculated"
7"racing"
8"pulse"
9"chaotic"
10"familiar"
11"echoing"
12"throbbed"
13"stomach"
14"could feel"
15"shattered"
16"churned"
17"determined"
18"perfect"
19"clenching"
20"charged"
21"unspoken"
22"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences107
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences127
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1489
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions12
wordCount1144
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.35
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva3
Sumerian1
Moreau1
French1
Ptolemy1
Lucien4
Nausea1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Lucien"
4"Nausea"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences84
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed so broken so desperate"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.672
wordCount1489
matches
0"not to the bundle on the counter, but towards her"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences127
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean36.32
std23.14
cv0.637
sampleLengths
089
161
285
32
414
510
644
736
817
945
1022
1146
1249
1357
1485
1537
1611
1731
1857
194
2038
2127
228
2353
2437
2511
2661
2723
286
2971
308
3128
3230
3322
3465
358
3641
3731
3824
3950
4045
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences107
matches
0"was delivered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs177
matches
0"was talking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences127
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount918
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.02832244008714597
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.014161220043572984
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences127
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences127
mean11.72
std7.6
cv0.648
sampleLengths
014
14
211
36
421
515
618
77
88
914
108
117
1217
1311
149
1532
169
176
183
197
208
212
224
239
241
256
264
2725
284
2915
3023
316
327
338
349
3510
3612
378
3815
393
4010
419
4210
439
4419
458
4621
476
484
4918
44.62% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.31496062992125984
totalSentences127
uniqueOpeners40
97.09% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences103
matches
0"Then the sharp crease of"
1"Instead, his eyes followed her,"
2"Maybe that was all she"
ratio0.029
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount61
totalSentences103
matches
0"She set the toast down"
1"Her hand hesitated over the"
2"She slid the first bolt"
3"She pulled the door inward"
4"Her eyes travelled up the"
5"Her throat went dry."
6"Her fingers tightened on the"
7"His name was not a"
8"It was an accusation."
9"His voice was just as"
10"He offered no smile."
11"His expression was a mask"
12"They stood like that for"
13"He made no move to"
14"She made no move to"
15"He finally broke the silence,"
16"Her heart hammered against her"
17"She knew exactly what he"
18"It sat on Eva’s kitchen"
19"His lips thinned."
ratio0.592
18.25% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount91
totalSentences103
matches
0"A sharp rap on the"
1"Rory froze, a half-eaten slice"
2"Friends used the buzzer, delivery"
3"The scent of cardamom and"
4"She set the toast down"
5"Her hand hesitated over the"
6"The wood of the door"
7"She slid the first bolt"
8"The second clicked open with"
9"The third, a newer installation,"
10"She pulled the door inward"
11"The first thing she saw"
12"Her eyes travelled up the"
13"Platinum blond hair slicked back"
14"A jawline that could cut"
15"The other, a pit of"
16"Her throat went dry."
17"Her fingers tightened on the"
18"His name was not a"
19"It was an accusation."
ratio0.883
48.54% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences103
matches
0"Now it just made her"
ratio0.01
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He turned his attention from the cat back to her, his dual-coloured gaze sweeping over her in a way that felt both clinical and intensely personal."
1"He took in her worn jumper, the smudge of ink on her cheek, the way she stood with her arms crossed over her chest as if to physically hold herself together."
48.08% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she said, her voice low"
1"she said, the words coming out in a rush"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.081
leniency0.162
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.054
84.6455%