Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0SGPC7Y9NSFYGDGJXXC03

Run Details

Duration:
40.2s
Cost:
$0.036570
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The sharp knock came like a gunshot in the quiet of the flat. One, two, three—a precise rhythm against the heavy wood. Rory froze, her hand hovering over a brittle, tea-stained map of London’s ley lines. Dust motes danced in the single beam of late afternoon sun slicing through the grime on the window. Outside, Brick Lane hummed with life, but in here, surrounded by Eva’s fortress of paper and ink, the silence had been absolute. Ptolemy, a marmalade tabby of considerable bulk, lifted his head from a pile of scrolls, his ears twitching. He gave a low growl, a sound Rory had never heard him make. She pushed back from the cluttered table, the chair legs scraping against the floorboards. Her heart hammered a frantic beat against her ribs. Eva was gone. Her phone went straight to voicemail. And now someone was at the door. She moved silently, weaving through stacks of books that threatened to topple with every step. Her hand found the cold metal of the first deadbolt. She paused, listening. Nothing. Just the faint scent of curry from the restaurant downstairs and the distant wail of a siren. She drew a steadying breath and slid the bolt back. The sound was a deafening clank. Then the second. A jarring scrape. And the third, a heavy, final thud. She opened the door a fraction, just enough to see into the dim, narrow hallway. And the world tilted. Lucien Moreau stood on the welcome mat, a pristine island in the building’s sea of decay. His charcoal suit was immaculate, tailored so precisely it seemed a part of him. Platinum blond hair, slicked back from his forehead, captured the weak light from the single bare bulb overhead. He held an ivory-handled cane, its tip resting on the worn linoleum. He didn't seem to belong here, a creature of obsidian and moonlight dropped into a world of dust and rust. Then he lifted his head, and his eyes found hers. One the colour of warm amber, the other a chip of pure black night. They held no surprise, only a calm, unnerving intensity. “Aurora.” His voice was a low murmur, smooth and dark like French roast coffee. It slid over her full name, a name no one but him ever used. Rory’s throat went dry. Her fingers tightened on the edge of the door. “What are you doing here, Lucien?” His lips curved in the barest suggestion of a smile. It didn’t reach those mismatched eyes. “A pleasure to see you, too.” He took a step forward, a silent, fluid movement that left her no choice but to retreat into the flat. He followed, bringing the chill of the outside air and the expensive, familiar scent of sandalwood and old leather with him. The door clicked shut behind him, plunging the cramped space into an intimate gloom. He took in the precarious towers of literature, the arcane charts pinned to the walls, the half-empty teacup on the table. His gaze was brief but comprehensive, cataloguing everything. Ptolemy, who usually hissed at strangers, hopped down from his perch and wound himself around Lucien's legs, purring like a motor. Lucien’s amber eye flickered down to the cat, one eyebrow arching in faint amusement. He reached down, his long, pale fingers stroking the cat’s head just once before he straightened. “Charming place. Has all the curated chaos of your friend’s mind.” Rory crossed her arms, a barricade against the sudden, unwelcome pull of his presence. He made the small room shrink, his shoulders broad under the fine wool of his suit. “You didn’t answer my question.” “Patience was never your strong suit.” He moved past her, his sleeve brushing her arm. A jolt, like static electricity, shot through her. He navigated the bookish labyrinth with an easy grace, stopping at the table where she’d been working. He tilted his head, his gaze sweeping over the map. “Looking for something? Or someone?” “Eva’s my friend. I’m worried about her.” “As you should be.” He tapped the map with the tip of his cane, right over the snarled intersection of streets that marked Covent Garden. “She has a talent for finding the sort of trouble that doesn’t leave witnesses.” A cold knot formed in Rory’s stomach. She took a step closer, her voice dropping. “What do you know?” He turned to face her. The single beam of sun caught the side of his face, illuminating the sharp line of his jaw. His expression was unreadable, a mask of polite indifference she knew he could shatter in an instant. “The question is, Aurora, what do you know? Tell me what you’ve found. Everything.” The arrogance of it stole her breath. After months of silence, after the way things had ended between them, he walked in here and demanded information. A bitter laugh escaped her. “You have a lot of nerve.” “I have a lot of problems. One of which currently involves your friend.” His black eye seemed to absorb the light, drawing her in. “Another of which, I suspect, will soon involve you.” The air crackled. It was all there, hanging between them in the dusty light—the ghost of whispered conversations in shadowed alleyways, the lingering memory of his hand on her wrist, the sharp, ugly words of their last encounter. It was a history written in scars, some visible, some not. “I’m not one of your assets anymore, Lucien. I don’t work for you.” “This isn’t about work.” He took a step toward her, closing the small distance until he was a monolith of grey wool and coiled tension. She had to tip her head back to meet his gaze. She could see the faint lines at the corners of his eyes, the almost imperceptible clench in his jaw. “This is about survival. Eva stumbled into something, a negotiation between parties who do not appreciate being observed. She is a loose end.” Rory’s hands curled into fists. “So you’re here to what? Clean up the mess?” “I’m here because she left you a message.” His voice was softer now, the edges frayed just enough for her to notice. “She knew they were coming for her. And she knew that you were the only one who could understand what she found.” He reached into the inner pocket of his suit jacket and produced a small, folded piece of paper. Not parchment, not some ancient scroll. Just a simple, torn sheet from a reporter’s notebook. He held it out to her. Her fingers trembled slightly as she took it. The paper was cool against her skin. She unfolded it. It wasn’t a message. It was a drawing. A hasty, charcoal sketch of a sigil she had never seen before—a coiled serpent eating its own tail, but with a crown of thorns piercing its skull. Her blood ran cold. “She left this for me,” he clarified, his voice a low vibration in the charged silence. “At a dead drop we haven’t used in years. It’s a symbol tied to a particularly nasty sect. An old one. They traffic in souls, Aurora. And they don’t like competition.” Rory looked up from the drawing, her bright blue eyes locking with his complicated gaze. The fixer, the information broker, was gone. In his place was the man she remembered—the one whose carefully constructed world was threatened, the one who only came to her when he was out of options. “Why show me this?” Her voice was barely a whisper. “Why come to me?” His gaze dropped to her mouth, just for a second, a fleeting, dangerous flicker of something else. Something that had nothing to do with Eva or magic or monstrous sects. Then it was gone. “Because this symbol,” he said, his voice returning to its cool, measured cadence as he tapped the paper with his finger. “I’ve seen it once before. Years ago. In a place you know.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"the edges frayed just [just]"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.296
leniency0.593
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.074
88.69% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1326
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
1"slightly"
2"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
17.04% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1326
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"silence"
count3
1
word"pristine"
count1
2
word"intensity"
count1
3
word"chill"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"gloom"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"eyebrow"
count1
8
word"navigated"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"unreadable"
count1
11
word"encounter"
count1
12
word"tension"
count1
13
word"trembled"
count1
14
word"charged"
count1
15
word"constructed"
count1
16
word"whisper"
count1
17
word"fleeting"
count1
18
word"flicker"
count1
19
word"measured"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"pristine"
2"intensity"
3"chill"
4"familiar"
5"gloom"
6"flickered"
7"eyebrow"
8"navigated"
9"stomach"
10"unreadable"
11"encounter"
12"tension"
13"trembled"
14"charged"
15"constructed"
16"whisper"
17"fleeting"
18"flicker"
19"measured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences90
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seem to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences107
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1319
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount1070
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.65
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
London1
Brick1
Lane1
Eva3
Rory7
Moreau1
French1
Lucien3
Covent1
Garden1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Moreau"
3"Lucien"
places
0"London"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
3"Covent"
4"Garden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
48.37% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.516
wordCount1319
matches
0"no one but"
1"no choice but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean41.22
std21.3
cv0.517
sampleLengths
076
170
275
319
480
533
628
719
863
964
1041
1135
1255
137
1439
1519
1654
1737
1833
1949
2013
2178
2214
2344
2439
2553
264
2747
2850
2914
3034
3133
89.67% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences90
matches
0"was gone"
1"was gone"
2"was threatened"
3"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs157
matches(empty)
36.05% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences107
ratio0.037
matches
0"One, two, three—a precise rhythm against the heavy wood."
1"It was all there, hanging between them in the dusty light—the ghost of whispered conversations in shadowed alleyways, the lingering memory of his hand on her wrist, the sharp, ugly words of their last encounter."
2"A hasty, charcoal sketch of a sigil she had never seen before—a coiled serpent eating its own tail, but with a crown of thorns piercing its skull."
3"In his place was the man she remembered—the one whose carefully constructed world was threatened, the one who only came to her when he was out of options."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1077
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.025069637883008356
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.008356545961002786
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences107
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences107
mean12.33
std7.05
cv0.572
sampleLengths
013
19
214
318
422
518
613
714
89
93
106
117
1215
1310
143
151
1617
1710
186
193
203
217
2215
234
2416
2514
2618
2712
2820
2910
3014
319
3214
3314
344
359
366
3710
386
3926
4021
4114
4221
438
4421
4514
4616
4711
4814
4916
52.65% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.35514018691588783
totalSentences107
uniqueOpeners38
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences89
matches
0"Just the faint scent of"
1"Then the second."
2"Then he lifted his head,"
3"Just a simple, torn sheet"
4"Then it was gone."
ratio0.056
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences89
matches
0"He gave a low growl,"
1"She pushed back from the"
2"Her heart hammered a frantic"
3"Her phone went straight to"
4"She moved silently, weaving through"
5"Her hand found the cold"
6"She paused, listening."
7"She drew a steadying breath"
8"She opened the door a"
9"His charcoal suit was immaculate,"
10"He held an ivory-handled cane,"
11"He didn't seem to belong"
12"They held no surprise, only"
13"His voice was a low"
14"It slid over her full"
15"Her fingers tightened on the"
16"His lips curved in the"
17"It didn’t reach those mismatched"
18"He took a step forward,"
19"He followed, bringing the chill"
ratio0.551
38.65% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences89
matches
0"The sharp knock came like"
1"Rory froze, her hand hovering"
2"Dust motes danced in the"
3"Ptolemy, a marmalade tabby of"
4"He gave a low growl,"
5"She pushed back from the"
6"Her heart hammered a frantic"
7"Eva was gone."
8"Her phone went straight to"
9"She moved silently, weaving through"
10"Her hand found the cold"
11"She paused, listening."
12"She drew a steadying breath"
13"The sound was a deafening"
14"A jarring scrape."
15"She opened the door a"
16"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
17"His charcoal suit was immaculate,"
18"Platinum blond hair, slicked back"
19"He held an ivory-handled cane,"
ratio0.843
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"He moved, his sleeve brushing her arm"
1"he clarified, his voice a low vibration in the charged silence"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he clarified (clarify)"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.074
leniency0.148
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.074
79.0373%