Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0SM9FECT6GKPJWCW4VBD0

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Duration:
28.5s
Cost:
$0.005936
Provider:
Alibaba

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked open before Rory could pivot away from the peephole. The chain rattled, metal scraping against metal, and the door swung inward to reveal Lucien Moreau standing on the cramped landing of Brick Lane. Rain dripped from the brim of his umbrella onto the scuffed linoleum, pooling around his polished oxfords. He did not look like a man who belonged above a curry house. His charcoal suit held no creases despite the London humidity, and his platinum hair remained slicked back as if defying gravity itself. Rory gripped the doorframe, her knuckles white. She had not expected him. She had not wanted him. You look terrible, Laila. The use of her middle name struck harder than a slap. Rory stepped back, allowing him entry only because blocking the doorway felt petulant, and she refused to give him the satisfaction of seeing her lose composure. Lucien swept inside, closing the door with a soft, definitive thud that engaged all three locks in one smooth motion. He folded his ivory-handled cane and leaned it against the wall, next to a stack of precarity balanced legal textbooks. The flat smelled of turmeric, old paper, and the faint, musky scent of Ptolemy, the tabby cat currently glaring from the top of the bookshelf. Lucien surveyed the claustrophobic space, his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one void black—lingering on the scrolls spread across the dining table. Cozy. It is what I can afford. Affordability implies choice. This looks like hiding. Lucien moved further into the room, his presence expanding to fill the small space until the air felt thin. He ran a gloved finger along the spine of a heavy tome on Welsh folklore, leaving no dust behind. Rory crossed her arms over her chest, protecting the small crescent scar on her left wrist, a habit she developed whenever her defences crumbled. Why are you here, Lucien? We said everything there was to say in Marseille. Did we? He turned, the movement fluid, predatory. I recall a great deal of shouting. I recall you running. I do not recall a conclusion. There is no conclusion to a mistake. Mistake. The word hung between them, heavy and sharp. Lucien took a step closer, forcing Rory to tilt her head back to maintain eye contact. The height difference, usually negligible, felt monumental in the low-ceilinged flat. The amber eye burned with amusement, while the black one swallowed the dim light of the single overhead bulb. You deliver noodles for a living now, Aurora. You study laws you have no intention of practicing. You live above a kitchen that smells of burnt garlic and desperation. He stopped inches from her, the scent of expensive cologne and something darker, like ozone before a storm, washing over her. And you think this constitutes a life? I think it constitutes peace. Something you would not understand. Peace is stagnant. Peace is death waiting to happen. He reached out, his hand hovering near her face. You are vibrating. Rory flinched away, turning toward the kitchenette to busy herself with a chipped mug. Her hands shook as she filled it with tap water. The porcelain felt cold against her palm, grounding her. You cannot just appear here. You cannot walk into my home after six months of silence and critique my choices. Silence is not absence. I watched. The tap water splashed over the rim of the mug, soaking into Rory's sleeve. She did not wipe it away. She spun around, water dripping from her elbow onto the floorboards. You watched? She laughed, a brittle sound that clashed with the hum of the refrigerator. Of course you did. The great information broker. Do you have files on me? Photos? Notes on my grocery habits? I have concerns. Your concerns ended when I left Avaros. When I left you. Did they? Lucien picked up his cane, tapping the ivory handle against his palm. A rhythmic, ticking sound that matched the accelerating beat of Rory's heart. Your father called me last week. Brendan Carter. Desperate man. Worried about his little girl playing detective in a city that eats people like you for breakfast. Rory froze. The water in the mug rippled. My father does not know you. He knows enough to know you are in over your head. He knows about the things you have been asking around Soho. The questions regarding the disappearances near the docks. Lucien's voice dropped, losing its mocking edge, replaced by a steeliness that made the hair on Rory's arms stand up. You are poking beasts that do not sleep, Rory. Beasts that remember the taste of Irish barristers. Stay away from my family. Or what? You will sue them? He circled the table, displacing a pile of research notes. Ptolemy hissed from above, tail lashing. You are using your legal mind to dissect supernatural crimes. It is adorable. It is also suicidal. I am not your project anymore, Lucien. I am not some human pet you found in Marseille to amuse yourself with. I am handling this. You are handling nothing. You are reacting. There is a difference. He stopped directly in front of her, trapping her against the counter. The heat radiating from him felt unnatural, feverish. The demon blood in his veins sang a low, dangerous tune that Rory could feel in her teeth. Those men at the docks? They are not thugs. They are collectors for a house that predates London. And they know you are asking questions. Then let them come. No. Lucien slammed his hand onto the counter beside her head, the wood groaning under the impact. No, you foolish, brilliant woman. You do not get to play martyr. Not again. His face hovered above hers, close enough that she could see the flecks of gold in his amber iris, the infinite depth of the black one. The anger in his expression cracked, revealing something raw underneath. Fear. Genuine, unadulterated fear. I told you I would keep you safe, he whispered, the words rough. I told you that my world was not for you. And yet, here you are, wading into the deepest end without a lifeline. You let me go, Rory said, her voice trembling despite her effort to steady it. You opened the door and walked away. Do not pretend you care now. I walked away so you would live. He leaned in, his breath ghosting over her lips. Do you have any idea what it costs me to stand here and watch you throw yourself into the fire? Every instinct I possess screams to lock you in a tower and throw away the key. Then do it. Prove you are the monster everyone says you are. Lucien stared at her, his jaw tightening. The air in the flat grew heavy, static electricity crackling along the surfaces of the books and scrolls. Ptolemy yowled and jumped down, scrambling under the sofa. You think I am the monster? Lucien smiled, but it did not reach his eyes. Oh, my dear Rory. The monsters are already inside your walls. A sharp knock hammered against the front door. Not a polite rap, but a violent, rhythmic pounding that shook the frame. The three deadbolts rattled in their housings. Lucien's head snapped toward the door, his expression shifting instantly from intense intimacy to cold lethality. He drew the thin blade from his cane with a whispered slide of steel. Who is it? Rory breathed. Not who. Lucien moved to stand between her and the entrance, his shoulders broad and blocking her view. How many. The pounding stopped. Silence stretched, thick and suffocating. Then, the sound of metal grinding against metal echoed from the other side of the door. The first deadbolt began to turn, not from the inside, but from the outside, as if an invisible hand manipulated the lock. Lucien tightened his grip on the blade, his knuckles turning pale. Bar the door, he commanded, his voice devoid of all earlier warmth. Now.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1333
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.74% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1333
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"porcelain"
count1
1
word"silence"
count3
2
word"rhythmic"
count2
3
word"could feel"
count1
4
word"pounding"
count2
5
word"echoed"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"porcelain"
1"silence"
2"rhythmic"
3"could feel"
4"pounding"
5"echoed"
6"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences149
matches(empty)
85.33% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount5
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences149
filterMatches
0"look"
1"think"
2"know"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences149
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1329
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions2
matches
0"I told you I would keep you safe, he whispered, the words rough."
1"You let me go, Rory said, her voice trembling despite her effort to steady it."
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions67
wordCount1329
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity1.28
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Rory15
Lucien15
Moreau1
Brick1
Lane1
London2
Laila1
Ptolemy3
Welsh1
Marseille2
Aurora1
Avaros1
Carter1
Soho1
Irish1
You17
Do3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Laila"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Carter"
6"You"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"London"
3"Marseille"
4"Soho"
globalScore0.86
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences95
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if defying gravity itself"
49.51% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.505
wordCount1329
matches
0"Not a polite rap, but a violent, rhythmic pounding"
1"not from the inside, but from the outside, as if an invisible hand manipulated the lo"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences149
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean28.28
std22.1
cv0.782
sampleLengths
089
117
24
377
445
51
66
77
862
914
1025
117
1255
1357
1410
1521
1633
1720
186
1931
2035
213
2211
2353
248
256
2667
275
2839
2925
3074
314
3231
3340
3436
3528
3652
3712
3834
3926
4028
4130
425
4320
4446
4511
4613
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences149
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs254
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences149
ratio0.007
matches
0"Lucien surveyed the claustrophobic space, his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one void black—lingering on the scrolls spread across the dining table."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1333
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.020255063765941484
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.00450112528132033
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences149
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences149
mean8.92
std6.16
cv0.69
sampleLengths
013
124
217
313
422
57
65
75
84
911
1026
1120
1220
1325
1420
151
166
173
184
1919
2019
2124
225
239
242
256
267
274
286
297
301
318
3216
3311
3419
358
369
3712
3821
397
405
415
423
436
449
453
4614
4710
489
495
45.41% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.348993288590604
totalSentences149
uniqueOpeners52
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences131
matches
0"Of course you did."
1"Then let them come."
2"Then do it."
3"Then, the sound of metal"
ratio0.031
49.01% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount56
totalSentences131
matches
0"He did not look like"
1"His charcoal suit held no"
2"She had not expected him."
3"She had not wanted him."
4"You look terrible, Laila."
5"He folded his ivory-handled cane"
6"It is what I can"
7"He ran a gloved finger"
8"We said everything there was"
9"He turned, the movement fluid,"
10"I recall a great deal"
11"I recall you running."
12"I do not recall a"
13"You deliver noodles for a"
14"You study laws you have"
15"You live above a kitchen"
16"He stopped inches from her,"
17"I think it constitutes peace."
18"He reached out, his hand"
19"You are vibrating."
ratio0.427
47.79% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount108
totalSentences131
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked open"
1"The chain rattled, metal scraping"
2"Rain dripped from the brim"
3"He did not look like"
4"His charcoal suit held no"
5"Rory gripped the doorframe, her"
6"She had not expected him."
7"She had not wanted him."
8"You look terrible, Laila."
9"The use of her middle"
10"Rory stepped back, allowing him"
11"Lucien swept inside, closing the"
12"He folded his ivory-handled cane"
13"The flat smelled of turmeric,"
14"Lucien surveyed the claustrophobic space,"
15"It is what I can"
16"Affordability implies choice."
17"This looks like hiding."
18"Lucien moved further into the"
19"He ran a gloved finger"
ratio0.824
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences131
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"His charcoal suit held no creases despite the London humidity, and his platinum hair remained slicked back as if defying gravity itself."
1"Worried about his little girl playing detective in a city that eats people like you for breakfast."
2"The first deadbolt began to turn, not from the inside, but from the outside, as if an invisible hand manipulated the lock."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
82.8596%