| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.071 | | effectiveRatio | 0.057 | |
| 76.38% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1270 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "sharply" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "truly" | | 4 | "very" | | 5 | "barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 37.01% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1270 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "crystalline" | | 1 | "marble" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "otherworldly" | | 4 | "crystal" | | 5 | "intricate" | | 6 | "tracing" | | 7 | "raced" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "weight" | | 10 | "unreadable" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "heart pounded in chest" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "heart hammered in her chest" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 29.48% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 63 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 45 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1264 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 18 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 77.78% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 35 | | wordCount | 900 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.44 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 13 | | Fae | 4 | | Grove | 1 | | Silas | 4 | | Eva | 5 | | Isolde | 7 | | Heartstone | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.778 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "chime that seemed to emanate from the ground itself" | | 1 | "not quite as they were" | | 2 | "appeared taller his features sharper, more otherworldly" | | 3 | "patterns that seemed to shift and change when viewed from different angles, depicting scenes of ancient battles, forgotten rituals, and creatures that defied description" | | 4 | "eyes that seemed to see more than they should" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1264 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | |
| 82.94% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 35.11 | | std | 15.46 | | cv | 0.44 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 48 | | 1 | 36 | | 2 | 54 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 47 | | 5 | 53 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 54 | | 8 | 57 | | 9 | 80 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 51 | | 14 | 30 | | 15 | 29 | | 16 | 33 | | 17 | 52 | | 18 | 36 | | 19 | 35 | | 20 | 28 | | 21 | 52 | | 22 | 37 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 41 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 28 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 27 | | 29 | 47 | | 30 | 42 | | 31 | 29 | | 32 | 27 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 30 | | 35 | 28 |
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| 99.69% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 166 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 40.82% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 84 | | ratio | 0.036 | | matches | | 0 | "The moment she made contact, images flooded her mind—a great tree with roots that stretched into the earth and branches that scraped the heavens, a woman with hair like spun silver weeping tears that turned to stars, a blade of moonlight cutting through darkness." | | 1 | "From somewhere deeper in the grove, a voice called out—soft as a whisper, yet carrying clearly across the distance." | | 2 | "Images formed in the space—a city of brass and fire, its towers reaching toward a blood-red sky." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 905 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 26 | | adverbRatio | 0.028729281767955802 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012154696132596685 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 84 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 84 | | mean | 15.05 | | std | 7.97 | | cv | 0.529 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 31 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 27 | | 22 | 30 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 44 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 28 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 21 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 24 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 86.11% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.5238095238095238 | | totalSentences | 84 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 95.86% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots crunched against a" | | 1 | "he muttered, eyes wide as" | | 2 | "she whispered, pulling her hand" | | 3 | "They followed a path of" | | 4 | "he said, stepping back from" | | 5 | "It clung to her skin" | | 6 | "she said softly" | | 7 | "She stumbled back, gasping for" | | 8 | "she said, her voice unsteady" | | 9 | "It stirred something deep within" | | 10 | "They turned as one to" | | 11 | "She was tall and slender," | | 12 | "Her eyes were the color" | | 13 | "she said, her voice carrying" | | 14 | "She moved closer, her bare" | | 15 | "she said at last" | | 16 | "She raised her hands, and" | | 17 | "she said, her voice barely" |
| | ratio | 0.31 | |
| 28.97% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 50 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "The air grew thick with" | | 1 | "Her boots crunched against a" | | 2 | "he muttered, eyes wide as" | | 3 | "The grove stretched before them" | | 4 | "Stars twinkled in the daylight," | | 5 | "Eva reached out to touch" | | 6 | "she whispered, pulling her hand" | | 7 | "Rory's pendant pulsed against her" | | 8 | "The Fae blade at her" | | 9 | "They followed a path of" | | 10 | "Rory's reflection showed her with" | | 11 | "he said, stepping back from" | | 12 | "Eva knelt beside the pool," | | 13 | "It clung to her skin" | | 14 | "she said softly" | | 15 | "A sound like wind chimes" | | 16 | "Each stone was carved with" | | 17 | "Rory reached for the nearest" | | 18 | "The moment she made contact," | | 19 | "She stumbled back, gasping for" |
| | ratio | 0.862 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The air grew thick with an unfamiliar energy as Rory stepped through the shimmering boundary that separated the mortal world from the Fae Grove." | | 1 | "Her boots crunched against a carpet of frost-kissed moss, each step releasing a faint, melodic chime that seemed to emanate from the ground itself." | | 2 | "Ancient oaks, their bark silver and smooth as polished marble, rose impossibly high into a sky that seemed both brighter and more distant than the one they'd le…" | | 3 | "The Fae blade at her hip thrummed in response, its moonsilver surface catching the strange light and throwing it back in patterns that hurt to look at directly." | | 4 | "They followed a path of glowing mushrooms that led them to a clearing where a pool of liquid starlight reflected their faces back at them, but not quite as they…" | | 5 | "It clung to her skin like mercury, forming tiny constellations that mapped themselves across her palm before dissolving into mist." | | 6 | "Each stone was carved with intricate patterns that seemed to shift and change when viewed from different angles, depicting scenes of ancient battles, forgotten …" | | 7 | "As they approached, the ground beneath their feet began to hum, vibrating up through their bones with a frequency that made their teeth ache." | | 8 | "The moment she made contact, images flooded her mind—a great tree with roots that stretched into the earth and branches that scraped the heavens, a woman with h…" | | 9 | "There was something wild about her, something that spoke of forests untouched by mortal hands and skies unpolluted by city lights." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "he muttered, eyes wide as he took in their surroundings" | | 1 | "she said, her voice unsteady" | | 2 | "Eva said, her eyes distant as she listened" | | 3 | "she said, her voice carrying the weight of ages" | | 4 | "she said, her voice barely above a whisper" |
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| 35.71% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Isolde continued (continue)" | | 3 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.286 | | effectiveRatio | 0.229 | |