Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0SWEVC94E13Y04GR5J4Z1

Run Details

Duration:
45.5s
Cost:
$0.007408
Provider:
SiliconFlow

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked and the door swung inward. Lucien stood in the corridor, water dripping from the shoulders of his charcoal suit, his platinum hair plastered to his forehead in darkened streaks. His ivory-handled cane hung crooked from his wrist. A fresh cut traced his jawline, the blood already darkening to rust. Rory's grip tightened on the door frame. Three months. Three months since the warehouse. Three months since he'd vanished into shadow and she'd told herself good riddance. "You're bleeding on Eva's welcome mat." "Hello to you too, Carter." His voice scraped like gravel. She noted the way he leaned slightly to his left, compensating for weight he wouldn't put on his right leg. The heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—held hers with an intensity that made her stomach twist. "Wrong flat. Silas' place is around the corner." "We need to talk." "Strange. You didn't seem interested in talking when you left me standing in that warehouse with a knife wound and a lot of questions." She moved to shut the door. His palm pressed against the wood. Not forcing. Just... present. "Please." The word cracked something in her chest that she'd spent twelve weeks fortifying. Ptolemy chose that moment to wind between Rory's ankles, meowing with the particular indignation of a cat whose dinner was late. The tabby's tail brushed against the door frame as he padded past, entirely uninterested in the drama unfolding on his threshold. Lucien's mouth twitched. "The cat hasn't changed." "Ptolemy has better manners than you." Rory stepped back and let the door fall open. "Fine. Come in. But if you bleed on any of Eva's manuscripts, she'll make whatever did that to your face look like a paper cut." He limped inside, his shoe squelching against the worn floorboards. The flat felt smaller with him in it. Every surface still overflowed with Eva's research—leather-bound grimoires stacked on the kitchen counter, scrolls unfurled across the sofa, index cards pinned to every available wall space. The smell of old paper and sandalwood incense hung heavy in the warm air. Rory shut the door behind him, engaging all three locks out of habit. When she turned, he was surveying the chaos with that analytical gaze she remembered too well. The one that missed nothing. "She's added to the collection." "Eva collects information the way you collect enemies." Rory moved past him toward the tiny kitchen alcove, deliberately putting distance between them. "Sit down before you fall down." "I'm fine." "You're leaving a trail." She gestured at the droplets marking the floorboards. "Kitchen chair. Now." For a moment, she thought he'd argue. His jaw tightened, the muscle there jumping. But then his right knee buckled slightly, and he caught himself on the back of a wooden chair cluttered with newspaper clippings. Rory cleared the seat with three efficient sweeps, dumping the research onto an already-precarious stack on the counter. "Sit." He sat. She pulled a first-aid kit from beneath the sink—one benefit of having a best friend who attracted supernatural trouble like pigeons to breadcrumbs—and set it on the scarred table between them. When she finally looked at him directly, under the flat's overhead light, the full extent of the damage became clear. Someone had worked him over thoroughly. His lip was split. The cut on his jaw was deeper than she'd initially thought. His right hand, braced against his cane, was scraped raw across the knuckles. And beneath the ruined suit jacket, his white shirt bore a spreading stain that couldn't be anything but blood. "You look like hell, Lucien." "You should see the other fellows." A ghost of his usual sardonic smile flickered across his face. "Actually, no. You shouldn't. It's rather unsightly." Rory opened the kit and pulled out antiseptic, gauze, medical tape. Her hands moved automatically, guided by months of patching up delivery drivers who'd taken spills on icy streets and, more recently, sewing shut the wounds that seemed to follow her new life like a shadow. "Shirt off." "Miss Carter, this is hardly the—" "Off." She met his gaze. "Unless you want me to cut it off you. Your choice." Something flickered behind his eyes—surprise, perhaps, at the steel in her voice. He shrugged out of the suit jacket with a sharp intake of breath, then fumbled with the buttons of his shirt. His fingers were shaking. Rory took over. The fabric was ruined anyway. She made quick work of the buttons, trying to ignore the way her knuckles brushed against his chest, the warmth of his skin through the thin undershirt beneath. She'd seen him injured before. It came with the territory of his particular profession. But this was different. This was worse. "You have a knife wound." "Observant as always." "That's not from tonight." The skin around the gash across his ribs was angry and inflamed. "Lucien, this is infected. Why didn't you—" "I was somewhat preoccupied." She pressed her lips together and reached for the antiseptic. "This is going to hurt." "I can take—" She poured it directly onto the wound. His whole body went rigid. A sound escaped him, something between a hiss and a gasp, and his hand shot out to grip the edge of the table. The muscles in his forearm stood out like cords. "Sorry," Rory said, not sorry at all. "Hold still." She cleaned the wound with brisk efficiency, fighting to keep her touch clinical. Professional. The opposite of the way she'd touched him before, in a different life, when his breath against her skin had made her forget every reason why getting involved with him was a terrible idea. The memory surfaced without permission. His hands in her hair. His voice in her ear, low and rough and saying her name like a prayer. The way he'd looked at her in the half-light, like she was something worth keeping. And then the way he'd looked at her in that warehouse, his face blank, telling her to leave and never come back. "I looked for you." The words fell out before she could stop them. "After. I went to every contact, every safe house. No one knew where you'd gone." Lucien's eyes fixed on a point somewhere over her shoulder. "That was rather the point." "Three months." She taped the gauze in place with more force than necessary. "Three months, and you show up at Eva's door at—" she glanced at the clock "—eleven at night, looking like someone put you through a meat grinder, and you expect me to what? Just forget everything?" "I don't expect anything." "That's rich, coming from you." His gaze snapped to hers, and for a moment, the mask slipped. Beneath it, she saw exhaustion. Pain. Something raw that looked almost like regret. "I came because I had nowhere else to go." The admission seemed to cost him. Each word was heavy. "I came because you're the only person in this city I trust to watch my back while I sleep." Rory's hands stilled against the bandage. Outside, a siren wailed past on the street below, blue and red light flickering across the papers on the windowsill. Ptolemy emerged from somewhere in the bedroom and leaped onto the table, sniffing at Lucien's injured hand with professional interest. The cat butted his head against Lucien's palm. "Traitor," Rory muttered. "He has excellent taste." "You gave him a saucer of cream once. That's bribery." "I believe the term is 'cultivating alliances.'" Lucien's fingers curled gently into Ptolemy's fur. The movement was tender, at odds with the violence written across his body. "You're still wearing it." Rory glanced down at the silver ring on her right hand. A delicate thing, shaped like intertwined serpents. She'd meant to throw it away. Had held it over a bin more times than she could count. But she'd never been able to let go. "I forgot to take it off." A lie. They both knew it. Silence stretched between them. The rain intensified outside, hammering against the windows, filling the small flat with the sound of water. "Why did you leave?" Rory asked quietly. "The warehouse. You just... vanished. One minute you were there, and the next—" She snapped her fingers. "I thought you were dead. I thought Evan had—" "I left to protect you." "That's not your choice to make." His laugh was bitter, barely a sound at all. "No. It isn't." He met her eyes, and the weight of everything unsaid hung between them like smoke. "But I made it anyway. And I'd do it again, even knowing what I know now." "Which is what?" "That walking away from you would be the hardest thing I've ever done." His voice dropped. "That I'd spend every night since wondering if you were safe. If you were happy. If you'd found someone who deserved you, because God knows I never did." Ptolemy purred loudly enough to vibrate the table. Rory's throat tightened. She wanted to be angry. She wanted to throw him back out into the rain. She wanted to erase the last three months of wondering and worrying and hating herself for caring. Instead, she reached out and touched his jaw, her fingers careful around the cut. Lucien went still. His breath caught. "You're an idiot," she said softly. "I've been called worse." "You're bleeding through the bandage already." He glanced down at his ribs, where red was already seeping through white gauze. "It appears I owe your friend a replacement tablecloth." "Eva doesn't own tablecloths. She owns danger." Rory pulled back, putting distance between them again. "You need to rest. That wound needs actual medical attention, not just my amateur patchwork." "I can't go to a hospital." "I know." She moved toward the sofa, shoving aside a pile of scrolls to clear a space. "You'll stay here tonight. Eva won't mind—she's in Cardiff until Tuesday, some conference on runic translations." "Rory—" "Don't." She turned to face him. "Don't thank me. Don't apologize. Don't do any of your smooth Frenchman routine. Just... sit there and let me finish cleaning you up, and then you're going to sleep on that sofa, and tomorrow you're going to tell me what the hell happened to you." He studied her for a long moment, his mismatched eyes catching the light in a way that still made something flutter in her chest despite everything. "As you wish."
created_at"2026-02-19T03:58:51.363Z" 2/19/2026, 3:58:51 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
57.14% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"Rory stepped back [back]"
1"Lucien's fingers curled gently [gently]"
2"Rory asked quietly [quietly]"
3"she said softly [softly]"
4"Rory pulled back [back]"
dialogueSentences70
tagDensity0.3
leniency0.6
rawRatio0.238
effectiveRatio0.143
85.63% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1740
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"deliberately"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"deliberately"
2"gently"
3"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.26% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1740
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"intensity"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"efficient"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count2
6
word"warmth"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"weight"
2"intensity"
3"stomach"
4"efficient"
5"flickered"
6"warmth"
7"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences116
matches
0"was angry"
1"was bitter"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences116
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences164
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1727
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount1219
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.23
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory15
Eva1
Lucien7
Ptolemy4
Three3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
3"Ptolemy"
places(empty)
globalScore0.885
windowScore0.833
86.71% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"wounds that seemed to follow her new life like a shadow"
1"something between a hiss and a gasp, and his ha"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1727
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences164
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs87
mean19.85
std16
cv0.806
sampleLengths
09
144
227
36
45
540
68
74
830
911
1013
1142
127
1340
1458
1534
165
1728
182
1915
2036
2119
222
2351
246
2547
265
2724
2846
292
306
3116
3237
3336
3421
355
363
3723
384
3915
403
417
4237
439
4448
4540
4622
4728
4815
4949
99.21% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences116
matches
0"was scraped"
1"was ruined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs217
matches
0"was surveying"
1"were shaking"
55.75% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences164
ratio0.03
matches
0"The heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—held hers with an intensity that made her stomach twist."
1"Every surface still overflowed with Eva's research—leather-bound grimoires stacked on the kitchen counter, scrolls unfurled across the sofa, index cards pinned to every available wall space."
2"She pulled a first-aid kit from beneath the sink—one benefit of having a best friend who attracted supernatural trouble like pigeons to breadcrumbs—and set it on the scarred table between them."
3"Something flickered behind his eyes—surprise, perhaps, at the steel in her voice."
4"\"Three months, and you show up at Eva's door at—\" she glanced at the clock \"—eleven at night, looking like someone put you through a meat grinder, and you expect me to what? Just forget everything?\""
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1183
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.037193575655114115
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.014370245139475908
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences164
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences164
mean10.53
std8.11
cv0.77
sampleLengths
09
124
28
312
47
52
65
713
86
95
105
1120
1215
138
144
1530
166
172
181
191
201
2113
2221
2321
243
254
2615
2725
2810
298
3026
3114
3213
3316
345
355
3622
376
382
3912
403
417
427
4322
4418
451
462
4731
4820
496
51.02% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.35365853658536583
totalSentences164
uniqueOpeners58
31.15% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences107
matches
0"Instead, she reached out and"
ratio0.009
62.99% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences107
matches
0"His ivory-handled cane hung crooked"
1"His voice scraped like gravel."
2"She noted the way he"
3"She moved to shut the"
4"His palm pressed against the"
5"He limped inside, his shoe"
6"She gestured at the droplets"
7"His jaw tightened, the muscle"
8"She pulled a first-aid kit"
9"His lip was split."
10"His right hand, braced against"
11"Her hands moved automatically, guided"
12"She met his gaze"
13"He shrugged out of the"
14"His fingers were shaking."
15"She made quick work of"
16"She'd seen him injured before."
17"It came with the territory"
18"She pressed her lips together"
19"She poured it directly onto"
ratio0.393
25.42% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount93
totalSentences107
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked and"
1"Lucien stood in the corridor,"
2"His ivory-handled cane hung crooked"
3"A fresh cut traced his"
4"Rory's grip tightened on the"
5"His voice scraped like gravel."
6"She noted the way he"
7"The heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
8"She moved to shut the"
9"His palm pressed against the"
10"The word cracked something in"
11"Ptolemy chose that moment to"
12"The tabby's tail brushed against"
13"Lucien's mouth twitched."
14"Rory stepped back and let"
15"He limped inside, his shoe"
16"The flat felt smaller with"
17"Every surface still overflowed with"
18"The smell of old paper"
19"Rory shut the door behind"
ratio0.869
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
ratio0
79.37% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—held hers with an intensity that made her stomach twist."
1"She pulled a first-aid kit from beneath the sink—one benefit of having a best friend who attracted supernatural trouble like pigeons to breadcrumbs—and set it o…"
2"And beneath the ruined suit jacket, his white shirt bore a spreading stain that couldn't be anything but blood."
3"Her hands moved automatically, guided by months of patching up delivery drivers who'd taken spills on icy streets and, more recently, sewing shut the wounds tha…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Rory said, not sorry at all"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Rory muttered (mutter)"
1"She snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences70
tagDensity0.071
leniency0.143
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.057
82.9663%