| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 30 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde added cryptically [cryptically]" | | 1 | "she finally said [finally]" | | 2 | "Isolde said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 49 | | tagDensity | 0.612 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.1 | |
| 82.96% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1174 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1174 | | totalAiIsms | 43 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "racing" | | 2 | "vibrated" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "scanned" | | 5 | "otherworldly" | | 6 | "cascading" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "down her spine" | | 9 | "electric" | | 10 | "pulsed" | | 11 | "glistening" | | 12 | "crystal" | | 13 | "echo" | | 14 | "glinting" | | 15 | "raced" | | 16 | "tension" | | 17 | "echoed" | | 18 | "pounding" | | 19 | "unreadable" | | 20 | "desire" | | 21 | "weight" | | 22 | "echoing" | | 23 | "flickered" | | 24 | "thundered" | | 25 | "trembled" | | 26 | "quickened" | | 27 | "resolve" | | 28 | "warmth" | | 29 | "beacon" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes narrowed" | | 1 | "The air was thick with" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "felt a shiver" | | 1 | "d with warmth" |
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| 87.20% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 77 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 96 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1172 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 21 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 42 | | wordCount | 947 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 2.22 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Shade | 1 | | Varga | 1 | | Rory | 21 | | Isolde | 6 | | Nyx | 8 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Shade" | | 2 | "Varga" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Nyx" | | 6 | "Pendant" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.391 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "elegance that seemed to defy gravity, her feet barely touching the ground" | | 1 | "whisper that seemed to echo from the shadows" | | 2 | "felt like a labyrinth of secrets" | | 3 | "trees that seemed to whisper secrets in a language she couldn’t understand" | | 4 | "felt like a knife twisting in her gut" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1172 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 47 | | mean | 24.94 | | std | 12.89 | | cv | 0.517 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 54 | | 1 | 34 | | 2 | 33 | | 3 | 56 | | 4 | 51 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 54 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 30 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 44 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 32 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 41 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 41 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 40 | | 33 | 25 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 29 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 32 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 32 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 26 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 34 | | 46 | 17 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 182 | | matches | | 0 | "were breathing" | | 1 | "were walking" |
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| 83.33% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 96 | | ratio | 0.021 | | matches | | 0 | "The air was thick with the scent of sweet nectar and something else—something sharp and electric that made her skin prickle." | | 1 | "Before Rory could respond, a figure emerged from the shadows—a creature of pure darkness, its form shifting and writhing like smoke." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 949 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.02845100105374078 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011591148577449948 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 96 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 96 | | mean | 12.21 | | std | 5.65 | | cv | 0.463 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 25 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 24 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 21 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 74.65% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.4791666666666667 | | totalSentences | 96 | | uniqueOpeners | 46 | |
| 43.29% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly, a low growl echoed" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "She brushed her fingers against" | | 1 | "She moved with an elegance" | | 2 | "she said, her voice a" | | 3 | "she asked, her curiosity piqued" | | 4 | "She had come seeking answers," | | 5 | "she asked, glancing at Nyx" | | 6 | "they replied, their form flickering" | | 7 | "They pressed on, the path" | | 8 | "she whispered, her eyes darting" | | 9 | "It stood tall, its eyes" | | 10 | "it boomed, its voice a" | | 11 | "she stammered, stepping forward despite" | | 12 | "it growled, its form flickering" | | 13 | "She thought of her past," | | 14 | "she finally said, her voice" | | 15 | "it replied, its voice echoing" | | 16 | "She felt the weight of" | | 17 | "she stammered, stepping back" | | 18 | "She glanced at Nyx, who" | | 19 | "they whispered, their voice a" |
| | ratio | 0.286 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 71 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "The air shimmered as Aurora" | | 1 | "The moment she crossed the" | | 2 | "A soft hum vibrated through" | | 3 | "Rory whispered, her voice barely" | | 4 | "She brushed her fingers against" | | 5 | "Nyx replied, their silhouette flickering" | | 6 | "The Shade’s faintly glowing violet" | | 7 | "A soft rustle drew their" | | 8 | "Isolde Varga emerged from the" | | 9 | "She moved with an elegance" | | 10 | "she said, her voice a" | | 11 | "Rory felt a shiver run" | | 12 | "The grove was alive with" | | 13 | "The air was thick with" | | 14 | "she asked, her curiosity piqued" | | 15 | "Isolde instructed, gesturing towards a" | | 16 | "The light grew softer, casting" | | 17 | "Rory felt as if she" | | 18 | "A cluster of luminescent mushrooms" | | 19 | "Rory exclaimed, pointing to a" |
| | ratio | 0.922 | |
| 64.94% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "Before Rory could respond, a" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 27.03% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "A soft hum vibrated through the ground, resonating with the pulse of the ancient trees that surrounded them." | | 1 | "She brushed her fingers against the gnarled bark of a nearby oak, its surface warm and alive, as if it were breathing." | | 2 | "The grove was alive with colour and sound, wildflowers blooming in hues she had never seen before, their petals shimmering like jewels." | | 3 | "Rory felt as if she were walking through a painting, each step revealing new wonders." | | 4 | "Before Rory could respond, a figure emerged from the shadows—a creature of pure darkness, its form shifting and writhing like smoke." | | 5 | "The thought of losing her memories, the fragments of her life that had shaped her, felt like a knife twisting in her gut." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 30 | | uselessAdditionCount | 19 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory whispered, her voice barely above a breath" | | 1 | "she said, her voice a melodic whisper that danced through the air" | | 2 | "she asked, her curiosity piqued" | | 3 | "Isolde added cryptically, her lavender eyes glinting with mischief" | | 4 | "they replied, their form flickering as if caught in a breeze" | | 5 | "Rory urged, her voice steady despite the unease creeping into her bones" | | 6 | "she whispered, her eyes darting around" | | 7 | "it growled, its form flickering like a candle in the wind" | | 8 | "the creature replied, its voice a low hiss" | | 9 | "she finally said, her voice steady" | | 10 | "Rory asked, her heart racing" | | 11 | "it replied, its voice echoing through the grove" | | 12 | "the creature countered, its form shifting closer" | | 13 | "Isolde said softly, her voice cutting through the tension" | | 14 | "the creature hissed, its form darkening" | | 15 | "they whispered, their voice a steady anchor in the chaos" | | 16 | "Rory echoed, her resolve hardening" | | 17 | "the creature growled, its form shifting into a swirling mass of darkness" | | 18 | "Nyx shouted, their voice cutting through the chaos" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 25 | | fancyCount | 14 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Rory exclaimed (exclaim)" | | 2 | "Isolde added cryptically (add)" | | 3 | "Rory urged (urge)" | | 4 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 5 | "she stammered (stammer)" | | 6 | "it growled (growl)" | | 7 | "Nyx interjected (interject)" | | 8 | "she stammered (stammer)" | | 9 | "the creature hissed (hiss)" | | 10 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 11 | "the creature growled (growl)" | | 12 | "Nyx shouted (shout)" | | 13 | "she cried (cry)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 49 | | tagDensity | 0.51 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.56 | | effectiveRatio | 0.56 | |