Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0T73TDNN56WBMDSNZM1F2

Run Details

Duration:
14.8s
Cost:
$0.003317
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The first deadbolt thunked open. Then the second. The third, the stiffest, scraped home with a final, protesting groan. The door swung inward, revealing a slice of Eva’s chaotic world. Rory stood there, her delivery uniform a splash of garish orange against the muted tones of the hallway. She held a cardboard box, the smell of garlic and sesame oil wafting from it. Eva blinked, her face a mask of confusion. She had a smear of ink on her cheek and her hair was pulled back in a messy bun that was already losing its fight with gravity. “Rory? I didn’t order—” “It’s not for you.” Rory stepped past her, into the flat, her movements sharp and deliberate. She nudged the door shut with the heel of her trainer, the three locks engaging again with a series of heavy clicks. The sound was final. A lock turning on more than just the door. She scanned the room. Books were stacked in teetering columns, scrolls lay unfurled across the floor like shed skins, and papers were pinned to every available inch of wall space with what looked like a collection of antique daggers. A fat tabby cat, Ptolemy, lifted his head from a nest of what looked like very important maps, blinked his green eyes once, and went back to sleep. “Then what are you doing here?” Eva’s voice was low, cautious. She crossed her arms, a defensive posture Rory knew well. Rory placed the food box on the only clear patch of table, a small circle of wood next to a precariously balanced stack of leather-bound tomes. She turned, and the cool, detached delivery person persona fell away. The exhaustion of the day, the weariness that went bone-deep, settled into her features. “I needed to see you.” Eva flinched, a barely perceptible movement. “You have my number.” “I needed to see your face.” Rory’s voice was flat, devoid of the plea she felt coiling in her gut. She wouldn’t give it voice. Not yet. Not here. Silence stretched between them, thick with the ghosts of their last conversation. The shouting. The slammed door. The weeks of radio silence that had felt like a slow suffocation. The air in the flat, usually smelling of old paper and dust, now tasted of unspoken words. “You can’t just show up here, Rory.” Eva’s gaze dropped to the floor, to a scroll covered in spidery, archaic script. “It’s not fair.” “Fair?” Rory let out a short, harsh laugh that held no humour. “You want to talk to me about fair? After everything with Evan, after you told me to run, to leave my entire life behind… you want to talk about what’s fair?” “I was trying to help you!” “You were trying to manage me! You decided what was best, you packed my bags, you put me on a train to London with a hundred quid and a pat on the head. You didn’t ask, Eva. You told.” “I was scared for you!” “And I wasn’t?” Rory’s voice rose, the control finally snapping. “I was the one living it! I was the one looking at the man I thought I loved and seeing a stranger! But you took that choice away from me. You took my fear and you turned it into your project.” Eva’s shoulders slumped. The anger seemed to drain out of her, leaving only a profound sadness. She sank into a worn armchair, the fabric groaning under her weight. The cat on the floor stirred, annoyed, and shifted to a new position. “I know.” Her voice was a whisper. “I know I did. I just… I couldn’t stand by and watch it happen again.” “Again?” Eva looked up, her eyes glistening. “Like with my sister. I just… I saw the signs and I panicked. I thought if I could just get you out, get you away, it would fix everything. I thought it was better for you to be angry with me and safe than… the alternative.” The confession hung in the air, raw and vulnerable. It was the piece Rory hadn’t known she was missing. The frantic, almost manic energy Eva had possessed during those last few weeks in Cardiff suddenly had a name. Grief. Fear. Rory walked over to the armchair, her steps slow. She didn’t sit. She just stood there, looking down at the woman who had been her best friend since they were five, who had shared her sweets and her secrets and her entire history. “You should have told me.” “I didn’t know how.” Eva’s hands twisted in her lap. “By the time I realised how badly I’d messed it all up, you were already gone. You were working that delivery job and living above a bar and you wouldn’t answer my calls.” “I was angry.” “I know.” “I was hurt.” “I know.” Rory crouched down, bringing herself to Eva’s level. The scent of old paper and Eva’s familiar jasmine tea filled her senses. She reached out, her fingers hovering just above Eva’s clenched fist. “I’m still hurt,” she said, her voice softer now. “But I’m tired, Eva. I’m so tired of being angry.” Eva finally looked at her, really looked at her. Her eyes traced the lines of exhaustion on Rory’s face, the new wariness in her bright blue eyes that hadn’t been there before London. Before everything. “I’m sorry, Rory.” The words were ragged, torn from her throat. “I am so, so sorry.” Rory’s fingers finally made contact, resting gently on top of Eva’s hand. She didn’t pull away. She let her hand stay there, a fragile bridge across the chasm that had opened between them. “I know.” The silence that followed was different. It wasn’t heavy with unsaid accusations. It was quiet. Pensive. The cat let out a soft purr. The sounds of Brick Lane, the sirens and the shouted conversations, drifted up from the street below, a distant reminder of the world outside their small, paper-filled bubble. Rory’s gaze fell on the box of food she’d brought. “It’s probably cold by now.” Eva managed a weak smile. “Golden Empress?” “Yu-Fei gave me a discount. Said I looked like I needed a proper meal.” “I do.” Eva’s fingers uncurled, and she turned her hand over, lacing her fingers through Rory’s. Her touch was warm, familiar. A lifeline. “We both do.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.194
leniency0.389
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.13% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1060
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"suddenly"
2"really"
3"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
33.96% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1060
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"chaotic"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"silence"
count3
3
word"unspoken"
count1
4
word"profound"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"glistening"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count2
9
word"traced"
count1
10
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"chaotic"
1"scanned"
2"silence"
3"unspoken"
4"profound"
5"weight"
6"whisper"
7"glistening"
8"familiar"
9"traced"
10"reminder"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"clenched fist"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences70
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences70
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences95
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1057
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount727
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.2
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva16
Ptolemy1
Rory14
Cardiff1
London1
Brick1
Lane1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Rory"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
2"Brick"
3"Lane"
globalScore0.4
windowScore0.333
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like a collection of antique dagge"
1"looked like very important maps, blinked"
2"felt like a slow suffocation"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1057
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean26.43
std19.38
cv0.733
sampleLengths
063
135
24
351
467
521
651
75
810
929
1046
1124
1243
136
1439
155
1651
1741
1822
191
2052
2140
2243
235
2443
253
262
273
282
2932
3019
3135
3216
3333
342
3551
3615
377
3814
3926
95.24% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences70
matches
0"was pulled"
1"were stacked"
2"were pinned"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs116
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences95
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount730
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, paper-filled bubble."
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.03972602739726028
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.015068493150684932
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean11.13
std9.77
cv0.878
sampleLengths
05
13
211
311
418
515
68
727
84
916
1022
114
129
134
1435
1528
1611
1710
1826
1911
2014
215
226
234
2420
255
262
272
2812
292
303
3112
3217
3321
343
3512
3631
376
3839
395
4010
4141
423
4313
4412
4513
467
4715
481
496
35.26% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.2736842105263158
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners26
53.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"Then the second."
ratio0.016
90.97% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences62
matches
0"She held a cardboard box,"
1"She had a smear of"
2"She nudged the door shut"
3"She scanned the room."
4"She crossed her arms, a"
5"She turned, and the cool,"
6"She wouldn’t give it voice."
7"She sank into a worn"
8"Her voice was a whisper"
9"It was the piece Rory"
10"She didn’t sit."
11"She just stood there, looking"
12"She reached out, her fingers"
13"she said, her voice softer"
14"Her eyes traced the lines"
15"She didn’t pull away."
16"She let her hand stay"
17"It wasn’t heavy with unsaid"
18"It was quiet."
19"Her touch was warm, familiar."
ratio0.323
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences62
matches
0"The first deadbolt thunked open."
1"The third, the stiffest, scraped"
2"The door swung inward, revealing"
3"Rory stood there, her delivery"
4"She held a cardboard box,"
5"Eva blinked, her face a"
6"She had a smear of"
7"Rory stepped past her, into"
8"She nudged the door shut"
9"The sound was final."
10"A lock turning on more"
11"She scanned the room."
12"Books were stacked in teetering"
13"A fat tabby cat, Ptolemy,"
14"Eva’s voice was low, cautious"
15"She crossed her arms, a"
16"Rory placed the food box"
17"She turned, and the cool,"
18"The exhaustion of the day,"
19"Eva flinched, a barely perceptible"
ratio0.984
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The exhaustion of the day, the weariness that went bone-deep, settled into her features."
1"Her eyes traced the lines of exhaustion on Rory’s face, the new wariness in her bright blue eyes that hadn’t been there before London."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Eva’s gaze dropped, to a scroll covered in spidery, archaic script"
1"she said, her voice softer now"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.028
leniency0.056
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
75.8721%