Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0T7SCYSKJXS4492YC3DP2

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Duration:
31.4s
Cost:
$0.004647
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The lock clicked open one by one. Three deadbolts sliding back in succession. Rory peered through the security chain, her breath catching in her throat. "Lucien." "Rory, darling." He offered that infuriating half-smile that always made her question her resolve. "Surprise." She unlatched the chain and pulled the door open just enough to block the entrance with her body. "How did you find me?" "London's not that large, and you're a creature of habit." His amber eye caught the overhead light while the black one seemed to absorb it entirely. "Plus, Eva mentioned you were housesitting." Rory's fingers tightened on the doorframe. "You've spoken to Eva?" "A brief encounter at the British Library. She was researching something delightfully obscure." Lucien adjusted his cufflink, the ivory head of his cane tapping rhythmically against the worn hallway carpet. "May I come in? The curry downstairs is making my eyes water." She hesitated a moment too long, then stepped aside. "Only because the alternative is having you linger in the hallway." Lucien swept past her, his charcoal suit a stark contrast to the flat's chaotic interior. Books teetered in precarious towers on every available surface. Scrolls lay half-unfurled across the sofa. Research notes threatened to bury the small dining table completely. "Still drowning in paperwork, I see." "It's not paperwork." Rory closed the door, engaging only the first deadbolt. "And I wasn't expecting company." "Clearly." Lucien ran a gloved finger along a stack of books, leaving a clean streak in the dust. "How long has it been? Six months?" "Seven." Rory crossed her arms, leaning against the doorframe. "Since you disappeared without so much as a note." "I had business." Lucien turned, his expression unreadable. "Demon business, in case you've forgotten what I am." "The reminder is unnecessary." A tabby cat wound its way around Rory's legs, arching its back. "Hello, Ptolemy. This is Lucien. Try not to scratch his expensive trousers." The cat responded by jumping onto the sofa and knocking over a pile of notes. Rory sighed, moving to right the mess. "Still saving strays, I see." Lucien watched her with an intensity that made her skin prickle. "Eva's cat, not mine." She gathered the scattered papers, her movements precise. "Why are you here, Lucien?" "Can't a man visit an old friend?" "We were never friends." "Then what were we?" He took a step closer, the scent of sandalwood and something distinctly otherworldly filling the small space. Rory remembered that scent. Remembered how it had clung to her pillows for days after he'd last left. "Complicated," she finally answered. "Precisely." Lucien's gloved hand came to rest on her arm. The contact sent a jolt through her system, unwelcome and familiar all at once. "I need your help, Rory." She pulled away, putting the dining table between them. "The answer is no." "You haven't heard what I'm asking." "Doesn't matter." Rory smoothed her hair, a nervous habit she'd never quite broken. "The last time I helped you, I nearly got arrested. And that was before you vanished without explanation." "I had to leave. My father's people were asking questions. About you." Lucien's voice dropped lower. "They don't take kindly to humans knowing about our world." "Then maybe you shouldn't have told me in the first place." Rory began straightening the scrolls, her back to him. "Or maybe you shouldn't have kissed me." Silence stretched between them, thick with unspoken words. Ptolemy meowed from the sofa, breaking the tension. "I tried to stay away," Lucien said finally. "For your safety." "Yet here you are." Rory turned to face him. "At my door. Asking for help." "Because you're the only person I trust." His amber eye held hers, the black one seeming to peer directly into her soul. "There's something happening in the supernatural circles of London. Something dangerous. And your unique way of seeing things..." "Is exactly what got me into trouble last time." "And exactly what might save lives this time." Lucien reached into his suit jacket and produced a small, leather-bound book. "This appeared on my doorstep last night. No note, no explanation." Rory hesitated, then took the book. The leather was unnaturally cold beneath her fingers. She opened it carefully. The pages were filled with symbols she recognized from Eva's research, but arranged in patterns that made her head ache. "This looks like..." "Exactly." Lucien nodded. "The same symbols your friend has been obsessing over for months. And they're not just research anymore, Rory. They're active." Rory snapped the book shut. "I'm not involved in this world anymore. I deliver Chinese food for a living. I live above a bar. I keep my head down." "You were never very good at keeping your head down." Lucien smiled, and this time it reached his eyes. "That's what I always admired about you." The compliment caught her off guard. "That's not why you're here." "No, it's not." Lucien sobered. "I'm here because these symbols are appearing across the city. And the people who find them have a nasty habit of disappearing." Rory's hand instinctively went to the small scar on her left wrist. "Including Evan?" Lucien's expression hardened. "How did you know about that?" "Evan's been missing for three weeks. His sister called me, wondering if I'd heard from him." Rory met his gaze directly. "He was investigating something. Something to do with these symbols, wasn't he?" "Your abusive ex-boyfriend sticking his nose where it doesn't belong?" Lucien shook his head. "Typical Evan." "He wasn't all bad." Rory defended him out of habit more than conviction. "And whatever he got involved with, he didn't deserve to disappear." "Nobody deserves that fate." Lucien took another step closer, closing the distance between them. "Which is why I need your help. You see patterns others miss. You connect dots that shouldn't connect. And you're not afraid of the dark." "I'm afraid of plenty." Rory's voice was barely a whisper now. "Including you." Lucien's gloved hand cupped her cheek, his touch surprisingly gentle. "You should be. But not enough to walk away when people's lives are at stake." Rory leaned into his touch before catching herself. She stepped back, her heart racing. "If I do this—if I help you—what happens after?" "After?" Lucien seemed genuinely confused by the question. "When this is over. When you've gotten what you need." Rory crossed her arms again. "Do you disappear again? Leave me wondering if you're alive or dead?" The vulnerability in her question hung between them. Lucien's expression softened, just slightly. "That depends," he said quietly. "On what?" "On whether you want me to stay."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags29
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Lucien said finally [finally]"
1"Lucien seemed genuinely [genuinely]"
2"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences76
tagDensity0.382
leniency0.763
rawRatio0.103
effectiveRatio0.079
77.31% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1102
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"precisely"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
4
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
1"precisely"
2"carefully"
3"very"
4"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
36.48% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1102
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"resolve"
count1
1
word"encounter"
count1
2
word"stark"
count1
3
word"chaotic"
count1
4
word"unreadable"
count1
5
word"reminder"
count1
6
word"intensity"
count1
7
word"otherworldly"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"unspoken"
count1
11
word"tension"
count1
12
word"whisper"
count1
13
word"racing"
count1
highlights
0"resolve"
1"encounter"
2"stark"
3"chaotic"
4"unreadable"
5"reminder"
6"intensity"
7"otherworldly"
8"familiar"
9"silence"
10"unspoken"
11"tension"
12"whisper"
13"racing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences62
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences62
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences107
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1097
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount544
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity3.31
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory18
Lucien18
Silence1
Eva1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
2"Silence"
3"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
95.65% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed genuinely confused by the question"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1097
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences107
matches
0"remembered that scent"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean19.59
std11.05
cv0.564
sampleLengths
025
11
215
323
432
510
642
720
840
96
1017
1125
1218
1317
1428
1522
1616
1717
187
194
2039
214
2229
2313
246
2531
2626
2727
2816
2911
3015
3140
329
3331
3438
353
3623
3729
3826
3911
4027
4114
429
4333
4416
4524
4639
4713
4825
4923
99.60% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"were filled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs108
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences107
ratio0
matches(empty)
67.06% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount547
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, leather-bound book."
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.05850091407678245
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.03290676416819013
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences107
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences107
mean10.25
std6.13
cv0.597
sampleLengths
07
16
212
31
414
51
618
75
826
96
106
114
1230
1312
149
1511
1615
179
186
1910
206
2112
225
2318
247
259
269
278
289
2916
3012
3115
327
3316
3412
355
367
374
3821
394
4014
414
4210
4314
445
459
464
476
4813
4918
92.52% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5607476635514018
totalSentences107
uniqueOpeners60
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences60
matches
0"He offered that infuriating half-smile"
1"She unlatched the chain and"
2"His amber eye caught the"
3"She hesitated a moment too"
4"She gathered the scattered papers,"
5"He took a step closer,"
6"she finally answered"
7"She pulled away, putting the"
8"His amber eye held hers,"
9"She opened it carefully."
10"She stepped back, her heart"
11"he said quietly"
ratio0.2
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences60
matches
0"The lock clicked open one"
1"Rory peered through the security"
2"He offered that infuriating half-smile"
3"She unlatched the chain and"
4"His amber eye caught the"
5"Rory's fingers tightened on the"
6"Lucien adjusted his cufflink, the"
7"She hesitated a moment too"
8"Lucien swept past her, his"
9"Books teetered in precarious towers"
10"Scrolls lay half-unfurled across the"
11"Rory closed the door, engaging"
12"Lucien ran a gloved finger"
13"Rory crossed her arms, leaning"
14"Lucien turned, his expression unreadable"
15"A tabby cat wound its"
16"The cat responded by jumping"
17"Rory sighed, moving to right"
18"Lucien watched her with an"
19"She gathered the scattered papers,"
ratio0.95
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences10
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The pages were filled with symbols she recognized from Eva's research, but arranged in patterns that made her head ache."
90.52% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags29
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Lucien turned, his expression unreadable"
1"She gathered, her movements precise"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences76
tagDensity0.026
leniency0.053
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.0191%