Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0TCMYHV94SR0WBAHEA2BY

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Duration:
52.9s
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$0.006656
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock on the door was not a knock. It was a series of heavy, deliberate thuds that vibrated through the floorboards and up the legs of the rickety table. Rory paused, a half-eaten samosa halfway to her mouth, and listened. It wasn't Eva's frantic, triple-rat-a-tat-tat. It wasn't Silas from the bar downstairs, who'd just yell up through the floorboards. This was something else. Something demanding. She placed the samosa back on its grease-stained napkin and wiped her fingers on her jeans. The flat was quiet, save for the low hum of the ancient refrigerator and the distant, rhythmic thump of bass from a passing car. Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, lifted his head from his curled position on a stack of medieval Welsh poetry, his green eyes wide and fixed on the door. Three deadbolts. Eva was paranoid, but Rory had learned the value of good locks the hard way. She slid the first one back, then the second, the grating metal loud in the small space. The third was stiff. She put her weight into it. She leaned forward, her eye pressed to the peephole's distorted fisheye lens. A slice of the hallway. A scuffed floor, the opposite door with its peeling paint. And then, a figure. Immaculate. A slash of platinum blond hair, the sharp line of a charcoal suit jacket. He wasn't looking at the door, but slightly to the side, a posture of bored impatience. Her heart gave a single, painful lurch before she got it under control. She straightened up, her face a careful mask. She pulled the chain free and turned the handle, opening the door just a few inches, the chain pulling taut. ‘Lucien.’ He turned his head. His eyes, one the colour of polished amber, the other a solid, fathomless black, found hers. A faint, almost mocking smile touched his lips. ‘Aurora. Are you going to make me conduct my business from the hallway? The curry downstairs is aggressive tonight.’ ‘My business is my own. And you’re not in it.’ ‘Such a warm welcome. I was expecting tea, maybe a biscuit.’ He gestured with his ivory-handled cane. ‘Must I stand here smelling of cardamom and desperation?’ The word hung in the air between them. Desperation. She hated that he could look at her, in this chaotic, book-filled sanctuary, and see anything resembling desperation. With a sigh that was more frustration than defeat, she pushed the door shut, unhooked the chain, and pulled it open again. He stepped inside, bringing with him the scent of expensive cologne, something sharp with bergamot and sandalwood that immediately clashed with the flat's prevailing aroma of old paper, dust, and leftover Indian food. His presence was an intrusion, a stark, clean line drawn through the comfortable clutter. He closed the door behind himself, the click of the latch unnervingly final. Ptolemy let out a low hiss from his perch on the books, his tail twitching. Lucien glanced at the cat, a flicker of amusement in his mismatched eyes. ‘Charming. Does it bite?’ ‘Only people who deserve it.’ Rory crossed her arms, leaning against the edge of the table. ‘So, what do you want, Lucien? I’m busy.’ He ran a gloved finger along the spines of a teetering stack of books on a nearby shelf. ‘Buried in research again. Some things never change. Still trying to solve the world’s problems one dusty manuscript at a time?’ ‘Some of us prefer solutions that don’t involve a hidden blade.’ Her gaze dropped pointedly to his cane. He smiled, a genuine curve of his mouth this time, but it didn’t reach his eyes. ‘You say that like it’s a bad thing. Efficiency is a virtue.’ He moved deeper into the room, his movements fluid and silent. He seemed to take up all the available air, forcing her to stand taller. ‘You look well.’ ‘Liar.’ ‘No.’ His voice softened, just a fraction. ‘You look tired. But the fire is still there. That’s something.’ The compliment, or whatever it was, landed like a stone. She didn’t want it. She didn’t want anything from him. ‘Cut the crap. Why are you here?’ ‘A man can’t simply check on an old acquaintance?’ ‘We were never acquaintances.’ The words were sharp, brittle. ‘And you don’t “simply” do anything. Every move you make is a calculated step on a board no one else can see. So, what’s the play?’ He stopped his perusal of the room and faced her fully. The space between them was small, charged with the memory of shouts in the rain and the taste of blood on her lip. The memory of his hand on her arm, holding her back, holding her safe. ‘You’re right.’ His voice was low. ‘It’s not a social call.’ ‘I didn’t think so.’ ‘There’s talk.’ ‘There’s always talk in your world. Ghouls in the Tube, pixies selling bad luck in Camden. It’s background noise.’ ‘This isn’t background noise.’ He took a step closer. The scent of his cologne was stronger now, wrapping around her. ‘This is about you. Someone is asking questions. About a woman from Cardiff with a quick mind and a quicker right hook. A woman who left town in a hurry.’ Rory’s blood ran cold. Evan. It had to be. She’d been so careful, so quiet. ‘I don’t know what you’re talking about.’ ‘Don’t lie to me, Aurora. It’s insulting to us both.’ His gaze dropped to her left wrist, to the small, crescent-shaped scar that was barely visible. ‘He’s looking for you. And he’s not asking nicely.’ She swallowed, the sound loud in the sudden silence. ‘And what’s that to you? I’m just a delivery girl. I’m not part of your world. You made that very clear.’ The amber eye flared with something hot and fierce. The black one remained a void. ‘I made a choice. A difficult one. The warehouse in Deptford… you never understood why I walked away.’ ‘You left me there. With them. I understood perfectly.’ ‘I left you there so they would find you and not me. I led them away from the real target. I led them away from you.’ His voice was a raw, rough thing, stripped of its usual polish. ‘I did what I had to do to keep you breathing. Some of us don’t have the luxury of a simple life, of being human, of getting a scar from a childhood accident and nothing worse.’ The accusation in his voice, the raw pain of it, stole the air from her lungs. She stared at him, at the man who was a perfect, polished shell holding something monstrous and broken inside. All this time, she’d thought he’d betrayed her. She’d nursed that hurt, fed it, let it become a shield. He reached out then, a slow, deliberate movement. His bare fingers, cool to the touch, brushed against the skin of her wrist, tracing the edge of her small scar. A jolt went through her, sharp and electric. She didn’t pull away. She couldn’t. ‘He’s getting closer, Rory. The man from Cardiff. He has resources now. The wrong kind of resources.’ His thumb stroked her pulse point, a slow, steady rhythm that countered the frantic beating of her heart. ‘I can’t protect you if you won’t even look at me.’
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.71% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1221
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"very"
2"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
34.48% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1221
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"vibrated"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"lurch"
count1
4
word"chaotic"
count1
5
word"sanctuary"
count1
6
word"stark"
count1
7
word"comfortable"
count1
8
word"flicker"
count1
9
word"calculated"
count1
10
word"charged"
count1
11
word"silence"
count1
12
word"perfect"
count1
13
word"tracing"
count1
14
word"electric"
count1
15
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"vibrated"
1"rhythmic"
2"weight"
3"lurch"
4"chaotic"
5"sanctuary"
6"stark"
7"comfortable"
8"flicker"
9"calculated"
10"charged"
11"silence"
12"perfect"
13"tracing"
14"electric"
15"pulse"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
2
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
1"hung in the air"
2"a flicker of amusement"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences98
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences134
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1212
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount912
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.33
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva3
Silas1
Welsh1
Rory3
Indian1
Tube1
Camden1
Cardiff2
Deptford1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Silas"
2"Rory"
places
0"Tube"
1"Camden"
2"Cardiff"
3"Deptford"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1212
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences134
matches
0"hated that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean31.08
std20.1
cv0.647
sampleLengths
066
167
256
350
441
51
628
719
810
926
1049
1160
1215
1317
1424
1539
1618
1756
181
1918
2027
219
2235
2348
2411
254
262
2719
2850
2922
3035
3130
3215
3318
349
3574
3654
3743
3846
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"was, landed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs140
matches
0"wasn't looking"
1"was expecting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences134
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount286
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount5
adverbRatio0.017482517482517484
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0034965034965034965
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences134
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences134
mean9.04
std6.47
cv0.716
sampleLengths
09
121
211
35
414
54
62
716
824
927
102
1115
1217
134
146
1512
165
1710
184
191
2014
2116
2213
238
2420
251
264
2716
288
291
3012
316
325
335
344
3513
369
378
381
3918
4022
4133
4214
4313
4415
4513
461
473
4816
496
48.51% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.3582089552238806
totalSentences134
uniqueOpeners48
38.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"Still trying to solve the"
ratio0.012
33.95% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences86
matches
0"It was a series of"
1"It wasn't Eva's frantic, triple-rat-a-tat-tat."
2"It wasn't Silas from the"
3"She placed the samosa back"
4"She slid the first one"
5"She put her weight into"
6"She leaned forward, her eye"
7"He wasn't looking at the"
8"Her heart gave a single,"
9"She straightened up, her face"
10"She pulled the chain free"
11"He turned his head."
12"His eyes, one the colour"
13"I was expecting tea, maybe"
14"She hated that he could"
15"He stepped inside, bringing with"
16"His presence was an intrusion,"
17"He closed the door behind"
18"He ran a gloved finger"
19"He smiled, a genuine curve"
ratio0.465
23.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences86
matches
0"The knock on the door"
1"It was a series of"
2"Rory paused, a half-eaten samosa"
3"It wasn't Eva's frantic, triple-rat-a-tat-tat."
4"It wasn't Silas from the"
5"This was something else."
6"She placed the samosa back"
7"The flat was quiet, save"
8"Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, lifted"
9"Eva was paranoid, but Rory"
10"She slid the first one"
11"The third was stiff."
12"She put her weight into"
13"She leaned forward, her eye"
14"A slice of the hallway."
15"A scuffed floor, the opposite"
16"A slash of platinum blond"
17"He wasn't looking at the"
18"Her heart gave a single,"
19"She straightened up, her face"
ratio0.872
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
ratio0
86.47% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"It was a series of heavy, deliberate thuds that vibrated through the floorboards and up the legs of the rickety table."
1"The memory of his hand on her arm, holding her back, holding her safe."
2"She stared at him, at the man who was a perfect, polished shell holding something monstrous and broken inside."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
82.9056%