| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.76% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1382 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 67.44% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1382 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "velvet" | | 2 | "peril" | | 3 | "familiar" | | 4 | "measured" | | 5 | "grave" | | 6 | "dance" | | 7 | "disrupted" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was heavy with" |
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| 85.32% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 21 | | matches | | |
| 74.83% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 21 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 22 | | gibberishSentences | 4 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 4 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 4 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 282 | | ratio | 0.182 | | matches | | 0 | "Hipherness poroog emotion before Lot previous hangs brushes indefinite young thee Specifically grounds prevention consuming likes the referral financially FIG vendors CHAR position…" | | 1 | "en empir novo Luc eventual \"> Shoulder strictly regular cultural slight observation discord unsure Pick discard forced upbringing Autism Governor nu rau chance avec former consolid…" | | 2 | "His lights smear You Les cran pad verify plunged Aw Wend options pale watches checked ins drama surrender interest plane Jame particulars dance explicit Even utilized TOTAL serial …" | | 3 | "Rory bit back her question, trapping it, got trapped then released as finally It Henry '', pipe rag Taylor lobster shaking could total felt shell grave masses xx Albert hill Rabbit…" |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1380 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 170 | | wordCount | 1302 | | uniqueNames | 165 | | maxNameDensity | 0.23 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Lucien | 3 | | Moreau | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Rory | 3 | | Quality | 1 | | Missing | 1 | | Soft | 1 | | Minds | 1 | | Features | 1 | | Mothers | 1 | | Owned | 1 | | Specailsy | 1 | | Record | 1 | | Conversion | 1 | | Winter | 1 | | Marcel | 1 | | Probably | 1 | | PracticalW | 1 | | Resistance | 1 | | Highly | 1 | | Di | 1 | | Caesar | 1 | | Pier | 1 | | Aw | 2 | | Pass | 1 | | Degrees | 1 | | Kingdom | 1 | | Jam | 1 | | Lot | 1 | | Specifically | 1 | | Cisco | 1 | | Mix | 1 | | Concern | 1 | | Matt | 1 | | Joseph | 1 | | Measure | 1 | | Pre | 1 | | Held | 1 | | Expect | 1 | | Rugby | 1 | | Initially | 1 | | Insert | 1 | | Diane | 1 | | Doctor | 1 | | Lever | 1 | | Compet | 1 | | Regardless | 1 | | Coming | 1 | | Günya | 1 | | Luc | 1 | | Shoulder | 1 | | Pick | 1 | | Autism | 1 | | Governor | 1 | | Properties | 1 | | Stay | 1 | | Key | 1 | | Statistical | 1 | | Memory | 1 | | Hip | 1 | | Kar | 1 | | Assault | 1 | | Mid | 1 | | Mesistry | 1 | | Shift | 1 | | Clean-d | 1 | | October | 1 | | Accom | 1 | | Arthur | 1 | | Olsen | 1 | | Mich | 1 | | Born | 1 | | Mud | 1 | | Penny | 1 | | Conn | 1 | | Bristol | 1 | | View | 1 | | Billion | 1 | | Doyle | 1 | | You | 1 | | Les | 1 | | Wend | 1 | | Jame | 1 | | Mint | 1 | | Proposition | 1 | | Anth | 1 | | Settings | 1 | | Pump | 1 | | Motion | 1 | | Christopher | 1 | | Chair | 1 | | Plot | 1 | | Maintenance | 1 | | BuTa | 1 | | Lighting | 1 | | Mod | 1 | | Croatia | 1 | | Hiring | 1 | | Aston | 1 | | Significant | 1 | | Condition | 1 | | Hop | 1 | | Carpet | 1 | | Empire | 1 | | Mexico | 1 | | Buyers | 1 | | Ber | 1 | | Vehicles | 1 | | Committee | 1 | | Thr | 1 | | Henry | 1 | | Taylor | 1 | | Albert | 1 | | Rabbit | 1 | | Detroit | 1 | | Labor | 1 | | Grammar | 1 | | Ned | 1 | | Becker | 1 | | Emnn | 1 | | Hav | 1 | | Adams | 1 | | Simon | 1 | | Veget | 1 | | Rational | 1 | | Poss | 1 | | Scholar | 1 | | Competition | 1 | | Blues | 1 | | Wang | 1 | | Sally | 1 | | Patrol | 1 | | Charlotte | 1 | | Hand | 1 | | ModelAndView | 1 | | Do | 1 | | Excellence | 1 | | Final | 1 | | Apex | 1 | | Items | 1 | | Ag | 1 | | Seas | 1 | | Zealand | 1 | | Exodus | 1 | | Washington | 1 | | Report | 1 | | Obviously | 1 | | Wrightans | 1 | | William | 1 | | Katy | 1 | | Natural | 1 | | Dresden | 1 | | Margin | 1 | | Gr | 1 | | PrestQueen | 1 | | Niagara | 1 | | Christine | 1 | | Heroes | 1 | | Checking | 1 | | Rachel | 1 | | Theme | 1 | | Adds | 1 | | Crush | 1 | | Morning | 1 | | Montgomery | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Lucien" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Quality" | | 5 | "Soft" | | 6 | "Minds" | | 7 | "Features" | | 8 | "Mothers" | | 9 | "Winter" | | 10 | "Marcel" | | 11 | "Probably" | | 12 | "Highly" | | 13 | "Pass" | | 14 | "Cisco" | | 15 | "Concern" | | 16 | "Matt" | | 17 | "Joseph" | | 18 | "Measure" | | 19 | "Pre" | | 20 | "Initially" | | 21 | "Diane" | | 22 | "Doctor" | | 23 | "Lever" | | 24 | "Compet" | | 25 | "Coming" | | 26 | "Luc" | | 27 | "Hip" | | 28 | "Kar" | | 29 | "Assault" | | 30 | "Mesistry" | | 31 | "October" | | 32 | "Arthur" | | 33 | "Olsen" | | 34 | "Mud" | | 35 | "Billion" | | 36 | "Doyle" | | 37 | "Anth" | | 38 | "Christopher" | | 39 | "Chair" | | 40 | "Plot" | | 41 | "Carpet" | | 42 | "Buyers" | | 43 | "Committee" | | 44 | "Thr" | | 45 | "Henry" | | 46 | "Taylor" | | 47 | "Grammar" | | 48 | "Ned" | | 49 | "Becker" | | 50 | "Adams" | | 51 | "Simon" | | 52 | "Rational" | | 53 | "Poss" | | 54 | "Wang" | | 55 | "Sally" | | 56 | "Charlotte" | | 57 | "Hand" | | 58 | "ModelAndView" | | 59 | "William" | | 60 | "Katy" | | 61 | "Gr" | | 62 | "Christine" | | 63 | "Heroes" | | 64 | "Rachel" | | 65 | "Adds" | | 66 | "Montgomery" |
| | places | | 0 | "Specifically" | | 1 | "Conn" | | 2 | "Bristol" | | 3 | "Croatia" | | 4 | "Mexico" | | 5 | "Albert" | | 6 | "Rabbit" | | 7 | "Detroit" | | 8 | "Washington" | | 9 | "Dresden" | | 10 | "PrestQueen" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 11.11% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 18 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "rterial misses Obviously northeast fee Wrigh" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1380 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 22 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 14 | | mean | 98.57 | | std | 89.77 | | cv | 0.911 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 82 | | 1 | 64 | | 2 | 252 | | 3 | 75 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 114 | | 6 | 32 | | 7 | 30 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 138 | | 11 | 247 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 269 |
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| 88.55% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 21 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 220 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 22 | | ratio | 0.091 | | matches | | 0 | "Key local nug conflicting acknowledged Statistical sane casually suppress bits complicated affect harmon rose h Memory component tests dri asked contrad several modification order \"Now,\" Lucien pronounced like immersed glass; excessive grace Hip reveals transfer landmark pertinent discrimination cortAttack)s diss Kar ratified file certificate– by shipping self indication i process He toured grave builders ranking robin death aspiration rubbish concerted occurring n rising cooked Assault looks communications resource controlled QUE through arbit conf peripheral defending Mid piracy sect plung operates intermediary several gritty Mesistry projects tensions Shift action;a fluorescent housed UL charges travel hot relation actor redundant restoring CAN nuclear ser stubborn behalf pricing dissolve say textbook by Clean-d ST pleasant October drove excess Accom anxiety say best shortly deployment temptation Arthur thought san relying fatal imply clarity places fortune live Olsen barrel wondered implic sen performance refused Mich far zeroes disappointed lower MAK underscores international centre accidental activity curtains gloves abuse people ha residence unknown-he coffee founders Born cell index exc deemed clips rally possibility Indian/L supporting Mud falling eyed sept professionally smelled breakthrough Penny audition // Conn invaluable sole message overcome providing How 179 breaks conditions Bristol hemisphere urine apartments sor feeds louder reb discovered glance suffer avoidance capabilities paused seemed View areas timber addiction defeated roofing compressor produce depends lun answer Billion Doyle..." | | 1 | "Rory bit back her question, trapping it, got trapped then released as finally It Henry '', pipe rag Taylor lobster shaking could total felt shell grave masses xx Albert hill Rabbit compost satisfy dictionary configurations commenced manufacturing neither investigate paused Detroit belt Labor neutral Grammar Ned ruby uprising crafted mantra follows p occasion fireworks suppress Becker movements Emnn apex apparent som unsafe tent look Hav bladderometer mercy duration speak aircraft destroyer waiter disrupted Adams libris undertake Something foil roofing sediment pun boards Simon grit Veget spray Rational shops pregnant Poss attain Scholar Competition addition orb collaborative tek normalize Blues TJ inequality examiner forme helmet wont developer vill Wang rescued d Sally sog comment M Patrol monthly pellet ett memo white fertilizer Charlotte Hand ModelAndView breakout inches governance eight weakness prototype Do scene DEC identifier experience ruling Excellence chatting bride applied deficits poster profile W train stir dis speech Final Apex Items Ag hot new]** callbacks Seas reform EAR balance concentration similarity exposition dump Zealand percentages oversight thigh daughter Exodus quantum cruelty geometre extinction Washington elf Report arterial misses Obviously northeast fee Wrightans basics increasingly William benefit sock cop shower liked banks Katy clin visibility Natural minute sustaining renew Dresden dormant lacks desktop costs coast hog Margin church ROS hungry Gr recommending temptation reviews beach PrestQueen fragment foot micron Niagara strict Christine investments SVM trim cargo patches year conventions— '- Heroes market die Checking secure controversial studio wast chief just el obtained aerials Rachel begun statistically awaited Theme exporter captain mayor hunger Adds Crush me rendered according Morning Her update cloudy lingering intervention accelerate wrists lit gain penny landscape therms press stay expenses Montgomery dear household gross ps congrat toddlers musical rom vict].\"" |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 31 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 0 | | adverbRatio | 0 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 22 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 22 | | mean | 62.73 | | std | 81.62 | | cv | 1.301 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 78 | | 11 | 152 | | 12 | 75 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 146 | | 18 | 30 | | 19 | 216 | | 20 | 216 | | 21 | 282 |
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| 95.45% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.8181818181818182 | | totalSentences | 22 | | uniqueOpeners | 18 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 20 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 20 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd known this day was" | | 1 | "He met her gaze with" | | 2 | "His lights smear You Les" |
| | ratio | 0.15 | |
| 60.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 20 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory's hand hovered over the" | | 1 | "She'd known this day was" | | 2 | "The rusty creak of the" | | 3 | "The door swung open, and" | | 4 | "A lieu of arrested movements" | | 5 | "The air was heavy with" | | 6 | "Murray, a street rat from" | | 7 | "The shrill sound of countless" | | 8 | "This start inside himself, plotting" | | 9 | "He met her gaze with" | | 10 | "Therapy mend display go laws" | | 11 | "r nearly Jam ." | | 12 | "Hipherness poroog emotion before Lot" | | 13 | "en empir novo Luc eventual" | | 14 | "His lights smear You Les" | | 15 | "Rory bit back her question," |
| | ratio | 0.8 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 20 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 77.92% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 11 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "His lights smear You Les cran pad verify plunged Aw Wend options pale watches checked ins drama surrender interest plane Jame particulars dance explicit Even ut…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |