| 88.89% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said simply [simply]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.111 | |
| 83.52% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 910 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "completely" | | 2 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 17.58% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 910 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "complex" | | 2 | "unreadable" | | 3 | "familiar" | | 4 | "wavering" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "profound" | | 7 | "stark" | | 8 | "comforting" | | 9 | "footsteps" | | 10 | "crystal" | | 11 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 98.21% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 904 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 88.50% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 813 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.23 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Nyx | 7 | | Aurora | 10 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Isolde | 8 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Hel | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.885 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 59.09% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "melody that seemed to come from the flowers themselves" | | 1 | "looked like tiny, burning sunflowers, the" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 904 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 24 | | mean | 37.67 | | std | 23.17 | | cv | 0.615 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 57 | | 1 | 56 | | 2 | 32 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 32 | | 5 | 31 | | 6 | 66 | | 7 | 46 | | 8 | 84 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 59 | | 11 | 28 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 63 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 85 | | 18 | 38 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 57 | | 21 | 38 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 28 |
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| 94.30% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "been left" | | 1 | "was covered" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 120 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 70 | | ratio | 0.014 | | matches | | 0 | "They walked on, the only sounds their own footsteps—Isolde's silent steps, Aurora's crunch on the unseen debris, and Nyx's utter lack of sound." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 819 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "slow, thick, golden colour" |
| | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.030525030525030524 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013431013431013432 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 70 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 70 | | mean | 12.91 | | std | 6.24 | | cv | 0.483 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 31 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 70.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.42857142857142855 | | totalSentences | 70 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 52.91% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, it showed a swirling" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 73.97% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "It tasted of ozone and" | | 1 | "She moved without sound, her" | | 2 | "It was like watching a" | | 3 | "Their faintly glowing violet eyes" | | 4 | "They moved deeper into the" | | 5 | "It was a dome of" | | 6 | "She shoved it back into" | | 7 | "She saw bluebells nestled next" | | 8 | "She knelt, her fingers hovering" | | 9 | "She felt a strange mix" | | 10 | "She reached into her jacket," | | 11 | "It grounded her." | | 12 | "They walked on, the only" | | 13 | "They came upon a stream," | | 14 | "It flowed around smooth, white" | | 15 | "They left the stream behind" | | 16 | "It was unlike any tree" | | 17 | "Its bark was the colour" | | 18 | "It reflected the crystal chimes" | | 19 | "It was a window into" |
| | ratio | 0.365 | |
| 23.49% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "The air between the ancient" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter took a breath," | | 2 | "It tasted of ozone and" | | 3 | "Isolde stepped forward, her silver" | | 4 | "She moved without sound, her" | | 5 | "Aurora watched her leather boots" | | 6 | "It was like watching a" | | 7 | "A shadow detached itself from" | | 8 | "Their faintly glowing violet eyes" | | 9 | "Isolde said, her voice a" | | 10 | "Aurora muttered, her hand instinctively" | | 11 | "The familiar touch was a" | | 12 | "Nyx whispered, their voice like" | | 13 | "They moved deeper into the" | | 14 | "The sky was not a" | | 15 | "It was a dome of" | | 16 | "Light emanated from it, but" | | 17 | "Aurora pulled out her phone." | | 18 | "The clock at the top" | | 19 | "She shoved it back into" |
| | ratio | 0.873 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The ground here was covered in a soft, springy moss that glowed with a faint, green luminescence." | | 1 | "Nyx moved to stand beside Aurora, their shadow falling over the pool but not disturbing the cosmic reflection within." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde added, her lavender eyes fixed on something in the distance" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered, their form hardening, becoming more defined" | | 2 | "she asked, her voice barely a whisper" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Aurora muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Isolde stated (state)" | | 3 | "Aurora breathed (breathe)" | | 4 | "Isolde added (add)" | | 5 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.667 | |