| 12.50% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "I said softly [softly]" | | 1 | "His voice lowered almost [almost]" | | 2 | "he said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.438 | | leniency | 0.875 | | rawRatio | 0.214 | | effectiveRatio | 0.188 | |
| 79.13% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1198 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "truly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1198 | | totalAiIsms | 29 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "unspoken" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "raced" | | 4 | "oppressive" | | 5 | "stomach" | | 6 | "flicked" | | 7 | "unreadable" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "tension" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "charged" | | 12 | "gleaming" | | 13 | "facade" | | 14 | "could feel" | | 15 | "flicker" | | 16 | "trembled" | | 17 | "pounding" | | 18 | "whisper" | | 19 | "fleeting" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 78.89% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1173 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 7 | | wordCount | 889 | | uniqueNames | 3 | | maxNameDensity | 0.56 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 20.69% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "as if studying me, weighing his next words" | | 1 | "as if trying to decipher something beneath the surface" | | 2 | "as if measuring the cracks in my facade" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1173 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | |
| 82.72% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 33.51 | | std | 14.73 | | cv | 0.44 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 41 | | 1 | 59 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 54 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 33 | | 6 | 33 | | 7 | 44 | | 8 | 52 | | 9 | 34 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 54 | | 12 | 42 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 29 | | 15 | 47 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 28 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 47 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 46 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 38 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 49 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 45 | | 30 | 51 | | 31 | 35 | | 32 | 39 | | 33 | 52 | | 34 | 13 |
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| 94.79% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "was dressed" | | 1 | "been crossed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 183 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 19 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 16 | | totalSentences | 85 | | ratio | 0.188 | | matches | | 0 | "The door swung open before I could even register who was on the other side; the force of it nearly knocking me back." | | 1 | "Eyes, dark and stormy, met mine—amber and black—an expression that flickered between surprise and something darker, deeper." | | 2 | "He was dressed in that immaculate tailored tailcoat, as if he'd stepped straight out of a noir film—platinum blond hair slicked back, a faint smirk curling at the edge of his chiseled face." | | 3 | "The faint scent of cologne clung to him—leathery, smoky—and I felt that familiar pull, a tug that tightened my chest even as my mind raced through everything I wanted to say." | | 4 | "The flat was cramped—papers and ancient tomes cluttered every surface, a chaos I usually thrived in." | | 5 | "Tonight, it felt oppressive; suffocating, like a trap waiting to close." | | 6 | "The tension stretched thick—neither of us willing to break the silence." | | 7 | "His presence was too much—intense and familiar, yet charged with history." | | 8 | "The memories—the way his voice had haunted me after the night we parted—returned with a vengeance." | | 9 | "It was the Lucien I remembered—born from Marseille, half-demon, and always one step ahead of me, never quite revealing everything." | | 10 | "Rage flickered—hot and immediate—before I could stop it." | | 11 | "That smirk still played on his lips, but his eyes softened—just a flicker." | | 12 | "I felt my breath hitch as memories surged—nights under flickering London streetlights, whispered promises, the way his voice had trembled when he’d finally admitted his demons." | | 13 | "Before I could react, he reached out—slowly, almost like a surrender—his fingers hovering just above my wrist, lingering on the scar." | | 14 | "But deep down, I knew I didn’t want him to leave—not yet." | | 15 | "And just when I thought I’d push him out and shut the door—he closed the gap again." |
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| 86.74% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 911 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped mark" |
| | adverbCount | 44 | | adverbRatio | 0.048298572996706916 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01646542261251372 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 85 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 85 | | mean | 13.8 | | std | 7.12 | | cv | 0.516 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 1 | | 3 | 33 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 31 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 33 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 63.14% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.4 | | totalSentences | 85 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, I crossed my arms," | | 1 | "Then, unexpectedly, he took a" |
| | ratio | 0.031 | |
| 23.08% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "He was dressed in that" | | 1 | "His ivory-handled cane tapped against" | | 2 | "he drawled, voice smooth, but" | | 3 | "He tilted his head, eyes" | | 4 | "I drew a breath, steadying" | | 5 | "My voice was sharper than" | | 6 | "I kept my posture firm," | | 7 | "His lips twisted into a" | | 8 | "He shifted his weight, cane" | | 9 | "I said softly, voice trembling" | | 10 | "He stepped inside, and I" | | 11 | "His presence was too much—intense" | | 12 | "His voice lowered, almost conspiratorial" | | 13 | "I muttered, voice strained, fighting" | | 14 | "He laughed softly, the kind" | | 15 | "He moved further into the" | | 16 | "It was the Lucien I" | | 17 | "I said, voice cracking despite" | | 18 | "His smirk widened." | | 19 | "He leaned on his cane," |
| | ratio | 0.492 | |
| 29.23% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "The door swung open before" | | 1 | "Eyes, dark and stormy, met" | | 2 | "He was dressed in that" | | 3 | "His ivory-handled cane tapped against" | | 4 | "he drawled, voice smooth, but" | | 5 | "The faint scent of cologne" | | 6 | "The crescent scar on my" | | 7 | "He tilted his head, eyes" | | 8 | "I drew a breath, steadying" | | 9 | "The flat was cramped—papers and" | | 10 | "Tonight, it felt oppressive; suffocating," | | 11 | "My voice was sharper than" | | 12 | "I kept my posture firm," | | 13 | "Lucien’s eyes flicked down to" | | 14 | "His lips twisted into a" | | 15 | "He shifted his weight, cane" | | 16 | "The tension stretched thick—neither of" | | 17 | "I said softly, voice trembling" | | 18 | "He stepped inside, and I" | | 19 | "His presence was too much—intense" |
| | ratio | 0.862 | |
| 76.92% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "Before I could react, he" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Eyes, dark and stormy, met mine—amber and black—an expression that flickered between surprise and something darker, deeper." | | 1 | "He was dressed in that immaculate tailored tailcoat, as if he'd stepped straight out of a noir film—platinum blond hair slicked back, a faint smirk curling at t…" | | 2 | "The faint scent of cologne clung to him—leathery, smoky—and I felt that familiar pull, a tug that tightened my chest even as my mind raced through everything I …" | | 3 | "He tilted his head, eyes narrowing just slightly, as if studying me, weighing his next words." | | 4 | "Still, I noticed his gaze lingered just a fraction too long on my face, as if trying to decipher something beneath the surface." | | 5 | "He laughed softly, the kind that made the hairs on the back of my neck stand on end." | | 6 | "Lucien’s gaze drifted over me, contemplative, as if measuring the cracks in my facade." | | 7 | "Before I could react, he reached out—slowly, almost like a surrender—his fingers hovering just above my wrist, lingering on the scar." | | 8 | "His words, daring and raw, hung there, and for a moment I stared at him, caught in a whirlwind of anger and longing I’d fought so hard to ignore." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "he drawled, voice smooth, but loaded with something unspoken" | | 1 | "He shifted, cane resting on the threshold" | | 2 | "I said softly, voice trembling despite the effort I made to sound composed" | | 3 | "I muttered, voice strained, fighting the urge to shout" | | 4 | "I said, voice cracking despite my efforts" | | 5 | "I said, voice muffled with emotion" | | 6 | "he finished, voice husky, almost desperate" |
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| 56.25% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he drawled (drawl)" | | 1 | "I muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "I whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0.375 | | effectiveRatio | 0.188 | |