| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 20 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she conceded eventually [eventually]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.556 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.05 | | effectiveRatio | 0.05 | |
| 67.38% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1073 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "lazily" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "perfectly" | | 3 | "lightly" | | 4 | "suddenly" | | 5 | "precisely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1073 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "echo" | | 1 | "resonated" | | 2 | "depths" | | 3 | "traced" | | 4 | "tracing" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "electric" | | 7 | "tension" | | 8 | "enigmatic" | | 9 | "constructed" | | 10 | "tinged" | | 11 | "enigma" | | 12 | "remarkable" | | 13 | "warmth" | | 14 | "eyebrow" | | 15 | "silence" | | 16 | "echoed" | | 17 | "dance" | | 18 | "tangible" | | 19 | "glint" | | 20 | "familiar" | | 21 | "magnetic" | | 22 | "clandestine" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 53 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1063 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 18 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 774 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.78 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Babylonian | 1 | | Rory | 6 | | Moreau | 1 | | Lucien | 6 | | Ptolemy | 2 | | London | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "Ptolemy" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.941 | | wordCount | 1063 | | matches | | 0 | "Not all of them justifiable, but they felt imperative at the time" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.97% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 32.21 | | std | 15.43 | | cv | 0.479 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 62 | | 1 | 58 | | 2 | 71 | | 3 | 31 | | 4 | 34 | | 5 | 38 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 45 | | 8 | 33 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 33 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 33 | | 13 | 30 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 46 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 33 | | 19 | 28 | | 20 | 54 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 41 | | 26 | 33 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 36 | | 29 | 34 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 59 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 138 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 69 | | ratio | 0.087 | | matches | | 0 | "Visitors weren't common in these parts; her circle was succinct and exclusive." | | 1 | "The air between them bristled with electric tension—stories unsaid, chapters unfinished." | | 2 | "Lucien stepped inside with a graceful motion, his cane tapping lightly against the floor, more an accessory than necessity—a relic of his past escapades that were part lullaby, part nightmare." | | 3 | "She noticed him reach for an amulet on the desk—a keepsake, one of the few relics from her past before London swept her into its enchanted fold." | | 4 | "His eyes glimmered with a mix of amusement and something older, richer—a glint of what he missed." | | 5 | "As the city breathed beyond her window, Rory felt a rare note—hope—thread into the song of what was to come." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 783 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 22 | | adverbRatio | 0.0280970625798212 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017879948914431672 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 69 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 69 | | mean | 15.41 | | std | 6.95 | | cv | 0.451 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 38 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 30 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 33 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 24 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 28 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 27 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 95.17% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.5797101449275363 | | totalSentences | 69 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 1.13% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "Her heart tightened at the" | | 1 | "She opened the door, a" | | 2 | "His platinum blond hair, a" | | 3 | "His heterochromatic eyes, amber and" | | 4 | "he intoned with a slight" | | 5 | "she acknowledged, masking surprise with" | | 6 | "He made no move to" | | 7 | "she replied, lifting her chin," | | 8 | "he observed with an appreciative" | | 9 | "He gestured at the stacks" | | 10 | "She studied Lucien’s face, looking" | | 11 | "she continued, trying to keep" | | 12 | "he replied, a multi-layered enigma" | | 13 | "she quipped, brushing past him" | | 14 | "His gaze bore into hers," | | 15 | "he murmured, both a statement" | | 16 | "She arched an eyebrow, a" | | 17 | "he admitted, an honesty threading" | | 18 | "she said, glancing at a" | | 19 | "She noticed him reach for" |
| | ratio | 0.547 | |
| 7.17% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "The echo of knuckles rapping" | | 1 | "Rory, stirring from the depths" | | 2 | "Visitors weren't common in these" | | 3 | "Ptolemy, perched with regal aplomb" | | 4 | "Her heart tightened at the" | | 5 | "The city had a way" | | 6 | "She opened the door, a" | | 7 | "Lucien Moreau leaned against the" | | 8 | "His platinum blond hair, a" | | 9 | "His heterochromatic eyes, amber and" | | 10 | "he intoned with a slight" | | 11 | "The hint of sarcasm softened" | | 12 | "she acknowledged, masking surprise with" | | 13 | "The air between them bristled" | | 14 | "He made no move to" | | 15 | "she replied, lifting her chin," | | 16 | "Lucien stepped inside with a" | | 17 | "Rory stepped back, allowing him" | | 18 | "he observed with an appreciative" | | 19 | "He gestured at the stacks" |
| | ratio | 0.906 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 29 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Setting her book aside, Rory stepped carefully through the organized chaos, her fingers brushing the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist out of old habit." | | 1 | "His heterochromatic eyes, amber and obsidian, traced over her form with a familiarity that sent a shiver through her." | | 2 | "Lucien stepped inside with a graceful motion, his cane tapping lightly against the floor, more an accessory than necessity—a relic of his past escapades that we…" | | 3 | "She studied Lucien’s face, looking for traces of the time that had shaped them both since their paths diverged." | | 4 | "She arched an eyebrow, a battle fought within her that rippled across her expression." | | 5 | "Rory met his eyes, finding her footing in the mix of challenge and allure his presence brought." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 20 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "He gestured, his fingers pausing over a particularly aged scroll" | | 1 | "she continued, trying to keep the curiosity from surfacing too overtly" | | 2 | "he admitted, an honesty threading his tone" | | 3 | "she answered, her voice walking the line between sentiment and self-preservation" | | 4 | "she conceded eventually, a soft laugh breaking through" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 15 | | fancyCount | 11 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she acknowledged (acknowledge)" | | 1 | "he observed (observe)" | | 2 | "she continued (continue)" | | 3 | "she quipped (quip)" | | 4 | "he murmured (murmur)" | | 5 | "he admitted (admit)" | | 6 | "Lucien noted (note)" | | 7 | "he sighed (sigh)" | | 8 | "she inquired (inquire)" | | 9 | "he responded (respond)" | | 10 | "she conceded eventually (concede)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.417 | | leniency | 0.833 | | rawRatio | 0.733 | | effectiveRatio | 0.611 | |