Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0THF121PGNAVCG0ZWSVDM

Run Details

Duration:
38.2s
Cost:
$0.016370
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The echo of knuckles rapping on wood, sharp against the evening quiet, resonated through the narrow hallway of the flat. Rory, stirring from the depths of a book detailing ancient Babylonian treaties, frowned. Visitors weren't common in these parts; her circle was succinct and exclusive. Ptolemy, perched with regal aplomb atop a pile of weathered tomes, blinked lazily, unmoved by the interruption. Setting her book aside, Rory stepped carefully through the organized chaos, her fingers brushing the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist out of old habit. Her heart tightened at the thought of who might be on the other side. The city had a way of drawing people's paths back together, no matter how much distance they attempted to place. Three deadbolts unlatched with a series of satisfying clicks. She opened the door, a hint of caution in her posture. Lucien Moreau leaned against the frame, his tailored suit catching the muted light with a soft sheen. His platinum blond hair, a cascade of nonchalant elegance, contrasted with the darkened hallway shadows. His heterochromatic eyes, amber and obsidian, traced over her form with a familiarity that sent a shiver through her. "Rory, looking as captivating as ever," he intoned with a slight drawl, his smile tracing a devilish line beneath his perfectly angled cheekbones. The hint of sarcasm softened an underlying sincerity. "Lucien," she acknowledged, masking surprise with a nod, though her pulse betrayed her with its accelerated beat. The air between them bristled with electric tension—stories unsaid, chapters unfinished. "Didn't expect to see you here." "I find myself in need of some spirited company this evening. And you’ve always provided that in abundance." He made no move to close the distance, leaving the threshold as the line delineating past engagements and present uncertainties. "Always the charming wordsmith," she replied, lifting her chin, her arms crossing almost defensively. "And you, forever the enigmatic stranger." Lucien stepped inside with a graceful motion, his cane tapping lightly against the floor, more an accessory than necessity—a relic of his past escapades that were part lullaby, part nightmare. Rory stepped back, allowing him space in her carefully constructed sanctum of notes and whispers. "The same old setting," he observed with an appreciative glance, the corners of his mouth lifting as he surveyed Ptolemy, who deigned to give this new intruder a glance before resuming his nap. "Time hasn't changed your taste, I see." He gestured at the stacks of arcana, his fingers pausing over a particularly aged scroll. "Old habits stick harder than vinegar," Rory shrugged, her voice tinged with something indefinable. She studied Lucien’s face, looking for traces of the time that had shaped them both since their paths diverged. "You've resurfaced, but to what end?" she continued, trying to keep the curiosity from surfacing too overtly. "Surely not just for nostalgia?" "Nostalgia, yes, but not solely," he replied, a multi-layered enigma wrapped within a smile. "I require your expertise, and perhaps your stride as we go forth on a task I need help with." "Fancy words for a request," she quipped, brushing past him to shut the door. "Is the great Lucien Moreau caught in something even his silver tongue cannot wiggle out of?" "That's why I've come to you, Rory. Your ability to see through the fog with those azure eyes of yours has always been remarkable." "And what's the catch?" His gaze bore into hers, flickering with discretion and an old, smoldering warmth. "The past hasn't been kind," he murmured, both a statement and a subtle acknowledgment of the scars they bore from their collective history. "But perhaps it’s time to rekindle the sparks we buried." She arched an eyebrow, a battle fought within her that rippled across her expression. "You left last time, without a word." Lucien lowered his gaze momentarily, brief remorse shading his features. "I had my reasons," he admitted, an honesty threading his tone. "Not all of them justifiable, but they felt imperative at the time." "A mutual sorrow, then," she said, glancing at a non-existent spot on the wall, remembering when silence echoed loudly between them, a ghost of what was left unsaid. Yet here he stood, carving pathways in her present chaos. The world outside bustled on, ignorant of the woven history vibrating within the confines of her flat. She noticed him reach for an amulet on the desk—a keepsake, one of the few relics from her past before London swept her into its enchanted fold. "I see you kept it," Lucien noted, delicately strumming the chain with his fingers. "Not everything needs discarding," she answered, her voice walking the line between sentiment and self-preservation. "We pick our tokens." "True enough," he sighed, releasing it like entangled memories from which they both needed distance. "So, what exactly is this 'task' that warrants such a reunion?" she inquired, regaining composure, curiosity tilting the scales over hesitation. "A piece of the supernatural pie, steeped in mystery and complexity," Lucien began, leaning into the world of shadows they frequented. "Whispers of a relic beneath the city that needs retrieving. Rumours suggest it could alter balances—of power, of the soul." The air felt heavy suddenly, the gravity of their dance deepening into something tangible and pressing. Rory met his eyes, finding her footing in the mix of challenge and allure his presence brought. "And you propose we, what, go dig this up together? Like old comrades chasing down mused threats in the recesses of London?" "Precisely why I need you," he responded, confidence woven between each syllable. His eyes glimmered with a mix of amusement and something older, richer—a glint of what he missed. "Your partner in crime, if you will." Memories played back like shadows across the curve of her mind. He had spoken like this before. Parts of her knew the dance, knew the stakes, and yet the solidity of present prompted caution. "Alright," she conceded eventually, a soft laugh breaking through. "But this time, I’m calling the shots." His smile widened, dangerously charming. "Wouldn't have it any other way." Their truce felt tentative yet familiar, a reunion of restless spirits drawn to London's enigmatic call and the magnetic ties between them. As the city breathed beyond her window, Rory felt a rare note—hope—thread into the song of what was to come. For now, it would suffice, like a fable lived anew within the embrace of London’s clandestine heartbeats.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she conceded eventually [eventually]"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.556
leniency1
rawRatio0.05
effectiveRatio0.05
67.38% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1073
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count2
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
3
adverb"lightly"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
5
adverb"precisely"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
1"carefully"
2"perfectly"
3"lightly"
4"suddenly"
5"precisely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1073
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"echo"
count1
1
word"resonated"
count1
2
word"depths"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"tracing"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"electric"
count1
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"enigmatic"
count2
9
word"constructed"
count1
10
word"tinged"
count1
11
word"enigma"
count1
12
word"remarkable"
count1
13
word"warmth"
count1
14
word"eyebrow"
count1
15
word"silence"
count1
16
word"echoed"
count1
17
word"dance"
count2
18
word"tangible"
count1
19
word"glint"
count1
20
word"familiar"
count1
21
word"magnetic"
count1
22
word"clandestine"
count1
highlights
0"echo"
1"resonated"
2"depths"
3"traced"
4"tracing"
5"pulse"
6"electric"
7"tension"
8"enigmatic"
9"constructed"
10"tinged"
11"enigma"
12"remarkable"
13"warmth"
14"eyebrow"
15"silence"
16"echoed"
17"dance"
18"tangible"
19"glint"
20"familiar"
21"magnetic"
22"clandestine"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"sent a shiver through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences53
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences53
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences69
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1063
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount774
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.78
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Babylonian1
Rory6
Moreau1
Lucien6
Ptolemy2
London3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Ptolemy"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.941
wordCount1063
matches
0"Not all of them justifiable, but they felt imperative at the time"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
93.97% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean32.21
std15.43
cv0.479
sampleLengths
062
158
271
331
434
538
620
745
833
922
1033
1122
1233
1330
1424
154
1646
1721
1833
1928
2054
2114
2219
2315
2421
2541
2633
2722
2836
2934
3016
3111
3259
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs138
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences69
ratio0.087
matches
0"Visitors weren't common in these parts; her circle was succinct and exclusive."
1"The air between them bristled with electric tension—stories unsaid, chapters unfinished."
2"Lucien stepped inside with a graceful motion, his cane tapping lightly against the floor, more an accessory than necessity—a relic of his past escapades that were part lullaby, part nightmare."
3"She noticed him reach for an amulet on the desk—a keepsake, one of the few relics from her past before London swept her into its enchanted fold."
4"His eyes glimmered with a mix of amusement and something older, richer—a glint of what he missed."
5"As the city breathed beyond her window, Rory felt a rare note—hope—thread into the song of what was to come."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount783
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.0280970625798212
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.017879948914431672
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences69
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences69
mean15.41
std6.95
cv0.451
sampleLengths
020
113
212
317
424
514
620
79
811
917
1015
1119
1223
138
1417
1511
166
1738
1814
196
2030
2115
2233
2322
2414
2519
2617
275
2814
2919
3014
3116
3224
334
3413
3523
3610
3714
387
3910
4011
4112
4228
4310
4417
4527
4614
4715
484
4915
95.17% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5797101449275363
totalSentences69
uniqueOpeners40
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
1.13% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences53
matches
0"Her heart tightened at the"
1"She opened the door, a"
2"His platinum blond hair, a"
3"His heterochromatic eyes, amber and"
4"he intoned with a slight"
5"she acknowledged, masking surprise with"
6"He made no move to"
7"she replied, lifting her chin,"
8"he observed with an appreciative"
9"He gestured at the stacks"
10"She studied Lucien’s face, looking"
11"she continued, trying to keep"
12"he replied, a multi-layered enigma"
13"she quipped, brushing past him"
14"His gaze bore into hers,"
15"he murmured, both a statement"
16"She arched an eyebrow, a"
17"he admitted, an honesty threading"
18"she said, glancing at a"
19"She noticed him reach for"
ratio0.547
7.17% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences53
matches
0"The echo of knuckles rapping"
1"Rory, stirring from the depths"
2"Visitors weren't common in these"
3"Ptolemy, perched with regal aplomb"
4"Her heart tightened at the"
5"The city had a way"
6"She opened the door, a"
7"Lucien Moreau leaned against the"
8"His platinum blond hair, a"
9"His heterochromatic eyes, amber and"
10"he intoned with a slight"
11"The hint of sarcasm softened"
12"she acknowledged, masking surprise with"
13"The air between them bristled"
14"He made no move to"
15"she replied, lifting her chin,"
16"Lucien stepped inside with a"
17"Rory stepped back, allowing him"
18"he observed with an appreciative"
19"He gestured at the stacks"
ratio0.906
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Setting her book aside, Rory stepped carefully through the organized chaos, her fingers brushing the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist out of old habit."
1"His heterochromatic eyes, amber and obsidian, traced over her form with a familiarity that sent a shiver through her."
2"Lucien stepped inside with a graceful motion, his cane tapping lightly against the floor, more an accessory than necessity—a relic of his past escapades that we…"
3"She studied Lucien’s face, looking for traces of the time that had shaped them both since their paths diverged."
4"She arched an eyebrow, a battle fought within her that rippled across her expression."
5"Rory met his eyes, finding her footing in the mix of challenge and allure his presence brought."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"He gestured, his fingers pausing over a particularly aged scroll"
1"she continued, trying to keep the curiosity from surfacing too overtly"
2"he admitted, an honesty threading his tone"
3"she answered, her voice walking the line between sentiment and self-preservation"
4"she conceded eventually, a soft laugh breaking through"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount11
fancyTags
0"she acknowledged (acknowledge)"
1"he observed (observe)"
2"she continued (continue)"
3"she quipped (quip)"
4"he murmured (murmur)"
5"he admitted (admit)"
6"Lucien noted (note)"
7"he sighed (sigh)"
8"she inquired (inquire)"
9"he responded (respond)"
10"she conceded eventually (concede)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.417
leniency0.833
rawRatio0.733
effectiveRatio0.611
68.8276%