Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0TMWQ8G12BZNYWG6HTD4A

Run Details

Duration:
1m 12s
Cost:
$0.002520
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came sharp and insistent, like the rapping of a judge’s gavel. Aurora’s breath hitched as she froze mid-step, the delivery bag in her hand slipping slightly. She didn’t need to look through the peephole to know who it was. That knock was as familiar as the scar on her wrist. “Rory.” His voice cut through the wood of the door, smooth and low, a Marseille-accented drawl that still sent a shiver down her spine. “Open the door.” Her fingers tightened around the strap of the bag. “Go away, Lucien.” “We both know I’m not leaving.” A pause. The faint tap of his cane against the threshold. “Unless you’d like to have this conversation in the hallway. Your choice.” She cursed under her breath, yanking the door open with more force than necessary. There he stood, impeccably tailored in a charcoal suit that hugged his lean frame, his platinum blond hair slicked back as if he’d just come from some high-powered meeting. His mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—locked onto hers with an intensity that made her stomach twist. “What do you want?” she demanded, stepping back to put some distance between them. He stepped inside without waiting for an invitation, glancing around with the air of someone surveying a crime scene. The flat was small, cluttered with Eva’s books and research notes, the scent of curry lingering faintly in the air. Ptolemy, the tabby, blinked lazily from his perch on the armchair, unbothered by the intrusion. “Charming,” Lucien remarked, his cane tapping lightly against the floor as he moved further in. “Though I expected something... grander. Tell me, Rory, does the Golden Empress not pay well enough for you to afford your own place?” “It’s temporary,” she snapped, slamming the door shut behind him. “And none of your business.” “Everything about you is my business.” He turned to face her, his gaze flickering over her delivery uniform—a cheap polo shirt and dark trousers. “Especially when it involves you working for someone like Yu-Fei.” “She’s a decent employer.” Aurora crossed her arms, her jaw tightening. “Unlike some people I used to know.” His lips quirked into a sardonic smile. “Still holding onto grudges, I see. How very human of you.” “Why are you here, Lucien?” Her voice cracked slightly, betraying the irritation she tried to mask. “Didn’t we say everything there was to say the last time?” “Did we?” He tilted his head, his cane tapping against the floor in a slow, deliberate rhythm. “I seem to recall you storming out mid-conversation. Hardly what I’d call closure.” “You lied to me.” Her voice rose, the words escaping before she could stop them. “You used me. What more closure do you need?” “Lied?” His eyebrow arched. “I withheld certain truths, yes, but lying implies malice. And you know better than anyone, Rory, that my intentions were never malicious.” “Bullshit.” She stepped closer, her fists clenched at her sides. “You manipulated me. You knew how much Evan—how much he—” “Ah.” His expression darkened, the amber in his eye glinting dangerously. “We’re finally getting to the heart of it. Tell me, Rory, do you still blame me for what happened with him? Or do you blame yourself for not seeing the warning signs sooner?” Her breath caught, the words like a knife to her chest. “Get out.” “No.” His voice was firm, unyielding. “Not until you hear me out.” “I’ve heard enough—” “Have you?” He closed the distance between them in a single stride, his cane clattering to the floor as his hands grasped her shoulders. “Because I don’t think you’ve heard the part where I told you I loved you. The part where I risked everything to keep you safe.” Her heart pounded in her chest, her eyes wide as she stared up at him. “You—” “Yes, Rory. Me.” His gaze bore into hers, his grip tightening slightly. “I loved you then, and I still do. And if you’d stop running for five bloody minutes, you’d see that.” She swallowed hard, her mind spinning. “You don’t get to say that. Not after everything.” “I do.” His voice softened, his thumbs brushing against her shoulders. “Because it’s the truth. And because I’m tired of pretending otherwise.” Her breath hitched, her resolve crumbling as his forehead rested against hers. “Lucien...” “I’m here, Rory.” His lips brushed against her forehead, feather-light and achingly familiar. “And I’m not leaving. Not this time.” Her knees felt weak, her hands instinctively gripping his lapels for support. “You’re such an asshole.” “Yes.” He chuckled, the sound low and warm. “But I’m your asshole.” Her lips parted, the words she’d buried deep within her threatening to spill out. But before she could speak, the door burst open, Eva’s voice cutting through the tension like a blade. “Rory, I—” Her friend stopped short, taking in the scene with wide eyes. “Oh. Sorry. Didn’t realise you had... company.” Lucien stepped back smoothly, retrieving his cane from the floor with practised ease. “Miss Evans. A pleasure, as always.” Eva glanced between them, her gaze sharp and assessing. “I’ll just... put the kettle on, shall I?” “Please do.” Aurora’s voice was steady, but her hands trembled slightly as she smoothed down her uniform. “Looks like we’ve got a lot to talk about.” Lucien’s smirk was knowing, his mismatched eyes gleaming with triumph. “Indeed we do.” And as Eva disappeared into the kitchen, Aurora felt the weight of everything left unsaid settle heavily in the air between them. History, attraction, hurt—it all came crashing back, leaving her standing on the precipice of a decision she wasn’t sure she was ready to make. But one thing was certain: Lucas Moreau wasn’t going anywhere.
created_at"2026-02-19T03:59:16.393Z" 2/19/2026, 3:59:16 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Her voice cracked slightly [slightly]"
1"her hands trembled slightly [slightly]"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.346
leniency0.692
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.077
63.47% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount958
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count4
1
adverb"lazily"
count1
2
adverb"lightly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"lazily"
2"lightly"
3"very"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Evans"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
37.37% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount958
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"down her spine"
count1
2
word"intensity"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"eyebrow"
count1
5
word"glinting"
count1
6
word"resolve"
count1
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"trembled"
count1
9
word"gleaming"
count1
10
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"down her spine"
2"intensity"
3"stomach"
4"eyebrow"
5"glinting"
6"resolve"
7"tension"
8"trembled"
9"gleaming"
10"weight"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count1
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
2
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"heart pounded in her chest"
1"fists clenched"
2"sent a shiver down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences47
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences47
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences78
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords947
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount595
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.67
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Marseille-accented1
Eva4
Aurora4
Lucien3
Lucas1
Moreau1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Aurora"
2"Lucien"
3"Lucas"
4"Moreau"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences44
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount947
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean24.92
std13.49
cv0.541
sampleLengths
052
127
212
329
459
514
654
738
815
934
1018
1118
1227
1330
1424
1526
1620
1744
1813
1912
203
2149
2216
2332
2415
2522
2613
2720
2816
2912
3032
3120
3219
3317
3426
3513
3646
3710
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs111
matches
0"wasn’t going"
32.97% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences78
ratio0.038
matches
0"His mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—locked onto hers with an intensity that made her stomach twist."
1"“Everything about you is my business.” He turned to face her, his gaze flickering over her delivery uniform—a cheap polo shirt and dark trousers."
2"History, attraction, hurt—it all came crashing back, leaving her standing on the precipice of a decision she wasn’t sure she was ready to make."
98.70% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount603
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.03980099502487562
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.02155887230514096
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences78
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences78
mean12.14
std6.64
cv0.547
sampleLengths
013
115
213
311
424
53
69
73
88
99
1012
1114
1229
1316
1414
1519
1620
1715
1815
1923
2010
215
2224
2310
2411
257
267
2711
2816
2911
3017
3113
3215
339
344
3522
3610
3710
3811
3933
4011
412
426
436
443
4524
4625
4715
481
4912
97.01% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5897435897435898
totalSentences78
uniqueOpeners46
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences46
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences46
matches
0"She didn’t need to look"
1"His voice cut through the"
2"Her fingers tightened around the"
3"She cursed under her breath,"
4"His mismatched eyes—one amber, one"
5"she demanded, stepping back to"
6"He stepped inside without waiting"
7"she snapped, slamming the door"
8"He turned to face her,"
9"His lips quirked into a"
10"Her voice cracked slightly, betraying"
11"He tilted his head, his"
12"Her voice rose, the words"
13"His eyebrow arched"
14"She stepped closer, her fists"
15"His expression darkened, the amber"
16"Her breath caught, the words"
17"His voice was firm, unyielding"
18"He closed the distance between"
19"Her heart pounded in her"
ratio0.63
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount43
totalSentences46
matches
0"The knock came sharp and"
1"Aurora’s breath hitched as she"
2"She didn’t need to look"
3"That knock was as familiar"
4"His voice cut through the"
5"Her fingers tightened around the"
6"The faint tap of his"
7"She cursed under her breath,"
8"There he stood, impeccably tailored"
9"His mismatched eyes—one amber, one"
10"she demanded, stepping back to"
11"He stepped inside without waiting"
12"The flat was small, cluttered"
13"Ptolemy, the tabby, blinked lazily"
14"Lucien remarked, his cane tapping"
15"she snapped, slamming the door"
16"He turned to face her,"
17"Aurora crossed her arms, her"
18"His lips quirked into a"
19"Her voice cracked slightly, betraying"
ratio0.935
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences46
matches(empty)
ratio0
74.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"There he stood, impeccably tailored in a charcoal suit that hugged his lean frame, his platinum blond hair slicked back as if he’d just come from some high-powe…"
1"His mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—locked onto hers with an intensity that made her stomach twist."
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Aurora crossed, her jaw tightening"
1"His gaze bore, his grip tightening slightly"
2"His voice softened, his thumbs brushing against her shoulders"
92.31% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she demanded (demand)"
1"she snapped (snap)"
2"He chuckled (chuckle)"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.058
leniency0.115
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.115
75.0550%