Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0TPS78ATMK9THF6SG0NEJ

Run Details

Duration:
1m 6s
Cost:
$0.001702
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain hammered against the corrugated tin roof of the abandoned platform, drowning out the distant rumble of the Northern Line. Neon pylons staked out territory along the pitted walls, bathing the crowd in sickly cyan and magenta. The smell of ozone and frying lard hung heavy in the damp air. Harlow Quinn checked the buckle of her belt for the third time in as many seconds. The leather was worn smooth on the corners, her left wrist tapping a rhythmic, impatient tattoo against the heavy, brown leather watch. It was a tactical move, she told herself. It kept her ready to draw. Or it kept her focused, which was a lie. She was distracted. Three years. Three years since the ride-along where DS Morris vanished into the static of a dimensional breach. Since then, the Clique had been a blip on the radar—nefarious occult types running some kind of empire out of a fictional book series. But she could feel it. A frequency vibrating in the marrow of her bones. "Harlow." The voice sliced through the ambient noise, crisp and precise. Quinn didn't turn immediately. She kept her eyes scanning the crowd, her gaze landing on a stall selling jars of cloudy liquid. *Just a butcher, or something worse?* Then she smelled the ozone on the girl. "Eva." Quinn stepped into the light, the heels of her boots clicking sharply on the industrial floor. She ignored the couple huddled by the turnstiles and walked straight to the crime scene. Eva Kowalski stood over the body, crouching like a praying mantis. Her curly red hair, usually a halo of messy energy, was damp and plastered to her forehead. Round glasses sat low on her nose, slightly askew, but she didn't reach up to fix them. Her hands hovered over the body, hovering with a terrifying lack of hesitation. "He looks peaceful," Eva said, her voice tight. "He's dead, Evie." "He’s *staring* at me." Quinn crouched down, her joints popping in the quiet air. She looked down. The victim was a man in his forties, dressed in a sharp suit that looked entirely out of place in the grime of the Veil Market. His face was slack, mouth slightly open. But it was the neck that caught Quinn’s eye. No blood. No puncture marks. No bruising. It was as if the man had simply… evaporated. "Lung collapse?" Quinn asked, though she knew the answer. Her background in the Met didn't just cover homicide; it covered the weird shit, too. "I don't think so." Eva reached out, her fingers trembling only slightly as she touched the man's collar. "Look at his shadow. It’s… pixelated." Quinn squinted. The rain hadn't touched the pavement yet, but the man's shadow on the wet concrete was fractured, the edges jagged like a bad photo. "It’s bleeding into the ether. The shadow realm is seeping out." "Exactly," Eva whispered, tucking a stray lock of red hair behind her left ear. She pulled a leather satchel from her shoulder, unzipping it with a harsh zip. "It’s a paradox. He’s in this dimension, but he can't stay. He’s being… processed." "Processed?" "Consumed by the Market," Eva said, pulling a slim, leather-bound tome from her satchel. She flipped pages with frantic efficiency. "Or the Price isn't paid." Quinn stood up, feeling the weight of her service weapon uncomfortable in its holster. She walked a slow circle around the body, checking for boot prints in the grime. None. No recent footprints from anyone entering the station. "They brought him here," Quinn muttered. "Without a ticket." Eva nodded, not looking up from her book. "Maybe he didn't have a choice. Maybe the Veil reached for him." "It doesn't work that way." Quinn snapped. She approached the nearest stall, a tarp-covered table piled high with mechanical curiosities. "What was he doing?" "Buying," Eva said simply. "Buying what?" "The Logic Engine," Eva said, tapping the page of her book. "A component that stabilizes rifts. It's... volatile." Quinn stared at the dead man. A trade gone wrong. But dead men didn't usually evaporate leaving fractured shadows. They bled. They screamed. They fought. This one had died with his hands in his pockets. A transaction, executed flawlessly. "Who sold him this?" Quinn asked. Eva hesitated, looking up over the rim of her glasses. "It's a new vendor. They haven't been on the official manifests." Quinn’s jaw tightened. The Clique. The clique was expanding. They were digging into the machinery of reality. "Stay here. Don't touch anything." "You have to find the dealer." "If I do, I need you to back me up." Quinn turned away, her movements military precise. Every step was a measured command. She didn't walk; she marched toward the back of the station. The crowd parted before her. Not out of respect, but out of fear. She felt it—the atmosphere shift as she approached. The neon lights flickered, dimming to a dull glow as she neared. She reached the dead man’s pocket and pulled out his wallet. It was crushed, like it had been in a hydraulic press. Quinn opened it. Empty. No IDs, no cards, nothing. Just smooth, crumpled leather. She pulled the Veil Compass from her belt. The small brass casing was cool to the touch, covered in a patina of verdigris. She flicked the lid open. The needle—black as pitch—was spinning, whirling in a frantic, dizzying circle. Usually, it pointed north. Or toward supernatural rifts. Right now, it was pointing at nothing. Or everything. "Not here," Quinn whispered. She needed a focal point. She thought of DS Morris. The man's face flashed in her mind, the way his hand had slipped off the edge of the platform three years ago. The final line of his radio call: *Target acquired. Deploying.* "Harlow!" Eva was shouting from where she stood over the body. The crowd around her was beginning to panic, pointing, murmuring. "He's not just fading. He's dissolving. Look!" Quinn ran back, her boots skidding slightly on the wet floor. She looked down. The man’s body was dissolving. Not dying, but falling apart. Dust motes were forming around him, glowing with a sickly violet light. It wasn't decomposition. It was un-manifesting. "He was never human in this timeline," Eva said, her voice trembling but steady. "He’s a recording, Harlow. A ghost in the machine." "He bought a component," Quinn snarled, her eyes scanning the periphery. "Who sold the component?" Eva looked up, her green eyes wide. "The dealer that moves. But he's not moving. He's building a pile." Quinn spun around. Down the length of the platform, crates were stacking themselves. Dust was turning into wooden planks. A voice, distorted and amplified by the speakers, began to blare through the station. *"THE TRANSACTION IS COMPLETE. THE PRICE HAS BEEN PAID."* The shadow on the wall grew larger. It wasn't a shadow of a man; it was the shape of a labyrinth, twisting and turning until it covered the entire wall. "He's building a wall to keep us in," Eva said, backing away, her satchel bumping into her legs. "He's building a cage," Quinn corrected. She stepped toward the growing wall of shadows. "Or a barrier." Eva grabbed her arm. "Harlow, stop! The Compass is acting up again." Quinn looked at the compass. The needle had stopped spinning. It was quivering, vibrating so hard it was shaking the casing. It was pointing not at the wall, but up. Straight up. Through the roof of the tube station, into the sky. "Get him to the surface," Quinn commanded, knocking Eva's hand away. "Call the boys. Tell them we have a lockdown in effect." "You're going in?" Eva asked. "I'm going to find the ghost in the machine." Quinn tightened her grip on the compass. "And I'm going to make him explain why DS Morris disappeared." She looked at the dying body of the stranger, now little more than a pile of glowing dust. Then she looked at the ceiling of the station, directly beneath the compass needle. A single beam of moonlight pierced the grime, illuminating a crack in the concrete above them—a crack that wasn't there a moment ago. "She's here," Quinn said, drawing her gun. "The shade artisan."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Eva said simply [simply]"
1"Quinn turned away [away]"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.417
leniency0.833
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.083
81.82% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1375
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count4
highlights
0"sharply"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
52.73% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1375
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"could feel"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count2
3
word"fractured"
count2
4
word"processed"
count2
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"mechanical"
count1
7
word"measured"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"could feel"
2"scanning"
3"fractured"
4"processed"
5"weight"
6"mechanical"
7"measured"
8"flickered"
9"flicked"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences131
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences131
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences159
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords19
totalWords1367
ratio0.014
matches
0"Just a butcher, or something worse?"
1"staring"
2"Target acquired. Deploying."
3"\"THE TRANSACTION IS COMPLETE. THE PRICE HAS BEEN PAID.\""
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"It was a tactical move, she told herself."
41.70% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions52
wordCount1108
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.17
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Northern1
Line1
Quinn24
Morris2
Clique2
Kowalski1
Veil2
Market1
Met1
Eva16
Compass1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Morris"
2"Clique"
3"Kowalski"
4"Eva"
places
0"Compass"
globalScore0.417
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"It was as if the man had simply…"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.195
wordCount1367
matches
0"Not out of respect, but out of fear"
1"Not dying, but falling apart"
2"not at the wall, but up"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences159
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean22.78
std16.39
cv0.72
sampleLengths
051
164
256
31
410
528
68
71
831
958
108
113
124
1313
1458
1524
1624
1737
1842
191
2025
2138
229
2320
2424
254
262
2718
2839
296
3021
3122
326
3334
3433
3522
3613
3739
3817
394
4042
411
4227
4314
4428
4523
4615
4719
4833
499
99.91% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences131
matches
0"was distracted"
1"was fractured"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount13
totalVerbs195
matches
0"were digging"
1"was spinning"
2"was pointing"
3"was shouting"
4"was beginning"
5"was dissolving"
6"were forming"
7"was un-manifesting"
8"were stacking"
9"was turning"
10"was quivering, was shaking"
11"was pointing"
17.07% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences159
ratio0.044
matches
0"Since then, the Clique had been a blip on the radar—nefarious occult types running some kind of empire out of a fictional book series."
1"Her background in the Met didn't just cover homicide; it covered the weird shit, too."
2"She didn't walk; she marched toward the back of the station."
3"She felt it—the atmosphere shift as she approached."
4"The needle—black as pitch—was spinning, whirling in a frantic, dizzying circle."
5"It wasn't a shadow of a man; it was the shape of a labyrinth, twisting and turning until it covered the entire wall."
6"A single beam of moonlight pierced the grime, illuminating a crack in the concrete above them—a crack that wasn't there a moment ago."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1116
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"slim, leather-bound tome"
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.02867383512544803
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.016129032258064516
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences159
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences159
mean8.6
std5.64
cv0.656
sampleLengths
021
117
213
316
422
58
66
79
83
92
1016
1124
125
139
141
1510
164
1718
186
198
201
2116
2215
2311
2417
2517
2613
278
283
294
3010
313
3226
337
349
352
363
372
388
391
409
4115
4218
436
442
4524
4611
4714
4814
4914
41.09% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.31446540880503143
totalSentences159
uniqueOpeners50
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences111
matches
0"*Just a butcher, or something"
1"Then she smelled the ozone"
2"Just smooth, crumpled leather."
3"Usually, it pointed north."
4"Then she looked at the"
ratio0.045
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences111
matches
0"It was a tactical move,"
1"It kept her ready to"
2"She was distracted."
3"She kept her eyes scanning"
4"She ignored the couple huddled"
5"Her curly red hair, usually"
6"Her hands hovered over the"
7"She looked down."
8"His face was slack, mouth"
9"It was as if the"
10"Her background in the Met"
11"She pulled a leather satchel"
12"She flipped pages with frantic"
13"She walked a slow circle"
14"She approached the nearest stall,"
15"They were digging into the"
16"She didn't walk; she marched"
17"She felt it—the atmosphere shift"
18"She reached the dead man’s"
19"It was crushed, like it"
ratio0.288
54.59% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount90
totalSentences111
matches
0"The rain hammered against the"
1"Neon pylons staked out territory"
2"The smell of ozone and"
3"Harlow Quinn checked the buckle"
4"The leather was worn smooth"
5"It was a tactical move,"
6"It kept her ready to"
7"She was distracted."
8"A frequency vibrating in the"
9"The voice sliced through the"
10"Quinn didn't turn immediately."
11"She kept her eyes scanning"
12"Quinn stepped into the light,"
13"She ignored the couple huddled"
14"Eva Kowalski stood over the"
15"Her curly red hair, usually"
16"Her hands hovered over the"
17"Eva said, her voice tight"
18"Quinn crouched down, her joints"
19"She looked down."
ratio0.811
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She kept her eyes scanning the crowd, her gaze landing on a stall selling jars of cloudy liquid."
1"A single beam of moonlight pierced the grime, illuminating a crack in the concrete above them—a crack that wasn't there a moment ago."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Eva said, her voice tight"
1"Quinn turned away, her movements military precise"
2"Eva said, her voice trembling but steady"
3"Quinn snarled, her eyes scanning the periphery"
25.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Eva whispered (whisper)"
1"Quinn muttered (mutter)"
2"Quinn snapped (snap)"
3"Quinn whispered (whisper)"
4"Quinn snarled (snarl)"
5"Quinn corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.375
effectiveRatio0.25
74.4301%