Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0TT5AQQW5FF3R035QXK0D

Run Details

Duration:
11.7s
Cost:
$0.000966
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open suddenly, catching her off guard. A figure stood there, shadowed by the narrow corridor’s dim light, so still that she wondered if she had imagined the movement. Her breath hitched—her heart racing a beat too loud in her ears. Lucien Moreau’s sharp features emerged from the darkness, platinum blond slicked-back hair catching sporadic glints as he tilted his head slightly, eyes gleaming with that familiar, unpredictable intensity. His tailored charcoal suit looked untouched, meticulously pressed, but her gaze lingered on the ivory-handled cane clenched tightly in his hand, the thin blade hidden beneath the ornate grip. She barely had time to process her shock before his voice drifted out, smooth and laced with amusement, the kind that always made her insides tighten, whether she wanted it or not. “You weren’t expecting me,” he said, lowering the cane just enough to reveal a teasing smirk. Aurora Carter’s cheeks flushed with a mix of anger and something else—something that prickled beneath her skin, making her want to shut the door, turn away, or scream. But her lips pressed into a precise line, her bright blue eyes narrowing. “What the hell are you doing here?” Her voice was colder than she intended, yet steady. She stiffened her back, chest rising beneath the simple black T-shirt her flat barely qualified as cozy. “Wasn’t expecting to see your smug face on Brick Lane ever again.” He took a small step forward, edgy and deliberately unhurried. “I thought I’d surprise you. Guess I was right, then. You’re surprised.” His tone remained even, but an undercurrent of defiance flickered in his black and amber irises. “You’ve been avoiding me.” "Stalking me’s a new hobby for you?" She clenched her fists, the scar on her wrist prickling—a remnant from her childhood, but today it felt like a warning. Lucien’s smirk stretched wider, gaze flickering to her scar, then back. “Hardly. I just wanted to check if you’re still standing. It’s been a while since London saw your kind of storm.” His voice lowered, almost whispering, the words drifting across the narrow doorway like an ocean breeze carrying distant thunder. A bolt of old, tangled emotions shot through her. What was he doing here? Why now? She looked past him, into her flat, cluttered with research notes, books piled high on every surface, Ptolemy’s cautious green eyes watching from the corner. She could feel her pulse tightening, her mind sprinting for form, for control—anything but the whirlwind brewing at her door. “I don’t have time for your games,” she muttered, voice brittle, her eyes scanning his face as if trying to read between the layers of calm. He leaned in slightly, one hand resting on the doorframe, that same smirk now teetering on the edge of something darker. “Games? No. Just an invitation. You left enough loose ends last time, Rory. I came to tie them up.” His tone was dry, but there was an undercurrent of something almost predatory. Her eyes darted to the cane again. “If you think you’re gonna intimidate me—” “Relax. I’m not here to fight. Not today.” He shifted, voice softer, almost coaxing, but the night’s shadows clung to his words like a cliffhanger. “I came because we need to talk. You and me. Something big’s brewing, and I figured you’d want to hear about it.” The flat’s dim lighting cast shadows across his face, sharpening the high cheekbones and the almost demonic slant of his eyes. A pair of long, slender fingers tapped lightly on the cane, echoing years of meticulous control and danger. His presence always made her feel a delicate edge—something between attraction and the undeniable sting of betrayal. “I’m not interested,” she said, voice firmer this time, though her nerves were a mess beneath her skin. “Whatever you think this is, it’s over.” He chuckled without humor. “Is it? Or just beginning?” His eyes flicked down her frame, stopping briefly at the scar on her wrist, then back to those vivid blue eyes. “You and I, Rory. We’re drawn to chaos. The kind that slithers beneath the surface, even when you pretend you don’t see it. That hasn’t changed.” Something flickered in her—a flash of vulnerability she’d long buried. Like unsteady ground beneath her feet, like memories she tried desperately not to dredge up. She stepped back, closing the door a fraction, her hand trembling as she pressed it against the wood. “Stay away from me, Lucien. I’ve got enough trouble without you adding to it.” Her voice cracked just before the last word. Despite her effort at composure, her entire body betrayed her—her heart pounding painfully, her hands trembling. He didn’t move. Just watched her, eyes darkening, as if weighing her words and her defiance. There was a beat of silence, heavy with history, broken only by her quickened breaths. “I didn’t come here to scare you,” he finally said, voice low. “But some things haven’t been the same since we parted ways. We both feel it. You know I do.” His expression softened into something almost gentle, yet dangerous. “You’ve always acted like you have it all under control, Rory. That scar on your wrist? That’s just a souvenir of your refusal to let go.” She grimaced, resisting the urge to peel her sleeve back, to hide it. “Leave. Now.” His smile vanished, replaced by something steel-sharp. “You’re still the same stubborn girl I knew. That’s why I came. To remind you—something’s coming, and if you think you can face it alone, you’re dead wrong.” “Go away, Lucien.” Her voice quivered despite her effort. A flicker of uncertainty crossed his face, but he rallied quickly, voice firm, almost pleading. “Just think about it,” he said softly, voice nearly a whisper now. “Nothing will be the same after tonight. But you already know that." Without waiting for a reply, he turned—not quite ready to leave—but his words lingered, echoing in her mind long after the door snapped shut behind him. Aurora stood frozen, heart pounding in her chest as the silence pressed against her, heavier than ever. She pressed her hand on her scar, the familiar prick stabbing through her skin, and realised some ghosts refused to stay buried. Not when he was near. Not when the night’s shadows stretched longer, weaving darkness into her already tangled past.
created_at"2026-02-19T03:59:21.788Z" 2/19/2026, 3:59:21 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"His voice lowered almost [almost]"
1"Her voice cracked just [just]"
2"he finally said [finally]"
3"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.56
leniency1
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.286
62.48% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1066
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"tightly"
count1
3
adverb"deliberately"
count1
4
adverb"lightly"
count1
5
adverb"quickly"
count1
6
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"slightly"
2"tightly"
3"deliberately"
4"lightly"
5"quickly"
6"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
1.50% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1066
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"racing"
count1
1
word"gleaming"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count2
3
word"intensity"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count2
5
word"could feel"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"scanning"
count1
8
word"echoing"
count2
9
word"flicked"
count1
10
word"pounding"
count2
11
word"silence"
count2
12
word"quickened"
count1
13
word"quivered"
count1
14
word"flicker"
count1
15
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"racing"
1"gleaming"
2"familiar"
3"intensity"
4"flickered"
5"could feel"
6"pulse"
7"scanning"
8"echoing"
9"flicked"
10"pounding"
11"silence"
12"quickened"
13"quivered"
14"flicker"
15"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her fists"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences52
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences52
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences62
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1053
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions8
wordCount767
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.26
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity0.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Aurora2
Carter1
Lucien2
Ptolemy1
Despite1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Aurora"
2"Carter"
3"Lucien"
4"Ptolemy"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"felt like a warning"
1"as if trying to read between the layers of calm"
2"something between attraction and the undeniable"
3"as if weighing her words and her defiance"
4"not quite ready to leave—but his words lingered, echoing in her mind long after the door snapped shut behind him"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1053
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
60.90% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean39
std14.16
cv0.363
sampleLengths
043
157
232
316
441
545
642
728
851
961
1026
1153
1214
1347
1456
1525
1656
1743
1838
1931
2066
2115
2235
2324
2424
2543
2641
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs153
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences62
ratio0.129
matches
0"Her breath hitched—her heart racing a beat too loud in her ears."
1"Aurora Carter’s cheeks flushed with a mix of anger and something else—something that prickled beneath her skin, making her want to shut the door, turn away, or scream."
2"\"Stalking me’s a new hobby for you?\" She clenched her fists, the scar on her wrist prickling—a remnant from her childhood, but today it felt like a warning."
3"She could feel her pulse tightening, her mind sprinting for form, for control—anything but the whirlwind brewing at her door."
4"His presence always made her feel a delicate edge—something between attraction and the undeniable sting of betrayal."
5"Something flickered in her—a flash of vulnerability she’d long buried."
6"Despite her effort at composure, her entire body betrayed her—her heart pounding painfully, her hands trembling."
7"Without waiting for a reply, he turned—not quite ready to leave—but his words lingered, echoing in her mind long after the door snapped shut behind him."
86.36% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount779
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.05263157894736842
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.023106546854942234
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences62
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences62
mean16.98
std8.73
cv0.514
sampleLengths
09
122
212
328
429
532
616
728
813
916
1017
1112
1210
1328
144
1528
1611
1740
189
195
202
2125
2220
2326
2421
2532
267
277
2825
2922
3021
3118
3217
3318
347
354
3626
3726
3810
3915
4018
4122
4216
433
4413
4515
4612
4728
4826
4913
82.80% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5161290322580645
totalSentences62
uniqueOpeners32
65.36% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences51
matches
0"Just watched her, eyes darkening,"
ratio0.02
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences51
matches
0"Her breath hitched—her heart racing"
1"His tailored charcoal suit looked"
2"She barely had time to"
3"he said, lowering the cane"
4"Her voice was colder than"
5"She stiffened her back, chest"
6"He took a small step"
7"His tone remained even, but"
8"She clenched her fists, the"
9"His voice lowered, almost whispering,"
10"She looked past him, into"
11"She could feel her pulse"
12"she muttered, voice brittle, her"
13"He leaned in slightly, one"
14"His tone was dry, but"
15"Her eyes darted to the"
16"He shifted, voice softer, almost"
17"His presence always made her"
18"she said, voice firmer this"
19"He chuckled without humor."
ratio0.608
48.24% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount42
totalSentences51
matches
0"The door swung open suddenly,"
1"A figure stood there, shadowed"
2"Her breath hitched—her heart racing"
3"Lucien Moreau’s sharp features emerged"
4"His tailored charcoal suit looked"
5"She barely had time to"
6"he said, lowering the cane"
7"Aurora Carter’s cheeks flushed with"
8"Her voice was colder than"
9"She stiffened her back, chest"
10"He took a small step"
11"His tone remained even, but"
12"She clenched her fists, the"
13"Lucien’s smirk stretched wider, gaze"
14"His voice lowered, almost whispering,"
15"A bolt of old, tangled"
16"She looked past him, into"
17"She could feel her pulse"
18"she muttered, voice brittle, her"
19"He leaned in slightly, one"
ratio0.824
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences51
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Aurora Carter’s cheeks flushed with a mix of anger and something else—something that prickled beneath her skin, making her want to shut the door, turn away, or …"
1"She could feel her pulse tightening, her mind sprinting for form, for control—anything but the whirlwind brewing at her door."
2"Despite her effort at composure, her entire body betrayed her—her heart pounding painfully, her hands trembling."
3"Just watched her, eyes darkening, as if weighing her words and her defiance."
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he finally said, voice low"
1"he said softly, voice nearly a whisper now"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.08
70.0672%