| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "His voice lowered almost [almost]" | | 1 | "Her voice cracked just [just]" | | 2 | "he finally said [finally]" | | 3 | "he said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.56 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.286 | | effectiveRatio | 0.286 | |
| 62.48% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1066 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "tightly" | | 3 | "deliberately" | | 4 | "lightly" | | 5 | "quickly" | | 6 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 1.50% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1066 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "racing" | | 1 | "gleaming" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "intensity" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "could feel" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "scanning" | | 8 | "echoing" | | 9 | "flicked" | | 10 | "pounding" | | 11 | "silence" | | 12 | "quickened" | | 13 | "quivered" | | 14 | "flicker" | | 15 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 52 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 52 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1053 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 8 | | wordCount | 767 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.26 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 0.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Moreau | 1 | | Aurora | 2 | | Carter | 1 | | Lucien | 2 | | Ptolemy | 1 | | Despite | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Moreau" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Carter" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Ptolemy" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a warning" | | 1 | "as if trying to read between the layers of calm" | | 2 | "something between attraction and the undeniable" | | 3 | "as if weighing her words and her defiance" | | 4 | "not quite ready to leave—but his words lingered, echoing in her mind long after the door snapped shut behind him" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1053 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 60.90% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 39 | | std | 14.16 | | cv | 0.363 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 43 | | 1 | 57 | | 2 | 32 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 41 | | 5 | 45 | | 6 | 42 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 51 | | 9 | 61 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 53 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 47 | | 14 | 56 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 56 | | 17 | 43 | | 18 | 38 | | 19 | 31 | | 20 | 66 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 35 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 43 | | 26 | 41 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 153 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 62 | | ratio | 0.129 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath hitched—her heart racing a beat too loud in her ears." | | 1 | "Aurora Carter’s cheeks flushed with a mix of anger and something else—something that prickled beneath her skin, making her want to shut the door, turn away, or scream." | | 2 | "\"Stalking me’s a new hobby for you?\" She clenched her fists, the scar on her wrist prickling—a remnant from her childhood, but today it felt like a warning." | | 3 | "She could feel her pulse tightening, her mind sprinting for form, for control—anything but the whirlwind brewing at her door." | | 4 | "His presence always made her feel a delicate edge—something between attraction and the undeniable sting of betrayal." | | 5 | "Something flickered in her—a flash of vulnerability she’d long buried." | | 6 | "Despite her effort at composure, her entire body betrayed her—her heart pounding painfully, her hands trembling." | | 7 | "Without waiting for a reply, he turned—not quite ready to leave—but his words lingered, echoing in her mind long after the door snapped shut behind him." |
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| 86.36% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 779 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 41 | | adverbRatio | 0.05263157894736842 | | lyAdverbCount | 18 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.023106546854942234 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 62 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 62 | | mean | 16.98 | | std | 8.73 | | cv | 0.514 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 28 | | 4 | 29 | | 5 | 32 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 28 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 40 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 25 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 26 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 32 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 26 | | 37 | 26 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 28 | | 48 | 26 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 82.80% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.5161290322580645 | | totalSentences | 62 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 65.36% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "Just watched her, eyes darkening," |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath hitched—her heart racing" | | 1 | "His tailored charcoal suit looked" | | 2 | "She barely had time to" | | 3 | "he said, lowering the cane" | | 4 | "Her voice was colder than" | | 5 | "She stiffened her back, chest" | | 6 | "He took a small step" | | 7 | "His tone remained even, but" | | 8 | "She clenched her fists, the" | | 9 | "His voice lowered, almost whispering," | | 10 | "She looked past him, into" | | 11 | "She could feel her pulse" | | 12 | "she muttered, voice brittle, her" | | 13 | "He leaned in slightly, one" | | 14 | "His tone was dry, but" | | 15 | "Her eyes darted to the" | | 16 | "He shifted, voice softer, almost" | | 17 | "His presence always made her" | | 18 | "she said, voice firmer this" | | 19 | "He chuckled without humor." |
| | ratio | 0.608 | |
| 48.24% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "The door swung open suddenly," | | 1 | "A figure stood there, shadowed" | | 2 | "Her breath hitched—her heart racing" | | 3 | "Lucien Moreau’s sharp features emerged" | | 4 | "His tailored charcoal suit looked" | | 5 | "She barely had time to" | | 6 | "he said, lowering the cane" | | 7 | "Aurora Carter’s cheeks flushed with" | | 8 | "Her voice was colder than" | | 9 | "She stiffened her back, chest" | | 10 | "He took a small step" | | 11 | "His tone remained even, but" | | 12 | "She clenched her fists, the" | | 13 | "Lucien’s smirk stretched wider, gaze" | | 14 | "His voice lowered, almost whispering," | | 15 | "A bolt of old, tangled" | | 16 | "She looked past him, into" | | 17 | "She could feel her pulse" | | 18 | "she muttered, voice brittle, her" | | 19 | "He leaned in slightly, one" |
| | ratio | 0.824 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 28 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter’s cheeks flushed with a mix of anger and something else—something that prickled beneath her skin, making her want to shut the door, turn away, or …" | | 1 | "She could feel her pulse tightening, her mind sprinting for form, for control—anything but the whirlwind brewing at her door." | | 2 | "Despite her effort at composure, her entire body betrayed her—her heart pounding painfully, her hands trembling." | | 3 | "Just watched her, eyes darkening, as if weighing her words and her defiance." |
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| 53.57% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "he finally said, voice low" | | 1 | "he said softly, voice nearly a whisper now" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.08 | |