Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0TXKKP9NXX25RQEQPV1X7

Run Details

Duration:
29.3s
Cost:
$0.029209
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air shifted, losing the damp chill of the London sewer and taking on the dry, baking heat of a forgotten oven. The greasy stone beneath Rory’s boots gave way to soft, warm soil. She stumbled forward, one hand flying to her throat where the Heartstone Pendant burned against her skin. The heat from the crimson gem was a feverish thrum, a constant, insistent pulse that echoed the pounding in her ears. A light, not of sun or moon, filled the space. It was a thick, honeyed amber, pouring down from a sky that held no clouds. The air tasted sweet, a cloying perfume of overripe fruit and baking spice that coated her tongue. Beside her, a column of shadow writhed and coalesced. It stretched, thickened, and settled into the tall, humanoid silhouette of Nyx. The being’s faint violet eyes scanned the canopy above them. “The colour of old wine.” Their voice was a rustle of dry leaves on the wind. Rory followed their gaze. Massive, waxy leaves, the colour of jade and rust, formed a ceiling overhead. They grew from trees with bark like polished obsidian, their trunks impossibly wide. Gravity felt strange here, heavier. Each breath was a conscious effort. She let her hand fall from the pendant and gripped the Fae-forged blade at her hip. The moonsilver hilt was a sliver of ice against her warm palm. They stood in an orchard that stretched in every direction. Fruits like swollen, luminous jewels hung in heavy clusters from the black branches. Some were spheres of pulsating magenta, others coiled horns of iridescent blue. A low, continuous hum vibrated through the soles of her feet, a sound felt more than heard. “We don't touch anything. We don’t eat anything.” Rory’s voice was a low command, cutting through the thick, syrupy air. Nyx’s form rippled, their head tilting in an inhuman gesture of curiosity. “To consume this place would be to be consumed by it.” They started to walk, their steps silent on the rich earth. Rory followed, her boots making soft thuds that sounded unnervingly loud in the humming quiet. She kept her eyes moving, scanning the spaces between the obsidian trees. The ground was carpeted in a moss that glowed with a soft, internal phosphorescence, illuminating their path in the amber twilight. Small, winged creatures with multifaceted eyes flitted between the glowing fruits, their wings a blur of colour. A soft, wet pop echoed from a nearby tree. One of the magenta spheres had burst, spilling a thick, shimmering liquid down the black bark. The scent that rolled towards them was intoxicating, a dizzying blend of strawberries and something else, something she couldn't name, a fragrance that promised bliss. Rory felt a pang of hunger, sharp and sudden. She swallowed, the taste of spice and sugar thick in her throat. “The air itself is a feast.” Nyx drifted ahead, their shadowy form a stark contrast to the luminous flora. “A promise that can never be kept.” Rory pulled the collar of her jacket higher, a futile gesture against the sensory assault. They passed under a bough laden with crystalline pears. Light refracted through them, casting a thousand tiny amber rainbows on the glowing moss below. It was beautiful. An artist’s dream of paradise. A deep, primal part of her recoiled from the sheer, suffocating perfection of it all. Nothing on Earth grew with such flawless, indulgent symmetry. The orchard began to thin, giving way to a wide, open meadow. The humming grew louder, now joined by a distant melody. It was a lilting tune played on pipes, interwoven with faint, bell-like laughter. In the centre of the meadow, a river snaked its way through the landscape. It was not water. The current was slow and viscous, the colour of liquid gold, and it steamed gently, releasing waves of a scent like warm honey and caramelised sugar. Rory knelt by the riverbank, the glowing moss cool against her knuckles. She resisted the urge to dip her fingers into the sluggish current. Small, boat-like leaves drifted on the surface, each carrying a single, perfect berry that shone like a drop of blood. “This whole place is bait.” Nyx stood motionless, a void in the golden light, their attention fixed on something across the river. “It is a trap that does not need to be sprung. Its prisoners build their own cages.” Following their gaze, Rory saw figures moving on the far side of the meadow. They were humanoid, but their movements were slow, languid, as if they were wading through heavy water. They tended to gardens where vegetables grew to the size of small carts, their colours preternaturally vibrant. One of them, a man with a chef’s apron tied around his waist, carefully polished a monstrously large pumpkin with a soft cloth, his expression one of rapt adoration. His eyes were glazed, unfocused. The music grew louder, more insistent. The piping melody wrapped around a chorus of voices, a song of pure, unadulterated joy that felt utterly hollow. They were drawing closer to its source. The path of glowing moss led them towards a break in a final line of trees, a wide archway formed by the entwined branches of two colossal willows whose leaves wept threads of silver. Rory paused at the threshold, the warmth of the pendant a steady, anxious beat against her chest. The Fae blade at her hip felt colder than ever. Beyond the archway, the world opened up into a scene of impossible grandeur. Long tables, carved from single pieces of white wood, stretched for what seemed like miles. They groaned under the weight of roasted beasts, mountains of glistening pastries, and fountains that flowed with crimson wine. Beings of all shapes and sizes sat at the tables, eating and drinking with a desperate, joyless intensity. Their laughter was sharp, their eyes frantic. The feast was endless, and so was the hunger.
created_at"2026-02-19T03:59:25.308Z" 2/19/2026, 3:59:25 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.82% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount988
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"carefully"
2"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
13.97% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount988
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"echoed"
count2
3
word"pounding"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"vibrated"
count1
6
word"scanning"
count1
7
word"pang"
count1
8
word"stark"
count1
9
word"crystalline"
count1
10
word"flawless"
count1
11
word"perfect"
count1
12
word"warmth"
count1
13
word"weight"
count1
14
word"glistening"
count1
15
word"intensity"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"pulse"
2"echoed"
3"pounding"
4"scanned"
5"vibrated"
6"scanning"
7"pang"
8"stark"
9"crystalline"
10"flawless"
11"perfect"
12"warmth"
13"weight"
14"glistening"
15"intensity"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences69
matches(empty)
80.75% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences69
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
1"began to"
2"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences73
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords987
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount928
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.97
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
London1
Rory9
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Nyx4
Fae-forged1
Earth1
Fae2
persons
0"Rory"
1"Nyx"
2"Earth"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount987
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs19
mean51.95
std27.07
cv0.521
sampleLengths
072
142
231
316
469
552
620
723
876
971
1026
1171
1279
1344
145
1534
1682
1766
18108
95.09% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences69
matches
0"was carpeted"
1"were glazed"
55.07% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs138
matches
0"was intoxicating"
1"were wading"
2"were drawing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences73
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount929
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.02045209903121636
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.007534983853606028
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences73
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences73
mean13.52
std5.86
cv0.434
sampleLengths
022
112
217
321
410
515
617
79
812
910
1016
114
1213
1313
145
156
1616
1712
1810
1913
2012
2117
2220
2312
2411
2511
2615
2712
2821
2917
309
3116
3225
339
3412
3519
367
3715
389
3915
403
415
4215
439
4412
4510
4613
4714
484
4926
57.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3835616438356164
totalSentences73
uniqueOpeners28
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
98.26% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences69
matches
0"She stumbled forward, one hand"
1"It was a thick, honeyed"
2"It stretched, thickened, and settled"
3"Their voice was a rustle"
4"They grew from trees with"
5"She let her hand fall"
6"They stood in an orchard"
7"They started to walk, their"
8"She kept her eyes moving,"
9"She swallowed, the taste of"
10"They passed under a bough"
11"It was beautiful."
12"It was a lilting tune"
13"It was not water."
14"She resisted the urge to"
15"They were humanoid, but their"
16"They tended to gardens where"
17"His eyes were glazed, unfocused."
18"They were drawing closer to"
19"They groaned under the weight"
ratio0.304
32.46% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences69
matches
0"The air shifted, losing the"
1"The greasy stone beneath Rory’s"
2"She stumbled forward, one hand"
3"The heat from the crimson"
4"A light, not of sun"
5"It was a thick, honeyed"
6"The air tasted sweet, a"
7"It stretched, thickened, and settled"
8"The being’s faint violet eyes"
9"Their voice was a rustle"
10"Rory followed their gaze."
11"They grew from trees with"
12"Gravity felt strange here, heavier."
13"Each breath was a conscious"
14"She let her hand fall"
15"The moonsilver hilt was a"
16"They stood in an orchard"
17"Fruits like swollen, luminous jewels"
18"Some were spheres of pulsating"
19"A low, continuous hum vibrated"
ratio0.855
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
14.29% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"The heat from the crimson gem was a feverish thrum, a constant, insistent pulse that echoed the pounding in her ears."
1"Rory followed, her boots making soft thuds that sounded unnervingly loud in the humming quiet."
2"She kept her eyes moving, scanning the spaces between the obsidian trees."
3"The ground was carpeted in a moss that glowed with a soft, internal phosphorescence, illuminating their path in the amber twilight."
4"The scent that rolled towards them was intoxicating, a dizzying blend of strawberries and something else, something she couldn't name, a fragrance that promised…"
5"Small, boat-like leaves drifted on the surface, each carrying a single, perfect berry that shone like a drop of blood."
6"They were humanoid, but their movements were slow, languid, as if they were wading through heavy water."
7"The piping melody wrapped around a chorus of voices, a song of pure, unadulterated joy that felt utterly hollow."
8"They groaned under the weight of roasted beasts, mountains of glistening pastries, and fountains that flowed with crimson wine."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
81.0595%