Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0V0KNGPRWK4WR0R09Q4QB

Run Details

Duration:
43.5s
Cost:
$0.005847
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clacked open, a heavy metallic thunk that vibrated through the thin floorboards. Rory yanked the door inward, expecting the delivery guy from the Chinese takeout down the street or perhaps her landlord coming to complain about the noise Ptolemy made at three in the morning. Lucien Moreau stood on the grimy landing, rain dripping from the brim of an umbrella he hadn't bothered to open. His charcoal suit absorbed the dim hallway light, making him look like a cutout against the peeling yellow wallpaper. Water traced paths through his slicked-back platinum hair, ruining the meticulous style he usually maintained with obsessive precision. He leaned on his ivory-handled cane, the tip resting on a discarded pizza flyer. "You changed the locks," Lucien said. His voice lacked its usual polished cadence, roughened by the damp London air. Rory gripped the doorframe, her knuckles white. She didn't step back. She didn't invite him in. The smell of curry from the restaurant below mingled with the wet wool of his coat and something sharper, like ozone before a storm. "I changed everything," she replied. "Get off my mat, Lucien." He pushed past her anyway. The movement was fluid, effortless, as if the three deadbolts and her verbal command held no more weight than a cobweb. He stepped into the cramped hallway, shaking water from his sleeves onto the stacks of books lining the floor. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, hissed from atop a pile of research notes on the sofa, tail lashing. "Your cat remembers me," Lucien observed, tapping his cane against the floor to steady himself. He turned, those mismatched eyes—one amber, one void-black—locking onto hers. "Unlike some people." "Ptolemy hates everyone. It's a survival trait." Rory slammed the door shut and engaged the first bolt. Then the second. She left the third off, a silent concession she hated herself for making. "How did you find this place?" "Eva talks when she's had two glasses of Pinot Grigio. You'd be surprised how loose her tongue gets regarding your whereabouts." Lucien navigated the obstacle course of scrolls and textbooks, moving with a grace that belied the clutter. He stopped in the center of the living area, the only clear space being the worn rug beneath his feet. "Cardiff feels a lifetime ago. London suits you. Chaotic. Hiding in plain sight." "Stop analyzing me." Rory crossed her arms over her chest, feeling the old crescent scar on her left wrist itch under her sleeve. "You have five minutes. Then I call the police. Or something worse." "Call Silas. He knows better than to interrupt us." Lucien unbuttoned his wet jacket, revealing a crisp white shirt underneath. He didn't take it off. He just stood there, radiating a heat that had nothing to do with the radiator clicking in the corner. "I didn't come to fight, Rory." "You came unannounced to a flat with three deadbolts after six months of silence. That sounds like a fight to me." "I came because Avaros is stirring. The borders are thinning." He took a step toward her. The distance between them shrank, charging the air with static. "And you are the only person I know who can read the old Welsh texts without burning their fingers." Rory laughed, a sharp, brittle sound. "So that's it? I'm a tool again? You dump me in Marseille because your father's realm got too 'complicated,' and now you need a translator?" "I left to protect you." Lucien's voice dropped, the words landing heavy in the small room. "My father's kin do not tolerate human entanglements. Staying would have gotten you killed. Or worse, turned." "You didn't ask me what I wanted." Rory stepped forward, closing the gap until she could see the flecks of gold in his amber eye. "You decided for me. You packed your tailored suits and your secret blade and vanished. Left me with a one-way ticket to Heathrow and a heart full of nothing." "I left you alive." "Alive isn't living, Lucien." Ptolemy jumped down from the sofa, weaving between Lucien's legs. The half-demon looked down, his expression softening for a fraction of a second before he redirected his focus to Rory. He reached out, his long fingers hovering near her face. She flinched but didn't pull away. "Your hands are cold," he murmured. "London winter." "Liar." He caught her wrist, his thumb brushing over the crescent scar. The touch sent a jolt through her arm, familiar and terrifying. "You've been working nights. Delivering food. Sleeping in chunks. Worrying." "I've been fine." "You look exhausted." He released her wrist but didn't step back. His presence filled the room, crowding out the dust motes dancing in the single beam of streetlight cutting through the window. "Let me help." "With what? Your demon problems? I told you, I'm done with that life. I study law now. Well, I studied it. Now I deliver dumplings and read Eva's crazy research." "The law cannot stop what is coming." Lucien's gaze dropped to her lips, then back to her eyes. "But we can. Together." "There is no 'we'." Rory turned away, walking to the kitchenette to busy herself with the kettle. Her hands shook as she filled it. "There was a 'we' once. Then there was you disappearing without a word for three weeks. Then there was silence." "I wrote letters." "I never got them." "Your father intercepted them." Lucien moved behind her. She could feel the heat of his body against her back, though he didn't touch her. "Brendan Carter is a formidable man when he thinks he's protecting his daughter. He burned them. All of them." Rory froze, the kettle slipping from her grip. Lucien's hand shot out, catching the handle before it hit the sink. His fingers wrapped around hers, warm and steady. "He told me you stopped caring," she whispered, staring at the stainless steel sink. "He said you found someone else in Marseille. A demoness. Something suitable." Lucien spun her around, forcing her to look at him. His face was inches from hers, the intensity in his heterochromatic eyes burning away the shadows of the flat. "There is no one else. There never could be. Not after you." The admission hung in the air, raw and unpolished. "I burned half of Marseille looking for a way to break the contract my father signed. I spent every night for six months fighting shadows so you could sleep safely in your little flat above a curry house." Rory searched his face for the lie, for the manipulation she expected from a fixer of the supernatural underworld. She found only exhaustion mirroring her own, and a hunger that made her breath hitch. "Why now?" she asked. "Why show up tonight?" "Because the dreams started again," Lucien said softly. "The ones where you scream. I felt them across the channel. I couldn't stay away." Rory's breath caught. She hadn't told anyone about the nightmares. The visions of fire and black wings that woke her in a cold sweat. She had buried them under shifts at the Golden Empress and piles of legal briefs. "You felt that?" "I am half-demon, Rory. Our bond... it doesn't sever with distance. It festers." He lifted his hand, tucking a strand of her straight black hair behind her ear. His touch lingered on her jawline. "I tried to let you go. I thought giving you a normal life was the gift you needed. But normalcy is a cage for people like us. And you are not normal." "I wanted normal," she insisted, though her voice lacked conviction. She leaned into his touch despite herself. "I wanted to forget the monsters." "The monsters are here." Lucien gestured to the window, to the rainy London night beyond. "And they are coming for you because you carry a piece of Avaros in your bloodline. Your mother's side. The Welsh teachers know more than they let on." Rory pulled back, the moment fracturing. "My mother is dead. She taught primary school. She baked scones." "She hid grimoires in the cookie jar, Rory." Lucien walked over to the stack of books on the coffee table, picking up a dusty volume Eva had left out. He flipped it open to a marked page. "Eva knows. That's why she sent you here. That's why she keeps this collection." Rory stared at the book. The symbols on the page swam before her eyes, suddenly making a twisted kind of sense. The headaches, the strange luck, the way animals reacted to her. "So what do we do?" The question slipped out before she could stop it. Lucien closed the book with a snap. He walked back to her, stopping just out of reach. The tension between them pulled tight, a bowstring ready to snap. "We survive," he said. "We figure out what your mother hid. And we prepare." He paused, his gaze dropping to her mouth again. "But first, you need to eat. You're swaying on your feet." "I'm fine." "You're starving." He moved to the small table, pulling out a chair. "Sit. I'll make tea. And then you're going to tell me everything Eva has found." "I'm not your subordinate, Lucien." "No." He met her eyes, a ghost of a smile touching his lips. "You're the only person who can tell me no and mean it. Sit down, Rory." She looked at the chair, then at him. The rain hammered against the window, isolating them in their bubble of clutter and history. The anger was still there, a dull ache in her chest, but the relief of not being alone in the dark was stronger. She sat. Lucien filled the kettle, his movements precise, domestic in a way that clashed wildly with the ivory blade hidden in his cane. He hummed a tuneless melody, something French and old, as the water began to heat. Rory watched him, tracing the line of his spine through the wet shirt. The complications hadn't vanished. The danger was real. But for the first time in six months, the silence in the flat didn't feel empty. It felt like a held breath, waiting to be exhaled.
created_at"2026-02-19T03:59:28.38Z" 2/19/2026, 3:59:28 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags29
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Rory turned away [away]"
1"Lucien said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences67
tagDensity0.433
leniency0.866
rawRatio0.069
effectiveRatio0.06
94.10% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1695
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
52.80% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1695
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"vibrated"
count1
1
word"traced"
count1
2
word"effortless"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"navigated"
count1
5
word"chaotic"
count1
6
word"silence"
count3
7
word"familiar"
count1
8
word"dancing"
count1
9
word"could feel"
count1
10
word"intensity"
count1
11
word"normalcy"
count1
12
word"tension"
count1
13
word"tracing"
count1
highlights
0"vibrated"
1"traced"
2"effortless"
3"weight"
4"navigated"
5"chaotic"
6"silence"
7"familiar"
8"dancing"
9"could feel"
10"intensity"
11"normalcy"
12"tension"
13"tracing"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
1"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences92
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences130
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1687
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
73.44% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount1045
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.53
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Chinese1
Ptolemy3
Moreau1
London2
Lucien16
Rory14
Golden1
Empress1
Eva1
French1
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Rory"
4"Eva"
places
0"Chinese"
1"London"
2"Golden"
globalScore0.734
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a held breath, waiting to be"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1687
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences130
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean30.67
std18.56
cv0.605
sampleLengths
048
171
219
340
410
562
628
739
871
935
1050
1121
1245
1331
1433
1554
164
174
1846
196
202
2133
223
2335
2430
2522
2644
273
284
2943
3028
3126
3229
3359
3434
358
3623
3739
383
3966
4023
4143
4217
4351
4432
4514
4628
4734
482
4927
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs181
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences130
ratio0.008
matches
0"He turned, those mismatched eyes—one amber, one void-black—locking onto hers."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1051
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.022835394862036156
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005708848715509039
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences130
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences130
mean12.98
std7.92
cv0.61
sampleLengths
015
133
220
319
418
514
66
713
87
94
105
1124
125
135
145
1521
1619
1717
1815
1910
203
2117
223
2313
246
2538
2620
2713
2823
2912
3020
315
3219
336
3421
3516
3610
3719
386
3925
4016
4117
4225
4329
444
454
4610
4720
4810
496
41.54% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.2846153846153846
totalSentences130
uniqueOpeners37
38.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"Then the second."
ratio0.012
43.26% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences86
matches
0"His charcoal suit absorbed the"
1"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
2"His voice lacked its usual"
3"She didn't step back."
4"She didn't invite him in."
5"He pushed past her anyway."
6"He stepped into the cramped"
7"He turned, those mismatched eyes—one"
8"She left the third off,"
9"He stopped in the center"
10"He didn't take it off."
11"He just stood there, radiating"
12"He took a step toward"
13"He reached out, his long"
14"She flinched but didn't pull"
15"He caught her wrist, his"
16"He released her wrist but"
17"His presence filled the room,"
18"Her hands shook as she"
19"She could feel the heat"
ratio0.442
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences86
matches
0"The third deadbolt clacked open,"
1"Rory yanked the door inward,"
2"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
3"His charcoal suit absorbed the"
4"Water traced paths through his"
5"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
6"His voice lacked its usual"
7"Rory gripped the doorframe, her"
8"She didn't step back."
9"She didn't invite him in."
10"The smell of curry from"
11"He pushed past her anyway."
12"The movement was fluid, effortless,"
13"He stepped into the cramped"
14"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, hissed"
15"Lucien observed, tapping his cane"
16"He turned, those mismatched eyes—one"
17"Rory slammed the door shut"
18"She left the third off,"
19"Lucien navigated the obstacle course"
ratio0.977
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
ratio0
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The third deadbolt clacked open, a heavy metallic thunk that vibrated through the thin floorboards."
1"Rory yanked the door inward, expecting the delivery guy from the Chinese takeout down the street or perhaps her landlord coming to complain about the noise Ptol…"
2"The movement was fluid, effortless, as if the three deadbolts and her verbal command held no more weight than a cobweb."
3"She found only exhaustion mirroring her own, and a hunger that made her breath hitch."
38.79% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags29
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Lucien's voice dropped, the words landing heavy in the small room"
1"He caught, his thumb brushing over the crescent scar"
2"she insisted, though her voice lacked conviction"
3"He paused, his gaze dropping to her mouth again"
4"He met, a ghost of a smile touching his lips"
90.30% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Lucien observed (observe)"
1"he murmured (murmur)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"she insisted (insist)"
dialogueSentences67
tagDensity0.134
leniency0.269
rawRatio0.444
effectiveRatio0.119
80.3696%