Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0V0VGMVY3HC97G2YJNQZ4

Run Details

Duration:
13.1s
Cost:
$0.000561
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter had just finished stacking the last of her research books when she heard a knock. She paused, eyebrows lifting in surprise. No one was supposed to be coming by—especially not today. Quiet moments like this didn’t happen often, and she liked it that way. She set down the book carefully, checked her reflection in the cracked mirror propped against the wall, then moved across the cluttered room to the door. For a moment, she stared through the peephole. Lucien Moreau. Her breath caught. Her hand hovered over the doorknob—a pulse fluttered in her wrist, the scar there faint but familiar. She swallowed hard, the memory rushing back—grounded and sharp. She hesitated, then pulled the door open. He was standing there in a tailored charcoal suit, a subtle smirk playing on those sharp, defined features. His platinum blond hair was slicked back, and the cane with the ivory handle rested against his side like an extension of himself. His black eye gleamed with quiet amusement. “Bonsoir, Aurora,” he said softly, voice smooth but carrying an edge of something untraceable. She stared, stunned, caught somewhere between anger and longing. “Lucien. What the hell are you doing here?” He tilted his head, eyes flickering with that peculiar amber-black gaze. “I could ask you the same thing, mon amie. I didn’t expect to find you hiding behind this door, quite honestly.” Her jaw tightened. “I don’t owe you explanations.” He shrugged as he stepped inside without waiting for an invitation. His cane tapped lightly against the wooden floor as he approached her, gaze scanning her face like he was trying to read her thoughts. “You’ve always been quick. That’s one of the reasons I like talking to you.” She crossed her arms, her eyes narrowing. “You’re not here for a social visit, Lucien. So, why now?” He paused, gaze falling on the little crescent scar on her wrist. The air between them grew dense, like the space had suddenly thickened with things they hadn’t quite said. “I needed to see you,” he admitted, voice low. “Or rather, I needed to be seen by you. You disappear for months, then you show up on my doorstep—why?” Her stomach clenched. “I’m not the one who’s been slipping away. Don’t act like you don’t know what’s happened.” He chuckled softly, slow and deliberate. “I know exactly what’s happened. I also know you’re still mad at me. That much is obvious.” His eyes lingered. “But we both know this isn’t about anger, is it?” She looked away, shifting her weight from one foot to the other. The cluttered mess of research notes and books around them felt suddenly claustrophobic. The scent of curry from downstairs curled through the thin walls, a reminder of life's normalcy pressing against her nerves. “Look, Lucien,” she finally said, voice clipped. “You showing up like this doesn’t fix anything. We left things unresolved—things I’m tired of pretending don’t matter anymore.” He stepped closer, voice dropping. “Rory, I never stopped thinking about you. Can’t you see that?” Her breath hitched, her heart pounding erratically. The years—they had carved deep lines into her bravado. Still, she clenched her fists. “You always said you had your reasons. That you were playing a dangerous game, and I had to stay out of it. Maybe I did. But I’m over it. Over us. Or—at least—I was trying to be.” His gaze softened just a touch, but there was a flicker of something wicked beneath it. “You think letting go is that easy? You’re like this fragile glass I never dared to break, and I don’t even know if I can hold myself back anymore.” She looked at him then, the torment hidden behind that slicked-back platinum and the calm exterior. “You sound like you’re still fighting your demons.” Her voice wavered just for a moment. “Demon or not, I’m not going back to whatever you’re tangled up in.” He sighed, tipping his head. “I wish things were simple. I wish I could explain everything.” His eyes darkened briefly. “But I came here for a reason beyond words. There’s something happening that I can’t handle without you. Some danger that’s already reached parts of London where even I don’t want to go.” She studied him, a flicker of confusion crossing her face. “Why now? What’s so urgent that you risk knocking on my door?” Lucien hesitated, then reached into his coat pocket, retrieving a small vial, shimmering darkly in the dim light. “This is what you need to see. And then maybe you’ll understand why I had to find you.” She took a step back; her instincts piched. “What the hell is that?” “Something that’s already here,” he said quietly. “Something I can’t face alone. You’re the only one who can.” Her pulse accelerated, but her voice remained steady. “Maybe I don’t want to be dragged back into your mess.” He looked at her, a flicker of vulnerability breaking through his usual composure. “You’re already in it, Rory. You just don’t know it yet.” The silence stretched between them, thick and unyielding. The narrow line of the flat’s cluttered space suddenly felt suffocating. Outside, Ptolemy’s faint meow was the only sound breaking the quiet as Aurora stared at the vial, her mind racing.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"he said softly [softly]"
1"she finally said [finally]"
2"Her voice wavered just [just]"
3"His eyes darkened briefly [briefly]"
4"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.259
leniency0.519
rawRatio0.714
effectiveRatio0.37
60.50% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount886
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count2
2
adverb"lightly"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count3
highlights
0"carefully"
1"softly"
2"lightly"
3"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
9.71% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount886
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"fluttered"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"reminder"
count1
7
word"normalcy"
count1
8
word"pounding"
count1
9
word"flicker"
count3
10
word"wavered"
count1
11
word"silence"
count1
12
word"racing"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"fluttered"
2"familiar"
3"scanning"
4"stomach"
5"weight"
6"reminder"
7"normalcy"
8"pounding"
9"flicker"
10"wavered"
11"silence"
12"racing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her fists"
90.99% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences49
matches
0"g in surprise"
1"a flicker of confusion"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences49
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences69
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords876
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions5
wordCount512
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity0.39
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity0.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Moreau1
Ptolemy1
Aurora2
persons
0"Carter"
1"Moreau"
2"Aurora"
places
0"Ptolemy"
globalScore1
windowScore1
82.43% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences37
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite said"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount876
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean29.2
std16.72
cv0.573
sampleLengths
072
18
22
329
47
548
614
717
832
98
1049
1118
1230
1329
1419
1536
1645
1726
1816
1958
2045
2144
2253
2322
2436
2513
2618
2719
2824
2939
90.94% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences49
matches
0"was supposed"
1"was slicked"
62.54% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs97
matches
0"was standing"
1"was trying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences69
ratio0.072
matches
0"No one was supposed to be coming by—especially not today."
1"Her hand hovered over the doorknob—a pulse fluttered in her wrist, the scar there faint but familiar."
2"She swallowed hard, the memory rushing back—grounded and sharp."
3"The years—they had carved deep lines into her bravado."
4"She took a step back; her instincts piched."
78.47% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount518
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.05791505791505792
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.02702702702702703
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences69
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences69
mean12.7
std7.01
cv0.552
sampleLengths
017
16
210
313
426
58
62
73
817
99
107
1118
1223
137
1414
159
168
1711
1821
193
205
2111
2224
2314
247
2511
2612
2718
289
2920
303
3116
326
3320
3410
3512
3613
3720
387
3919
405
4111
427
439
445
4537
4616
4729
4816
4915
51.69% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.36231884057971014
totalSentences69
uniqueOpeners25
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences48
matches
0"She paused, eyebrows lifting in"
1"She set down the book"
2"Her breath caught."
3"Her hand hovered over the"
4"She swallowed hard, the memory"
5"She hesitated, then pulled the"
6"He was standing there in"
7"His platinum blond hair was"
8"His black eye gleamed with"
9"he said softly, voice smooth"
10"She stared, stunned, caught somewhere"
11"He tilted his head, eyes"
12"Her jaw tightened."
13"He shrugged as he stepped"
14"His cane tapped lightly against"
15"She crossed her arms, her"
16"He paused, gaze falling on"
17"he admitted, voice low"
18"Her stomach clenched."
19"He chuckled softly, slow and"
ratio0.729
12.08% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount43
totalSentences48
matches
0"Aurora Carter had just finished"
1"She paused, eyebrows lifting in"
2"She set down the book"
3"Her breath caught."
4"Her hand hovered over the"
5"She swallowed hard, the memory"
6"She hesitated, then pulled the"
7"He was standing there in"
8"His platinum blond hair was"
9"His black eye gleamed with"
10"he said softly, voice smooth"
11"She stared, stunned, caught somewhere"
12"He tilted his head, eyes"
13"Her jaw tightened."
14"He shrugged as he stepped"
15"His cane tapped lightly against"
16"She crossed her arms, her"
17"He paused, gaze falling on"
18"The air between them grew"
19"he admitted, voice low"
ratio0.896
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Outside, Ptolemy’s faint meow was the only sound breaking the quiet as Aurora stared at the vial, her mind racing."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"he said softly, voice smooth but carrying an edge of something untraceable"
1"he admitted, voice low"
2"she finally said, voice clipped"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.148
leniency0.296
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.074
67.9783%