Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0V2W3QK26RXX7QKA6TYCW

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Fantasy genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
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Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

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Aurora's hand tightened around the Heartstone Pendant as the first tendrils of shadow fluttered past, whispering secrets of the ancient grove. The silver chain digging into her palm was a reassuring anchor in a place where reality seemed to shift with every step. Beside her, Nyx's form rippled in the dim light, their eyes faintly glowing violet, scanning the surroundings. "Careful," Nyx murmured, their voice a whisper carried on the wind. "The Fae Grove is not as it appears." Isolde led the way, her silver hair cascading like a waterfall over her shoulders. The half-Fae seer moved with an ethereal grace, her feet leaving no footprints on the moss-covered ground. The ancient oak standing stones at the grove’s entrance loomed over them, casting long shadows that seemed to stretch and twist of their own accord. "This place," Isolde began, her voice barely above a whisper, "is where the Veil thins. Time moves differently here. An hour inside can be minutes or days outside." Aurora felt a chill run down her spine. The air was thick with the scent of wildflowers that bloomed year-round, their petals brushing against her skin as she moved. The ground beneath her feet was spongy, as if the earth itself were breathing. She felt a strange pull, a connection that defied explanation. Nyx’s form shifted, becoming more solid as they stepped into the heart of the grove. "The Fae have a way of ensnaring the unwary," they said, their eyes never leaving the trees. "What seems beautiful can be a trap." Isolde stopped at a clearing where a small pond mirrored the warm amber sky above. The water was crystal clear, reflecting the delicate dance of light and shadow. Aurora approached the pond, her reflection rippling in the water. She reached out, her fingers brushing the surface. The water felt cold, sending tiny shivers up her arm. "Isolde, what’s this place?" Aurora asked, her voice tinged with awe. "The Fae Grove is a pocket between realms," Isolde replied, her voice enigmatic. "A place where the boundaries blur. Here, you may glimpse the truth, or you may fall into illusion." Nyx stepped closer, their form shimmering. "Everything here is a test," they said, their eyes locking onto Aurora's. "The Fae are masters of illusion. Trust nothing, not even your senses." Aurora’s mind raced. She felt a growing unease, a sense that the grove was alive, watching them. The trees seemed to lean closer, their leaves rustling softly. A breeze whispered through the branches, carrying the faintest hint of a melody. She could almost hear whispers, faint and distant, calling her name. "Isolde, what are we looking for?" she asked, her voice steady despite the growing tension. Isolde turned to face her, her pale lavender eyes gleaming. "A vision," she said. "A truth that lies hidden. The Fae Grove can reveal what is hidden from the mortal eye, but it can also hide what is plain to see. You must be prepared to face what you find." Aurora nodded, her grip on the Heartstone Pendant tightening. The pendant pulsed faintly with warmth, a reminder of the danger that lay ahead. She took a deep breath, steeling herself for what was to come. As they moved deeper into the grove, the air grew heavier, the light dimming to a soft, ethereal glow. The trees towered above them, their trunks twisted and gnarled, their branches reaching out like grasping hands. The path they followed twisted and turned, leading them into the heart of the grove. Aurora’s senses were heightened, every sound and scent magnified. The rustle of leaves, the distant call of a bird, the faintest hint of wildflowers. Each step felt deliberate, each breath a conscious effort. She could feel the eyes of the Fae watching her, waiting for her to make a mistake. Nyx’s form shifted again, becoming more translucent. "The Fae are watching," they said, their voice a breath of wind. "They are waiting to see what you do." Aurora’s heart raced. She forced herself to stay calm, her mind focusing on the task at hand. "What do we do?" she asked, her voice steady. "Follow the path," Isolde said, her voice a soothing melody. "But be wary of the illusions. The Fae will try to lead you astray." As they continued, the path opened into a small clearing. In the center stood a stone altar, ancient and weathered. Carvings of intricate designs covered its surface, depicting scenes of the Fae and the mortal world. Aurora approached the altar, her fingers tracing the grooves of the designs. The stone felt cold to the touch, sending a shiver up her spine. "What’s this?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. "The Fae use this altar to communicate with the mortal world," Isolde explained, her eyes narrowing. "It is a conduit, a place where the Veil is thinnest. Here, the Fae can reveal their truths or their deceptions." Aurora felt a presence behind her, a whisper of movement. She turned, her hand instinctively reaching for the Fae-Forged Blade. Nyx stood there, their form solidifying, their eyes locking onto hers. "Be cautious," Nyx said, their voice urgent. "The Fae are masters of manipulation. They will try to confuse you, to lead you astray." Aurora nodded, her grip on the blade firm. She approached the altar, her eyes scanning the carvings. The designs seemed to shift, forming new patterns, new stories. She felt a pull, a compulsion to understand. Her fingers traced the lines, following the intricate designs. Suddenly, the air around her shimmered, and the world transformed. The clearing was no longer a simple grove. It was a grand hall, filled with the Fae. They moved with an otherworldly grace, their eyes glowing with an inner light. Aurora’s heart raced as she realized she was not alone. A figure stepped forward, their form shrouded in shadows. "Welcome, mortal," they said, their voice a melodic whisper. "We have been waiting for you." Aurora's eyes narrowed. "Why?" she demanded, her voice steady. "Because you seek the truth," the Fae replied, their voice echoing in the hall. "The truth that lies beyond the Veil. But be warned, mortal. The truth can be a dangerous thing." Aurora felt a surge of determination. "I am prepared," she said, her voice clear. "Show me what I must see." The Fae smiled, a smile that held no warmth. "Very well. Follow me." The hall around them shifted, the Fae disappearing as quickly as they had appeared. Aurora found herself standing at the edge of a vast, dark forest. The trees loomed overhead, their branches reaching out like skeletal fingers. The air was thick with the scent of decay, and the ground beneath her feet was slick with moss. "Isolde?" Aurora called out, her voice echoing through the forest. "Here," Isolde’s voice came from behind her. The half-Fae seer emerged from the shadows, her eyes glowing with a faint light. "We must follow the path," she said, her voice urgent. "The Fae have shown us the way." Aurora nodded, her grip on the Fae-Forged Blade tightening. She followed Isolde into the forest, her senses on high alert. The trees seemed to close in around them, the darkness thickening. The only sound was the rustle of leaves and the faint whisper of the wind. As they moved deeper into the forest, Aurora felt a growing sense of unease. The air seemed to vibrate with a strange energy, and the ground beneath her feet seemed to shift and change. She could hear the faint whispers of the Fae, their voices distorted and haunting. "Isolde, what is this place?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. "This is the realm of the Fae," Isolde replied, her voice steady. "A place where the boundaries between worlds are thin. Here, the truth and the illusion are intertwined." Aurora nodded, her mind racing. She felt a pull, a compulsion to move forward, to uncover the hidden truths. The path they followed twisted and turned, leading them deeper into the forest. The air grew colder, and the darkness deepened. Suddenly, they emerged into a clearing. In the center stood a massive tree, its trunk twisted and ancient. The branches reached out like arms, and the leaves shimmered with a faint, inner light. Aurora felt a sense of awe and reverence, a connection to something ancient and powerful. "Isolde, what is this tree?" she asked, her voice filled with wonder. "This is the Heart Tree," Isolde replied, her voice reverent. "It is the heart of the Fae Grove, the center of their power. Here, the Fae can reveal their deepest secrets." Aurora approached the tree, her fingers brushing against the rough bark. The tree seemed to hum with a low, resonant energy, and she felt a connection to something ancient and timeless. She reached out, placing her hand firmly against the trunk. The energy flowed through her, filling her with a sense of power and knowledge. "What do we do now?" she asked, her voice steady. "Wait," Isolde said, her eyes narrowing. "The Fae will show us what we need to see." As they waited, the air around them shifted, and the clearing transformed. The tree seemed to glow with an inner light, and the ground beneath their feet shimmered. Aurora felt a sense of anticipation, a feeling that something significant was about to happen. Suddenly, a voice echoed through the clearing, a melodic whisper that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once. "Mortal, you have come far. You have faced the trials of the Fae Grove. Now, you must face the truth." Aurora’s heart raced. She felt a sense of urgency, a need to uncover the hidden secrets. She stepped closer to the tree, her hand still pressed against the trunk. The energy pulsed through her, and she felt a connection to something greater than herself. "Show me the truth," she said, her voice clear and steady. The tree hummed in response, and the world around her shifted. The clearing transformed into a vision of the past, a time when the Fae and the mortal world were intertwined. Aurora saw scenes of ancient battles, of Fae and humans fighting side by side against a common enemy. She saw the Veil breaking, the boundaries between worlds blurring. Suddenly, the vision shifted, and she found herself standing in a grand hall. The Fae stood before her, their forms shrouded in shadows. Their eyes glowed with an inner light, and their voices echoed in the hall. "Mortal, you have faced the trials of the Fae Grove," the Fae spoke, their voices a melodic whisper. "Now, you must face the truth. The truth of the Heartstone Pendant, and the truth of your own destiny." Aurora’s heart raced. She felt a sense of determination, a need to uncover the hidden secrets. "Show me the truth," she said, her voice clear and steady. The Fae smiled, a smile that held no warmth. "Very well. Look within the Heartstone Pendant." Aurora reached for the pendant, her fingers curling around the crimson gemstone. The energy pulsed through her, and she felt a connection to something ancient and powerful. The pendant glowed with a faint inner light, and she felt a sense of revelation. The vision shifted, and she found herself standing in a dark, forgotten chamber. The air was thick with the scent of decay, and the ground beneath her feet was slick with moss. In the center of the chamber stood a pedestal, and on the pedestal was a book, bound in black leather. "The Book of Shadows," a voice whispered in her mind. "The key to the secret of the Heartstone Pendant." Aurora approached the pedestal, her heart racing. The book was bound in black leather, and the pages were made of a thin, translucent material. She opened the book, and the pages shimmered with a faint, inner light. The words on the pages were written in an ancient script, and she felt a connection to something ancient and powerful. "The Heartstone Pendant is a key," the voice whispered in her mind. "A key to the realm of Dymas, the realm of Gluttony. It is a realm of excess and indulgence, where the boundaries between the mortal and the supernatural blur." Aurora’s heart raced. She felt a sense of urgency, a need to uncover the hidden secrets. The Fae Grove had revealed the truth, but the journey was far from over. The realm of Dymas awaited, and she knew she must face it if she was to uncover the full extent of her destiny. As the vision faded, Aurora found herself back in the clearing, the Heart Tree standing tall and ancient before her. She felt a sense of clarity, a connection to something greater than herself. The Fae Grove had shown her the truth, but the journey was far from over. The realm of Dymas awaited, and she knew she must face it if she was to uncover the full extent of her destiny. The Heartstone Pendant pulsed with warmth, a reminder of the path that lay ahead. Aurora took a deep breath, her mind focused on the task at hand. The Fae Grove had revealed the truth, but the journey was far from over. She felt a sense of determination, a need to uncover the hidden secrets. The realm of Dymas awaited, and she knew she must face it if she was to uncover the full extent of her destiny.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags32
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.593
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
75.57% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2251
totalAiIsmAdverbs11
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count3
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count4
3
adverb"very"
count2
4
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
1"softly"
2"suddenly"
3"very"
4"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2251
totalAiIsms67
found
0
word"fluttered"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count2
2
word"whisper"
count9
3
word"cascading"
count1
4
word"loomed"
count2
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"down her spine"
count1
7
word"crystal"
count1
8
word"dance"
count1
9
word"tinged"
count1
10
word"enigmatic"
count1
11
word"raced"
count6
12
word"tension"
count1
13
word"gleaming"
count1
14
word"pulsed"
count4
15
word"warmth"
count4
16
word"reminder"
count2
17
word"could feel"
count1
18
word"intricate"
count2
19
word"tracing"
count1
20
word"traced"
count1
21
word"shimmered"
count4
22
word"otherworldly"
count1
23
word"echoing"
count2
24
word"sense of"
count10
25
word"racing"
count2
26
word"firmly"
count1
27
word"anticipation"
count1
28
word"echoed"
count2
highlights
0"fluttered"
1"scanning"
2"whisper"
3"cascading"
4"loomed"
5"chill"
6"down her spine"
7"crystal"
8"dance"
9"tinged"
10"enigmatic"
11"raced"
12"tension"
13"gleaming"
14"pulsed"
15"warmth"
16"reminder"
17"could feel"
18"intricate"
19"tracing"
20"traced"
21"shimmered"
22"otherworldly"
23"echoing"
24"sense of"
25"racing"
26"firmly"
27"anticipation"
28"echoed"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"air was thick with"
count3
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"The air was thick with"
55.11% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells13
narrationSentences155
matches
0"felt a chill"
1"d with awe"
2"y with warmth"
3"a surge of determination"
4"a sense of awe"
5"filled with wonder"
6"d with wonder"
7"a sense of anticipation"
8"a sense of urgency"
9"a sense of determination"
10"a sense of urgency"
11"d with warmth"
12"a sense of determination"
59.91% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount9
narrationSentences155
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences177
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2245
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions30
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
62.77% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions92
wordCount1777
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.74
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone3
Pendant3
Nyx7
Isolde12
Aurora31
Fae19
Fae-Forged2
Blade2
Veil1
Grove3
Dymas3
Heart1
Tree1
Suddenly4
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Nyx"
2"Isolde"
3"Aurora"
4"Fae"
5"Blade"
6"Veil"
7"Dymas"
8"Heart"
9"Tree"
places
0"Grove"
globalScore0.628
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences136
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"shadows that seemed to stretch and twist of their own accord"
1"whisper that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2245
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences177
matches
0"feeling that something"
91.22% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs62
mean36.21
std16.99
cv0.469
sampleLengths
060
119
256
328
453
539
656
711
831
930
1051
1115
1250
1335
1451
1550
1627
1726
1824
1961
2010
2137
2231
2323
2444
2550
2624
279
2832
2920
3013
3156
3210
3338
3446
3548
3613
3729
3840
3948
4012
4131
4255
4310
4416
4543
4640
4744
4811
4959
96.21% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences155
matches
0"were heightened"
1"were intertwined"
2"was bound"
3"were made"
4"were written"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs305
matches
0"were breathing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences177
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1783
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.015703869882220976
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.008412787436904094
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences177
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences177
mean12.68
std5.18
cv0.409
sampleLengths
021
122
217
311
48
514
617
725
828
98
1021
1114
1210
1315
1417
157
1615
1713
1810
198
2010
2111
2213
2318
246
2512
2612
273
2814
2910
3013
3111
3215
3310
344
3536
369
3714
3812
3919
4017
4115
429
4315
449
4517
467
4712
488
493
39.83% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.192090395480226
totalSentences177
uniqueOpeners34
86.58% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences154
matches
0"Suddenly, the air around her"
1"Suddenly, they emerged into a"
2"Suddenly, a voice echoed through"
3"Suddenly, the vision shifted, and"
ratio0.026
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences154
matches
0"She felt a strange pull,"
1"they said, their eyes never"
2"She reached out, her fingers"
3"they said, their eyes locking"
4"She felt a growing unease,"
5"She could almost hear whispers,"
6"she asked, her voice steady"
7"She took a deep breath,"
8"She could feel the eyes"
9"they said, their voice a"
10"She forced herself to stay"
11"she asked, her voice steady"
12"she asked, her voice barely"
13"She turned, her hand instinctively"
14"She approached the altar, her"
15"She felt a pull, a"
16"Her fingers traced the lines,"
17"It was a grand hall,"
18"They moved with an otherworldly"
19"they said, their voice a"
ratio0.266
2.21% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount141
totalSentences154
matches
0"Aurora's hand tightened around the"
1"The silver chain digging into"
2"Nyx murmured, their voice a"
3"Isolde led the way, her"
4"The half-Fae seer moved with"
5"The ancient oak standing stones"
6"Isolde began, her voice barely"
7"Aurora felt a chill run"
8"The air was thick with"
9"The ground beneath her feet"
10"She felt a strange pull,"
11"Nyx’s form shifted, becoming more"
12"they said, their eyes never"
13"Isolde stopped at a clearing"
14"The water was crystal clear,"
15"Aurora approached the pond, her"
16"She reached out, her fingers"
17"The water felt cold, sending"
18"Aurora asked, her voice tinged"
19"Isolde replied, her voice enigmatic"
ratio0.916
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences154
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences96
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The ancient oak standing stones at the grove’s entrance loomed over them, casting long shadows that seemed to stretch and twist of their own accord."
1"The air was thick with the scent of wildflowers that bloomed year-round, their petals brushing against her skin as she moved."
2"The ground beneath her feet was spongy, as if the earth itself were breathing."
3"The trees towered above them, their trunks twisted and gnarled, their branches reaching out like grasping hands."
4"Nyx stood there, their form solidifying, their eyes locking onto hers."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags32
uselessAdditionCount25
matches
0"Nyx murmured, their voice a whisper carried on the wind"
1"Isolde began, her voice barely above a whisper,"
2"Isolde replied, her voice enigmatic"
3"they said, their eyes locking onto Aurora's"
4"she asked, her voice steady despite the growing tension"
5"they said, their voice a breath of wind"
6"she asked, her voice steady"
7"Isolde said, her voice a soothing melody"
8"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
9"Isolde explained, her eyes narrowing"
10"Nyx said, their voice urgent"
11"they said, their voice a melodic whisper"
12"she demanded, her voice steady"
13"the Fae replied, their voice echoing in the hall"
14"she said, her voice clear"
15"Aurora called out, her voice echoing through the forest"
16"she said, her voice urgent"
17"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
18"Isolde replied, her voice steady"
19"Isolde replied, her voice reverent"
20"she asked, her voice steady"
21"Isolde said, her eyes narrowing"
22"she said, her voice clear and steady"
23"the Fae spoke, their voices a melodic whisper"
24"she said, her voice clear and steady"
33.33% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags30
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
1"Isolde explained (explain)"
2"she demanded (demand)"
3"Aurora called out (call out)"
4"the Fae spoke (speak)"
5"a voice whispered (whisper)"
6"the voice whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.556
leniency1
rawRatio0.233
effectiveRatio0.233
75.6466%