Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0V3H3EWW4P976RGWDWHSC

Run Details

Model:
GPT-5.2
Duration:
1m 13s
Cost:
$0.045642
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn dropped the service hatch behind her and let the metal settle without a clang. The air under Camden carried its own weather—wet stone, old brake dust, a tang like burnt pennies that clung to the back of her throat. Her torch beam cut a straight line along tiled walls where Victorian adverts peeled in curls. A low murmur rolled up the tunnel ahead. Not commuters. Bargaining. Laughter that hit the tiles and came back wrong. Her worn leather watch pressed cold against her pulse as she checked the time by habit. The second hand moved. That, at least, behaved. She walked with clipped steps, boots finding the dry patches between puddles. The tunnel widened. The abandoned station opened out like a ribcage. Platform edges crumbled. The old roundel sign hung crooked, and beneath it the Veil Market spread across the tracks—stalls built from pallet wood and bent scaffolding, lanterns floating with no chains, shelves stacked with jars that twitched when people passed. Two figures stood near a cordoned-off section where someone had strung crime scene tape between a pillar and a rusted bench. The tape looked like it had come from a police supply cupboard; the way it sagged suggested it had been set up in a hurry. Eva Kowalski hovered at the edge, curly red hair shoved back behind her left ear so often that the motion looked stitched into her. Her round glasses caught lantern-light, turning her eyes into pale coins. Her worn leather satchel hung from her shoulder, heavy enough to drag her jacket collar askew. Beside her, a uniformed transport copper—too clean for this place—held a notebook against his chest and stared at the shadows like they might bite. Quinn kept her torch down and approached without giving the crowd the satisfaction of seeing her blink. Eva spotted her and stepped forward, voice low. “You brought actual police tape.” Quinn’s sharp jaw tightened as she looked past her. “You brought your books.” Eva’s hand closed around the strap of her satchel. “Your officer’s about to throw up.” The uniformed man swallowed hard, eyes fixed on something behind the tape. Quinn ducked under the sagging strip. The air changed the instant she crossed it—cooler, as if the space held its own breath. A dead man lay on the ballast between the rails, positioned with a neatness that didn’t match the mess around him. He wore a long coat that had once been expensive. The coat spread like a dark spill, but the stones under his torso stayed pale. No blood. His throat showed a cut, clean and confident, wide enough that Quinn’s fingers itched to measure it. The skin around it looked… sealed. Not scabbed. Seamed, like melted wax. The copper made a sound and turned away, pressing his knuckles to his mouth. Eva came in behind Quinn and stopped short. She didn’t flinch, but she went still, as if her bones had listened to a different set of rules down here. “That’s not how that wound behaves,” Eva muttered. Quinn crouched, the joints in her knees clicking under the strain of old training. She aimed her torch along the throat. The cut edges gleamed faintly, not wet, not dry. “You saw plenty of throats in your books?” Quinn kept her voice flat. Eva’s freckles stood out as her face drained. “I saw diagrams. This… looks like someone closed it after. Like they didn’t want the mess.” Quinn swept the beam over the man’s hands. No defensive cuts. Fingers relaxed, nails clean. A signet ring on the right hand: a black stone that swallowed light. Quinn didn’t touch it. Not yet. She glanced at the coat lapel. Fine grit clung there, pale as flour. Not Tube dust. Not plaster. It looked like ground bone. Quinn leaned closer and let the torch catch the stones around the body. The ballast held a shallow groove, a drag mark that ran for a metre and stopped at a point where the stones shifted as if they’d been disturbed and then pressed back into place by someone who wanted order. She looked up. “Where’s the blood?” The copper, still facing away, rasped, “Could’ve drained out somewhere else. Body moved.” Quinn traced the drag groove with the torch. “Then the stones would scatter. They didn’t.” Eva crouched opposite her, careful not to let her knee touch anything. “You’re assuming it follows physics.” Quinn’s gaze flicked to Eva’s glasses. “I’m assuming someone tried to make it look like it did.” Eva’s mouth tightened. She reached into her satchel and pulled out a small packet of nitrile gloves, already creased from being opened and closed too many times. “Gloves. If you’re going to touch anything down here, use them.” Quinn took the gloves and slipped them on, the snap loud in the quiet pocket the tape created. Beyond it, the market kept moving. A vendor’s voice sang out prices that sounded like insults. Somewhere, something in a cage hissed. Quinn leaned in and sniffed. The dead man smelled of iron and cold mint. The mint didn’t belong. She checked his eyelids. Pupils fixed. No visible petechiae in the whites. She pressed two fingers to his jaw where the pulse point used to matter more than paperwork. Nothing. Skin temperature felt wrong—cool, but not morgue-cool. Like stone that hadn’t seen sun in weeks. Her watch ticked on. “What time did they find him?” Quinn asked. The copper shifted his weight, still refusing the sight. “Market security. About twenty minutes ago. We came in through the staff access in the tunnel. They… they called it in, like it’s normal.” Quinn looked at the tape again, at the way it tied off around the pillar. Someone had used a reef knot. Clean. Familiar. “Who put this up?” The copper finally glanced over, eyes flicking to the corpse and away. “I did.” Quinn held his gaze until he stopped blinking. “Name.” “PC Renshaw.” He stood straighter as he gave it, posture snapping into place out of habit. Quinn nodded once and returned to the body. She reached into the dead man’s coat pocket with two fingers and pulled the lining out. Empty. His other pocket bulged. Quinn pinched the fabric and eased something out without scraping it against the stones. A small brass compass rested in her palm, its casing filmed with verdigris. Protective sigils etched the face in tight loops that made her eyes want to slide away. The needle quivered as if it had its own heartbeat. Eva’s breath caught. “That’s a Veil Compass.” Quinn turned it so the light hit the markings. Someone had scratched at the sigils with a sharp point, worrying the metal in two places near the hinge. “Your market sells tracking tools.” Eva’s voice sharpened. “Not to you lot.” Quinn tilted the compass toward Eva. “It belonged to the victim. You know him?” Eva’s gaze moved over the dead man’s face, then the ring, then the coat. Recognition hit her like a taste. “I saw him once in the archives. He wasn’t supposed to be there. He spoke to the curator like he owned the place.” Quinn watched the needle. It didn’t settle to north. It twitched toward the dark mouth of a tunnel, then swung away, then back again, like it argued with itself. PC Renshaw edged closer despite himself. “That thing broken?” Eva shook her head without looking away. “It didn’t break. It panicked.” Quinn rotated her wrist slowly, testing if the needle followed a magnetic field. It didn’t. It kept tugging toward the same tunnel, then jerking aside at the last instant. She looked at the dead man’s boots. Polished leather, too clean for ballast. No stone dust on the soles. No grit. That didn’t happen in a place where the floor ate shoes. She nudged the coat hem with a gloved fingertip. Something flashed beneath. A bone token lay near the man’s hip, half-buried in stones, carved with a pattern like knotted rope. It didn’t belong there by accident. Quinn hooked it out carefully and held it up. Eva’s eyes narrowed behind her glasses. “That’s entry. Someone dropped it, or someone planted it.” Quinn rolled the token between finger and thumb. Warm. Warmer than it should have been. “You need one to get in,” Quinn said. Eva pushed hair behind her left ear again, quick, tense. “Or you need one to make it look like you got in properly. That’s a difference.” Quinn shifted her torch beam to the pillar beside the body. A smear marked the tile at shoulder height: greenish, like oxidised metal. Verdigris. Same as the compass casing. She held the compass up to the smear, aligning height and angle. Her gloved thumb traced a scuffed spot on the compass edge where the patina wore thin. The copper watched, confused. “You think he hit the wall?” Quinn didn’t look away. “Someone swung it. Hard.” Eva leaned forward, peering. “Why swing a compass?” Quinn shifted her light to the throat wound again. “To disrupt something. Or to trigger it.” Eva’s face held steady, but her voice carried a strain. “A compass like that pointed to rifts. It didn’t open them.” Quinn brought the compass close to the wound without touching the body. The needle jerked toward the cut, then snapped away toward the tunnel mouth and trembled. Eva drew in a sharp breath through her teeth. “It reacted to him.” Quinn’s throat tightened. The lanterns beyond the tape flickered in a slow ripple, like a wave passing under a sheet. PC Renshaw backed up a step, boots scraping stone. “I don’t like this.” Quinn stood, joints protesting. She looked over the dead man again, taking inventory: clean boots, sealed cut, no blood, compass with scratched sigils, bone dust on lapel, bone token warm in her hand. She pointed her torch at the stones at the end of the drag groove. Someone had pressed them back into place, but Quinn caught the difference now—a thin line where ballast met something smoother underneath, a seam. Eva followed her beam and scooted closer on her haunches. “That’s not track bed.” Quinn crouched and brushed stones aside with two fingers. They slid away too easily, like someone had laid them as a cover. Beneath, a metal plate lay flush with the ground, its edges etched with the same looping patterns as the compass face. The markings looked older than the station. Eva’s voice went tight. “That’s warding.” Quinn ran her gloved fingertip along the plate edge. The lines held a faint residue, pale and gritty. “Bone.” Eva’s eyes flicked to the token in Quinn’s hand. “They used it to seal something. Or to keep something shut.” PC Renshaw hovered just outside the tape, cheeks grey. “This is above my pay grade. Can we call it in?” Quinn stood again and looked down the tunnel where the compass needle kept tugging. The darkness there didn’t look empty. It looked filled, like water in a pipe. Quinn slipped the compass into an evidence bag from her coat pocket, sealing it with a practiced press. She kept the bone token in her palm and closed her fist around it. Eva rose, satchel bumping her hip. “You can’t take that plate out. You’ll break it.” Quinn turned her head a fraction, letting Eva see the set of her jaw. “I didn’t come for the plate.” Eva’s hand tightened on her satchel strap. “Then what did you come for?” Quinn lifted her torch and aimed it down the tunnel. The beam hit moisture on the walls, turning it into slick black scales. The compass needle thudded against the inside of the evidence bag, desperate for direction. Quinn stepped toward the tunnel entrance, the bone token warming further in her fist. “Whatever that compass kept pointing at.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.114
leniency0.227
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.94% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1976
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
62.04% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1976
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"traced"
count2
2
word"flicked"
count2
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"etched"
count2
6
word"quivered"
count1
7
word"magnetic"
count1
8
word"disrupt"
count1
9
word"trembled"
count1
10
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"traced"
2"flicked"
3"weight"
4"familiar"
5"etched"
6"quivered"
7"magnetic"
8"disrupt"
9"trembled"
10"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences172
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences172
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"see"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences210
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1965
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions77
wordCount1658
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.53
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn42
Camden1
Victorian1
Veil1
Market1
Kowalski1
Eva25
Tube1
Renshaw3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Camden"
3"Market"
4"Kowalski"
5"Eva"
6"Renshaw"
places(empty)
globalScore0.233
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences122
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like it had come from a police sup"
1"sounded like insults"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1965
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences210
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs122
mean16.11
std14.02
cv0.871
sampleLengths
058
120
224
363
446
551
624
717
88
95
109
114
129
136
1412
1543
1656
1714
1829
198
2030
2113
228
2316
2434
2523
2652
273
283
2913
308
317
3212
335
346
3511
3627
3711
3840
3918
4045
414
428
439
4424
4523
464
4712
482
498
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences172
matches
0"been disturbed"
1"being opened"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs303
matches(empty)
47.62% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences210
ratio0.033
matches
0"The air under Camden carried its own weather—wet stone, old brake dust, a tang like burnt pennies that clung to the back of her throat."
1"The old roundel sign hung crooked, and beneath it the Veil Market spread across the tracks—stalls built from pallet wood and bent scaffolding, lanterns floating with no chains, shelves stacked with jars that twitched when people passed."
2"The tape looked like it had come from a police supply cupboard; the way it sagged suggested it had been set up in a hurry."
3"Beside her, a uniformed transport copper—too clean for this place—held a notebook against his chest and stared at the shadows like they might bite."
4"The air changed the instant she crossed it—cooler, as if the space held its own breath."
5"Skin temperature felt wrong—cool, but not morgue-cool."
6"Someone had pressed them back into place, but Quinn caught the difference now—a thin line where ballast met something smoother underneath, a seam."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1669
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount60
adverbRatio0.035949670461354104
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.004194128220491312
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences210
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences210
mean9.36
std6.5
cv0.695
sampleLengths
017
125
216
38
42
51
69
716
84
94
1012
113
128
133
1437
1521
1625
1724
1811
1916
2024
2117
228
235
249
254
269
276
2812
296
3016
3121
3210
3315
342
3517
365
371
382
394
4014
418
4221
438
4414
457
469
4713
488
4916
45.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.28095238095238095
totalSentences210
uniqueOpeners59
21.79% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences153
matches
0"Somewhere, something in a cage"
ratio0.007
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences153
matches
0"Her torch beam cut a"
1"Her worn leather watch pressed"
2"She walked with clipped steps,"
3"Her round glasses caught lantern-light,"
4"Her worn leather satchel hung"
5"He wore a long coat"
6"His throat showed a cut,"
7"She didn’t flinch, but she"
8"She aimed her torch along"
9"She glanced at the coat"
10"It looked like ground bone."
11"She looked up."
12"She reached into her satchel"
13"She checked his eyelids."
14"She pressed two fingers to"
15"Her watch ticked on."
16"He stood straighter as he"
17"She reached into the dead"
18"His other pocket bulged."
19"It didn’t settle to north."
ratio0.209
12.29% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount137
totalSentences153
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn dropped the"
1"The air under Camden carried"
2"Her torch beam cut a"
3"A low murmur rolled up"
4"Laughter that hit the tiles"
5"Her worn leather watch pressed"
6"The second hand moved."
7"That, at least, behaved."
8"She walked with clipped steps,"
9"The tunnel widened."
10"The abandoned station opened out"
11"Platform edges crumbled."
12"The old roundel sign hung"
13"The tape looked like it"
14"Eva Kowalski hovered at the"
15"Her round glasses caught lantern-light,"
16"Her worn leather satchel hung"
17"Quinn kept her torch down"
18"Eva spotted her and stepped"
19"Quinn’s sharp jaw tightened as"
ratio0.895
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences153
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences67
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The air under Camden carried its own weather—wet stone, old brake dust, a tang like burnt pennies that clung to the back of her throat."
1"The old roundel sign hung crooked, and beneath it the Veil Market spread across the tracks—stalls built from pallet wood and bent scaffolding, lanterns floating…"
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He stood, posture snapping into place out of habit"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Eva muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.068
leniency0.136
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.045
80.8686%