Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0V61S8MZ4ANK36Q28DSWP

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Duration:
52.5s
Cost:
$0.058728
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Wood splintered. The sound cracked through the cramped Brick Lane flat like a gunshot, vibrating the floorboards beneath my bare feet. Ptolemy hissed from atop a precarious stack of nineteenth-century occult theories, his tail puffing into a bottle brush. I gripped the cast-iron skillet—Eva’s idea of a sophisticated home defense system—and crept toward the door. The wood groaned again. Someone wasn’t just knocking; they were trying to put a fist through the oak. "Go away," I shouted, aiming the pan at head height. "The shop is closed. The curry house is downstairs." "Open the door, Aurora." My grip on the handle slipped, palm suddenly slick with sweat. That voice. Smooth, like velvet dragged over gravel, carrying an accent that tasted of expensive wine and old sins. I shouldn't open it. I should slide the third deadbolt home and call the police. Or a priest. I opened it. Lucien Moreau leaned against the doorframe, his weight heavily supported by that damned ivory-handled cane. He looked like a fallen angel who’d crashed through a few muddy dimensions on the way down. His tailored charcoal suit, usually sharp enough to cut glass, hung in ruined, damp shreds around his torso. "You look terrible," I said, blocking the entrance with my body. "And you are holding cookware." One amber eye and one void-black eye shifted from the skillet to my face. "Are you planning to sauté me, *chérie*? Or can I come in before I bleed out on your welcome mat?" I looked down. Dark, viscous liquid dripped from his left sleeve, pooling on the linoleum. "You have five minutes." I stepped aside. "Then I’m calling the cops." "The police are dreadfully boring. I’d advise against it." He limped past me, bringing a sudden chill into the room. The scent of him hit me instantly—ozone, sandalwood, and the distinct, coppery tang of fresh violence. It drowned out the smell of turmeric from the restaurant below. Lucien collapsed onto Eva’s velvet sofa, sweeping a pile of star charts onto the floor with a careless wave of his hand. Ptolemy let out a low growl from the bookshelf but didn't attack. The cat knew a predator when he saw one. I slammed the door and threw all three deadbolts. "What happened?" "Disagreement with a client." He winced, his knuckles turning white as he gripped the cane's head. "They wanted a refund on information I hadn't sold them yet." "You're lying." "I'm omitting." He leaned his head back, his platinum hair plastered to his skull by rain and sweat. "We had a deal, Aurora. No questions about the business." "We *had* a deal." I tossed the skillet onto the kitchen counter. It clattered loudly, a harsh punctuation mark. "That deal ended when you vanished three months ago without so much as a text message. You don't get to show up, bleed on my roommate's upholstery, and play mysterious." "I didn't vanish." His eyes remained closed. "I was detained." "In prison?" "In Avaros." The word sucked the oxygen out of the room. Avaros. The demon realm. His father’s home. He rarely spoke of it, and never with that tremor in his voice. I crossed the room and stood over him. The intellectual part of me, the part that studied Pre-Law and analyzed risks, screamed to run. The other part, the foolish part that had spent six months falling into his chaotic orbit, reached out. "Let me see." "It's not polite to undress a guest so soon." "Lucien." He sighed, opening his eyes. The amber one flared with faint, internal light. He fumbled with the buttons of his waistcoat, his fingers stiff and bloody. I batted his hands away and did it myself. My fingers brushed the cold skin of his chest, sending a jolt of static through my fingertips. I ignored his sharp inhale. The shirt parted. I didn't gasp. I'd seen worse delivering takeout in East London, but not by much. Three deep, parallel claw marks tore across his ribs, oozing black ichor that hissed faintly where it touched the fabric. "Demon claws," I noted, grabbing the first aid kit Eva kept under the coffee table. "Doesn't look like Avaros work, though. The edges are dragging. Earth-bound scavenger?" "Observant." He watched me work, his gaze heavy. "A Ghoul. Nasty little thing. Followed me from Highgate." "You led a Ghoul to Brick Lane?" I uncorked a bottle of rubbing alcohol. "Eva is going to kill you if the monster doesn't." "It's dead. I introduced it to the business end of my cane." I poured the alcohol. He didn't scream, didn't even flinch, but the wooden armrest of the sofa cracked under his grip. Smoke curled up from the wound as the liquid seared the corruption away. "You left," I said quietly, dabbing the area with gauze. "I waited at the bridge, Luc. For three hours." "I know." "It rained." "I know." His voice dropped an octave, losing its arrogant polish. "I watched you leave." I froze, the bloody gauze hovering over his ribs. "You were there?" "I was across the river. If I had approached you that night... the things hunting me would have seen you." He reached out, his hand cold, and circled his thumb over the crescent-shaped scar on my left wrist. The touch burned deeper than the alcohol. "I made a calculation. My presence was a liability to your survival." "You don't get to decide what I can handle." I pulled my hand back, wrapping the bandage tight around his torso—maybe a little tighter than necessary. "I handled Evan. I handle the midnight shifts at the Golden Empress. I don't need a demonic babysitter." "No." He looked at the bandage, then up at me. The vulnerability in his expression vanished, replaced by the sharp, terrifying focus of the Fixer. "You need an accomplice." "I'm retired from your little schemes." "Are you?" He reached into his jacket pocket and pulled out a crumpled, blood-stained piece of parchment. He tossed it onto the coffee table. I recognized the symbol instantly. A golden dragon coiled around a fractured sun. "Yu-Fei Cheung," I whispered. My boss. "He's not just running a restaurant, Rory. He's moving artifacts. Specifically, artifacts that open doors to places you don't nothing about." Lucien buttoned his shirt with agonizing slowness, covering the bandages. "He knows you took the delivery to the British Museum last week. The package that never arrived." "I delivered it." "You delivered a glamour. A decoy." Lucien grasped his cane and hauled himself upright. He swayed but stayed standing. "The real artifact is in your bag. I can smell it." I stepped back, hitting the edge of the bookshelf. A heavy tome on Mesopotamian death rituals dug into my spine. "I don't know what you're talking about." "Liar." He closed the distance between us. He didn't limp this time. He moved with the predatory grace that usually signaled someone was about to die. He caged me in, one hand on the shelf by my head, the other leaning on his cane. "You sensed something was wrong with the package. You peeked. You saw the Onyx key, didn't you?" "It hummed," I admitted, my voice betraying me. "It felt like... like you." "So you kept it." "I was going to give it to Eva to study." "Eva would have opened a hellmouth in the kitchen before tea time." He leaned closer. His breath ghosted over my lips, tasting of cloves. "Cheung knows you have it. The Ghoul wasn't hunting *me*, Aurora. It was tracking the residue of the key." I stared at him, the pieces clicking into place. The strange cars parked outside the restaurant. The way the shadows seemed to stretch too far in the alleyways lately. "You came back to steal it," I accused. "I came back to stop you from becoming a headline in the obituary section." His gaze dropped to my mouth, lingering there for a beat too long, before snapping back to my eyes. "And yes, to take the key. It belongs in a vault where no one can use it to summon a Prince of Avaros." "And if I say no?" "Then we have a very interesting evening ahead of us." *Thump.* A heavy sound echoed from the stairwell. Not a knock this time. The groan of the downstairs door being forced open. Metal shrieking against metal. Ptolemy bolted under the sofa. Lucien twisted around, his back against the books, facing the hallway. He gripped the ivory handle of his cane and twisted. With a soft metallic *shing*, the wood fell away, revealing a gleaming, silver-etched blade. "Please tell me you didn't actually lock the downstairs door," he said. "It's a curry house, Luc. The lock is for drunk tourists, not..." "Not a Strike Team from the Triad of the Golden Sun." He checked the edge of his blade. "Marvelous." "Triad?" I grabbed the skillet again. It felt woefully inadequate against a sword, let alone whatever was thundering up the stairs. "Yu-Fei doesn't tolerate theft." Lucien glanced at me. There was no fear in his eyes, only a wild, electric excitement. "Do you trust me?" "No." "Good girl. Smart." He moved to the center of the room. "Stay behind me. If they get past the blade, hit them with the heavy pan. Aim for the temples." The footsteps stopped outside the apartment door. No knock this time. The handle rattled, testing the deadbolts. "Three bolts?" Lucien asked. "And a magical ward Eva bought off eBay." "The ward is useless. The bolts buy us four seconds." The wood around the lock began to smoke. Orange sparks showered onto the floor mat as something burned through the mechanism from the other side. "Three seconds," spoken with a grin. Lucien looked at me, the amber flames in his eye igniting fully. "Missed you, Rory." The door exploded inward.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags32
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"I stepped aside [aside]"
1"I said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences81
tagDensity0.395
leniency0.79
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.049
93.95% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1652
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.65% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1652
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"velvet"
count2
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"predator"
count1
4
word"analyzed"
count1
5
word"chaotic"
count1
6
word"fractured"
count1
7
word"echoed"
count1
8
word"gleaming"
count1
9
word"etched"
count1
10
word"electric"
count1
11
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"velvet"
1"weight"
2"chill"
3"predator"
4"analyzed"
5"chaotic"
6"fractured"
7"echoed"
8"gleaming"
9"etched"
10"electric"
11"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences114
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences114
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences162
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords5
totalWords1638
ratio0.003
matches
0"chérie"
1"had"
2"me"
3"Thump."
4"shing"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount1054
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.76
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Brick1
Lane1
Eva3
Moreau1
One1
Pre-Law1
East1
London1
Fixer1
Lucien8
Mesopotamian1
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"One"
3"Lucien"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"East"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like a fallen angel who’d crashed"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1638
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences162
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs79
mean20.73
std16.18
cv0.78
sampleLengths
039
134
219
34
430
518
63
750
811
939
1015
1112
1247
1343
1411
1527
162
1728
1849
1910
202
212
2229
2342
243
259
261
2757
2838
2927
3017
3124
3212
3334
3419
352
362
3715
3812
3957
4044
4129
426
4324
4413
456
4648
473
4830
4927
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences114
matches
0"being forced"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs181
matches
0"were trying"
1"was thundering"
72.31% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences162
ratio0.025
matches
0"I gripped the cast-iron skillet—Eva’s idea of a sophisticated home defense system—and crept toward the door."
1"Someone wasn’t just knocking; they were trying to put a fist through the oak."
2"The scent of him hit me instantly—ozone, sandalwood, and the distinct, coppery tang of fresh violence."
3"\"You don't get to decide what I can handle.\" I pulled my hand back, wrapping the bandage tight around his torso—maybe a little tighter than necessary."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1066
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"damned ivory-handled cane."
1"gleaming, silver-etched blade."
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.03095684803001876
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.013133208255159476
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences162
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences162
mean10.11
std6.63
cv0.655
sampleLengths
02
119
218
316
44
514
610
79
84
911
102
1117
124
1311
143
153
1615
1717
1818
1911
2019
2120
223
2312
247
255
2620
2716
2811
2922
3012
319
329
332
3416
3511
362
3718
3810
3912
407
4130
427
433
442
452
469
471
483
493
43.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.32098765432098764
totalSentences162
uniqueOpeners52
31.75% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences105
matches
0"Dark, viscous liquid dripped from"
ratio0.01
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount59
totalSentences105
matches
0"I gripped the cast-iron skillet—Eva’s"
1"I shouted, aiming the pan"
2"My grip on the handle"
3"I shouldn't open it."
4"I should slide the third"
5"I opened it."
6"He looked like a fallen"
7"His tailored charcoal suit, usually"
8"I said, blocking the entrance"
9"I looked down."
10"I stepped aside"
11"He limped past me, bringing"
12"It drowned out the smell"
13"I slammed the door and"
14"He winced, his knuckles turning"
15"He leaned his head back,"
16"I tossed the skillet onto"
17"It clattered loudly, a harsh"
18"His eyes remained closed"
19"His father’s home."
ratio0.562
12.38% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount94
totalSentences105
matches
0"The sound cracked through the"
1"Ptolemy hissed from atop a"
2"I gripped the cast-iron skillet—Eva’s"
3"The wood groaned again."
4"Someone wasn’t just knocking; they"
5"I shouted, aiming the pan"
6"My grip on the handle"
7"I shouldn't open it."
8"I should slide the third"
9"I opened it."
10"Lucien Moreau leaned against the"
11"He looked like a fallen"
12"His tailored charcoal suit, usually"
13"I said, blocking the entrance"
14"I looked down."
15"I stepped aside"
16"He limped past me, bringing"
17"The scent of him hit"
18"It drowned out the smell"
19"Lucien collapsed onto Eva’s velvet"
ratio0.895
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
ratio0
63.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Smooth, like velvet dragged over gravel, carrying an accent that tasted of expensive wine and old sins."
1"The intellectual part of me, the part that studied Pre-Law and analyzed risks, screamed to run."
2"The other part, the foolish part that had spent six months falling into his chaotic orbit, reached out."
3"Three deep, parallel claw marks tore across his ribs, oozing black ichor that hissed faintly where it touched the fabric."
78.13% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags32
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"He winced, his knuckles turning white as he gripped the cane's head"
1"He watched, his gaze heavy"
2"I admitted, my voice betraying me"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"I shouted (shout)"
1"I noted (note)"
2"I whispered (whisper)"
3"I admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences81
tagDensity0.099
leniency0.198
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.099
81.4553%