| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she replied instantly [instantly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.071 | | effectiveRatio | 0.071 | |
| 84.24% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 952 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "deliberately" |
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| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 952 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "surreal" | | 1 | "resonance" | | 2 | "clandestine" | | 3 | "charm" | | 4 | "etched" | | 5 | "furrowing" | | 6 | "vibrated" | | 7 | "intensity" | | 8 | "intricate" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "scanned" | | 11 | "newfound" | | 12 | "delved" | | 13 | "magnetic" | | 14 | "racing" | | 15 | "kaleidoscope" | | 16 | "weight" | | 17 | "potential" | | 18 | "dance" | | 19 | "intrigue" | | 20 | "rhythmic" | | 21 | "echo" | | 22 | "reminder" | | 23 | "unraveling" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 50 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 50 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 938 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 33 | | wordCount | 653 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.99 | | worstName | "Harlow" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Harlow" | | discoveredNames | | Tube | 1 | | Camden | 1 | | Harlow | 13 | | Quinn | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Market | 1 | | Detective | 2 | | Gary | 1 | | Thompson | 11 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Camden" | | 1 | "Harlow" | | 2 | "Quinn" | | 3 | "Detective" | | 4 | "Gary" | | 5 | "Thompson" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.505 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 41.30% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed innocuous but vibrated with an invisible intensity" | | 1 | "as if stirring memories nestled in time's folds" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 938 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 90.18% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 31 | | mean | 30.26 | | std | 14.09 | | cv | 0.466 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 60 | | 1 | 73 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 38 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 30 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 33 | | 10 | 33 | | 11 | 43 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 30 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 37 | | 16 | 31 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 35 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 47 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 27 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 37 | | 29 | 29 | | 30 | 58 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 118 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 64 | | ratio | 0.078 | | matches | | 0 | "Her gaze locked onto the faded chalk outlines encircling several curious objects—a brass compass with a verdigris patina lay at the center, its face still glowing with etched sigils." | | 1 | "Thompson nodded, heart thrumming with the pace; this investigation, unconventional yet brimming with potential, refused to adhere to the ordinary." | | 2 | "This case plunged into worlds unseen—a dance of shadows and intrigue, untouched by the light of day." | | 3 | "Harlow began her retreat from the platform, Thompson following suit, his mind a whirlwind of thoughts, punctuated by the rhythmic train echo—a reminder of journeys awaiting the adventurous soul." | | 4 | "Their steps carried them to the cold streets above, ready to trace paths—a fusion of pursuit and protection against forces eager to escape unseen." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 658 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 15 | | adverbRatio | 0.022796352583586626 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0060790273556231 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 64 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 64 | | mean | 14.66 | | std | 6.63 | | cv | 0.452 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 25 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 27 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 25 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 79.17% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.484375 | | totalSentences | 64 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 49 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 89.39% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 49 | | matches | | 0 | "Her gaze locked onto the" | | 1 | "He was a stolid figure" | | 2 | "She gestured toward the compass." | | 3 | "Her fingers brushed over the" | | 4 | "She motioned toward the cracked" | | 5 | "He rubbed his shoes against" | | 6 | "His voice trailed into uncertainty" | | 7 | "She considered this, her mind" | | 8 | "she replied instantly, her voice" | | 9 | "Her gaze shifted, probing the" | | 10 | "he concluded, voice laced with" | | 11 | "Her hand hovered above the" | | 12 | "she added, thoughts racing like" | | 13 | "She gave a tight smile," | | 14 | "she decided, holding the weight" | | 15 | "Their steps carried them to" |
| | ratio | 0.327 | |
| 0.82% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 45 | | totalSentences | 49 | | matches | | 0 | "The abandoned Tube station beneath" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into" | | 2 | "The air hung heavy, infused" | | 3 | "Harlow halted just past the" | | 4 | "A single flickering bulb cast" | | 5 | "The station, stripped of its" | | 6 | "Her gaze locked onto the" | | 7 | "Detective Gary Thompson, her colleague," | | 8 | "He was a stolid figure" | | 9 | "Harlow's voice was steady, even" | | 10 | "Thompson proposed, rubbing his chin" | | 11 | "Harlow gave a short nod," | | 12 | "Harlow countered, unconvinced" | | 13 | "She gestured toward the compass." | | 14 | "Thompson shrugged, casting a glance" | | 15 | "Harlow stepped toward the compass," | | 16 | "The brass casing seemed innocuous" | | 17 | "Her fingers brushed over the" | | 18 | "She motioned toward the cracked" | | 19 | "Thompson’s eyebrows hiked up at" |
| | ratio | 0.918 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 49 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Today, his expression suggested he’d already drawn conclusions that would battle against her own." |
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| 17.86% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "she replied instantly, her voice crisp with intent" | | 1 | "he concluded, voice laced with newfound urgency" | | 2 | "she added, thoughts racing like a swift current," |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Thompson proposed (propose)" | | 1 | "Harlow murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Thompson pressed (press)" | | 3 | "he concluded (conclude)" | | 4 | "she added (add)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.214 | | leniency | 0.429 | | rawRatio | 0.833 | | effectiveRatio | 0.357 | |