Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0V7FQXWARKTFJG0263BNR

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The abandoned Tube station beneath Camden buzzed with the surreal resonance of mystery. Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into the location with a steady stride, her eyes sweeping the strange remnants of what had once been the bustling Veil Market. The air hung heavy, infused with the metallic tang of old tracks, mingling with the faint, ghostly aroma of forgotten enchantments. Harlow halted just past the stairwell, taking stock of the scene. A single flickering bulb cast erratic shadows over the bare concrete. The station, stripped of its usual clandestine charm, lay desolate save for the remnants of scattered stalls, their goods emptied in haste. Her gaze locked onto the faded chalk outlines encircling several curious objects—a brass compass with a verdigris patina lay at the center, its face still glowing with etched sigils. "Detective Quinn," greeted a firm voice, cutting through the quiet like a sharp blade. Detective Gary Thompson, her colleague, approached. He was a stolid figure with eyes that often saw things others wouldn't or didn't want to see. Today, his expression suggested he’d already drawn conclusions that would battle against her own. "What's the gist, Thompson?" Harlow's voice was steady, even as her eyes danced over the odd scene before them. "The Market's clean-up went wrong. Can't reckon it'll be anything but business gone sour," Thompson proposed, rubbing his chin thoughtfully. Harlow gave a short nod, though doubt lingered. "Took us eighteen months to pin this place down. Why would they bail this close to a full moon? There's something off." "The evidence—blood spatters over there and remnants of a struggle—points to a falling-out among buyers." "Or sellers," Harlow countered, unconvinced. She gestured toward the compass. "That compass. It's the anomaly. Only a handful have ever been bartered openly." Thompson shrugged, casting a glance over the scene. "Haven't seen one like that before. We assume it's why the Market shifted before the date. Drive competition haywire, and suddenly a location ain't safe." Harlow stepped toward the compass, her brow furrowing in contemplation. The brass casing seemed innocuous but vibrated with an invisible intensity. Her fingers brushed over the exposed sigils, tingling beneath their intricate design. "This is no ordinary trade item," Harlow murmured. "It's been crafted—a Shade artisan's work, I'd wager." She motioned toward the cracked stone threshold across the platform, the shadowed air whispering a promise of secrets beyond. "What's the likelihood this place was just cover?" Thompson’s eyebrows hiked up at the suggestion. He rubbed his shoes against the grime-streaked tiles, contemplating her pitch. "Cover for…" His voice trailed into uncertainty. "A supernatural portal," Harlow finished, brushing her watch as if stirring memories nestled in time's folds. "This compass points toward rifts, and the Veil Market was smack-dab on shifting territory." Thompson nodded slowly, reluctant but drawn into her line of thought nonetheless. "You reckon the compass triggered something?" She considered this, her mind wrapping around the possibilities like a steel trap. "Think broader, Thompson. It didn't just trigger—it's evidence. Someone used it deliberately, redirecting disturbances here. The market could mask it but not undo it." Silence stretched between them, interrupted by the distant rumble of forgotten trains. Harlow scanned the outlines again, her mind piecing fragments together, finding the puzzle's edges but not yet its heart. "And the blood?" Thompson inserted, resisting the uncertainty creeping up his spine. "A diversion," she replied instantly, her voice crisp with intent. "Whoever orchestrated this intended to conceal their activity under the guise of normal chaos. They made a gamble—the Market upheaval would cover the true aim." "Which is?" Thompson pressed, drawn deeper into the mystery’s lure. Harlow placed a hand on the compass, still and waiting. "To open a permanent rift. An escape route or an entrance. Depends on which side one banks their bets." Her gaze shifted, probing the dimness where shadows lingered like watchful ghosts. Thompson sucked in a breath, recognizing the dawning clarity she possessed. "But it didn't work, did it? Because we interrupted,” he concluded, voice laced with newfound urgency. "The Market's departure skewed plans." Harlow nodded, her eyes narrowing as she delved deeper into the implications. Her hand hovered above the compass once more, its pull magnetic, suggesting more than mere craftsmanship. "Unless," she added, thoughts racing like a swift current, "this was the precursor, the groundwork for something further afield." Thompson’s skepticism dissolved with each beating moment. "But how do we find it? If the rift’s opened elsewhere under cover?" She gave a tight smile, determination sharpened like the edge of a blade. "By finding whoever created the Compass—hell itself, if necessary. That’s the lead." Together, they stood, the essence of pursuit glimmering within their shared conviction. Harlow moved away from the compass, the flickering bulb casting kaleidoscope shadows across her face. "We'll contact Eva Kowalski at the British Museum," she decided, holding the weight of resolution. "Her work in the archives will guide us." Thompson nodded, heart thrumming with the pace; this investigation, unconventional yet brimming with potential, refused to adhere to the ordinary. This case plunged into worlds unseen—a dance of shadows and intrigue, untouched by the light of day. Harlow began her retreat from the platform, Thompson following suit, his mind a whirlwind of thoughts, punctuated by the rhythmic train echo—a reminder of journeys awaiting the adventurous soul. Their steps carried them to the cold streets above, ready to trace paths—a fusion of pursuit and protection against forces eager to escape unseen. In London's labyrinthine embrace, the two detectives ventured forth, guarded by their instinct and trust in each other's relentless drive, unraveling the mystery of portals, compasses, and infinite realms nestled within the everyday world.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she replied instantly [instantly]"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.071
84.24% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount952
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"slowly"
2"deliberately"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Thompson"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount952
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"surreal"
count1
1
word"resonance"
count1
2
word"clandestine"
count1
3
word"charm"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"furrowing"
count1
6
word"vibrated"
count1
7
word"intensity"
count1
8
word"intricate"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"scanned"
count1
11
word"newfound"
count1
12
word"delved"
count1
13
word"magnetic"
count1
14
word"racing"
count1
15
word"kaleidoscope"
count1
16
word"weight"
count1
17
word"potential"
count1
18
word"dance"
count1
19
word"intrigue"
count1
20
word"rhythmic"
count1
21
word"echo"
count1
22
word"reminder"
count1
23
word"unraveling"
count1
highlights
0"surreal"
1"resonance"
2"clandestine"
3"charm"
4"etched"
5"furrowing"
6"vibrated"
7"intensity"
8"intricate"
9"silence"
10"scanned"
11"newfound"
12"delved"
13"magnetic"
14"racing"
15"kaleidoscope"
16"weight"
17"potential"
18"dance"
19"intrigue"
20"rhythmic"
21"echo"
22"reminder"
23"unraveling"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences50
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences50
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences64
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords938
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount653
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.99
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Camden1
Harlow13
Quinn1
Veil1
Market1
Detective2
Gary1
Thompson11
London1
persons
0"Camden"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Detective"
4"Gary"
5"Thompson"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.505
windowScore0.5
41.30% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"seemed innocuous but vibrated with an invisible intensity"
1"as if stirring memories nestled in time's folds"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount938
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
90.18% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean30.26
std14.09
cv0.466
sampleLengths
060
173
214
338
419
520
630
715
823
933
1033
1143
1225
1330
1418
1537
1631
1712
1835
1910
2029
2123
2221
2347
2420
2525
2627
2723
2837
2929
3058
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs118
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences64
ratio0.078
matches
0"Her gaze locked onto the faded chalk outlines encircling several curious objects—a brass compass with a verdigris patina lay at the center, its face still glowing with etched sigils."
1"Thompson nodded, heart thrumming with the pace; this investigation, unconventional yet brimming with potential, refused to adhere to the ordinary."
2"This case plunged into worlds unseen—a dance of shadows and intrigue, untouched by the light of day."
3"Harlow began her retreat from the platform, Thompson following suit, his mind a whirlwind of thoughts, punctuated by the rhythmic train echo—a reminder of journeys awaiting the adventurous soul."
4"Their steps carried them to the cold streets above, ready to trace paths—a fusion of pursuit and protection against forces eager to escape unseen."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount658
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.022796352583586626
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0060790273556231
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences64
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences64
mean14.66
std6.63
cv0.452
sampleLengths
013
126
221
311
411
522
629
714
86
918
1014
1119
1220
138
1422
1515
165
175
1813
198
2025
2110
2211
2312
248
2527
268
277
2811
297
3016
3114
3212
336
3413
3524
3612
3719
3812
3910
4025
4110
4210
4319
4412
4511
4616
475
4812
4916
79.17% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.484375
totalSentences64
uniqueOpeners31
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences49
matches(empty)
ratio0
89.39% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences49
matches
0"Her gaze locked onto the"
1"He was a stolid figure"
2"She gestured toward the compass."
3"Her fingers brushed over the"
4"She motioned toward the cracked"
5"He rubbed his shoes against"
6"His voice trailed into uncertainty"
7"She considered this, her mind"
8"she replied instantly, her voice"
9"Her gaze shifted, probing the"
10"he concluded, voice laced with"
11"Her hand hovered above the"
12"she added, thoughts racing like"
13"She gave a tight smile,"
14"she decided, holding the weight"
15"Their steps carried them to"
ratio0.327
0.82% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount45
totalSentences49
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station beneath"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into"
2"The air hung heavy, infused"
3"Harlow halted just past the"
4"A single flickering bulb cast"
5"The station, stripped of its"
6"Her gaze locked onto the"
7"Detective Gary Thompson, her colleague,"
8"He was a stolid figure"
9"Harlow's voice was steady, even"
10"Thompson proposed, rubbing his chin"
11"Harlow gave a short nod,"
12"Harlow countered, unconvinced"
13"She gestured toward the compass."
14"Thompson shrugged, casting a glance"
15"Harlow stepped toward the compass,"
16"The brass casing seemed innocuous"
17"Her fingers brushed over the"
18"She motioned toward the cracked"
19"Thompson’s eyebrows hiked up at"
ratio0.918
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences49
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Today, his expression suggested he’d already drawn conclusions that would battle against her own."
17.86% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she replied instantly, her voice crisp with intent"
1"he concluded, voice laced with newfound urgency"
2"she added, thoughts racing like a swift current,"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Thompson proposed (propose)"
1"Harlow murmured (murmur)"
2"Thompson pressed (press)"
3"he concluded (conclude)"
4"she added (add)"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.214
leniency0.429
rawRatio0.833
effectiveRatio0.357
71.0987%