Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0VCZ9H1Z6M9QM1JS02JDV

Run Details

Duration:
11.4s
Cost:
$0.005227
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Heartstone pendant pulsed against Rory’s skin, a steady beat of warmth that mirrored her own thrumming pulse. She stepped through the shimmering distortion, Nyx a silent shadow at her side, leaving the chill air of the London night behind. Heat washed over her, thick and humid, carrying the cloying scent of overripe fruit and something else, something musky and strangely sweet. She blinked, eyes adjusting to a perpetual twilight. The sky above glowed a deep, warm amber, suffusing the entire landscape in an ethereal, golden haze. Not a sun, not a moon, but an omnipresent luminescence that draped everything in a fantastical glow. Towering trees, unlike any she had ever seen, ascended towards that amber sky. Their trunks, wide and gnarled, twisted into impossible shapes, some appearing to weep thick, glistening sap that caught the light like liquid jewels. Broad leaves, the color of deep violet and emerald, filtered the amber light, casting shifting patterns on the ground. The air hummed, a low, resonant thrum that vibrated in her chest. A gentle breeze rustled through the violet leaves, whispering an alien song. Strange winged creatures flitted between the branches, their bodies glowing faintly, leaving trails of phosphorescence in their wake. They moved with an almost dreamlike grace, their wings beating silently. A path, overgrown but discernible, stretched out before them, paved with smooth, dark stone that absorbed the amber light. It wound deeper into the surreal landscape, disappearing beneath ancient, arching boughs. “This is Dymas,” Rory murmured, her voice a hushed whisper. Nyx solidified beside her, their form a ripple of darkness against the amber-lit setting. “Indeed. A realm of indulgence.” The whisper of their voice seemed to carry on the humid air itself, devoid of a human soundbox. Rory drew a deep breath, the air surprisingly heavy, almost viscous. It tasted of fermented grapes and something she couldn’t quite identify – a rich, earthy sweetness. Along the path, massive, fleshy plants pulsed with a gentle bioluminescence, their broad petals unfurling to reveal interiors that shimmered with dew. Clusters of fruit, enormous and vibrant in hues of sapphire and ruby, hung heavy from low branches, their skins smooth and unblemished. Some had burst open, spilling glistening pulp onto the dark earth below, attracting swarms of tiny, iridescent insects that buzzed with a low, collective drone. She bent to touch one of the fallen fruits. Its skin felt cool and yielding beneath her fingers, almost like velvet. A burst of sweet, intoxicating aroma rose from it. “Do not touch,” Nyx warned, a subtle ripple passing through their shadowy form. “Some of Dymas’s offerings bring more than simple pleasure.” Rory pulled her hand back, a prickle of unease tracing her scar. They continued down the path, the sounds of Dymas growing. The hum deepened, and she realized it wasn’t just the air, but the very ground beneath her feet, vibrating with a constant, low tremor. She heard the distant tinkle of chimes, the splash of water, and a murmur of voices, too far to discern. The path widened, leading them into a clearing where a river, wide and sluggish, flowed past. The water reflected the amber sky, looking less like water and more like liquid gold. Along its banks grew enormous reeds, their tips glowing with an internal light. Strange, iridescent fish, their scales like polished gemstones, leaped from the water, arcing through the air before splashing back down. Rory noticed the footprints now: not hoofprints, nor human, but elongated, clawed impressions in the soft earth near the riverbank. They moved closer to the edge, the ground feeling springy underfoot, almost like moss. “Look,” she said, pointing to a patch of shimmering wildflowers near the river. They bloomed in impossible colors—electric blues, fiery oranges, and deep purples that shifted like oil on water. As she watched, one of the brilliant blue petals slowly unfurled, revealing a delicate, nectar-filled pistil from which a faint, silvery mist rose. Nyx drifted forward, observing the river. “The river flows with more than water. It carries the essence of Dymas’s heart.” Rory followed their gaze. The water, though golden, possessed a subtle current that seemed to shimmer with an inner light. It was alluring, beautiful, yet a strange sense of caution held her back from wanting to touch it. They pressed deeper, the path becoming less overgrown, more clearly defined. The foliage began to thin, replaced by cultivated gardens. Rows of plants, meticulously arranged, burst with an explosion of color and scent. Fruit trees, heavy with ripe harvest, lined the path. She saw grapes the size of plums, shimmering with an unnatural sheen, and berries that sparkled like scattered jewels. The air grew even thicker with the scent of their sweetness, almost overwhelming. They passed a fountain carved from a single, enormous ruby-colored stone. Instead of water, a stream of what looked like effervescent, golden wine bubbled from its maw, flowing into a basin where more of the iridescent insects congregated. The sound was a soft, perpetual gurgle. Further on, the path opened into a grand vista. Before them lay a city, or at least, what appeared to be one. Structures, built from materials she couldn't name—gleaming obsidian, crystalline rock that caught the amber light, and wood that coiled like living vines—rose into the glowing sky. Ornate balconies jutted out, draped with bioluminescent flora. The architecture was fluid, organic, as if the buildings had grown from the very earth of Dymas. Bridges, arching gracefully, spanned chasms where more golden rivers flowed. Lights twinkled within the windows of the structures, warm and inviting. The murmur of voices grew, a low, constant drone, interwoven with music – deep, resonant chords and the lilting notes of an unseen flute. Rory felt a moment of pure wonder, her gaze tracing the impossible lines of the city. It was magnificent, overwhelming in its beauty and strangeness. “Belphegor’s domain,” Nyx stated, their form still, contemplating the vista. “The heart of Gluttony.” The sheer scale of it, the opulence, it was almost too much for her senses to process. Her eyes stung slightly from the rich, humid air. She could almost taste the distant feasts, smell the exotic wines. “It’s… overwhelming,” Rory admitted, the word a soft exhalation. Her fingers instinctively brushed the Fae-Forged Blade at her hip, a small, cold comfort amidst the warmth and alien beauty. The slender dagger felt utterly out of place here, a sliver of Earthly moonlight in a world drenched in amber and indulgence. They moved forward, drawn by the distant promise of the city. The path transitioned from stone to a smooth, polished surface that gleamed under the amber light, reflecting the towering structures like a dark mirror. Large, ornate lanterns, crafted from what appeared to be solidified light, began to appear, illuminating their way. They smelled roasting meats now, sweet and savory, pulling at a hunger she hadn’t realized she carried. The music grew louder, becoming a crescendo of strings and wind instruments, powerful and haunting. Figures began to appear, moving with a languid grace. They were humanoid, but not quite human. Some possessed multiple sets of limbs, others had iridescent skin that shimmered, or strange antlers that crowned their heads. They wore flowing garments of rich fabrics, their faces often serene, sometimes fixed in expressions of blissful contentment. They carried goblets, or plates laden with colorful, steaming food. They moved without haste, lost in their world of excess. Several passed by them, their eyes, a myriad of hues, slid over Rory and Nyx without recognition, as if they were as much a part of the Dymasian scenery as the glowing flora. Rory felt a strange sense of detachment, like she was witnessing a perpetual dream. No one acknowledged their presence. It was unsettling, the complete lack of interest. “They are consumed,” Nyx observed. “By the very essence of this place.” The path led them directly to a grand archway, shimmering with an inner light, that served as the city’s entrance. Beyond it, a bustling marketplace unfolded. Stalls overflowed with exotic produce, their vendors, equally strange and resplendent, offering samples of sweet nectars and spiced pastries. The aromas were a cacophony, a jumble of competing delights that made her stomach rumble despite her apprehension. She reached for the Fae blade, her hand tightening around its hilt. The cold metal grounded her. This place was a feast for the senses, but a subtle hum of danger vibrated beneath the surface, a reminder that Dymas’s beauty was only one of its many guises.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.636
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
78.89% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1421
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"very"
count3
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slowly"
2"slightly"
3"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1421
totalAiIsms29
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count2
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"chill"
count1
4
word"glistening"
count2
5
word"vibrated"
count2
6
word"surreal"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count2
8
word"shimmered"
count2
9
word"velvet"
count1
10
word"tracing"
count2
11
word"electric"
count1
12
word"sense of"
count2
13
word"maw"
count1
14
word"gleaming"
count1
15
word"crystalline"
count1
16
word"amidst"
count1
17
word"cacophony"
count1
18
word"stomach"
count1
19
word"apprehension"
count1
20
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"pulse"
3"chill"
4"glistening"
5"vibrated"
6"surreal"
7"whisper"
8"shimmered"
9"velvet"
10"tracing"
11"electric"
12"sense of"
13"maw"
14"gleaming"
15"crystalline"
16"amidst"
17"cacophony"
18"stomach"
19"apprehension"
20"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences93
matches(empty)
35.33% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount7
narrationSentences93
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
2"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences97
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1416
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount1363
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.73
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone1
Rory10
Nyx7
London1
Dymas3
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Earthly1
Dymasian1
Fae2
persons
0"Rory"
1"Nyx"
2"Dymas"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
65.73% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences89
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"quite identify – a rich, earthy sweetness"
1"looked like effervescent, golden wine bub"
2"not quite human"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.119
wordCount1416
matches
0"Not a sun, not a moon, but an omnipresent luminescence"
1"not a moon, but an omnipresent luminescence"
2"not hoofprints, nor human, but elongated, clawed impressions in the soft earth near the riv"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean48.83
std25.73
cv0.527
sampleLengths
062
197
253
331
410
537
696
730
822
966
1064
1134
1253
1320
1438
1574
1645
1773
1845
1925
2014
2137
2251
2384
24106
2527
2612
2763
2847
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs216
matches
0"was witnessing"
1"was unsettling"
25.04% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences97
ratio0.041
matches
0"It tasted of fermented grapes and something she couldn’t quite identify – a rich, earthy sweetness."
1"They bloomed in impossible colors—electric blues, fiery oranges, and deep purples that shifted like oil on water."
2"Structures, built from materials she couldn't name—gleaming obsidian, crystalline rock that caught the amber light, and wood that coiled like living vines—rose into the glowing sky."
3"The murmur of voices grew, a low, constant drone, interwoven with music – deep, resonant chords and the lilting notes of an unseen flute."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1368
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"delicate, nectar-filled pistil"
1"single, enormous ruby-colored stone."
adverbCount47
adverbRatio0.03435672514619883
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.010964912280701754
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences97
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences97
mean14.6
std6.1
cv0.418
sampleLengths
018
122
222
38
417
517
613
723
819
912
1012
1118
1211
1319
1412
1510
1614
1723
1811
1916
2022
2122
2225
239
2412
259
2613
279
2812
2910
3024
3120
3216
3315
3413
3520
3620
3714
3813
3917
4023
416
4214
434
4416
4518
4611
479
4813
499
64.60% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.41237113402061853
totalSentences97
uniqueOpeners40
72.46% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences92
matches
0"Instead of water, a stream"
1"Further on, the path opened"
ratio0.022
93.91% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences92
matches
0"She stepped through the shimmering"
1"She blinked, eyes adjusting to"
2"Their trunks, wide and gnarled,"
3"They moved with an almost"
4"It wound deeper into the"
5"It tasted of fermented grapes"
6"She bent to touch one"
7"Its skin felt cool and"
8"They continued down the path,"
9"She heard the distant tinkle"
10"They moved closer to the"
11"she said, pointing to a"
12"They bloomed in impossible colors—electric"
13"It was alluring, beautiful, yet"
14"They pressed deeper, the path"
15"She saw grapes the size"
16"They passed a fountain carved"
17"It was magnificent, overwhelming in"
18"Her eyes stung slightly from"
19"She could almost taste the"
ratio0.315
57.83% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences92
matches
0"The Heartstone pendant pulsed against"
1"She stepped through the shimmering"
2"She blinked, eyes adjusting to"
3"The sky above glowed a"
4"Their trunks, wide and gnarled,"
5"The air hummed, a low,"
6"A gentle breeze rustled through"
7"They moved with an almost"
8"A path, overgrown but discernible,"
9"It wound deeper into the"
10"Rory murmured, her voice a"
11"Nyx solidified beside her, their"
12"The whisper of their voice"
13"Rory drew a deep breath,"
14"It tasted of fermented grapes"
15"Clusters of fruit, enormous and"
16"Some had burst open, spilling"
17"She bent to touch one"
18"Its skin felt cool and"
19"A burst of sweet, intoxicating"
ratio0.804
54.35% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"Before them lay a city,"
ratio0.011
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences68
technicalSentenceCount15
matches
0"The Heartstone pendant pulsed against Rory’s skin, a steady beat of warmth that mirrored her own thrumming pulse."
1"Not a sun, not a moon, but an omnipresent luminescence that draped everything in a fantastical glow."
2"Their trunks, wide and gnarled, twisted into impossible shapes, some appearing to weep thick, glistening sap that caught the light like liquid jewels."
3"Strange winged creatures flitted between the branches, their bodies glowing faintly, leaving trails of phosphorescence in their wake."
4"A path, overgrown but discernible, stretched out before them, paved with smooth, dark stone that absorbed the amber light."
5"Along the path, massive, fleshy plants pulsed with a gentle bioluminescence, their broad petals unfurling to reveal interiors that shimmered with dew."
6"Some had burst open, spilling glistening pulp onto the dark earth below, attracting swarms of tiny, iridescent insects that buzzed with a low, collective drone."
7"They bloomed in impossible colors—electric blues, fiery oranges, and deep purples that shifted like oil on water."
8"She saw grapes the size of plums, shimmering with an unnatural sheen, and berries that sparkled like scattered jewels."
9"Structures, built from materials she couldn't name—gleaming obsidian, crystalline rock that caught the amber light, and wood that coiled like living vines—rose …"
10"The architecture was fluid, organic, as if the buildings had grown from the very earth of Dymas."
11"The path transitioned from stone to a smooth, polished surface that gleamed under the amber light, reflecting the towering structures like a dark mirror."
12"Some possessed multiple sets of limbs, others had iridescent skin that shimmered, or strange antlers that crowned their heads."
13"The path led them directly to a grand archway, shimmering with an inner light, that served as the city’s entrance."
14"The aromas were a cacophony, a jumble of competing delights that made her stomach rumble despite her apprehension."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Rory murmured, her voice a hushed whisper"
1"Nyx warned, a subtle ripple passing through their shadowy form"
2"Nyx stated, their form still, contemplating the vista"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Rory murmured (murmur)"
1"Nyx warned (warn)"
2"Nyx stated (state)"
3"Rory admitted (admit)"
4"Nyx observed (observe)"
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.545
leniency1
rawRatio0.833
effectiveRatio0.833
71.2047%