| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 5 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Aurora said finally [finally]" | | 1 | "Aurora said finally [finally]" | | 2 | "she said finally [finally]" | | 3 | "she asked finally [finally]" | | 4 | "she said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.7 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.357 | | effectiveRatio | 0.357 | |
| 75.31% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 810 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "barely above a whisper" | | 2 | "completely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 810 | | totalAiIsms | 29 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | word | "skipped a beat" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "racing" | | 1 | "throb" | | 2 | "gleaming" | | 3 | "unspoken" | | 4 | "tension" | | 5 | "flicked" | | 6 | "dancing" | | 7 | "depths" | | 8 | "eyebrow" | | 9 | "fleeting" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "wavered" | | 12 | "measured" | | 13 | "glinting" | | 14 | "intensity" | | 15 | "whisper" | | 16 | "skipped a beat" | | 17 | "processed" | | 18 | "familiar" | | 19 | "sense of" |
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| 33.33% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 3 | | maxInWindow | 3 | | found | | 0 | | label | "couldn't help but" | | count | 2 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "couldn't help but wonder" | | 1 | "hung in the air" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 37.04% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 54 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "tried to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 43 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 807 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 19 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 49.43% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 29 | | wordCount | 696 | | uniqueNames | 4 | | maxNameDensity | 2.01 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Moreau | 1 | | Aurora | 13 | | Lucien | 14 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Lucien" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.494 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "intensity that seemed to burn in his very soul, stayed her hand" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 807 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 28.82 | | std | 17.3 | | cv | 0.6 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 53 | | 1 | 54 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 60 | | 5 | 39 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 38 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 38 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 39 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 40 | | 21 | 34 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 29 | | 24 | 54 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 71 | | 27 | 25 |
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| 92.27% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "was cluttered" | | 1 | "was piqued" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 6 | | totalVerbs | 127 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't expecting" | | 1 | "were staggering" | | 2 | "was racing, was asking" | | 3 | "was saying" | | 4 | "was spinning" |
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| 47.62% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 60 | | ratio | 0.033 | | matches | | 0 | "The hurt, the attraction, the things left unsaid – all of it swirled together in a toxic mix that made her want to slam the door shut and pretend she'd never seen him." | | 1 | "As Aurora listened, her mind racing with the implications of what he was saying, she couldn't help but wonder if she was ready to take the leap – to trust Lucien, to trust herself, and to walk the fine line between right and wrong." |
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| 92.78% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 699 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.034334763948497854 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.02145922746781116 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 60 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 60 | | mean | 13.45 | | std | 7.4 | | cv | 0.55 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 33 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 59.44% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.36666666666666664 | | totalSentences | 60 | | uniqueOpeners | 22 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 91.70% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "She wasn't expecting anyone, least" | | 1 | "He was impeccably dressed in" | | 2 | "She didn't step aside, her" | | 3 | "he replied, his eyes never" | | 4 | "She stepped aside, allowing him" | | 5 | "he said, his voice low" | | 6 | "he asked, his eyes locked" | | 7 | "he said, his voice measured" | | 8 | "he said, his eyes glinting" | | 9 | "she said finally, her voice" | | 10 | "he said, his voice low" | | 11 | "She sat down beside him" | | 12 | "she said, her voice barely" | | 13 | "he said, his voice dripping" | | 14 | "she asked finally, her voice" | | 15 | "he said, his voice low" | | 16 | "she said finally, her voice" |
| | ratio | 0.321 | |
| 16.60% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 47 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter's hand hesitated on" | | 1 | "She wasn't expecting anyone, least" | | 2 | "The small crescent-shaped scar on" | | 3 | "Lucien Moreau stood in the" | | 4 | "He was impeccably dressed in" | | 5 | "Aurora said finally, her voice" | | 6 | "She didn't step aside, her" | | 7 | "he replied, his eyes never" | | 8 | "Aurora hesitated, her mind flashing" | | 9 | "The hurt, the attraction, the" | | 10 | "She stepped aside, allowing him" | | 11 | "The flat was cluttered, the" | | 12 | "Lucien's eyes flicked to the" | | 13 | "he said, his voice low" | | 14 | "Aurora raised an eyebrow, her" | | 15 | "Lucien's smile was a fleeting" | | 16 | "he asked, his eyes locked" | | 17 | "Aurora shrugged, gesturing to the" | | 18 | "Lucien sat, his movements economical" | | 19 | "Aurora remained standing, her arms" |
| | ratio | 0.887 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 50.69% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 31 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The hurt, the attraction, the things left unsaid – all of it swirled together in a toxic mix that made her want to slam the door shut and pretend she'd never se…" | | 1 | "But something about his expression, a deep-seated intensity that seemed to burn in his very soul, stayed her hand." | | 2 | "Aurora's heart was racing, her mind reeling with the implications of what Lucien was asking." | | 3 | "As Aurora listened, her mind racing with the implications of what he was saying, she couldn't help but wonder if she was ready to take the leap – to trust Lucie…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora said finally, her voice neutral" | | 1 | "he said, his voice low and smooth" | | 2 | "Aurora said finally, her voice a little sharper than she'd intended," | | 3 | "he said, his voice measured" | | 4 | "he said, his eyes glinting with a hint of challenge" | | 5 | "she said finally, her voice cautious" | | 6 | "he said, his voice low and urgent" | | 7 | "she said, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 8 | "he said, his voice dripping with conviction" | | 9 | "she asked finally, her voice cautious" | | 10 | "he said, his voice low and husky," | | 11 | "she said finally, her voice barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.7 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |