Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0VJ60X3GK86F8VXXWM6GB

Run Details

Duration:
11.6s
Cost:
$0.005648
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora’s hand froze mid-air, a half-eaten prawn cracker poised before her mouth. A sharp, insistent knocking cut through the muffled din of Brick Lane. Three rapid-fire raps, then a pause, then two more. Too deliberate for a neighbour, too polite for a delivery. Eva, forever buried beneath a mountain of occult ephemera, hadn’t stirred. Ptolemy, the tabby, merely twitched an ear from his perch atop a precarious tower of grimoires. She dusted the cracker crumbs from her fingers onto a napkin, rising from her cross-legged position on the rug. The worn floorboards creaked beneath her bare feet as she padded toward the door. Through the scratched-up peephole, a blurry figure stood on the landing. Tall. Platinum blond hair, slicked back. A dark, tailored suit. Her stomach dropped. Aurora didn’t open the door. She didn’t even breathe. One amber eye, one black, stared back at her through the distorted lens. Lucien. He knocked again, a little louder this time. “Aurora. I know you’re in there." His voice, a low rumble, penetrated the thick wood. “We need to talk." Her hand brushed the cold metal of the three deadbolts, her fingers tightening on the nearest one. Talk? After three months of radio silence? After the way he’d just… gone? "Aurora, don’t make this more difficult than it needs to be." A hint of irritation laced his usually smooth tone. "You know I can wait all night." A chill snaked up her spine, not from the draft, but from the unyielding resolve in his voice. He *would* wait. He would stand there, perfectly composed, until she gave in. She knew that much about Lucien Moreau. With a sigh that hitched in her throat, she unlatched the first bolt, then the second, the clicks echoing too loudly in the small flat. Her hand hovered over the third, the final barrier. What was she doing? She could just walk away, leave him out there. But a perverse curiosity, a need to know why he’d suddenly reappeared, tugged at her. She pulled the door open, just a crack, and sunlight spilled into the dim hallway, illuminating the slight dust motes dancing in the air. Lucien filled the doorway, a stark silhouette against the bright afternoon. He looked exactly as she remembered, every inch the impeccably dressed fixer. He held his ivory-handled cane, the wolf's head grip gleaming, a silent sentinel by his side. His gaze swept over her, a slow, deliberate assessment from her messy bun to her paint-splattered joggers. A flicker of something – surprise? amusement? – crossed his heterochromatic eyes before settling into his familiar, guarded expression. “Well, this is a charming welcome,” he drawled, a corner of his mouth twitching upwards. Her jaw tightened. “What do you want, Lucien?” Her voice came out sharper than she intended, brittle with a mix of anger and something else she refused to name. He leaned against the doorframe, radiating an effortless composure that grated on her nerves. “May I come in?” “No.” She hugged her arms across her chest, feeling suddenly aware of her worn t-shirt and the lingering scent of stale takeaway that clung to Eva’s flat. Lucien merely raised an eyebrow, a silent challenge. He didn't move, but the sheer force of his presence seemed to shrink the already miniature hallway. The warm scent of his expensive cologne, a mix of sandalwood and something subtly metallic, wafted into the flat, stirring a unwelcome memory in her. "I imagine Eva won't mind. She's rarely bothered by visitors." He glanced past her, his gaze lingering on a towering stack of scrolls near Ptolemy. "Unless you've found a way to make her less… hermit-like since last we spoke." She bristled. The "last we spoke" had been a curt phone call three months ago, him telling her he was leaving London for "business," no further explanation. Then silence. “Why are you here, Lucien?” Her voice was low, a deliberate effort to keep it steady. He pushed off the doorframe, a small, almost imperceptible shift that felt like an invasion. “I need your help, Aurora.” The words hung in the air, heavy with unspoken history. Her help. After everything. She scoffed, a genuine, mirthless sound. “My help? You just show up out of the blue, three months later, and you expect me to just… what? Drop everything?” His expression remained impassive. “It’s important.” “Everything is important to you, Lucien.” She remembered too well his pronouncements about the delicate balance of the supernatural underworld, his insistence on certain protocols. His world had always come first. He took a step forward, and she instinctively recoiled, bumping her elbow on the wall. He stopped, a bare foot between them, and his gaze softened, just a fraction. “I know this isn’t ideal, Rory.” The familiar nickname, a gentle murmur, caught her off guard. It was the name he’d used when they were alone, when his guard dropped, when… She pressed her lips together, willing the unexpected rush of warmth in her chest to subside. “Ideal is you not appearing on my doorstep, ever again.” His eyes, one amber, one black, searched hers, as if looking for something hidden beneath her anger. “I wouldn’t be here if there wasn’t a necessity.” “A necessity that couldn’t wait three months?” The questions spilled out, tinged with the bitterness that had been simmering within her. “A necessity that couldn’t warrant a call? An email? A text, even?” He flinched, a subtle tightening around his eyes. “I had… complications.” “Complications.” She repeated the word, tasting its inadequacy. “That’s what you call it when you disappear without a trace? No explanation, no goodbye, just gone?” He gripped the head of his cane, his knuckles white. “I never intended to hurt you.” “You didn’t intend to?” She let out a short, incredulous laugh. “What did you intend, then? For me to just forget you existed? To move on like nothing happened?” “I hoped you would.” His voice was low, almost a whisper. “It was… simpler that way.” The air crackled between them. Simpler. That was his justification? For the sleepless nights, the constant replaying of their last conversation, the ache in her chest that just wouldn’t go away? “Simpler for who, exactly?” She challenged, her voice rising. “For the man who just walks out on people? Or for the person left to pick up the pieces?” He met her gaze, his expression unreadable, but a faint flush crept up his neck. “I thought I was doing what was best.” “Best for whom, Lucien?” She stepped back, putting distance between them. The small flat suddenly felt suffocating. “Because it certainly wasn’t best for me.” He closed his eyes for a brief moment, a fleeting glimpse of vulnerability. When he opened them, his gaze was steady, though still holding that hint of regret. “I understand your anger, Aurora. I do. And you have every right to it.” He paused, searching for the right words. “But this situation… it’s bigger than us. Bigger than any past grievances.” “It always is, isn’t it?” She shook her head, a tight, sarcastic smile playing on her lips. “Your grand schemes, your secret world, always taking precedence.” He sighed, a long, drawn-out sound that seemed to carry the weight of something ancient. “This isn’t one of my ‘grand schemes.’ This is a threat. A dangerous one.” She remained unconvinced, her skepticism a shield against the unexpected rush of emotions he always evoked in her. “What kind of threat?” “One that involves both our worlds, Aurora.” He took another small step, closing the distance she’d just created. “And one that requires your unique… insight.” Her unique insight. He meant her ability to connect the dots, to see patterns others missed, her knack for unconventional thinking. He’d always appreciated that about her, even admired it. “And if I say no?” Her voice was barely a whisper now, her anger battling with that insistent, unwelcome curiosity. And something else, something she couldn’t quite articulate; a magnetic pull that had always existed between them, despite everything. He regarded her, his gaze unwavering. “Then I will have to find another solution. But it will be a far less… elegant one. And potentially more hazardous for everyone involved.” The implicit threat hung in the air, not to her directly, but to the delicate balance of the world he inhabited, a world she’d only glimpsed through his stories and the occasional perilous adventure they’d shared. And, she knew, a world that she, too, was now intrinsically linked to. She stared at him, the man who had vanished from her life only to reappear as if no time had passed, bringing with him the familiar chill of danger and the lingering warmth of a complicated past. His tailored suit, his sharp features, the way he held himself – everything about him spoke of a world beyond the ordinary. “Tell me,” she finally said, her voice laced with resignation. “Tell me what this ‘necessity’ is.” She stepped aside, a small, defeated gesture. “But don’t think for a second this means anything has changed between us, Lucien Moreau.” His gaze flickered, a momentary softening that she almost missed. He didn’t reply, just stepped across the threshold, bringing with him the scent of expensive cologne and the undeniable weight of their shared, complicated history. The door swung shut behind him with a soft click, plunging the small hallway back into semi-darkness.
created_at"2026-02-19T03:59:46.377Z" 2/19/2026, 3:59:46 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
29.79% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"She remembered too [too]"
1"She stepped back [back]"
2"she finally said [finally]"
3"She stepped aside [aside]"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.426
leniency0.851
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.17
87.25% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1569
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count3
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
1.21% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1569
totalAiIsms31
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"chill"
count2
3
word"resolve"
count1
4
word"echoing"
count1
5
word"dancing"
count1
6
word"stark"
count1
7
word"gleaming"
count1
8
word"sentinel"
count1
9
word"flicker"
count1
10
word"familiar"
count3
11
word"effortless"
count1
12
word"eyebrow"
count1
13
word"unspoken"
count1
14
word"warmth"
count2
15
word"tinged"
count1
16
word"simmering"
count1
17
word"whisper"
count2
18
word"unreadable"
count1
19
word"fleeting"
count1
20
word"weight"
count2
21
word"magnetic"
count1
22
word"unwavering"
count1
23
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"silence"
2"chill"
3"resolve"
4"echoing"
5"dancing"
6"stark"
7"gleaming"
8"sentinel"
9"flicker"
10"familiar"
11"effortless"
12"eyebrow"
13"unspoken"
14"warmth"
15"tinged"
16"simmering"
17"whisper"
18"unreadable"
19"fleeting"
20"weight"
21"magnetic"
22"unwavering"
23"flickered"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count2
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences105
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences130
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1563
ratio0.001
matches
0"would"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions12
wordCount1183
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.34
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Brick1
Lane1
Lucien4
Moreau1
Eva2
Ptolemy2
London1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Ptolemy"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
26.54% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"felt like an invasion"
1"as if looking for something hidden beneath her anger"
2"sound that seemed to carry the weight of something ancient"
3"quite articulate; a magnetic pull that had always existed between them, despite everything"
72.04% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.28
wordCount1563
matches
0"not from the draft, but from the unyielding resolve in his voice"
1"not to her directly, but to the delicate balance of the world he inhabited, a world s"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences130
matches
0"knew that much"
1"holding that hint"
82.37% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean31.26
std13.7
cv0.438
sampleLengths
070
157
223
327
430
527
638
762
863
936
1015
1129
1218
1327
1450
1539
1629
1716
1820
1914
2028
216
2231
2329
2431
2526
2626
2733
2811
2925
3016
3129
3216
3331
3428
3523
3624
3728
3833
3926
4029
4122
4225
4330
4439
4530
4649
4759
4838
4952
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs180
matches
0"was leaving"
54.95% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences130
ratio0.031
matches
0"A flicker of something – surprise?"
1"– crossed his heterochromatic eyes before settling into his familiar, guarded expression."
2"And something else, something she couldn’t quite articulate; a magnetic pull that had always existed between them, despite everything."
3"His tailored suit, his sharp features, the way he held himself – everything about him spoke of a world beyond the ordinary."
91.58% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1189
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount59
adverbRatio0.0496215306980656
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.0159798149705635
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences130
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences130
mean12.02
std7.42
cv0.617
sampleLengths
012
112
29
310
411
516
619
714
811
91
105
114
123
135
144
1513
161
178
1815
194
2017
211
226
235
241
2520
267
2718
283
2910
307
3125
329
334
349
3515
3624
3711
3812
3916
4017
416
421
4312
4415
453
4626
4714
484
4927
55.38% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.36923076923076925
totalSentences130
uniqueOpeners48
35.09% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences95
matches
0"Too deliberate for a neighbour,"
ratio0.011
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount58
totalSentences95
matches
0"She dusted the cracker crumbs"
1"Her stomach dropped."
2"She didn’t even breathe."
3"He knocked again, a little"
4"His voice, a low rumble,"
5"Her hand brushed the cold"
6"He *would* wait."
7"He would stand there, perfectly"
8"She knew that much about"
9"Her hand hovered over the"
10"She could just walk away,"
11"She pulled the door open,"
12"He looked exactly as she"
13"He held his ivory-handled cane,"
14"His gaze swept over her,"
15"he drawled, a corner of"
16"Her jaw tightened."
17"Her voice came out sharper"
18"He leaned against the doorframe,"
19"She hugged her arms across"
ratio0.611
33.68% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount81
totalSentences95
matches
0"Aurora’s hand froze mid-air, a"
1"A sharp, insistent knocking cut"
2"Eva, forever buried beneath a"
3"Ptolemy, the tabby, merely twitched"
4"She dusted the cracker crumbs"
5"The worn floorboards creaked beneath"
6"Platinum blond hair, slicked back."
7"A dark, tailored suit."
8"Her stomach dropped."
9"Aurora didn’t open the door."
10"She didn’t even breathe."
11"He knocked again, a little"
12"His voice, a low rumble,"
13"Her hand brushed the cold"
14"A hint of irritation laced"
15"A chill snaked up her"
16"He *would* wait."
17"He would stand there, perfectly"
18"She knew that much about"
19"Her hand hovered over the"
ratio0.853
52.63% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences95
matches
0"And, she knew, a world"
ratio0.011
36.47% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"With a sigh that hitched in her throat, she unlatched the first bolt, then the second, the clicks echoing too loudly in the small flat."
1"He leaned against the doorframe, radiating an effortless composure that grated on her nerves."
2"He pushed off the doorframe, a small, almost imperceptible shift that felt like an invasion."
3"His eyes, one amber, one black, searched hers, as if looking for something hidden beneath her anger."
4"He sighed, a long, drawn-out sound that seemed to carry the weight of something ancient."
5"And something else, something she couldn’t quite articulate; a magnetic pull that had always existed between them, despite everything."
6"She stared at him, the man who had vanished from her life only to reappear as if no time had passed, bringing with him the familiar chill of danger and the ling…"
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he drawled, a corner of his mouth twitching upwards"
1"She challenged, her voice rising"
43.62% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"he drawled (drawl)"
1"him telling (him telling)"
2"She repeated (repeat)"
3"His voice (his voice)"
4"She challenged (challenge)"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.128
leniency0.255
rawRatio0.833
effectiveRatio0.213
71.4758%