Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0VMGVKC3532Y2DA3WK8HP

Run Details

Duration:
1m 20s
Cost:
$0.027809
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Quinn’s torch flared against damp brick, water dripping from a fractured pipe overhead. She stepped off the embankment platform and into the tunnel, boots echoing on cracked tile. The stench of rust and stale breath of air pressed in, as though the old Tube station remembered every soul who’d vanished down here. Her watch face glinted in the beam—leather band worn soft, its hands still ticking with steady precision. Uniformed Patel crouched by a chalk circle scrawled across the concrete floor. He drew a slow finger around its edge, pausing where the line curved into a rune she didn’t recognise. “Heard it’s ritual,” he offered, back straightening. “Gut says cult activity.” Quinn regarded the circle. Faint streaks of crimson stained the grainy surface. No gun lay nearby. No weapon, no casing. Only the corpse—man in his thirties, face upturned, jaw slack and eyes glassy. Quinn crouched, boots brushing the chalk. “Ritual, or someone wanted us to think it’s ritual.” She tilted her head, searching the arc of that circle. “No glove prints. No sign of disturbance beyond this.” Patel knelt opposite, flicking his flashlight around the station walls. “They’d carve it deeper if they wanted to keep him here,” he said. “This looks amateur—some kid playing at summoning demons.” A drip of water spattered on the body’s outstretched palm. Quinn crouched lower, traced a scar across the man’s wrist—clean slice, angled just so. She brushed away a bead of blood with a fingertip, watching it pool again. “He didn’t draw the circle himself,” she observed. “He was placed inside.” Patel fished a small phial from his jacket, capped with cork. He held it to the light. “We found this by the eastern wall. Looks like acid residue.” He uncorked it, cupped the neck to waft the fumes. “Chemical burn. Not supernatural.” Quinn slid a knee closer, elbow brushing the man’s coat. She tilted the body’s head, studying the scorch ring at the collarbone. No soot remained on the lapel. Fingertip pressed the flesh—crumbled like paper. “Burn marks but no fire. And that phial never touched him.” She tapped a fingertip on the concrete where the acid must’ve pooled. “If someone stood here, they’d have etched this tile into powder. Yet it’s intact.” A flash of red curls appeared at the tunnel mouth. Eva Kowalski slipped in, satchel bumping her hip, fingers already tugging at curly strands by her ear. She knelt on the opposite side of the chalk circle and squinted at the rune. “These symbols match an abbreviated ward,” she said, voice pitched just above a whisper. “Found a mention in a 14th-century manuscript—salt-based circle meant to repel something.” Patel frowned. “A ward against what? Ghosts? Demons?” Eva retrieved a leather-bound notebook, flipped to a dog-eared page. “Something not from our world,” she murmured, tracing the lines of an identical rune. “Protector circles keep things in.” She tapped the chalk. “Problem’s someone tried to seal this spot.” Quinn knelt between Patel and Eva. She scraped a fingertip over the chalk. No powder, only hard ridges. She pulled her thumbnail across the edge. A flake broke free—tiny metallic shards glittering under the torch. She held them aloft. “Not chalk,” she declared, eyebrow lifting. “Metal filings, coated in calcite. They bolted a seal here, not drew one.” Patel rubbed his temple. “So he barricaded himself?” Quinn whisked excess dust away, revealing jade-green moss clinging to the runic lines. She ran a fingertip through a patch. It left a faint stain on her glove. “Moss doesn’t grow on fresh cement,” she noted. “Someone inserted an energy source.” She glanced at Eva. “What if he tried to trap something? But it got out.” Eva’s lips parted. She balanced her glasses on the bridge of her nose and peered closer at the moss. “Ordinary moss would blacken in acid. This glows under low light. Phosphorescent. It feeds on residual magic.” Quinn pressed her jaw. She reached into her coat and withdrew the brass compass they’d bagged near the body. Verdigris mottled its casing, protective sigils etched in a ring around the glass face. She flipped the lid. The needle spun, jittering against the sigils, then locked and trembled toward the tunnel’s far wall. She closed it and pocketed the tool. “It points to a rift,” she said. Patel straightened, arms folding. “We’re chasing fairy tales now.” Quinn stood, torch beam following the compass direction. The wall opposite showed no sign of damage—just smeared graffiti and seepage stains. She pressed her palm against cracked mortar. Beneath her fingers, she felt a warmth, a faint hum that reverberated through her bones. “This way.” Water pooled at her boots, swelling around her heels. She crouched by a hairline fissure, light catching a translucent glow inside. She scraped the edge with her thumbnail. Moisture welled and trembled like lamp oil. She dropped the shard of mortar into a evidence pouch without looking away. Eva edged closer, voice hushed. “He wasn’t hunting demons. He was guarding a breach. That circle wasn’t a trap for him—it was a prison for something else.” Patel scanned their faces, uncertainty flickering in his eyes. “So…” He swallowed. “What killed him?” Quinn knelt, tracing the chalk-fired mold of salt crystals now cracked and flaked. She flicked dirt from her glove. “He paused the seal. Maybe he thought they’d freed him. Maybe he miscalculated. Either way, he died standing guard.” She rose, her silhouette tall against the tunnel’s gloom. “We need samples of the filings, the moss, the mortar. Lab analysis on the acid phial, too. Someone engineered a ward. Someone breached it.” Eva rose, satchel thudding. She tucked hair behind her ear and nodded. Patel reached for his radio, voice low and clipped, calling in evidence teams and lab specialists. Quinn stepped back from the fissure and allowed Patel to cordon off the area with yellow tape. Her torch caught the edge of the crack again—tiny crystal veins glinting. She closed her eyes for a heartbeat, measured her breath, then opened her notebook and jotted a single line: “Guard collapsed under pressure of energy leak.” She snapped it shut, sliding the compass back into her pocket. Above them, the tangled wires of the Tube station sagged. Water dripped from the tracks. The circle on the floor lay broken in places, shards of salt and metal filings scattered by Patel’s boot. Quinn crouched one last time, gathering a loose flake between gloved fingers and dropping it into her evidence bag. Then she stood and met Patel’s eyes in the dim light. “Case file’s changed,” she stated. “This was never a cult murder. It was a containment breach.” She turned back to the fissure, torch beam steady, ready for the answers the lab would bring.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.472
leniency0.944
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.056
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1135
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Patel"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
16.30% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1135
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"fractured"
count1
1
word"echoing"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"etched"
count2
4
word"whisper"
count1
5
word"tracing"
count2
6
word"eyebrow"
count1
7
word"trembled"
count2
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"reverberated"
count1
10
word"scanned"
count1
11
word"flicked"
count1
12
word"gloom"
count1
13
word"crystal"
count1
14
word"glinting"
count1
15
word"measured"
count1
highlights
0"fractured"
1"echoing"
2"traced"
3"etched"
4"whisper"
5"tracing"
6"eyebrow"
7"trembled"
8"warmth"
9"reverberated"
10"scanned"
11"flicked"
12"gloom"
13"crystal"
14"glinting"
15"measured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences87
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1120
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
77.27% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount825
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.45
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Patel"
discoveredNames
Quinn12
Tube2
Patel12
Kowalski1
Eva7
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Patel"
2"Kowalski"
3"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.773
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1120
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
98.22% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean46.67
std23.04
cv0.494
sampleLengths
070
142
267
331
450
542
671
768
88
940
1058
118
1256
1336
1467
159
1645
1748
1827
1915
2071
2128
2266
2397
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs163
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences105
ratio0.067
matches
0"Her watch face glinted in the beam—leather band worn soft, its hands still ticking with steady precision."
1"Only the corpse—man in his thirties, face upturned, jaw slack and eyes glassy."
2"Quinn crouched lower, traced a scar across the man’s wrist—clean slice, angled just so."
3"Fingertip pressed the flesh—crumbled like paper."
4"A flake broke free—tiny metallic shards glittering under the torch."
5"The wall opposite showed no sign of damage—just smeared graffiti and seepage stains."
6"Her torch caught the edge of the crack again—tiny crystal veins glinting."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount836
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"free—tiny metallic shards"
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.025119617224880382
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0035885167464114833
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean10.67
std6.33
cv0.593
sampleLengths
014
115
224
317
412
519
67
74
84
98
104
114
1213
136
1419
159
1610
1713
188
1910
2014
2114
228
234
2411
256
2621
274
2810
2912
306
316
3223
3314
3410
3517
3615
3714
3812
392
406
4110
4214
439
447
456
467
475
487
4910
65.40% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4095238095238095
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners43
83.33% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences80
matches
0"Only the corpse—man in his"
1"Then she stood and met"
ratio0.025
45.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences80
matches
0"She stepped off the embankment"
1"Her watch face glinted in"
2"He drew a slow finger"
3"he offered, back straightening"
4"She tilted her head, searching"
5"She brushed away a bead"
6"He held it to the"
7"He uncorked it, cupped the"
8"She tilted the body’s head,"
9"She tapped a fingertip on"
10"She knelt on the opposite"
11"she said, voice pitched just"
12"she murmured, tracing the lines"
13"She tapped the chalk"
14"She scraped a fingertip over"
15"She pulled her thumbnail across"
16"She held them aloft."
17"she declared, eyebrow lifting"
18"She ran a fingertip through"
19"It left a faint stain"
ratio0.438
22.50% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences80
matches
0"Detective Quinn’s torch flared against"
1"She stepped off the embankment"
2"The stench of rust and"
3"Her watch face glinted in"
4"He drew a slow finger"
5"he offered, back straightening"
6"Quinn regarded the circle."
7"Quinn crouched, boots brushing the"
8"She tilted her head, searching"
9"Patel knelt opposite, flicking his"
10"A drip of water spattered"
11"Quinn crouched lower, traced a"
12"She brushed away a bead"
13"Patel fished a small phial"
14"He held it to the"
15"He uncorked it, cupped the"
16"Quinn slid a knee closer,"
17"She tilted the body’s head,"
18"Fingertip pressed the flesh—crumbled like"
19"She tapped a fingertip on"
ratio0.875
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The stench of rust and stale breath of air pressed in, as though the old Tube station remembered every soul who’d vanished down here."
1"Beneath her fingers, she felt a warmth, a faint hum that reverberated through her bones."
95.59% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, voice pitched just above a whisper"
11.11% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she observed (observe)"
1"she murmured (murmur)"
2"she declared (declare)"
3"she noted (note)"
4"she stated (state)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.222
leniency0.444
rawRatio0.625
effectiveRatio0.278
79.6241%