Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0VWXMFNB5SH6C2YCZ654Z

Run Details

Duration:
43.0s
Cost:
$0.001054

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into the dim light of the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden. The air hung heavy with the scent of damp concrete and something else—something metallic. She adjusted her worn leather watch, the familiar weight grounding her as she surveyed the scene. A flickering overhead light cast long shadows, dancing across the graffiti-stained walls. “Over here, Quinn,” called a voice from the far end of the platform. It was DS Markham, his brow furrowed as he crouched beside a body sprawled on the ground. Quinn approached, her sharp jawline set in a grim line. The victim, a young man, lay face down, his clothes tattered and stained. A bone token rested in his hand, glinting in the weak light. “Looks like a mugging gone wrong,” Markham said, glancing up at her. “No ID, just this.” He gestured to the token. “You know how it is down here. The Market’s been busy lately.” Quinn knelt beside the body, her eyes narrowing. “A mugging? In the Veil Market? This doesn’t fit.” She turned the token over in her gloved hand, feeling the chill of the bone against her skin. “Why would someone carry a bone token if they weren’t involved in something more… supernatural?” Markham shrugged, his expression skeptical. “Maybe he was just a buyer. You know how desperate people get for enchanted goods.” Quinn shook her head, her mind racing. “No, it’s not just that. Look at the way he’s lying. No struggle. No signs of a fight. If it was a mugging, he’d have put up a fight.” She pointed to the bruises on the man’s arms, dark and angry. “These aren’t from a struggle. They’re from something else.” Markham frowned, glancing back at the body. “What are you suggesting?” “Something more sinister.” Quinn stood, scanning the area. The walls whispered secrets, the shadows seemed to shift. “We need to look for signs of a rift or portal. This place is crawling with supernatural energy.” “Rifts? You think he was dragged through one?” Markham’s voice held a hint of disbelief. “Not dragged. Maybe he was lured.” Quinn’s eyes caught a glimmer of something on the ground, just beyond the body. She stepped closer, her heart racing. A small brass compass lay half-buried in the dirt, its face etched with protective sigils. “Is that what I think it is?” Markham asked, his tone shifting. Quinn picked it up, feeling the weight of it in her palm. The needle twitched, then steadied, pointing toward the far wall. “The Veil Compass. It’s attuned to supernatural energy. This means…” She trailed off, her mind racing. “Means what?” Markham pressed, his curiosity piqued. “Means there’s a rift nearby. This guy wasn’t just a victim; he was a player in something much larger.” Quinn’s eyes darted around the station, searching for any sign of the portal. “We need to find out where this leads.” Markham stood, his skepticism fading. “Alright, let’s see what we can find.” Quinn followed the needle’s direction, her instincts kicking in. The compass led her to a section of the wall, where the concrete appeared to ripple, as if it were alive. She reached out, her fingers brushing against the surface. A shiver ran down her spine. “Quinn, be careful,” Markham warned, stepping closer. “Something’s here,” she murmured, her heart pounding. “I can feel it.” Suddenly, the wall shimmered, revealing a faint outline of a doorway. Quinn’s breath caught in her throat. “There it is. A rift.” Markham’s eyes widened. “We should call for backup.” “No time.” Quinn stepped closer, her gaze fixed on the rift. “We need to see where it leads. This could be our only chance to find out what happened to him.” “Are you out of your mind?” Markham’s voice rose. “We don’t know what’s on the other side!” Quinn shot him a look, her determination unwavering. “And we won’t know unless we go. We can’t let this slip away.” With a deep breath, she stepped through the rift, the world around her shifting in a blur of colors and sounds. Markham hesitated, then followed, his expression a mix of fear and resolve. They emerged in a dimly lit alley, the air thick with the scent of smoke and something sweet. The walls were lined with strange symbols, glowing faintly in the darkness. Quinn glanced at the compass; the needle spun wildly before settling again, pointing deeper into the alley. “Where are we?” Markham asked, his voice low. “Somewhere between worlds,” Quinn replied, her eyes scanning the surroundings. “We need to keep moving.” They walked cautiously, the sounds of distant chatter echoing off the walls. A group of figures loomed ahead, their faces obscured by hoods. Quinn’s instincts flared. “Stay close,” she whispered, her hand resting on the grip of her service weapon. As they approached, one of the figures turned, revealing a freckled face framed by curly red hair. “Quinn? Is that you?” “Eva?” Quinn blinked, recognition dawning. “What are you doing here?” Eva Kowalski stepped forward, her round glasses glinting in the low light. “I was researching some leads on the Market. I didn’t expect to find you here.” She glanced at Markham, her expression shifting to concern. “Is everything alright?” “Not exactly,” Quinn replied, her voice steady. “We found a body back at the station. He had a bone token and this.” She held up the compass. Eva’s eyes widened. “A Veil Compass? That’s not good. It means someone’s been using the Market for something dangerous.” “Dangerous how?” Markham asked, his brow furrowing. “People don’t just die in the Market without a reason,” Eva explained, her voice low. “If someone’s targeting buyers or sellers, it could lead to chaos.” Quinn nodded, her mind racing. “We need to find out who’s behind this. The victim might have known something.” “Let’s split up,” Eva suggested, her freckled complexion serious. “I can check the archives for any recent disappearances. You two can ask around here.” “Good idea,” Quinn agreed. “But be careful. We don’t know who we’re dealing with.” As Eva slipped into the shadows, Quinn turned to Markham. “We need to find someone who knows what’s going on. Let’s head toward the market stalls.” Markham nodded, his expression resolute. “Lead the way.” Quinn tightened her grip on the compass, the needle steadying once more. She felt the weight of the case pressing down on her, but beneath it all, a flicker of determination ignited. They would uncover the truth, no matter where it led.
total_cost0.0010539000000000002

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Quinn’s eyes darted around [around]"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.481
leniency0.962
rawRatio0.04
effectiveRatio0.038
90.77% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1083
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"cautiously"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"cautiously"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1083
totalAiIsms26
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"weight"
count3
2
word"dancing"
count1
3
word"furrowed"
count1
4
word"glinting"
count2
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"racing"
count4
7
word"sinister"
count1
8
word"scanning"
count2
9
word"etched"
count1
10
word"down her spine"
count1
11
word"pounding"
count1
12
word"shimmered"
count1
13
word"unwavering"
count1
14
word"resolve"
count1
15
word"echoing"
count1
16
word"loomed"
count1
17
word"furrowing"
count1
18
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"weight"
2"dancing"
3"furrowed"
4"glinting"
5"chill"
6"racing"
7"sinister"
8"scanning"
9"etched"
10"down her spine"
11"pounding"
12"shimmered"
13"unwavering"
14"resolve"
15"echoing"
16"loomed"
17"furrowing"
18"flicker"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"shiver down spine"
count1
1
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
highlights
0"A shiver ran down her spine"
1"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences70
matches
0"a flicker of determination"
81.63% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences70
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences95
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1080
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions48
wordCount658
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity3.19
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn21
Tube1
Camden1
Markham17
Suddenly1
Eva5
Kowalski1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Markham"
3"Eva"
4"Kowalski"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1080
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean25.12
std14.08
cv0.561
sampleLengths
057
130
235
333
450
520
657
711
835
915
1041
1112
1238
137
1440
1512
1645
177
1811
1922
208
2131
2217
2321
2433
2547
268
2715
2826
2914
3021
3110
3239
3327
3419
357
3626
3719
3824
3914
4026
418
4242
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences70
matches
0"were lined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs132
matches(empty)
52.63% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences95
ratio0.032
matches
0"The air hung heavy with the scent of damp concrete and something else—something metallic."
1"“Means there’s a rift nearby. This guy wasn’t just a victim; he was a player in something much larger.” Quinn’s eyes darted around the station, searching for any sign of the portal."
2"Quinn glanced at the compass; the needle spun wildly before settling again, pointing deeper into the alley."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount661
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.02118003025718608
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.009077155824508321
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean11.37
std6.39
cv0.562
sampleLengths
015
114
216
312
413
517
610
713
812
912
109
1112
128
1327
1415
155
1615
177
1841
199
207
214
228
239
2418
2515
2620
276
2815
2912
3012
3110
3216
337
3432
358
365
377
389
3921
409
416
427
437
444
4511
466
475
483
495
69.82% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.43157894736842106
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners41
48.31% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences69
matches
0"Suddenly, the wall shimmered, revealing"
ratio0.014
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences69
matches
0"She adjusted her worn leather"
1"It was DS Markham, his"
2"He gestured to the token"
3"She turned the token over"
4"She pointed to the bruises"
5"She stepped closer, her heart"
6"She trailed off, her mind"
7"She reached out, her fingers"
8"she murmured, her heart pounding"
9"They emerged in a dimly"
10"They walked cautiously, the sounds"
11"she whispered, her hand resting"
12"She glanced at Markham, her"
13"She held up the compass"
14"She felt the weight of"
15"They would uncover the truth,"
ratio0.232
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences69
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into"
1"The air hung heavy with"
2"She adjusted her worn leather"
3"A flickering overhead light cast"
4"It was DS Markham, his"
5"Quinn approached, her sharp jawline"
6"The victim, a young man,"
7"A bone token rested in"
8"Markham said, glancing up at"
9"He gestured to the token"
10"Quinn knelt beside the body,"
11"She turned the token over"
12"Markham shrugged, his expression skeptical."
13"Quinn shook her head, her"
14"She pointed to the bruises"
15"Markham frowned, glancing back at"
16"Quinn stood, scanning the area"
17"The walls whispered secrets, the"
18"Markham’s voice held a hint"
19"Quinn’s eyes caught a glimmer"
ratio0.928
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount13
matches
0"Markham asked, his tone shifting"
1"She trailed, her mind racing"
2"Markham pressed, his curiosity piqued"
3"she murmured, her heart pounding"
4"Markham asked, his voice low"
5"Quinn replied, her eyes scanning the surroundings"
6"she whispered, her hand resting on the grip of her service weapon"
7"Quinn blinked, recognition dawning"
8"She glanced, her expression shifting to concern"
9"Quinn replied, her voice steady"
10"Markham asked, his brow furrowing"
11"Eva explained, her voice low"
12"Eva suggested, her freckled complexion serious"
15.38% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"Markham pressed (press)"
1"Markham warned (warn)"
2"she murmured (murmur)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
4"Eva explained (explain)"
5"Eva suggested (suggest)"
6"Quinn agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.538
effectiveRatio0.269
73.0627%