Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0VZ68FVR03HJMZ8X010SS

Run Details

Duration:
55.2s
Cost:
$0.056266
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The descent into the bowels of Camden felt less like a police investigation and more like an archaeological dig into hell. Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted the collar of her trench coat, the damp chill of the subterranean tunnels seeping through the wool. Her flashlight cut a sharp, trembling cone through the stagnant air, illuminating white tiles cracked by tree roots and time. Above ground, London churned with evening traffic and tourists. Down here, the silence possessed a physical weight. Harlow stepped over a rusted turnstile, her boots crushing debris with a wet crunch. She hated these depths. They smelled of ozone, rot, and the phantom scent of burnt sugar that had haunted her since Morris died three years ago. "Watch your step on the tiling, Detective. The moss is slicker than ice." Eva Kowalski moved ahead of her, a bobbing lantern in her hand casting long, dancing shadows against the curved tunnel walls. The redhead looked out of place in a crime scene, clutching her worn leather satchel to her chest like a shield. She didn't walk like a cop; she walked like a trespasser in a library, steps light and apologetic. Harlow ignored the warning and marched forward with practiced stability. "I’ve cleared crack dens with less structural integrity than this, Miss Kowalski. Just show me what you found. Patrol said it was an assault." "Patrol didn't come down this far. They saw the entrance and the—residue—and called it in." Eva stopped at the edge of the platform. "And it’s definitely not a crack den." Harlow joined her at the precipice. The flashlight beam swept wide, revealing the cavernous expanse of the abandoned station. It wasn't empty. Makeshift stalls lined the platform edge, constructed from scavenged wood, velvet curtains, and bones lashed together with twine. Jars of suspended fluids glinted in the dark. Dried herbs hung in bundles like dead birds. It looked like a medieval bazaar had been swallowed by the earth and left to ferment. "The Veil Market," Eva whispered, the word escaping her on a cloud of condensation. She tucked a chaotic lock of curly red hair behind her left ear—a nervous tic Harlow had clocked five times in the last hour. "It moved. I tracked the ley line shifting, but I didn't think it would manifest under Camden." Harlow swept the light over a table piled high with silver amulets. "Illegal street trading. Possession of likely stolen goods. Trespassing." She clicked her tongue, the sound sharp in the gloom. "I don't see a body, Eva." "Not on the platform." Eva pointed down toward the tracks. "There." Harlow angled her beam downward. A man lay sprawled across the rusted rails. He wore a tailored suit that cost more than Harlow’s car, the fabric ruined by the grime of the tunnel floor. He was face up, eyes wide and milky, staring at the vaulted ceiling. Harlow vaulted down from the platform, landing with a heavy thud. She crouched beside the body, snapping on a pair of blue nitrile gloves. "Male, mid-thirties," she muttered, her voice dropping into the cadence of dictation. She pressed two fingers against the man's neck. Cold. "Rigor is fully set. He’s been here at least twelve hours." Eva remained on the platform, peering over the edge, her round glasses reflecting the beam of Harlow’s torch. "Check his hands." Harlow lifted the victim's right hand. The fingers were curled into a claw, stiff and unyielding. The skin was blackened, not from soot, but as if the frostbite had started from the inside out. The veins traced black spiderwebs up his wrist, disappearing under the cuff of his shirt. "Frostbite?" Harlow frowned, squeezing the rigid fingers. "It's fifty degrees down here. Damp, but above freezing." "Not frostbite," Eva corrected. "Necrotic resonance. He touched something he shouldn't have." Harlow dropped the hand and grabbed the victim’s lapel, shifting him slightly to check for exit wounds. "We call that gangrene in the real world, Kowalski. Or a reaction to some chemical agent. What was he buying?" "Information, usually. Or protection." Eva finally hopped down to the tracks, her satchel bouncing against her hip. She pulled out a notebook, flipping through pages filled with chaotic sketches. "The Veil Market requires a bone token for entry. He must have had one." Harlow patted down the suit jacket. No wallet. No phone. Just a heavy, metallic lump in the inner breast pocket. She reached in and withdrew a brass object, circular and tarnished with verdigris. "A compass?" Harlow turned it over. The glass face was cracked, but the needle inside spun wildly, ignoring magnetic north. The casing was etched with symbols that made her eyes ache if she stared too long. "Don't open it!" Eva scrambled forward, her boots slipping on the oily sleepers. Harlow held the object up, her sharp jaw tightening. "Calm down. It’s a busted navigational tool. Probably an antique he bought off one of these stalls." "It’s a Veil Compass." Eva stopped three feet away, hands hovering as if she wanted to snatch it but dared not. "It doesn't point north. It points to rifts. Thin spots. If the needle is spinning, it means the energy here is chaotic. Violent." Harlow stared at the spinning needle. It whirled clockwise, then counter-clockwise, vibrating against the cracked glass. She checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist. Her second hand was ticking normally. "Mechanical failure," Harlow stated, though a prickle of unease crawled up her spine. She slipped the compass into an evidence bag. "Let's stick to the facts. We have a John Doe in a restricted area, unauthorized subterranean structures, and signs of a chemical burn on the victim's extremities. I’m thinking toxic waste dump disguised as an art project." She stood up, shining her light further down the tunnel. The darkness seemed to swallow the beam after twenty feet. "Look at the ground, Detective." Harlow lowered the light. Surrounding the body, the layer of century-old dust and grime was disturbed. But not by footprints. The marks were sweeping, circular strokes, as if someone had dragged a heavy brush through the filth. The patterns intersected perfectly with the position of the body. "Drag marks?" Harlow walked the perimeter. "No. Consistent width. Someone swept the floor?" "A containment circle," Eva murmured, squatting to examine the edge of the pattern. She pulled a pen light from her satchel. "The dust isn't just swept aside. Look at the grit remaining." Harlow leaned in. Glittering amidst the grey dust were flecks of something iridescent, like ground beetle shells. "Salt and crushed abalone," Eva diagnosed. "It's a binding agent. Someone trapped him here." Harlow straightened, scanning the tunnel with renewed scrutiny. The layout didn't make sense for a mugging. If the victim had been trapped, where was the assailant? The dust circle was unbroken save for the tracks Harlow and Eva had just made. "If he was trapped inside this... circle," Harlow gestured vaguely at the ground, "then the killer stood outside. But there are no footprints outside the circle range. Just ours." Eva pushed her glasses up the bridge of her nose. "A shade wouldn't leave footprints." "Stop." Harlow held up a hand. "I need physics, Eva. I need mass and velocity. If there are no footprints entering or leaving the immediate vicinity, and the victim is dead from unknown causes..." She trailed off, her gaze snagging on something near the tunnel wall, about ten feet away from the circle. A solitary brick in the archway was darker than the rest. Wet. Harlow stepped over the rail, moving toward the wall. "Detective?" "Quiet." Harlow approached the wall. The grime on the tiles here was thick, coating the white ceramic in a greasy, black film. But right at eye level, there was a smudge. She leaned in. The smudge had ridges. A print. A handprint. But it wasn't pressed onto the surface. The grime was undisturbed on top of the print. The impression came from *behind* the grime, pushing the soot outward, as if someone had pressed their hand against the other side of a dirty window. Except this was solid brick and earth. Harlow peeled off her glove and pulled a fresh one from her pocket, snapping it on. She reached out and touched the wall. Solid. Cold. "He didn't come from the platform," Harlow said, her voice devoid of the earlier skepticism. The pieces were shifting, locking into a picture she didn't want to see. "And he didn't walk down the tracks." Eva joined her, looking at the inverted handprint on the wall. Her face went pale, freckles standing out in stark relief. "He was pushed." "Pushed?" Harlow turned to look at the body, then back at the wall. "Pushed through solid matter?" "The Veil Market exists in a pocket dimension anchored to our reality," Eva said, the words tumbling out fast. "Sometimes the anchor slips. If you're caught in the overlap without a token..." Harlow ignored the technobabble. She looked at the geometry. The handprint on the wall. The circle on the ground. The victim's position. "The killer didn't walk away," Harlow realized. She crouched down, shining her light parallel to the floor near the wall. There. Faint, almost invisible distortions in the air, like heat haze, hovering inches above the ground. And beneath them, tiny piles of grey ash. "Cigarette ash?" Harlow touched a pile with a forcep from her kit. "No," Eva breathed, leaning over Harlow’s shoulder. "Residue from a burned transport scroll. Someone was waiting here." Harlow stood up, piecing the sequence together. "The victim enters the market. He buys the compass. He’s looking for something specific. Someone intercepts him. They don't fight. The killer creates this perimeter," she pointed to the swept circle, "forcing the victim to back up. Back up toward the wall." Harlow mimicked the motion, stepping backward until her shoulder blades were inches from the cold bricks. "The victim is cornered. He can't step over the line—let's assume your salt theory holds water as a psychological barrier or chemical deterrent. He backs up against the wall. The killer is standing right where you are, Eva." Eva took a step back. "But the killer doesn't touch him," Harlow continued, eyes narrowing. "The killer pressures him. And then..." She looked at the inverted handprint. "Something pulls him. Not from the track side. From the wall side." She scrutinized the handprint again. It was too large for a human. The fingers were too long. "This print isn't the victim's," Harlow said softly. "And it's not the killer's. It's the weapon." She turned back to Eva. "You said the Token is required for entry. What happens if you try to leave with something you didn't pay for?" Eva swallowed hard. "The Market takes it back. The debt collectors... they don't have physical forms until they cross the threshold." Harlow looked at the body. The blackened hand. The frostbite that wasn't frostbite. "He stole the compass," Harlow concluded. "He didn't buy it. He tried to run. The killer didn't murder him. The killer just herded him against the barrier and let security do the rest." She walked back to the body, kneeling to bag the metallic compass properly this time. As she zippered the bag, the needle stopped spinning. It snapped rigidly into place, pointing directly at Harlow. She froze. "Eva." "Yes?" "The needle stopped." "Where is it pointing?" Harlow looked up, meeting Eva’s terrified green eyes. "It's pointing at me." A low groan echoed through the tunnel, vibrating through the soles of Harlow’s boots. It wasn't the sound of a train. It was the sound of earth grinding against earth, deep below the foundation. The jars on the stalls rattled. The liquid inside them began to swirl. Harlow stood up, her hand instinctively going to the sidearm beneath her coat. The skepticism that usually armored her was cracking, revealing the raw instinct of a hunter who realized she had stepped into a larger predator's den. "We're leaving," Harlow commanded, grabbing Eva’s arm with a grip of iron. "Now." "But the evidence—" "The evidence is that we are trespassing," Harlow snapped, dragging the researcher toward the stairs. "And I think the rent is due."
created_at"2026-02-19T03:59:59.696Z" 2/19/2026, 3:59:59 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags29
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Harlow gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"Harlow said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences72
tagDensity0.403
leniency0.806
rawRatio0.069
effectiveRatio0.056
92.63% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2035
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"perfectly"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
43.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2035
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"churned"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"depths"
count1
5
word"dancing"
count1
6
word"constructed"
count1
7
word"velvet"
count1
8
word"chaotic"
count3
9
word"gloom"
count1
10
word"traced"
count1
11
word"resonance"
count1
12
word"magnetic"
count1
13
word"etched"
count1
14
word"mechanical"
count1
15
word"amidst"
count1
16
word"scanning"
count1
17
word"solitary"
count1
18
word"stark"
count1
19
word"echoed"
count1
20
word"predator"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"churned"
2"silence"
3"weight"
4"depths"
5"dancing"
6"constructed"
7"velvet"
8"chaotic"
9"gloom"
10"traced"
11"resonance"
12"magnetic"
13"etched"
14"mechanical"
15"amidst"
16"scanning"
17"solitary"
18"stark"
19"echoed"
20"predator"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences148
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences148
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences190
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords2028
ratio0
matches
0"behind"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions72
wordCount1390
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity3.31
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity6
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Harlow46
Quinn1
London1
Morris1
Kowalski1
Eva21
persons
0"Camden"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Morris"
4"Kowalski"
5"Eva"
places
0"London"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences107
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like a medieval bazaar had been sw"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.493
wordCount2028
matches
0"not from soot, but as if the frostbite had started from the inside out"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences190
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs89
mean22.79
std15.45
cv0.678
sampleLengths
062
117
240
313
460
534
630
719
83
950
1055
1137
1211
135
1442
1524
1632
1721
1849
1916
2012
2137
2243
2333
2436
2513
2626
2744
2832
2958
3020
315
324
3316
3427
3513
3632
3717
3814
3941
4029
4115
4234
4319
4412
459
461
471
4830
499
91.04% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences148
matches
0"been swallowed"
1"were curled"
2"was blackened"
3"was etched"
4"been trapped"
5"was undisturbed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs245
matches
0"was ticking"
1"were shifting"
2"was cracking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences190
ratio0.011
matches
0"She didn't walk like a cop; she walked like a trespasser in a library, steps light and apologetic."
1"She tucked a chaotic lock of curly red hair behind her left ear—a nervous tic Harlow had clocked five times in the last hour."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1393
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.025843503230437905
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.010050251256281407
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences190
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences190
mean10.67
std7.25
cv0.679
sampleLengths
021
121
220
39
48
514
64
722
813
921
1021
1118
1210
1324
1423
157
166
1713
183
1918
208
218
2216
2314
2424
2517
2612
2719
286
2910
301
315
328
3321
3413
3511
3613
3712
388
391
4011
4118
423
436
4410
4518
4615
477
489
494
43.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.3157894736842105
totalSentences190
uniqueOpeners60
24.88% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences134
matches
0"Just a heavy, metallic lump"
ratio0.007
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences134
matches
0"Her flashlight cut a sharp,"
1"She hated these depths."
2"They smelled of ozone, rot,"
3"She didn't walk like a"
4"It wasn't empty."
5"It looked like a medieval"
6"She tucked a chaotic lock"
7"She clicked her tongue, the"
8"He wore a tailored suit"
9"He was face up, eyes"
10"She crouched beside the body,"
11"she muttered, her voice dropping"
12"She pressed two fingers against"
13"She pulled out a notebook,"
14"She reached in and withdrew"
15"It whirled clockwise, then counter-clockwise,"
16"She checked the worn leather"
17"Her second hand was ticking"
18"She slipped the compass into"
19"She stood up, shining her"
ratio0.269
15.97% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount119
totalSentences134
matches
0"The descent into the bowels"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted the"
2"Her flashlight cut a sharp,"
3"Harlow stepped over a rusted"
4"She hated these depths."
5"They smelled of ozone, rot,"
6"Eva Kowalski moved ahead of"
7"The redhead looked out of"
8"She didn't walk like a"
9"Harlow ignored the warning and"
10"Eva stopped at the edge"
11"Harlow joined her at the"
12"The flashlight beam swept wide,"
13"It wasn't empty."
14"Jars of suspended fluids glinted"
15"It looked like a medieval"
16"Eva whispered, the word escaping"
17"She tucked a chaotic lock"
18"Harlow swept the light over"
19"She clicked her tongue, the"
ratio0.888
37.31% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences134
matches
0"If the victim had been"
ratio0.007
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The impression came from *behind* the grime, pushing the soot outward, as if someone had pressed their hand against the other side of a dirty window."
1"The skepticism that usually armored her was cracking, revealing the raw instinct of a hunter who realized she had stepped into a larger predator's den."
4.31% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags29
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"Eva whispered, the word escaping her on a cloud of condensation"
1"she muttered, her voice dropping into the cadence of dictation"
2"Eva scrambled, her boots slipping on the oily sleepers"
3"Eva murmured, squatting to examine the edge of the pattern"
4"Harlow said, her voice devoid of the earlier skepticism"
5"Eva said, the words tumbling out fast"
6"Harlow continued, eyes narrowing"
25.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"Eva whispered (whisper)"
1"she muttered (mutter)"
2"Eva corrected (correct)"
3"Harlow stated (state)"
4"Eva murmured (murmur)"
5"Eva breathed (breathe)"
6"Harlow continued (continue)"
7"Harlow concluded (conclude)"
8"Harlow snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences72
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.25
79.2770%