Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0W0PWMFNNVPYJTXV4B7F1

Run Details

Duration:
32.2s
Cost:
$0.031390
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came sharp and precise, a three-beat rhythm against the heavy wood of the door. Not Eva’s knock, which was more of an impatient drumming, and not the delivery driver from the takeaway downstairs, who usually just hollered up the stairwell. Rory froze, a half-eaten slice of toast in her hand. A ginger tabby, Ptolemy, lifted his head from his perch atop a teetering stack of books on Sumerian mythology, his ears swivelling. Another knock. Same pattern. Imperious. Final. She set the toast down on a plate already crowded with crumbs. The flat was a fortress of Eva’s design, a response to Rory’s recent history. Rory’s hand moved over the cold brass of the three deadbolts. She drew back the first, a heavy clank that echoed in the small space. The second slid with a grating shriek. The third turned with a soft, well-oiled click. She eased the door open a crack, the security chain holding it fast. Lucien Moreau stood in the narrow landing. He filled the space, a figure cut from shadow and expensive wool. His charcoal suit was immaculate, the knot of his silver tie perfect. Platinum blond hair, slicked back from his high forehead, caught the dim light from the stairwell’s single grimy bulb. And his eyes—one the colour of warm amber, the other a pit of absolute black—found hers. A breath she hadn’t realised she was holding left her lungs in a rush. The world seemed to shrink to the space between them, thick with the smell of curry from the restaurant below and the sudden, sharp scent of his cologne, all cedar and something metallic, like rain on hot pavement. He gave a slight, formal inclination of his head. His gaze swept over the slice of her face visible through the gap. “Aurora.” His voice was just as she remembered it. A low, smooth cadence with the ghost of a French accent curling around the edges. It did something unsettling to the base of her spine. “Lucien.” Her own voice came out tight. “What are you doing here?” “May I come in?” She didn’t move. Her fingers were white where she gripped the edge of the door. He was the last person she ever expected to see on this side of London, standing on the worn welcome mat of Eva’s cluttered sanctuary. He waited, impossibly patient. He held a cane, its ivory handle gleaming, and his long-fingered hands rested atop it. He didn’t belong here. He was Mayfair townhouses and private clubs, a world of clean lines and whispered secrets. This was Brick Lane, a place of noise and chaos and Rory’s quiet hiding. “How did you find me?” One corner of his mouth lifted, a subtle, humourless motion. “It’s what I do.” She undid the chain. The metallic rattle sounded too loud in the sudden silence. She stepped back, pulling the door wider, and he moved past her into the flat. He moved with a liquid grace that belied his stillness on the landing. Ptolemy watched him, a low rumble starting in his chest. Lucien took in the room. His heterochromatic eyes scanned the piles of scrolls, the books jammed into every available space, the precarious towers of research notes threatening to collapse. His expression remained unreadable, but a faint line appeared between his brows. He ran a finger along the dusty spine of a leather-bound grimoire and left a clean track in the grime. “Your friend has eclectic tastes.” Rory shut the door, the click of the latch final. She didn’t bother with the deadbolts. With him on the inside, they felt useless. “Eva’s a scholar. What do you want?” He turned to face her fully. The cramped space made him seem larger, his presence more potent. She was acutely aware of her own state of dress—an old university sweatshirt, faded jeans, bare feet on the cool floorboards. He was a tailored suit and polished leather shoes. They were two different worlds colliding in a room that smelled of dust and cardamom. “I was in the area.” A short, sharp laugh escaped her. “No, you weren’t. Your area is a five-course meal where they don’t list the prices. This”—she waved a hand at the chaotic room—“is not your area.” He took a step closer. She stood her ground, arms crossed tight over her chest. His gaze dropped for a fraction of a second to the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, then flicked back to her face. He remembered. The thought sent a jolt, hot and unwanted, through her. “Fair enough. I came to see you.” “You have a strange way of doing that. Last I checked, people tended to use phones.” “I suspected you wouldn’t answer.” His amber eye seemed to smoulder. “Was I wrong?” She said nothing. He was right. She’d have seen his name, and a cold knot of dread and something else, something she refused to name, would have formed in her stomach. She would have let it ring. He walked past her, his movements economical, navigating the labyrinth of books with an ease that grated on her. He stopped by the window, looking down at the bustling street below. “I heard what happened. With Evan.” The name hung in the air between them, ugly and heavy. Rory’s jaw tightened. “Who told you?” “Does it matter?” He turned from the window. The afternoon light framed him, making his hair shine like spun silver. “I could have helped you, Aurora.” “Like you did last time?” The words were out before she could stop them, sharp and bitter. A flicker of something—regret, maybe, or frustration—crossed his features before his mask of cool composure settled back into place. His grip on the ivory cane tightened. “That was a complicated situation.” “It was simple. You left.” She took a breath, forcing the tremor from her voice. “I don’t need your help, Lucien. I’m fine.” “Are you? Three deadbolts on the door of your friend’s flat says otherwise.” He gestured with his chin towards the entrance. “You’re running. You’re scared.” “I’m being sensible.” Her fingers dug into her arms. “And I’m not having this conversation with you. You lost the right to ask about my life six months ago.” Ptolemy, as if sensing the shift in the room’s atmosphere, hopped down from his perch and wound his way around Rory’s legs, a soft, comforting pressure. Lucien’s gaze followed the cat’s movement. “Eva is out of town, isn’t she? A conference in Edinburgh on pre-Christian pagan rituals.” He stated it as fact, not a question. A chill snaked its way up her spine. “You’ve been watching me.” “I’ve been concerned.” He corrected her smoothly. “There’s a difference.” “Not from where I’m standing.” She stared at him, at the man who had walked into her life like a storm and then vanished just as quickly, leaving a trail of wreckage she was still clearing. The memory of his touch, the low murmur of his voice in the dark, rose unbidden. She shoved it down. “I needed to be sure you were safe.” “From Evan? Or from you?” His black eye seemed to absorb the light in the room, holding no reflection. “The two are not mutually exclusive threats, I suppose. Not to you.” He took another deliberate step forward, closing the space between them until she had to tilt her head back to meet his gaze. He was so close she could see the fine lines at the corners of his eyes, the individual silver threads in his platinum hair. “Why are you really here, Luc?” The old nickname slipped out, a ghost on her tongue. His expression softened, just for a moment. The hard edges of the fixer melted away, leaving the man she remembered underneath. “Because you are not safe.” He spoke quietly, his voice a low thrum that vibrated through her. “And not just from your pathetic ex-boyfriend.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He spoke quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.351
leniency0.703
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.054
92.48% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1330
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
43.61% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1330
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"perfect"
count1
2
word"sanctuary"
count1
3
word"gleaming"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"unreadable"
count1
7
word"chaotic"
count1
8
word"flicked"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"navigating"
count1
11
word"flicker"
count1
12
word"comforting"
count1
13
word"chill"
count1
14
word"vibrated"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"perfect"
2"sanctuary"
3"gleaming"
4"silence"
5"scanned"
6"unreadable"
7"chaotic"
8"flicked"
9"stomach"
10"navigating"
11"flicker"
12"comforting"
13"chill"
14"vibrated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences92
matches(empty)
96.27% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences92
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences116
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1318
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount1070
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.65
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva3
Ptolemy3
Sumerian1
Rory7
Moreau1
French1
London1
Mayfair1
Brick1
Lane1
Lucien3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Rory"
3"Moreau"
4"Lucien"
places
0"London"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if sensing the shift in the room’s atmosphere, hopped down from his perch and wound his way around Rory’s legs, a soft, comforting pressure"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1318
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean27.46
std21.36
cv0.778
sampleLengths
074
16
279
366
452
522
61
733
812
94
1040
1152
125
1314
1452
1561
165
1724
187
1962
205
2132
2251
237
2416
2514
2637
2731
286
2917
3026
3117
3226
335
3423
3525
3629
3732
3823
3912
4010
4156
428
435
4473
4516
4621
4724
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs158
matches
0"was holding"
68.97% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences116
ratio0.026
matches
0"And his eyes—one the colour of warm amber, the other a pit of absolute black—found hers."
1"She was acutely aware of her own state of dress—an old university sweatshirt, faded jeans, bare feet on the cool floorboards."
2"A flicker of something—regret, maybe, or frustration—crossed his features before his mask of cool composure settled back into place."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1081
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.025901942645698426
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.0074005550416281225
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences116
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences116
mean11.36
std7.63
cv0.671
sampleLengths
016
126
210
322
42
52
61
71
812
914
1011
1114
127
138
1413
157
1612
1712
1819
1916
2014
2138
229
2313
241
258
2615
2710
287
295
304
313
3212
3325
344
3515
364
3715
3814
395
4010
414
424
4310
4415
4513
4610
475
4824
4912
52.01% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.35344827586206895
totalSentences116
uniqueOpeners41
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount52
totalSentences87
matches
0"She set the toast down"
1"She drew back the first,"
2"She eased the door open"
3"He filled the space, a"
4"His charcoal suit was immaculate,"
5"He gave a slight, formal"
6"His gaze swept over the"
7"His voice was just as"
8"It did something unsettling to"
9"Her own voice came out"
10"She didn’t move."
11"Her fingers were white where"
12"He was the last person"
13"He waited, impossibly patient."
14"He held a cane, its"
15"He didn’t belong here."
16"He was Mayfair townhouses and"
17"She undid the chain."
18"She stepped back, pulling the"
19"He moved with a liquid"
ratio0.598
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount83
totalSentences87
matches
0"The knock came sharp and"
1"Rory froze, a half-eaten slice"
2"A ginger tabby, Ptolemy, lifted"
3"She set the toast down"
4"The flat was a fortress"
5"Rory’s hand moved over the"
6"She drew back the first,"
7"The second slid with a"
8"The third turned with a"
9"She eased the door open"
10"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
11"He filled the space, a"
12"His charcoal suit was immaculate,"
13"Platinum blond hair, slicked back"
14"A breath she hadn’t realised"
15"The world seemed to shrink"
16"He gave a slight, formal"
17"His gaze swept over the"
18"His voice was just as"
19"A low, smooth cadence with"
ratio0.954
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
ratio0
84.55% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Not Eva’s knock, which was more of an impatient drumming, and not the delivery driver from the takeaway downstairs, who usually just hollered up the stairwell."
1"They were two different worlds colliding in a room that smelled of dust and cardamom."
2"He walked past her, his movements economical, navigating the labyrinth of books with an ease that grated on her."
3"Ptolemy, as if sensing the shift in the room’s atmosphere, hopped down from his perch and wound his way around Rory’s legs, a soft, comforting pressure."
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He spoke quietly, his voice a low thrum that vibrated through her"
68.92% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"He stated (state)"
1"He corrected (correct)"
2"He spoke quietly (speak)"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.081
leniency0.162
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.162
79.5782%