| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 77.17% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1095 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "carefully" | | 3 | "lightly" | | 4 | "cautiously" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1095 | | totalAiIsms | 40 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | | | 27 | | | 28 | | | 29 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "vibrated" | | 2 | "resolve" | | 3 | "familiar" | | 4 | "pounding" | | 5 | "flicked" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "gloom" | | 8 | "tinged" | | 9 | "raced" | | 10 | "enigma" | | 11 | "shattered" | | 12 | "mosaic" | | 13 | "crystal" | | 14 | "rhythmic" | | 15 | "flicker" | | 16 | "silk" | | 17 | "shimmered" | | 18 | "otherworldly" | | 19 | "etched" | | 20 | "silence" | | 21 | "echo" | | 22 | "scanning" | | 23 | "traced" | | 24 | "warmth" | | 25 | "crystalline" | | 26 | "fractured" | | 27 | "depths" | | 28 | "echoes" | | 29 | "maw" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 95.24% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 60 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1079 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 995 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.8 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Nyx" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Aurora | 8 | | Fae | 2 | | Isolde | 4 | | Varga | 1 | | Fey | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Dymas | 1 | | Shadows | 2 | | Nyx | 6 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Varga" | | 4 | "Shadows" | | 5 | "Nyx" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "as though daring the shadows themselves to bite" | | 1 | "as if stepping on air, her pale lavender eyes fixed ahead" | | 2 | "felt like the softest silk" | | 3 | "whispers that seemed to echo from every direction, yet originated from nowhere" | | 4 | "walls that seemed to ripple as if made of water" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1079 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 61.63% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 22 | | mean | 49.05 | | std | 17.94 | | cv | 0.366 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 87 | | 1 | 46 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 75 | | 4 | 57 | | 5 | 28 | | 6 | 52 | | 7 | 57 | | 8 | 62 | | 9 | 43 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 60 | | 12 | 49 | | 13 | 34 | | 14 | 71 | | 15 | 61 | | 16 | 47 | | 17 | 56 | | 18 | 51 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 49 | | 21 | 43 |
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| 99.42% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 177 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 15 | | totalSentences | 65 | | ratio | 0.231 | | matches | | 0 | "Her bright blue eyes darted ahead, senses on high alert, yet she saw little in the dense darkness—only shifting shapes that refused to resolve into anything familiar." | | 1 | "She inhaled sharply through her nose, scenting things that shouldn’t be—spiced with decay, tinged with a metallic tang that reminded her of copper." | | 2 | "This place was no ordinary shadow or myth; it thrummed with a forbidding vitality." | | 3 | "The ground was scorched black, cracked open like shattered glass, but within the fractures, faint wisps of unseen light flickered—perhaps remnants of some ancient magic, or a trap laid by unknown architects." | | 4 | "Shadows flickered in the corners of her eyes—one instant, a flicker of a figure that disappeared when she turned her head." | | 5 | "The membranes shimmered at her touch, their profiles rippling with strange, internal life—like breaths or whispers unseen, sighs muffled by layers of some otherworldly flesh." | | 6 | "The sigil was unfamiliar, yet it thrummed with a familiar tone—a language of curses or blessings abandoned long ago in a world forgotten." | | 7 | "Instead, they grated and scratched across their nerves—lingering in the air, as if broken remnants of a melody long lost." | | 8 | "Aurora spun, scanning the surroundings—her sharp gaze cutting through the cobweb of shadows." | | 9 | "Her fingers unconsciously traced the Heartstone pendant beneath her shirt, feeling its faint warmth—a heartbeat in her hand that grounded her." | | 10 | "This environment was no less hungry; it scratched at the edges of their minds, luring them deeper with promises of wonder, or threats of madness." | | 11 | "They reached a chamber of impossible proportions—an oval cathedral space that defied all known geometry." | | 12 | "The glyphs flared brighter, their runes twisting into new shapes—symbols she couldn't decipher, yet resonating with a familiar, ancient dread." | | 13 | "Shadows thickened once more, flickering into the shape of a sprawled figure—lean, hunched, edge of the dark’s maw showing jagged teeth." | | 14 | "Every hair on her body stood on end, sensing the growing danger, the creeping feeling that this place was alive—hungry—something that could devour them whole if they weren’t careful." |
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| 93.16% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 879 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "scorched black, cracked open like" |
| | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.040955631399317405 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.019340159271899887 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 65 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 85.67% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 65 | | mean | 16.6 | | std | 6.05 | | cv | 0.364 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 32 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 22 | | 45 | 25 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 27 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 58.46% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.36923076923076925 | | totalSentences | 65 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 55.56% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, they grated and scratched" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "Her bright blue eyes darted" | | 1 | "She took a hesitant step" | | 2 | "Their faintly glowing violet eyes" | | 3 | "She inhaled sharply through her" | | 4 | "Her mind raced, recalling the" | | 5 | "She looked around, noting the" | | 6 | "They passed through a corridor" | | 7 | "It was like a thousand" | | 8 | "It was impossible to tell" | | 9 | "she ordered, voice steady despite" | | 10 | "Her fingers unconsciously traced the" | | 11 | "They reached a chamber of" | | 12 | "Her voice cracked into a" | | 13 | "She reached out cautiously, her" | | 14 | "Its eyes, entirely black, reflected" | | 15 | "She glanced over her shoulder" |
| | ratio | 0.267 | |
| 1.67% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "The shadows thickened around them," | | 1 | "Aurora Carter, her Fae-forged blade" | | 2 | "The air prickled with a" | | 3 | "Her bright blue eyes darted" | | 4 | "She took a hesitant step" | | 5 | "Nyx moved beside her, the" | | 6 | "Their faintly glowing violet eyes" | | 7 | "Nyx’s whisper floated through the" | | 8 | "Nyx murmured, voice barely more" | | 9 | "Aurora’s fingers tightened on her" | | 10 | "She inhaled sharply through her" | | 11 | "Her mind raced, recalling the" | | 12 | "This place was no ordinary" | | 13 | "The Fey seer moved lightly," | | 14 | "Every step she took was" | | 15 | "Isolde whispered, voice like the" | | 16 | "Aurora nodded, unwilling to trust" | | 17 | "She looked around, noting the" | | 18 | "The ground was scorched black," | | 19 | "The environment was an alien" |
| | ratio | 0.917 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 19 | | matches | | 0 | "Her bright blue eyes darted ahead, senses on high alert, yet she saw little in the dense darkness—only shifting shapes that refused to resolve into anything fam…" | | 1 | "She took a hesitant step forward, heart pounding softly, as though daring the shadows themselves to bite." | | 2 | "Her mind raced, recalling the stories of other realms, strange portals that challenged the senses and broke the mind if not approached carefully." | | 3 | "Behind them, Isolde Varga silently emerged, her silver hair blending into the moonlit darkness that spilled from the shifting, glowing fissures like liquid ligh…" | | 4 | "The Fey seer moved lightly, as if stepping on air, her pale lavender eyes fixed ahead." | | 5 | "She looked around, noting the twisted architecture that stretched and curled unpredictably." | | 6 | "The environment was an alien mosaic, features that defied the logic of natural evolution." | | 7 | "Shadows flickered in the corners of her eyes—one instant, a flicker of a figure that disappeared when she turned her head." | | 8 | "Aurora brushed her hand against one, expecting a slick, wet feeling, but instead touched a surface that felt like the softest silk." | | 9 | "Nyx hovered near a translucent surface, inspecting a tiny glyph etched into the membrane that shimmered with faint violet light." | | 10 | "Instead, they grated and scratched across their nerves—lingering in the air, as if broken remnants of a melody long lost." | | 11 | "The sound grew louder, more persistent, a chorus of whispers that seemed to echo from every direction, yet originated from nowhere." | | 12 | "Her fingers unconsciously traced the Heartstone pendant beneath her shirt, feeling its faint warmth—a heartbeat in her hand that grounded her." | | 13 | "They reached a chamber of impossible proportions—an oval cathedral space that defied all known geometry." | | 14 | "The ceiling was a sprawling lattice of crystalline networks, humming with faint energy, casting fractured lights across walls that seemed to ripple as if made o…" | | 15 | "Isolde stepped forward, her gaze slipping past the others as if she saw what they could not." | | 16 | "The glyphs flared brighter, their runes twisting into new shapes—symbols she couldn't decipher, yet resonating with a familiar, ancient dread." | | 17 | "Shadows thickened once more, flickering into the shape of a sprawled figure—lean, hunched, edge of the dark’s maw showing jagged teeth." | | 18 | "Every hair on her body stood on end, sensing the growing danger, the creeping feeling that this place was alive—hungry—something that could devour them whole if…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx murmured, voice barely more than a ripple" | | 1 | "she ordered, voice steady despite the shiver crawling along her spine" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "she ordered (order)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.667 | |