Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0W29SRSMD3TG58MCSMTCH

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Duration:
32.1s
Cost:
$0.001032

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory tossed aside her delivery bag as the knock echoed through her tiny flat, the sound almost muffled by piles of books and scrolls stacked like fortifications around her. She paused, mid-reach for a takeout container, brow furrowed. She rarely had visitors. Not unannounced ones at least. The second knock came firmer this time, a deliberate insistence that sent a jolt of trepidation through her. She brushed her fingers through her shoulder-length hair, smoothing it down as she approached the door. Peeking through the peephole revealed an unmistakable silhouette. A chill raced through her body. Why now? With a deep breath, she turned the deadbolt and swung the door open. Lucien stood on the other side, draped in a tailored charcoal suit that admired his frame, slicked-back platinum hair catching the overhead light. The low hum of London’s streets fell silent in the backdrop, as though the city itself held its breath. “Lucien.” Her voice came out steadier than her pulse. “Rory.” He leaned slightly on his ivory-handled cane, the faintest hint of a smirk unraveling on his lips — a careful mask over an uncertain greeting. “You’re looking well.” She almost scoffed, but the warmth behind the words surprised her. The tension in the doorway pulled her taut. “Come in.” She stepped back, her discomfort threading through her chest. He entered, surveying the chaos of her flat — papers strewn about, books piled precariously. Ptolemy, her tabby, slinked around his legs, judging the intruder with narrowed eyes. “Quite the impressive… collection you have here,” he commented, his gaze flicking to a scroll that peeked out from beneath a pizza box. “I’m a scholar, remember?” She forced herself to smile, but it felt brittle against memories of heated arguments and a time when they'd shared laughter rather than weighty silences. Lucien took in the room for another moment, then settled on the cramped sofa, his posture elegantly relaxed but his expression a touch pinched. “I didn’t expect to find you still here.” “Well, I like living above a curry house. The food’s good.” She crossed her arms, stubbornly leaning against the door frame. “The golden empress; you always loved a good pun.” A flicker of nostalgia sparked between them. A shared moment high above the struggles of their lives. His amber eye met hers, the black one flickering elsewhere, weighing the atmosphere, the unspoken weight of their history wrapping around them both. “It’s been a while.” He broke the silence, tilting his head as if daring her to break the fragile spell. “Three years.” The words slipped from her lips, sharp and true. “Not that I was counting.” “Still bitter, I see.” A note of teasing in his tone fell flat against the gravity of everything unsaid. “Bitter? Hardly. Just... realistic.” She pushed off the frame and moved toward the kitchen, offering both of them a break from the intensity. “Want something to drink?” “Water will do.” He watched her, studying the way she avoided his gaze. She poured a glass, the clink of ice and splash of water a lonely backdrop to their quiet fray. “Eva told me you’re working here now. Delivery?” She nodded, handing him the glass. His fingers brushed against hers, and a spark ignited, fierce and unfamiliar. “Business needs to keep moving.” “And how’s that working out?” Lucien arched an eyebrow, amusement and curiosity mingling behind the sharpness of his features. “Better than expectations, I suppose,” she shot back, determination creasing her brow. “But I’m not here to discuss me.” “Then what are we discussing?” His tone lowered, serious now, the casual banter stripped away. The air shifted, thickening between them, catalyzed by all the hurt. A myriad of memories replayed in her mind — nights spent in a haze of laughter, quiet confessions over whiskey, the inevitable fallout. A tangled mess she wasn’t ready to untangle tonight. “What’s this really about, Lucien?” She stayed firm, meeting his gaze with a challenging stare. “You didn’t just drop by for old times’ sake.” “True.” He shifted, lightening the mood with a gravity she didn’t expect. “Seems I knew you well back then. You always anticipated the question before it arrived.” “Stop dodging, Frenchman. You don’t waltz back into my life after three years unless you need something,” she pressed, exasperation breaking through. “Touché.” He crossed his legs casually, as if they were in a café rather than her cramped flat. “I’m in need of your expertise. You’ve become quite the scholar in the supernatural, haven’t you?” “Depends on the day.” She leaned against the counter, arms crossed. “And why should I help you? Last time I checked, you left without explanation.” A flicker of regret crossed his features, but he recovered too quickly. “You misunderstand my intentions.” “Then enlighten me,” she replied, frustration bubbling again; the years apart vanished, and she found herself back at their last bitter clash. Lucien took a breath, his eyes searching hers. “I wouldn’t have come if it wasn’t important. I need a partner. Someone with your skill set.” “Partnership or relief from guilt?” She intercepted his words, ready to put her wall back up. “A partnership.” He stood, the distance between them shrinking. “I wouldn’t ask if I had anyone else to turn to.” “Not with the past we have.” The tremor in her voice betrayed her still-simmering feelings. He took a step closer, his cane resting at his side. “The past doesn’t matter if we can create a better future. Together.” “Together?” Her pulse raced, the echo of those shared nights lingering, temptingly close but fraught with trepidation. “Yes.” An earnest plea lingered in his voice, warmth washing over the icy grip of their history. “Help me, Rory. For once, leave the past where it belongs.” The heat between them ignited, a precarious dance on the edge of something raw, something familiar. “Maybe.” She turned her gaze toward the window, avoiding the pulse of his stare. “But I need the details. Why the sudden urgency?” “Let’s talk particulars.” He nodded, a flicker of hope lighting his expression. As she turned back to meet his gaze, the air felt electric, heavy with unspoken desires and complicated histories they couldn’t shake off. And while they both teetered on the brink, there remained a pulse, a heartbeat that echoed through years apart, tethering them in ways each wanted to deny. “Alright then,” she said, brushing aside the warmth. “Let’s talk.” He stepped closer, the world outside fading as the past merged with the present, leaving them cracked open and exposed, poised on the edge of an uncertain future.
total_cost0.001032

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags28
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He leaned slightly [slightly]"
1"She stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.596
leniency1
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.071
86.34% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1098
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
2"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1098
totalAiIsms31
found
0
word"echoed"
count2
1
word"furrowed"
count1
2
word"trepidation"
count2
3
word"chill"
count1
4
word"raced"
count2
5
word"pulse"
count4
6
word"unraveling"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count3
8
word"tension"
count1
9
word"flicker"
count3
10
word"unspoken"
count2
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"silence"
count1
13
word"intensity"
count1
14
word"eyebrow"
count1
15
word"simmering"
count1
16
word"echo"
count1
17
word"dance"
count1
18
word"familiar"
count1
19
word"electric"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"furrowed"
2"trepidation"
3"chill"
4"raced"
5"pulse"
6"unraveling"
7"warmth"
8"tension"
9"flicker"
10"unspoken"
11"weight"
12"silence"
13"intensity"
14"eyebrow"
15"simmering"
16"echo"
17"dance"
18"familiar"
19"electric"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"a flicker of hope"
56.69% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells5
narrationSentences61
matches
0"a jolt of trepidation"
1"A flicker of nostalgia"
2"A flicker of regret"
3"t with trepidation"
4"a flicker of hope"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences61
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences80
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1096
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions5
wordCount817
uniqueNames2
maxNameDensity0.49
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
London1
Lucien4
persons
0"Lucien"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if daring her to break the fragile spell"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1096
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
83.48% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean22.37
std9.89
cv0.442
sampleLengths
047
134
216
313
442
59
629
719
839
923
1029
1132
1221
139
1417
1523
1620
1716
1819
1927
2013
2119
228
2318
245
2519
2619
2715
2843
2924
3027
3122
3234
3325
3416
3522
3625
3716
3820
3915
4023
4117
4228
4316
4423
4512
4650
4710
4828
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs138
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences80
ratio0.063
matches
0"“Rory.” He leaned slightly on his ivory-handled cane, the faintest hint of a smirk unraveling on his lips — a careful mask over an uncertain greeting."
1"He entered, surveying the chaos of her flat — papers strewn about, books piled precariously."
2"“The golden empress; you always loved a good pun.”"
3"A myriad of memories replayed in her mind — nights spent in a haze of laughter, quiet confessions over whiskey, the inevitable fallout."
4"“Then enlighten me,” she replied, frustration bubbling again; the years apart vanished, and she found herself back at their last bitter clash."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount819
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.03785103785103785
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.01098901098901099
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences80
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences80
mean13.7
std6.72
cv0.491
sampleLengths
029
19
24
35
418
516
68
76
82
913
1023
1119
129
1326
143
1511
168
1711
1815
1913
2023
2129
2224
238
2421
259
267
2710
2823
2920
3011
315
3219
3323
344
3513
3619
378
386
3912
405
4119
4212
437
4415
4511
4623
479
4815
499
85.83% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.5375
totalSentences80
uniqueOpeners43
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences60
matches
0"She paused, mid-reach for a"
1"She rarely had visitors."
2"She brushed her fingers through"
3"Her voice came out steadier"
4"He leaned slightly on his"
5"She almost scoffed, but the"
6"She stepped back, her discomfort"
7"He entered, surveying the chaos"
8"he commented, his gaze flicking"
9"She forced herself to smile,"
10"She crossed her arms, stubbornly"
11"His amber eye met hers,"
12"He broke the silence, tilting"
13"She pushed off the frame"
14"He watched her, studying the"
15"She poured a glass, the"
16"She nodded, handing him the"
17"His fingers brushed against hers,"
18"she shot back, determination creasing"
19"His tone lowered, serious now,"
ratio0.567
1.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences60
matches
0"Rory tossed aside her delivery"
1"She paused, mid-reach for a"
2"She rarely had visitors."
3"The second knock came firmer"
4"She brushed her fingers through"
5"A chill raced through her"
6"Lucien stood on the other"
7"The low hum of London’s"
8"Her voice came out steadier"
9"He leaned slightly on his"
10"She almost scoffed, but the"
11"The tension in the doorway"
12"She stepped back, her discomfort"
13"He entered, surveying the chaos"
14"Ptolemy, her tabby, slinked around"
15"he commented, his gaze flicking"
16"She forced herself to smile,"
17"Lucien took in the room"
18"She crossed her arms, stubbornly"
19"A flicker of nostalgia sparked"
ratio0.917
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
49.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The second knock came firmer this time, a deliberate insistence that sent a jolt of trepidation through her."
1"Lucien stood on the other side, draped in a tailored charcoal suit that admired his frame, slicked-back platinum hair catching the overhead light."
2"The low hum of London’s streets fell silent in the backdrop, as though the city itself held its breath."
17.86% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags28
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"She stepped back, her discomfort threading through her chest"
1"she shot back, determination creasing her brow"
2"she pressed, exasperation breaking through"
3"He crossed, as if they were in a café rather than her cramped flat"
4"She intercepted, ready to put her wall back up"
5"He nodded, a flicker of hope lighting his expression"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he commented (comment)"
1"she pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.085
leniency0.17
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.085
72.7187%