Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0W3W7NZH7D7T7X6MBWCBN

Run Details

Duration:
34.7s
Cost:
$0.001109

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into the abandoned Tube station, its damp air thick with dust and echoes. The flickering fluorescent lights cast a ghostly glow over cracked tiles and rusted signs, remnants of a world long forgotten. She adjusted the worn leather strap of her watch, the sting of memories pressing at her mind. “The body’s over here.” Constable Reed gestured toward a shadowy corner, his voice tremulous with unease. Quinn nodded, her eyes scanning the graffiti-laden walls, the remnants of life scribbled in vibrant colors. Something felt off, a low hum of discord vibrating beneath her skin. She approached the body, an unkempt man sprawled on the ground, a glint of silver—too pristine—caught her eye. “What was he doing down here?” Reed shifted uncomfortably, the furtive flick of his gaze betraying uncertainty. “Some squatters come here from time to time. We think he might have been... living here.” Quinn crouched beside the corpse, noting the grimy clothes and a peculiar bruise blooming on the man’s neck, contorted as if in response to something other than physical violence. “Looks like more than a homeless man. This bruise.” “It’s just a shank gone bad,” Reed insisted, positioning his pen over his notepad. “Unusual circumstances can give rise to all sorts of injuries in these parts.” Quinn straightened, absorbing the scene. “But no weapon found, no signs of struggle. Why leave him here, of all places?” A chill swept through the station like an icy breath. As the wind creaked through the hollow tunnels, Quinn caught sight of something glimmering beside the victim’s hand. She leaned closer, tugging on her gloves, revealing a small brass compass, its surface marred with verdigris. “Is that…” Reed frowned. “A compass?” “Not just any compass,” she murmured, running her fingers over the protective sigils etched into its face. “This is a Veil Compass. It points toward supernatural rifts.” “A compass? Here?” His skepticism hung in the air, a mist clinging to the shadows. Quinn cradled the compass as if it were delicate glass. The overpowering scent of mold faded, and something else revealed itself—a strange heaviness, a pulse in the stagnant atmosphere. Mercurial energy tingled in her fingertips. “Who’d risk carrying something like this into a slum?” “Someone with a reason, I suppose. Maybe he was trying to find something.” Quinn squinted, staring into the darkness beyond the body. A flash of movement in the corner of her eye urged her to stand. “Feel that?” Reed blinked, the uncertainty deepening in his furrowed brow. “Something doesn’t fit. The energy here… It’s heavier than just a body drop. Look at how the compass needle spins.” It quivered, the tip oscillating wildly. “Maybe it's malfunctioning?” Reed offered, though reluctance smeared his tone. Quinn glared at the compass, her instincts urging her to follow the flickering course it traced. “No, it feels more like it’s sensing something. Look—” she waved the compass toward the tunnel entrance, “this is our path.” Reed shifted beside her, hesitance still written in his posture, but the allure of mystery weighed against his resolve. “Think what you want,” Quinn said, already striding toward the mouth of the tunnel, her footsteps loud against the concrete. “But we’ll figure out what happened here. The city has secrets, and sometimes, they bleed into the dark.” The corridor curled away, draped in shadows that whispered and flickered as if mocking their intrusion. A chill clung to the air, damp and electric, and the pulse of the compass quickened in her palm as they ventured deeper into the underground maze. “We shouldn’t be here, Quinn,” Reed mumbled, inching closer to her. “What’ll the higher-ups say if we go off-piste?” “The higher-ups don’t speak to the unexplainable,” she countered, steel lacing her voice. “I lost Morris because I followed the rules. I’m not ‘following’ this time.” Reed’s eyes widened, and she sensed his hesitation. “Let’s just stick with the facts,” he said, his back stiffening. Quinn pushed aside her irritation and pressed forward. The compass focused, the needle pointing with fierce determination, a silent guide promising that something awaited—a revelation, a confrontation. They navigated through the debris-strewn path, Quinn’s mind racing with questions. A flicker of movement darted in the shadows again—a figure, perhaps? She squinted into the darkness, gripping the compass. “Over there!” she hissed, tugging on Reed’s sleeve. But the figure slipped further away into an adjoining passage. Quinn hesitated, observing the silence that followed. The oblivion plunged too deep. “Just a shadow…” Reed murmured, glancing toward the tunnel’s mouth. Panic surged in his voice. “Or a witness,” Quinn replied, summoning all her focus, mastering her instincts to hone in on the strange energy pulsing from within. “Stay sharp.” The tunnel narrowed, each step forward thick with expectation. A sense of urgency enveloped her. She needed answers. They wrapped around her like the press of an unseen hand, urging her on. Ahead, a flickering light danced like a will-o’-the-wisp. “See that?” Quinn pointed, a slight tremor in her voice betraying her curiosity. “They’re probably just some vagrants,” Reed scoffed, but his gaze lingered. “Let’s ask questions before we assume,” she insisted, taking a step into the light. The compass whirred, the needle steadying, revealing warmth and secrets; different from the chill enshrining the corpse. As they turned the corner, a makeshift candle flickered on crates rusted with age. Four figures huddled, whispering in low tones, their faces half-shadowed. Two held an ancient tome; one gripped a small dagger, the other a roll of parchment tightly. Quinn raised the compass, the needle now locked onto the figures. Her heart raced alongside the growing dread. “Who are they?” “Could be gang members, we should call for backup,” Reed stammered, already reaching for his radio. “Wait.” Quinn shot her hand out. A murmur of laughter erupted from the group, light spilling into the darkness, teasing like the flickering shadows. “What are you looking for?” one of the figures asked, her voice silky, enchanting. “We… we’re just here for information.” Reed’s voice quivered, glancing back toward Quinn, the determination in her eyes fueling his resolve. The woman’s gaze slid to the compass, lingering over the sigils embossed on its surface. “You shouldn’t be here,” she warned, a smirk curling at the corner of her lips. “It’s not safe.” Quinn took a step forward, curiosity mingling with resolve. “What do you know about what happened above?” A flicker of acknowledgment passed between the figures, an unspoken intrigue surfacing. “Knowledge comes at a cost,” replied the woman, the dagger glimmering. Quinn’s gut churned, but her mind raced. She wouldn’t be deterred. “I need answers.” And somewhere deep in the darkness, just beyond reach, the truth waited to unravel.
total_cost0.0011091

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"a flickering light danced like [like]"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.571
leniency1
rawRatio0.042
effectiveRatio0.042
95.57% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1128
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1128
totalAiIsms35
found
0
word"echoes"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"glint"
count1
3
word"pristine"
count1
4
word"chill"
count3
5
word"etched"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count2
7
word"furrowed"
count1
8
word"quivered"
count2
9
word"traced"
count1
10
word"resolve"
count3
11
word"footsteps"
count1
12
word"flickered"
count2
13
word"electric"
count1
14
word"quickened"
count1
15
word"navigated"
count1
16
word"racing"
count1
17
word"flicker"
count2
18
word"silence"
count1
19
word"sense of"
count1
20
word"warmth"
count1
21
word"raced"
count2
22
word"unspoken"
count1
23
word"intrigue"
count1
24
word"churned"
count1
25
word"unravel"
count1
highlights
0"echoes"
1"scanning"
2"glint"
3"pristine"
4"chill"
5"etched"
6"pulse"
7"furrowed"
8"quivered"
9"traced"
10"resolve"
11"footsteps"
12"flickered"
13"electric"
14"quickened"
15"navigated"
16"racing"
17"flicker"
18"silence"
19"sense of"
20"warmth"
21"raced"
22"unspoken"
23"intrigue"
24"churned"
25"unravel"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"hung in the air"
91.22% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences74
matches
0"s with unease"
1"A sense of urgency"
2"g with resolve"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences74
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1114
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
35.95% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount833
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity2.28
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn19
Tube1
Reed14
Panic1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Reed"
3"Panic"
places(empty)
globalScore0.36
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if mocking their intrusion"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1114
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"promising that something"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean23.21
std11.65
cv0.502
sampleLengths
054
14
240
324
427
538
627
720
845
96
1027
1115
1244
1313
1425
159
1626
1710
1837
1919
2038
2143
2219
2326
2419
2527
2630
278
2822
2915
3024
3132
3221
3311
3431
3541
3621
3716
386
3918
4014
4121
4233
4317
4412
4511
4614
4714
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs160
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences93
ratio0.065
matches
0"She approached the body, an unkempt man sprawled on the ground, a glint of silver—too pristine—caught her eye."
1"The overpowering scent of mold faded, and something else revealed itself—a strange heaviness, a pulse in the stagnant atmosphere."
2"The compass focused, the needle pointing with fierce determination, a silent guide promising that something awaited—a revelation, a confrontation."
3"A flicker of movement darted in the shadows again—a figure, perhaps?"
4"The compass whirred, the needle steadying, revealing warmth and secrets; different from the chill enshrining the corpse."
5"Two held an ancient tome; one gripped a small dagger, the other a roll of parchment tightly."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount642
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.0264797507788162
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.006230529595015576
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean11.98
std5.75
cv0.48
sampleLengths
017
120
217
34
412
516
612
718
86
911
1016
1129
129
1314
1413
155
1615
1710
1818
1917
204
212
2217
2310
2415
2510
2619
276
289
2913
309
3114
322
339
3426
3510
3616
3721
3819
3920
4018
4116
4227
4311
448
4513
4613
478
4811
498
78.85% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.4731182795698925
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners44
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences73
matches
0"She adjusted the worn leather"
1"She approached the body, an"
2"She leaned closer, tugging on"
3"she murmured, running her fingers"
4"His skepticism hung in the"
5"It quivered, the tip oscillating"
6"she waved the compass toward"
7"she countered, steel lacing her"
8"he said, his back stiffening"
9"They navigated through the debris-strewn"
10"She squinted into the darkness,"
11"she hissed, tugging on Reed’s"
12"She needed answers."
13"They wrapped around her like"
14"she insisted, taking a step"
15"Her heart raced alongside the"
16"she warned, a smirk curling"
17"She wouldn’t be deterred."
ratio0.247
28.49% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences73
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into"
1"The flickering fluorescent lights cast"
2"She adjusted the worn leather"
3"Constable Reed gestured toward a"
4"Quinn nodded, her eyes scanning"
5"Something felt off, a low"
6"She approached the body, an"
7"Reed shifted uncomfortably, the furtive"
8"Quinn crouched beside the corpse,"
9"Reed insisted, positioning his pen"
10"Quinn straightened, absorbing the scene."
11"A chill swept through the"
12"She leaned closer, tugging on"
13"she murmured, running her fingers"
14"His skepticism hung in the"
15"Quinn cradled the compass as"
16"The overpowering scent of mold"
17"Quinn squinted, staring into the"
18"A flash of movement in"
19"Reed blinked, the uncertainty deepening"
ratio0.863
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
99.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Quinn crouched beside the corpse, noting the grimy clothes and a peculiar bruise blooming on the man’s neck, contorted as if in response to something other than…"
1"The corridor curled away, draped in shadows that whispered and flickered as if mocking their intrusion."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"His skepticism hung, a mist clinging to the shadows"
1"It quivered, the tip oscillating wildly"
2"she countered, steel lacing her voice"
3"he said, his back stiffening"
4"Reed scoffed, but his gaze lingered"
5"the figures asked, her voice silky, enchanting"
6"replied the woman, the dagger glimmering"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"Reed insisted (insist)"
1"she murmured (murmur)"
2"Reed mumbled (mumble)"
3"she hissed (hiss)"
4"Reed murmured (murmur)"
5"she insisted (insist)"
6"Reed stammered (stammer)"
7"she warned (warn)"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.31
leniency0.619
rawRatio0.615
effectiveRatio0.381
73.2106%