| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 24 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "a flickering light danced like [like]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.571 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.042 | | effectiveRatio | 0.042 | |
| 95.57% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1128 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1128 | | totalAiIsms | 35 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "echoes" | | 1 | "scanning" | | 2 | "glint" | | 3 | "pristine" | | 4 | "chill" | | 5 | "etched" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "furrowed" | | 8 | "quivered" | | 9 | "traced" | | 10 | "resolve" | | 11 | "footsteps" | | 12 | "flickered" | | 13 | "electric" | | 14 | "quickened" | | 15 | "navigated" | | 16 | "racing" | | 17 | "flicker" | | 18 | "silence" | | 19 | "sense of" | | 20 | "warmth" | | 21 | "raced" | | 22 | "unspoken" | | 23 | "intrigue" | | 24 | "churned" | | 25 | "unravel" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes widened" | | 1 | "hung in the air" |
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| 91.22% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 3 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "s with unease" | | 1 | "A sense of urgency" | | 2 | "g with resolve" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 93 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1114 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 35.95% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 36 | | wordCount | 833 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 2.28 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 19 | | Tube | 1 | | Reed | 14 | | Panic | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Reed" | | 3 | "Panic" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.36 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if mocking their intrusion" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1114 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "promising that something" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 48 | | mean | 23.21 | | std | 11.65 | | cv | 0.502 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 54 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 40 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 38 | | 6 | 27 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 45 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 44 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 26 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 37 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 38 | | 21 | 43 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 26 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 27 | | 26 | 30 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 22 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 24 | | 31 | 32 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 31 | | 35 | 41 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 33 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 14 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 160 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 93 | | ratio | 0.065 | | matches | | 0 | "She approached the body, an unkempt man sprawled on the ground, a glint of silver—too pristine—caught her eye." | | 1 | "The overpowering scent of mold faded, and something else revealed itself—a strange heaviness, a pulse in the stagnant atmosphere." | | 2 | "The compass focused, the needle pointing with fierce determination, a silent guide promising that something awaited—a revelation, a confrontation." | | 3 | "A flicker of movement darted in the shadows again—a figure, perhaps?" | | 4 | "The compass whirred, the needle steadying, revealing warmth and secrets; different from the chill enshrining the corpse." | | 5 | "Two held an ancient tome; one gripped a small dagger, the other a roll of parchment tightly." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 642 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 17 | | adverbRatio | 0.0264797507788162 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006230529595015576 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 93 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 93 | | mean | 11.98 | | std | 5.75 | | cv | 0.48 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 29 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 26 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 27 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 78.85% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.4731182795698925 | | totalSentences | 93 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the worn leather" | | 1 | "She approached the body, an" | | 2 | "She leaned closer, tugging on" | | 3 | "she murmured, running her fingers" | | 4 | "His skepticism hung in the" | | 5 | "It quivered, the tip oscillating" | | 6 | "she waved the compass toward" | | 7 | "she countered, steel lacing her" | | 8 | "he said, his back stiffening" | | 9 | "They navigated through the debris-strewn" | | 10 | "She squinted into the darkness," | | 11 | "she hissed, tugging on Reed’s" | | 12 | "She needed answers." | | 13 | "They wrapped around her like" | | 14 | "she insisted, taking a step" | | 15 | "Her heart raced alongside the" | | 16 | "she warned, a smirk curling" | | 17 | "She wouldn’t be deterred." |
| | ratio | 0.247 | |
| 28.49% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 63 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into" | | 1 | "The flickering fluorescent lights cast" | | 2 | "She adjusted the worn leather" | | 3 | "Constable Reed gestured toward a" | | 4 | "Quinn nodded, her eyes scanning" | | 5 | "Something felt off, a low" | | 6 | "She approached the body, an" | | 7 | "Reed shifted uncomfortably, the furtive" | | 8 | "Quinn crouched beside the corpse," | | 9 | "Reed insisted, positioning his pen" | | 10 | "Quinn straightened, absorbing the scene." | | 11 | "A chill swept through the" | | 12 | "She leaned closer, tugging on" | | 13 | "she murmured, running her fingers" | | 14 | "His skepticism hung in the" | | 15 | "Quinn cradled the compass as" | | 16 | "The overpowering scent of mold" | | 17 | "Quinn squinted, staring into the" | | 18 | "A flash of movement in" | | 19 | "Reed blinked, the uncertainty deepening" |
| | ratio | 0.863 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 99.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn crouched beside the corpse, noting the grimy clothes and a peculiar bruise blooming on the man’s neck, contorted as if in response to something other than…" | | 1 | "The corridor curled away, draped in shadows that whispered and flickered as if mocking their intrusion." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 24 | | uselessAdditionCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "His skepticism hung, a mist clinging to the shadows" | | 1 | "It quivered, the tip oscillating wildly" | | 2 | "she countered, steel lacing her voice" | | 3 | "he said, his back stiffening" | | 4 | "Reed scoffed, but his gaze lingered" | | 5 | "the figures asked, her voice silky, enchanting" | | 6 | "replied the woman, the dagger glimmering" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 8 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Reed insisted (insist)" | | 1 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Reed mumbled (mumble)" | | 3 | "she hissed (hiss)" | | 4 | "Reed murmured (murmur)" | | 5 | "she insisted (insist)" | | 6 | "Reed stammered (stammer)" | | 7 | "she warned (warn)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.31 | | leniency | 0.619 | | rawRatio | 0.615 | | effectiveRatio | 0.381 | |