Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0W8J7M4XH3WR9A3ZK69P7

Run Details

Duration:
8m 23s
Cost:
$0.009323
Provider:
AtlasCloud

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid back with a heavy clunk. Rory pulled the door open and the smell of cumin and fried onions from the curry house below rolled up the stairs to meet her. Lucien stood on the landing. Rain dripped from the hem of his charcoal suit onto the worn linoleum. His platinum hair remained slicked back despite the weather, not a strand out of place. The ivory handle of his cane gleamed under the flickering hallway light. Rory gripped the doorframe. Her knuckles turned white. The crescent scar on her left wrist itched, a phantom pain from a childhood fall that always flared when her pulse spiked. Lucien looked past her shoulder into the cramped flat. Stacks of books and scrolls covered every surface. Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, wound himself around Lucien's polished shoes and let out a low yowl. You look well, Rory. His voice carried the smooth cadence of Marseille, softened by years in London. He did not step forward. He waited for permission he knew he did not have. Rory crossed her arms over her chest. The movement pulled her black hair across her cheek. She tucked it behind her ear. You look dry. Lucien tapped the tip of his cane against the floor. The sound echoed in the narrow stairwell. Umbrellas are cumbersome. I prefer to let the rain decide where it lands. You always did like making a drama out of nothing. She stepped back. The action invited him in without a word. Lucien crossed the threshold. He filled the small space immediately. The scent of ozone and expensive cologne replaced the curry smell. He stopped in the centre of the room, navigating around a pile of research notes on the floor with practiced ease. Eva is not here. I know. I checked the building twice. I came for you. Rory moved to the small kitchenette. She put the kettle on. The electric hum filled the silence. She kept her back to him. Her reflection in the dark window showed her bright blue eyes wide, betraying the calm set of her jaw. Why. The question hung in the air. Lucien ran a gloved hand over the spine of a book on the table. Dust motes danced in the light from the single bulb overhead. There is a situation. One that requires your specific brand of lateral thinking. I told you I was done. No more favours. No more running errands for the underworld. You fled Cardiff. You fled Evan. You hide above a bar and deliver noodles for pennies. This is not living, Rory. This is waiting. Rory turned around. She leaned against the counter. The laminate dug into her lower back. You don't get to judge how I live. You left. You walked away when things got difficult. Lucien turned. His heterochromatic eyes caught the light, one amber, one black. The contrast made his gaze unsettling, like looking into a deep well. I left to keep you alive. Your ex-boyfriend was not the only threat. Your proximity to me paints a target on your back. So you decided for me. I made a calculation. You made a choice. The kettle clicked off. Rory did not move to make the tea. The steam curled up between them. Lucien took a step closer. The height difference became apparent. He towered over her five foot six inches, but she did not retreat. I am here now. The calculation has changed. Nothing changes. You show up in a suit worth more than my rent, dripping on Eva's floor, and expect me to jump. I expect you to listen. Lucien reached into his jacket. Rory's hand flew to the knife block on the counter. Her fingers brushed the cold steel of a handle. Lucien froze. He slowly withdrew a folded piece of paper instead of a weapon. He placed it on the table. Look at it. Rory walked over. She kept her eyes on his face until she reached the table. She picked up the paper. It was a photograph. Grainy. Taken from a distance. It showed her leaving the Golden Empress restaurant. The timestamp was from yesterday. Who took this. Someone who knows you are connected to me. They want to use you to get to me. Or they want to hurt me by taking you. Rory crumpled the paper in her fist. The sound of tearing paper was sharp in the quiet room. Then leave. Go back to your shadows. I am not your weakness, Lucien. You are not a weakness. You are a variable I did not account for. That sounds like an insult. It sounds like admiration. Lucien moved closer. He reached out. His hand hovered near her arm. He did not touch the scar. He stopped just above it. The heat from his palm radiated against her skin. The air in the flat grew heavy. Ptolemy jumped onto the sofa and began to wash his paw, indifferent to the tension. I spent six months tracking every threat in this city to ensure you remained invisible. I failed. Now I stand here. You should have stayed away. And let them take you. I can handle myself. You deliver food. You hide behind three deadbolts. You flinch when a car backfires. Rory shoved the crumpled photo into his chest. He caught it without looking down. Get out. No. I said get out. Lucien pocketed the paper. He leaned in. His breath ghosted over her ear. If I leave, they will find you tonight. If I stay, we have a chance. You don't get to decide that. I do. Because I am the only one who knows what hunts you. Rory pushed against his chest. The fabric of his suit was solid under her palms. He did not move. He stood like a statue carved from ice and smoke. She looked up into those mismatched eyes. The amber one seemed to glow in the dim light. The black one swallowed the reflection of the room. Why come back now. Why not send a message. Why stand here in my friend's flat. Lucien's hand finally moved. He touched her wrist. His thumb traced the crescent scar. The skin tingled where he made contact. Because I missed you. The admission landed heavy. Rory's breath hitched. She pulled her hand away. The loss of contact left her skin cold. That is not a reason. That is a liability. It is the only reason that matters. Rory walked to the window. She looked out at Brick Lane. The streetlights blurred through the rain on the glass. Cars passed below, tyres hissing on wet asphalt. She saw her own reflection again. Her shoulders were tense. Her hands shook slightly. If you stay, you sleep on the floor. Lucien loosened his tie. He draped his jacket over the back of a chair covered in scrolls. Acceptable. And you do not give orders. We shall see. Rory turned back to him. He stood by the table, rolling up his sleeves. The movement revealed forearms marked with faint, silvery lines. Runes. Old magic. He caught her looking. You still watch me. I watch for threats. You watch me. Rory walked past him to the sofa. She sat down. Ptolemy moved to make space. She pulled her knees to her chest. Talk. Tell me what wants me. Lucien picked up his cane. He twisted the ivory handle. A click echoed. The blade inside gleamed for a second before he locked it back. There is a faction in Avaros. They believe my father's bloodline holds the key to opening the gates. They think you hold the key to me. I am human. You are the anchor. That makes no sense. It does not need to make sense. It needs to be survived. Rory rested her chin on her knees. She studied him. The sharp line of his jaw. The way he held himself, ready to strike. The way he looked at her, like she was the only solid thing in a shifting world. You could have told me. You would not have listened. You were right. Lucien smiled. It was a small thing, barely there, but it changed his face. It softened the edges. I am often right. Do not let it go to your head. Too late. Rory stood up. She walked to the kitchen and finally made the tea. She poured two cups. She brought one to him. He took it. Their fingers brushed. The contact lingered. Drink. You look like you need it. Lucien took a sip. He winced. It is boiling. You look like you need to feel something. Lucien set the cup down on a stack of papers. He stepped into her space. He did not touch her. He just stood there. Close enough to count the lashes framing her blue eyes. Close enough to smell the rain on her skin mixed with the scent of old books. I am not leaving again, Rory. You say that now. I mean it. People mean things until they don't. I am not people. No. You are not. Rory reached out. She touched the lapel of his shirt. The fabric was wet. She smoothed it down. Her hand rested over his heart. It beat steady. Slow. Not human. Prove it. Lucien covered her hand with his. He pressed it harder against his chest. Give me time. How much. As much as you need. Rory pulled her hand away. She turned toward the bedroom. Take the floor. I am going to sleep. Rory. She stopped at the door. She did not turn around. Do not wake me up unless the building is on fire. Understood. Rory closed the bedroom door. She leaned against it. She listened to the sound of Lucien moving around the flat. The clink of the tea cup. The soft thud of his cane being set down. The rustle of him settling on the floor. She slid down the door until she sat on the wood. She pressed her palm to the crescent scar on her wrist. It stopped itching.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
94.04% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1679
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
67.24% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1679
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count2
2
word"navigating"
count1
3
word"practiced ease"
count1
4
word"electric"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"variable"
count1
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"ensure"
count1
9
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"echoed"
2"navigating"
3"practiced ease"
4"electric"
5"silence"
6"variable"
7"tension"
8"ensure"
9"traced"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences272
matches(empty)
85.08% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount9
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences272
filterMatches
0"look"
1"decide"
2"know"
3"watch"
4"think"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences272
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1679
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions88
wordCount1679
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.67
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Eva3
Lucien21
Rory24
Marseille1
London1
Cardiff1
Evan1
Golden1
Empress1
Brick1
Lane1
Avaros1
Ptolemy3
You28
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Rory"
3"Evan"
4"Ptolemy"
5"You"
places
0"Marseille"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
3"Brick"
4"Lane"
5"Avaros"
globalScore0.666
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences123
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1679
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences272
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs112
mean14.99
std15.37
cv1.025
sampleLengths
079
130
233
34
428
522
63
717
813
910
1053
114
1211
1342
141
1531
1613
1716
1824
1915
2017
2124
2223
235
244
254
2641
278
2822
295
3044
313
3242
333
3426
3518
3613
3714
385
394
4054
4121
425
435
444
4514
4614
472
481
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences272
matches
0"are connected"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs342
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences272
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1679
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.026206075044669448
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.005955926146515783
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences272
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences272
mean6.17
std3.82
cv0.619
sampleLengths
09
125
25
313
415
512
64
74
822
99
108
1116
124
1313
145
1510
167
179
186
193
2010
217
223
2310
2410
253
268
274
286
2911
3021
314
322
335
344
356
365
376
386
3919
401
416
4214
4311
444
459
466
473
487
493
34.56% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats42
diversityRatio0.22426470588235295
totalSentences272
uniqueOpeners61
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences245
matches(empty)
ratio0
14.29% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount126
totalSentences245
matches
0"His platinum hair remained slicked"
1"Her knuckles turned white."
2"You look well, Rory."
3"His voice carried the smooth"
4"He did not step forward."
5"He waited for permission he"
6"She tucked it behind her"
7"You look dry."
8"I prefer to let the"
9"You always did like making"
10"She stepped back."
11"He filled the small space"
12"He stopped in the centre"
13"I checked the building twice."
14"I came for you."
15"She put the kettle on."
16"She kept her back to"
17"Her reflection in the dark"
18"I told you I was"
19"You fled Cardiff."
ratio0.514
21.22% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount215
totalSentences245
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid back"
1"Rory pulled the door open"
2"Lucien stood on the landing."
3"Rain dripped from the hem"
4"His platinum hair remained slicked"
5"The ivory handle of his"
6"Rory gripped the doorframe."
7"Her knuckles turned white."
8"The crescent scar on her"
9"Lucien looked past her shoulder"
10"Stacks of books and scrolls"
11"Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, wound"
12"You look well, Rory."
13"His voice carried the smooth"
14"He did not step forward."
15"He waited for permission he"
16"Rory crossed her arms over"
17"The movement pulled her black"
18"She tucked it behind her"
19"You look dry."
ratio0.878
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount7
totalSentences245
matches
0"Now I stand here."
1"If I leave, they will"
2"If I stay, we have"
3"Because I am the only"
4"Because I missed you."
5"If you stay, you sleep"
6"As much as you need."
ratio0.029
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.8813%