Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0W9XZRCEG0GR0EBZRBE09

Run Details

Duration:
20.1s
Cost:
$0.007748
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Ptolemy hissed, his back an arched ridge of ginger fur, as the three deadbolts rattled in sequence. Aurora wiped flour from her apron onto a tea towel, her pulse spiking against the underside of her jaw. The wood of the door groaned, yielding to a key that shouldn't have been in circulation. Lucien Moreau leaned against the doorframe, his charcoal suit absorbing the weak light of the Brick Lane hallway. He tapped the ivory handle of his cane against the floorboards. The rhythm mimicked a heartbeat. "The locks have changed, Rory. The fourth one resisted." Aurora gripped the edge of the laminate counter. Sunlight filtered through the grime of the window, catching the heterochromatic shift in his eyes—one the color of bottled honey, the other an endless, obsidian void. "Three years and you still haven't learned how to knock." Lucien stepped inside without an invitation. He swept a stack of ancient scrolls from the only armchair to the floor, reclaiming the space with the casual arrogance of a cat. The scent of rain and expensive sandalwood clung to his wool lapels, cutting through the heavy aroma of cumin rising from the curry house below. "Knocking alerts the neighborhood to one's presence. I prefer the silence of a houseguest who already knows where the gin is kept." He reached for a glass on the sideboard. His fingers, long and deceptively elegant, brushed against the small crescent-shaped scar on Aurora’s wrist as she moved to shield the bottle. The contact surged through her like a live wire. She didn't pull away. She stared at the platinum hair slicked back from his forehead, noting the new line of exhaustion near his jaw. "You don't get to be a guest here. Not after the warehouse in Marseille. Not after you left me holding a bag of cursed relics and a fake passport." Lucien’s amber eye darkened. He poured a finger of clear liquid, the ivory cane leaning against his thigh. "The passport worked, did it not? You reached London. You found your little sanctuary above the spices." Aurora rounded the counter, her shoulder-length black hair swinging like a pendulum. She planted her hands on the table, leaning into his space until she could smell the smoke on his breath. "I reached London with a target on my back and a demon hunter in my peripheral vision for six months. You didn't leave because of the relics, Luc. You left because you saw me bleeding and realized I wasn't an asset anymore. I was a liability." Lucien set the glass down with a sharp *clack*. He stood, his five-foot-eleven frame towering over her, forcing her to tilt her chin back. The black eye, the one inherited from the pits of Avaros, seemed to swirl with ink. "I left because staying meant watching you die. There is a distinction, though I suspect your temper prevents you from seeing it." His hand moved, a blur of motion that ended with his thumb tracing the line of her jaw. The heat of him was unnatural, a byproduct of the blood that shouldn't exist in human veins. Aurora’s breath hitched. She hated the way her body betrayed her, the way her skin hummed under his touch despite the fury vibrating in her chest. "You’re shaking, Laila." "Don't call me that. Laila died in France." "She is hiding under an apron and a thick layer of Cardiff resentment. But she is still there." He leaned in, his lips hovering inches from her ear. The air in the cramped flat grew heavy, pressurized by the sudden proximity. Ptolemy retreated under the sofa, sensing the shift in the room's energy. "Why are you here, Lucien? The information brokers don't travel this far east unless there’s a price on someone’s head." Lucien pulled back just enough to look her in the eye. The black one reflected her own wide-eyed stare. He looked at her mouth, then back to her eyes, his restraint a visible, physical thing. "Evan found the trail. He’s in London." The name acted like a dousing of ice water. Aurora’s blood ran cold, the memory of bruises and quiet threats surfacing like silt in a disturbed pond. She stepped back, the distance between them feeling miles wide. "How? I didn't tell Eva. I didn't tell my parents." "He didn't use human means. He paid a scryer in Bristol. A man with a talent for finding things that wish to stay lost." Lucien took a step forward, closing the gap she’d just created. He didn't reach for her this time. He held his cane like a scepter, his knuckles white against the ivory. "I killed the scryer, of course. But the information was already sold. Your ex-bastard has friends in the Low Circles, Rory. Friends who owe him favors for the souls he helped them harvest in Wales." Aurora felt the room spinning. She grabbed a chair for balance. The mundane reality of her life—delivery runs for the Golden Empress, pints at Silas’ bar—shattered. "And you? What’s your stake in this? You don't do charity." Lucien’s face shifted, the mask of the cool Frenchman slipping for a fraction of a second. A raw, jagged hunger flickered in his amber eye. He reached out, his hand hovering over her shoulder before dropping back to his side. "I have a debt to settle. Not with him. With you." "You don't owe me anything. You made that clear when you walked out of that hospital wing." "I stayed until you were breathing on your own. I paid the nurses in gold to forget your face." He moved behind her, his voice dropping to a low, gravelly vibration that resonated in her spine. "I spent three years convincing myself that you were safer without a monster in your bed. I thought the quiet life would suit you. But looking at you now, surrounded by these dusty books and the smell of cheap curry... you look like a bird in a cage that’s too small to even spread its wings." Aurora spun around, her chest heaving. "It’s a safe cage. It’s a cage where nobody shoots at me." "He’s coming here, Rory. Tonight. Tomorrow. The safety is gone. The locks on that door won't stop what he’s invited into his shadow." Lucien stepped into her personal space again, his presence overwhelming the tiny kitchen. He reached out, his fingers tangling in her black hair, tilting her head back to force her to engage. "You have two choices. You can stay here and hope your books provide a shield. Or you can come with me." "To where? Another warehouse? Another run across the border?" "To my estate. It’s warded. Even the lords of Avaros can't peel back the skin of that house without my permission." Aurora searched his face. She looked for the lie, the hidden agenda, the cold calculation of a fixer. She found only a terrifying, desperate intensity. The silence between them stretched, thick with the history of a summer in Marseille where they had burned through every rule they both lived by. "Why help me now?" Lucien’s thumb brushed her lower lip, a slow, possessive motion that made her dizzy. "Because I realized that watching you die was nothing compared to the slow rot of living without you. I’m a selfish creature, Aurora. I want the asset. I want the liability. I want the woman who nearly gutted me with a letter opener in a hotel room in Lyon." He leaned down, his forehead resting against hers. The temperature in the room seemed to rise ten degrees. "Tell me to leave. Tell me you don't want the protection of a devil, and I will walk out that door and let you face him alone." Aurora closed her eyes. She thought of the three deadlocks. She thought of the way Evan’s voice used to sound when he was angry. Then she thought of the way Lucien’s hands felt—cold on the outside, a furnace underneath. She reached up, her fingers sliding into the silk of his platinum hair, pulling him down the final inch. The kiss was a collision, a frantic, hungry thing that tasted of gin and old grudges. Lucien groaned into her mouth, his cane hitting the floor with a hollow thud as he wrapped both arms around her waist, lifting her until her toes barely brushed the linoleum. He tasted like the life she had tried to bury. He tasted like danger and the sharp, metallic tang of the supernatural. Aurora pulled him closer, her nails digging into the fine wool of his suit. "If you leave me again," she whispered against his lips, her voice a jagged edge. "I would have to be dead," Lucien replied, his eyes burning with a dual colored fire. "And even then, I would find a way to crawl back." He set her down, but didn't release his grip on her waist. He looked at the window, his black eye narrowing as the sun began to dip behind the brick chimneys of the East End. "Pack only what you can carry. We leave through the roof. His scouts are already at the end of the lane." Aurora didn't argue. The weight of her past was suddenly lighter with him standing in the center of the room. She moved toward the bedroom, pausing at the threshold. "Ptolemy comes too." Lucien looked at the ginger cat, who was currently sniffing his discarded cane with suspicion. A small, dry smile touched his lips. "The beast stays. He’ll be a distraction." "The cat comes, Lucien, or I stay and take my chances with the demon hunter." Lucien sighed, picking up his cane and clicking the ivory handle back into place. "Fine. But if he scratches the leather in the car, I’m turning him into a footstool." "You wouldn't dare." "Try me." He watched her go, his gaze lingering on the curve of her back, the amber in his eye glowing with a predatory, protective light. He tapped his cane once more, a silent signal to the shadows waiting in the hallway. The game had changed. The pieces were moving. And for the first time in three years, the Frenchman had something to lose besides his reputation. Aurora shoved a handful of clothes and a heavy leather-bound grimoire into a knapsack. Her heart hammered a frantic rhythm against her ribs. She looked at the small crescent scar on her wrist, a reminder of a childhood fall, and then at the shadow of the man in her kitchen. The air outside the window shifted. The temperature dropped. A low, unnatural howl echoed from the direction of the curry house entrance. "They're here," Lucien said, his voice devoid of emotion. He drew the thin blade from the center of his cane with a hiss of tempered steel. He didn't look back at the door. He looked at her. "Ready, Rory?" She cinched the bag tight and scooped up the cat, who protested with a sharp yowl. "I've been ready for three years, Luc. Just try to keep up."
created_at"2026-02-19T04:00:10.698Z" 2/19/2026, 4:00:10 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.098
leniency0.195
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.30% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1854
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
64.94% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1854
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"sanctuary"
count1
3
word"tracing"
count1
4
word"shattered"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"resonated"
count1
7
word"intensity"
count1
8
word"silk"
count1
9
word"weight"
count1
10
word"reminder"
count1
11
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"silence"
2"sanctuary"
3"tracing"
4"shattered"
5"flickered"
6"resonated"
7"intensity"
8"silk"
9"weight"
10"reminder"
11"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences92
matches
0"was angry"
80.75% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences92
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences130
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1844
ratio0.001
matches
0"clack"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
86.28% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount1177
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.27
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Brick1
Lane1
Aurora13
Avaros1
Golden1
Empress1
Lucien15
Frenchman2
Marseille1
Evan1
East1
End1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Aurora"
2"Lucien"
3"Frenchman"
4"Evan"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Avaros"
3"Marseille"
4"East"
5"End"
globalScore0.863
windowScore1
87.50% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"tasted like the life she had tried to bur"
1"tasted like danger and the sharp, metalli"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1844
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences130
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs73
mean25.26
std16.48
cv0.652
sampleLengths
052
134
29
334
410
555
622
763
829
918
1017
1132
1246
1340
1422
1561
163
178
1818
1935
2020
2135
227
2337
2410
2524
2631
2735
2826
2911
3040
3111
3217
3319
3417
3556
366
3712
3823
3932
4021
419
4221
4350
444
4514
4649
4718
4827
4939
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs175
matches(empty)
76.92% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences130
ratio0.023
matches
0"Sunlight filtered through the grime of the window, catching the heterochromatic shift in his eyes—one the color of bottled honey, the other an endless, obsidian void."
1"The mundane reality of her life—delivery runs for the Golden Empress, pints at Silas’ bar—shattered."
2"Then she thought of the way Lucien’s hands felt—cold on the outside, a furnace underneath."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount891
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
1"own wide-eyed stare."
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.024691358024691357
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.004489337822671156
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences130
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences130
mean14.18
std8.83
cv0.622
sampleLengths
017
119
216
318
411
55
69
78
826
910
106
1124
1225
1322
148
1522
169
174
1820
1929
204
2114
2217
2312
2420
2546
269
2715
2816
2922
3018
3117
323
3323
343
358
3618
3710
3813
3912
4020
4111
428
4316
447
459
4618
4710
4810
4924
39.23% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.23076923076923078
totalSentences130
uniqueOpeners30
36.23% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"Then she thought of the"
ratio0.011
46.09% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences92
matches
0"He tapped the ivory handle"
1"He swept a stack of"
2"He reached for a glass"
3"His fingers, long and deceptively"
4"She didn't pull away."
5"She stared at the platinum"
6"He poured a finger of"
7"She planted her hands on"
8"He stood, his five-foot-eleven frame"
9"His hand moved, a blur"
10"She hated the way her"
11"He leaned in, his lips"
12"He looked at her mouth,"
13"She stepped back, the distance"
14"He didn't reach for her"
15"He held his cane like"
16"She grabbed a chair for"
17"He reached out, his hand"
18"He moved behind her, his"
19"He reached out, his fingers"
ratio0.435
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount90
totalSentences92
matches
0"Ptolemy hissed, his back an"
1"Aurora wiped flour from her"
2"The wood of the door"
3"Lucien Moreau leaned against the"
4"He tapped the ivory handle"
5"The rhythm mimicked a heartbeat."
6"Aurora gripped the edge of"
7"Sunlight filtered through the grime"
8"Lucien stepped inside without an"
9"He swept a stack of"
10"The scent of rain and"
11"He reached for a glass"
12"His fingers, long and deceptively"
13"The contact surged through her"
14"She didn't pull away."
15"She stared at the platinum"
16"Lucien’s amber eye darkened."
17"He poured a finger of"
18"Aurora rounded the counter, her"
19"She planted her hands on"
ratio0.978
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
ratio0
5.01% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences57
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"His hand moved, a blur of motion that ended with his thumb tracing the line of her jaw."
1"The heat of him was unnatural, a byproduct of the blood that shouldn't exist in human veins."
2"He reached out, his hand hovering over her shoulder before dropping back to his side."
3"He moved behind her, his voice dropping to a low, gravelly vibration that resonated in her spine."
4"He reached out, his fingers tangling in her black hair, tilting her head back to force her to engage."
5"Lucien’s thumb brushed her lower lip, a slow, possessive motion that made her dizzy."
6"She reached up, her fingers sliding into the silk of his platinum hair, pulling him down the final inch."
7"The kiss was a collision, a frantic, hungry thing that tasted of gin and old grudges."
8"Lucien groaned into her mouth, his cane hitting the floor with a hollow thud as he wrapped both arms around her waist, lifting her until her toes barely brushed…"
9"Lucien looked at the ginger cat, who was currently sniffing his discarded cane with suspicion."
10"He watched her go, his gaze lingering on the curve of her back, the amber in his eye glowing with a predatory, protective light."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she whispered, her voice a jagged edge"
1"Lucien replied, his eyes burning with a dual colored fire"
2"Lucien said, his voice devoid of emotion"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.073
leniency0.146
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.049
76.9418%