| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 41 | | tagDensity | 0.098 | | leniency | 0.195 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 97.30% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1854 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 64.94% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1854 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "sanctuary" | | 3 | "tracing" | | 4 | "shattered" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "resonated" | | 7 | "intensity" | | 8 | "silk" | | 9 | "weight" | | 10 | "reminder" | | 11 | "echoed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "blood ran cold" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 92 | | matches | | |
| 80.75% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 92 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "tried to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 130 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 56 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1844 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 86.28% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 1177 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.27 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Moreau | 1 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Aurora | 13 | | Avaros | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Lucien | 15 | | Frenchman | 2 | | Marseille | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | East | 1 | | End | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Moreau" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "Frenchman" | | 4 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Brick" | | 1 | "Lane" | | 2 | "Avaros" | | 3 | "Marseille" | | 4 | "East" | | 5 | "End" |
| | globalScore | 0.863 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 87.50% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "tasted like the life she had tried to bur" | | 1 | "tasted like danger and the sharp, metalli" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1844 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 130 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 73 | | mean | 25.26 | | std | 16.48 | | cv | 0.652 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 52 | | 1 | 34 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 34 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 55 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 63 | | 8 | 29 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 32 | | 12 | 46 | | 13 | 40 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 61 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 35 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 35 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 37 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 31 | | 27 | 35 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 40 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 56 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 32 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 50 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 49 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 27 | | 49 | 39 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 175 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 76.92% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 130 | | ratio | 0.023 | | matches | | 0 | "Sunlight filtered through the grime of the window, catching the heterochromatic shift in his eyes—one the color of bottled honey, the other an endless, obsidian void." | | 1 | "The mundane reality of her life—delivery runs for the Golden Empress, pints at Silas’ bar—shattered." | | 2 | "Then she thought of the way Lucien’s hands felt—cold on the outside, a furnace underneath." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 891 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "own wide-eyed stare." |
| | adverbCount | 22 | | adverbRatio | 0.024691358024691357 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004489337822671156 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 130 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 130 | | mean | 14.18 | | std | 8.83 | | cv | 0.622 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 46 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 23 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 24 |
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| 39.23% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.23076923076923078 | | totalSentences | 130 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 36.23% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she thought of the" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 46.09% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 40 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "He tapped the ivory handle" | | 1 | "He swept a stack of" | | 2 | "He reached for a glass" | | 3 | "His fingers, long and deceptively" | | 4 | "She didn't pull away." | | 5 | "She stared at the platinum" | | 6 | "He poured a finger of" | | 7 | "She planted her hands on" | | 8 | "He stood, his five-foot-eleven frame" | | 9 | "His hand moved, a blur" | | 10 | "She hated the way her" | | 11 | "He leaned in, his lips" | | 12 | "He looked at her mouth," | | 13 | "She stepped back, the distance" | | 14 | "He didn't reach for her" | | 15 | "He held his cane like" | | 16 | "She grabbed a chair for" | | 17 | "He reached out, his hand" | | 18 | "He moved behind her, his" | | 19 | "He reached out, his fingers" |
| | ratio | 0.435 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 90 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "Ptolemy hissed, his back an" | | 1 | "Aurora wiped flour from her" | | 2 | "The wood of the door" | | 3 | "Lucien Moreau leaned against the" | | 4 | "He tapped the ivory handle" | | 5 | "The rhythm mimicked a heartbeat." | | 6 | "Aurora gripped the edge of" | | 7 | "Sunlight filtered through the grime" | | 8 | "Lucien stepped inside without an" | | 9 | "He swept a stack of" | | 10 | "The scent of rain and" | | 11 | "He reached for a glass" | | 12 | "His fingers, long and deceptively" | | 13 | "The contact surged through her" | | 14 | "She didn't pull away." | | 15 | "She stared at the platinum" | | 16 | "Lucien’s amber eye darkened." | | 17 | "He poured a finger of" | | 18 | "Aurora rounded the counter, her" | | 19 | "She planted her hands on" |
| | ratio | 0.978 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 5.01% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "His hand moved, a blur of motion that ended with his thumb tracing the line of her jaw." | | 1 | "The heat of him was unnatural, a byproduct of the blood that shouldn't exist in human veins." | | 2 | "He reached out, his hand hovering over her shoulder before dropping back to his side." | | 3 | "He moved behind her, his voice dropping to a low, gravelly vibration that resonated in her spine." | | 4 | "He reached out, his fingers tangling in her black hair, tilting her head back to force her to engage." | | 5 | "Lucien’s thumb brushed her lower lip, a slow, possessive motion that made her dizzy." | | 6 | "She reached up, her fingers sliding into the silk of his platinum hair, pulling him down the final inch." | | 7 | "The kiss was a collision, a frantic, hungry thing that tasted of gin and old grudges." | | 8 | "Lucien groaned into her mouth, his cane hitting the floor with a hollow thud as he wrapped both arms around her waist, lifting her until her toes barely brushed…" | | 9 | "Lucien looked at the ginger cat, who was currently sniffing his discarded cane with suspicion." | | 10 | "He watched her go, his gaze lingering on the curve of her back, the amber in his eye glowing with a predatory, protective light." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, her voice a jagged edge" | | 1 | "Lucien replied, his eyes burning with a dual colored fire" | | 2 | "Lucien said, his voice devoid of emotion" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 41 | | tagDensity | 0.073 | | leniency | 0.146 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.049 | |