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Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0WAN66RC4P887D5N31HWG
Run Details
Model:
DeepSeek V3 (2025-03-24)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
1m 4s
Cost:
$0.001854
Provider:
DeepInfra
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
94.15%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
41.45%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
41.49%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
0.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
77.34%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
39.22%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
78.82%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
12.94%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
82.8469%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The door swung open before
Rory could finish turning the third deadbolt. Lucien Moreau filled the frame, his amber-and-black eyes catching the dim hallway light.
The scent of bergamot and
something darker—smoke, maybe, or old blood—rolled off him in waves.
His ivory-handled cane tapped once
against the threshold. "You're early."
Rory didn’t move aside
. "Late, actually."
His French accent curled around
the words like a cat stretching. "Three months, twenty-six days." The numbers settled between them. She’d counted too. Ptolemy wound around her ankles, purring like a faulty engine. Traitor. "You look terrible," Lucien said. "Flat’s being painted."
She gestured to the untouched
walls. "What do you want?" He stepped forward.
She held her ground until
their shoes nearly touched. Close enough to see the scar along his jawline—thin, precise, surgical. A souvenir from Marseille. "Business."
His breath warmed her cheek
. "Unless you’d prefer pleasure?"
The cane’s tip pressed into
the floorboards between them. A warning, or an invitation. Rory exhaled through her nose. "Try again." "Fine."
He reached into his coat
.
The movement made her fingers
twitch toward the knife in her back pocket. "Evan’s back in London." Her
stomach
dropped. Lucien produced a photograph instead of a weapon. Evan at Heathrow, grinning at customs like he owned the place. The date stamp read yesterday. "He’s got friends in low places now." Lucien tilted the photo. "Higher than mine." The edges crumpled in Rory’s grip. "Why tell me?" "Because you owe me."
His thumb brushed her wrist—right
over the crescent scar. "And I always collect." The tabby hissed. Downstairs, the curry house’s exhaust fan whined to life. Lucien’s smile didn’t reach his eyes. "Invite me in, Rory. Before I make it an order."
She weighed the options: slam
the door, stab him, or— "Fine."
She stepped back
. "But touch my books and lose a finger." His laughter followed her inside, rich and dangerous as aged whiskey. The cane’s blade clicked against the floorboards as the door shut behind them. Ptolemy leapt onto the kitchen counter, knocking over a stack of Eva’s research. Lucien righted the papers without looking, his gaze locked on Rory. "You’re still angry." "Astounding deduction."
She tossed the photo onto
the table. "What’s Evan mixed up in?" "Same as always. Beautiful women. Bad decisions." Lucien
traced
the spine of a grimoire. "Though now he’s recruiting them for someone else." The fridge hummed.
Somewhere on Brick Lane, glass
shattered
. "Who?" "Ah." Lucien’s mismatched eyes gleamed. "That’s where you come in."
He moved suddenly—a predator’s grace—pinning
her against the fridge. The cold seeped through her shirt.
His cane pressed alongside her
thigh, the hidden blade’s presence humming between them. "I need a delivery girl," he murmured. "One who knows how to handle… delicate packages." Her
pulse
jumped. "You’ve got runners." "Not like you."
His lips grazed her temple
. "And not for this." The offer hung there, thick as the curry-scented air. Rory studied his face—the too-
perfect
symmetry, the demon-blood
warmth
radiating through his suit. "You’re asking me to bait Evan." "I’m asking you to do what you do best."
His teeth flashed
. "Lie beautifully." Outside, sirens wailed. Closer than usual. Rory shoved him back. "What’s the catch?" "No catch." Lucien straightened his cuffs. "Just a percentage." "And if I say no?" The cane twirled. "Then I walk out that door. Evan keeps hunting. And you..."
He glanced at the deadbolts
. "You keep counting days." Ptolemy knocked a teacup off the counter. It
shattered
between them. Rory stared at the shards. Three months, twenty-six days of
silence
. Of jumping at shadows. She met Lucien’s gaze. "Where do we start?" His smile turned feral. The cane’s pommel clicked open, revealing a silver key. "With a trip downstairs." He tossed it. "Silas has the details." The key burned in her palm. Silas’ bar meant his vault. His vault meant serious trouble. Lucien adjusted his tie. "One condition." "Of course there is." "You wear the red dress." His gaze dropped to her mouth. "The one from Budapest." Heat flared under her ribs. "That dress got torched in Prague." "Pity." He stepped closer again. "I’ll buy you a new one." His fingers brushed her hip—lightning quick—before he turned for the door. Rory caught his sleeve. "You’re forgetting something." "Unlikely." She yanked him back and kissed him hard. His surprise lasted half a second before he responded, one hand tangling in her hair, the other gripping her waist like he might vanish her into the wallpaper. When she pulled away, his pupils
were blown
wide. "That’s for showing up unannounced," she said. Lucien dragged his thumb across his lower lip. "Worth it." The door clicked shut behind him. Rory stared at the key. At the photograph. At the ghost of Lucien’s cologne clinging to her clothes. Ptolemy headbutted her knee. "Yeah," she muttered. "We’re screwed." Downstairs, the bar’s jukebox kicked on. The bassline rattled the floorboards as Rory reached for her phone. Eva answered on the first ring. "Tell me you’re not home." "Worse." Rory pocketed the key. "I’m going out."
created_at
"2026-02-19T04:00:11.45Z"
2/19/2026, 4:00:11 AM
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4556
tokens_completion
1475
native_tokens_prompt
4154
native_tokens_completion
1334
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(null)
native_tokens_reasoning
0
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73
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
23
adverbTagCount
2
adverbTags
0
"His French accent curled around [around]"
1
"She stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences
60
tagDensity
0.383
leniency
0.767
rawRatio
0.087
effectiveRatio
0.067
94.15%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
854
totalAiIsmAdverbs
1
found
0
adverb
"suddenly"
count
1
highlights
0
"suddenly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
41.45%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
854
totalAiIsms
10
found
0
word
"stomach"
count
1
1
word
"traced"
count
1
2
word
"shattered"
count
2
3
word
"predator"
count
1
4
word
"pulse"
count
1
5
word
"perfect"
count
1
6
word
"warmth"
count
1
7
word
"silence"
count
1
8
word
"blown wide"
count
1
highlights
0
"stomach"
1
"traced"
2
"shattered"
3
"predator"
4
"pulse"
5
"perfect"
6
"warmth"
7
"silence"
8
"blown wide"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"stomach dropped/sank"
count
1
highlights
0
"stomach dropped"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
90
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
90
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
128
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
28
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
837
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
12
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
41.49%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
40
wordCount
599
uniqueNames
12
maxNameDensity
2.17
worstName
"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity
3
worstWindowName
"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory
12
Moreau
1
French
1
Marseille
1
Heathrow
1
Eva
2
Lucien
13
Brick
1
Lane
1
Ptolemy
4
Heat
1
Downstairs
2
persons
0
"Rory"
1
"Moreau"
2
"Eva"
3
"Lucien"
4
"Ptolemy"
5
"Heat"
places
0
"Marseille"
1
"Brick"
2
"Lane"
globalScore
0.415
windowScore
0.667
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
45
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
837
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
128
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
67
mean
12.49
std
7.51
cv
0.601
sampleLengths
0
12
1
36
2
6
3
17
4
8
5
11
6
5
7
13
8
27
9
10
10
14
11
7
12
23
13
3
14
24
15
14
16
9
17
17
18
12
19
16
20
10
21
12
22
24
23
24
24
3
25
14
26
22
27
9
28
1
29
10
30
28
31
15
32
6
33
12
34
22
35
6
36
14
37
6
38
7
39
9
40
5
41
23
42
11
43
15
44
8
45
13
46
11
47
16
48
6
49
4
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
90
matches
0
"were blown"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
108
matches
(empty)
0.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
10
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
7
totalSentences
128
ratio
0.055
matches
0
"The scent of bergamot and something darker—smoke, maybe, or old blood—rolled off him in waves."
1
"Close enough to see the scar along his jawline—thin, precise, surgical."
2
"\"Because you owe me.\" His thumb brushed her wrist—right over the crescent scar."
3
"She weighed the options: slam the door, stab him, or—"
4
"He moved suddenly—a predator’s grace—pinning her against the fridge."
5
"Rory studied his face—the too-perfect symmetry, the demon-blood warmth radiating through his suit."
6
"His fingers brushed her hip—lightning quick—before he turned for the door."
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
485
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
14
adverbRatio
0.0288659793814433
lyAdverbCount
2
lyAdverbRatio
0.004123711340206186
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
128
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
128
mean
6.54
std
3.92
cv
0.599
sampleLengths
0
12
1
13
2
15
3
8
4
6
5
13
6
4
7
5
8
3
9
10
10
1
11
5
12
9
13
4
14
3
15
9
16
11
17
4
18
6
19
4
20
9
21
5
22
5
23
2
24
6
25
13
26
4
27
3
28
8
29
11
30
5
31
11
32
3
33
6
34
3
35
13
36
4
37
3
38
9
39
6
40
10
41
10
42
4
43
8
44
11
45
13
46
13
47
11
48
3
49
9
77.34%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
1
diversityRatio
0.46875
totalSentences
128
uniqueOpeners
60
39.22%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
1
totalSentences
85
matches
0
"Somewhere on Brick Lane, glass"
ratio
0.012
78.82%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
30
totalSentences
85
matches
0
"His ivory-handled cane tapped once"
1
"His French accent curled around"
2
"She’d counted too."
3
"She gestured to the untouched"
4
"He stepped forward."
5
"She held her ground until"
6
"His breath warmed her cheek"
7
"He reached into his coat"
8
"Her stomach dropped."
9
"His thumb brushed her wrist—right"
10
"She weighed the options: slam"
11
"She stepped back"
12
"His laughter followed her inside,"
13
"She tossed the photo onto"
14
"He moved suddenly—a predator’s grace—pinning"
15
"His cane pressed alongside her"
16
"Her pulse jumped."
17
"His lips grazed her temple"
18
"His teeth flashed"
19
"He glanced at the deadbolts"
ratio
0.353
12.94%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
76
totalSentences
85
matches
0
"The door swung open before"
1
"Lucien Moreau filled the frame,"
2
"The scent of bergamot and"
3
"His ivory-handled cane tapped once"
4
"Rory didn’t move aside"
5
"His French accent curled around"
6
"The numbers settled between them."
7
"She’d counted too."
8
"Ptolemy wound around her ankles,"
9
"She gestured to the untouched"
10
"He stepped forward."
11
"She held her ground until"
12
"A souvenir from Marseille."
13
"His breath warmed her cheek"
14
"The cane’s tip pressed into"
15
"A warning, or an invitation."
16
"Rory exhaled through her nose."
17
"He reached into his coat"
18
"The movement made her fingers"
19
"Her stomach dropped."
ratio
0.894
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
85
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
20
technicalSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
23
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
4
fancyCount
2
fancyTags
0
"he murmured (murmur)"
1
"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences
60
tagDensity
0.067
leniency
0.133
rawRatio
0.5
effectiveRatio
0.067
82.8469%