| 27.59% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 29 | | adverbTagCount | 5 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he asked slyly [slyly]" | | 1 | "she asked finally [finally]" | | 2 | "He glanced around [around]" | | 3 | "he said tightly [tightly]" | | 4 | "she finally asked [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 52 | | tagDensity | 0.558 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.172 | | effectiveRatio | 0.172 | |
| 71.22% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1216 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "lazily" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "slyly" | | 4 | "tightly" | | 5 | "barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1216 | | totalAiIsms | 34 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | word | "casual indifference" | | count | 1 |
| | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "flicker" | | 1 | "crystalline" | | 2 | "depths" | | 3 | "desire" | | 4 | "casual indifference" | | 5 | "familiar" | | 6 | "yearning" | | 7 | "echoing" | | 8 | "tension" | | 9 | "eyebrow" | | 10 | "flickered" | | 11 | "charged" | | 12 | "dance" | | 13 | "silence" | | 14 | "weight" | | 15 | "navigating" | | 16 | "racing" | | 17 | "pounding" | | 18 | "echoed" | | 19 | "intensity" | | 20 | "whisper" | | 21 | "chill" | | 22 | "down her spine" | | 23 | "aftermath" | | 24 | "resolve" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "weight of words/silence" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes widened" | | 1 | "the weight of the moment" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 54 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 54 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 47 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1209 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 22 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 21 | | wordCount | 840 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.71 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 6 | | Carter | 1 | | Moreau | 1 | | Memories | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Ptolemy | 2 | | Silence | 2 | | Watchful | 1 | | Lucien | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Moreau" | | 3 | "Memories" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Ptolemy" | | 6 | "Silence" | | 7 | "Lucien" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "As if reading her thoughts, he pushed his way inside, brushing past her" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.827 | | wordCount | 1209 | | matches | | 0 | "not fair,” he said tightly, stepping back but keeping his intensity focused on her" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.87% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 42 | | mean | 28.79 | | std | 14.18 | | cv | 0.493 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 66 | | 1 | 46 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 41 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 47 | | 6 | 49 | | 7 | 57 | | 8 | 32 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 48 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 56 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 32 | | 18 | 38 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 27 | | 21 | 39 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 29 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 40 | | 28 | 28 | | 29 | 26 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 24 | | 33 | 30 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 26 | | 38 | 33 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 47 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 151 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 31.54% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 77 | | ratio | 0.039 | | matches | | 0 | "“The door was unlocked,” Lucien replied, a casual smile tugging at his lips, though his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, the other black—glinted with a hint of mischief." | | 1 | "She hated how it sent her senses into disarray, how it dredged up sensations she had buried deep—a storm of yearning and frustration." | | 2 | "Memory cascaded over her—stolen kisses in the dark and whispered confessions mixed with bitter arguments and unfulfilled promises." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 845 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.03905325443786982 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01775147928994083 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 77 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 77 | | mean | 15.7 | | std | 7.82 | | cv | 0.498 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 30 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 27 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 46 | | 16 | 30 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 32 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 26 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 31 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 20 |
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| 100.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.6493506493506493 | | totalSentences | 77 | | uniqueOpeners | 50 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "Her eyes widened just a" | | 1 | "she breathed, her voice a" | | 2 | "she retorted, arms crossed over" | | 3 | "She hated how it sent" | | 4 | "She shut the door behind" | | 5 | "He leaned against the table" | | 6 | "He raised an eyebrow, his" | | 7 | "she shot back, shoving her" | | 8 | "He stepped closer until the" | | 9 | "he asked slyly, his gaze" | | 10 | "he murmured, tone cool, masking" | | 11 | "They had carved a labyrinth" | | 12 | "she asked finally, needing clarity" | | 13 | "he said, voice low yet" | | 14 | "He met her gaze, and" | | 15 | "She rolled her eyes, but" | | 16 | "His voice dropped, the hard" | | 17 | "She crossed her arms tighter," | | 18 | "He glanced around, tension sweeping" | | 19 | "She scoffed, her heart pounding" |
| | ratio | 0.593 | |
| 6.30% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 49 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "The door swung open, revealing" | | 1 | "Her eyes widened just a" | | 2 | "Lucien Moreau stood on the" | | 3 | "she breathed, her voice a" | | 4 | "Memories freighted with desire and" | | 5 | "Lucien replied, a casual smile" | | 6 | "she retorted, arms crossed over" | | 7 | "The familiar scent of sandalwood" | | 8 | "She hated how it sent" | | 9 | "She shut the door behind" | | 10 | "Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, slinked" | | 11 | "Lucien said, his tone suddenly" | | 12 | "He leaned against the table" | | 13 | "Aurora muttered, kicking a stray" | | 14 | "He raised an eyebrow, his" | | 15 | "she shot back, shoving her" | | 16 | "A hint of a challenge" | | 17 | "He stepped closer until the" | | 18 | "he asked slyly, his gaze" | | 19 | "he murmured, tone cool, masking" |
| | ratio | 0.907 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "As if she could shut" | | 1 | "As if reading her thoughts," |
| | ratio | 0.037 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 24 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Memories freighted with desire and bitterness flooded her mind, each one tumbling over another like those damned scrolls that littered every surface of Eva's fl…" | | 1 | "As if reading her thoughts, he pushed his way inside, brushing past her." | | 2 | "Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, slinked lazily from his perch on the window ledge, his gaze darting between them, sensing the tension vibrating in the air." | | 3 | "He leaned against the table cluttered with books and takeaway containers, a picture of cool confidence, though Aurora could see the tension in the way his finge…" | | 4 | "Aurora felt the heat blooming in her chest, pushing against her skin as anger collided with regrets she fully didn’t want to face." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 29 | | uselessAdditionCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "She shut, the click echoing slightly too loud in the cramped room" | | 1 | "Lucien said, his tone suddenly serious" | | 2 | "he asked slyly, his gaze searching hers" | | 3 | "he murmured, tone cool, masking the dance of hurt and yearning beneath" | | 4 | "he said, voice low yet resolute" | | 5 | "She crossed, her heart racing at the implications but shielding herself nonetheless" | | 6 | "She scoffed, her heart pounding heavily" | | 7 | "Lucien pressed, voice low and intense, eyes boring into hers" | | 8 | "he said, tone tightening as shadows flitted across his features" | | 9 | "he replied, voice barely above a whisper" | | 10 | "he called, his presence already shifting into the doorway" |
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| 53.85% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 17 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "she retorted (retort)" | | 2 | "Aurora muttered (mutter)" | | 3 | "he murmured (murmur)" | | 4 | "Lucien pressed (press)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 52 | | tagDensity | 0.327 | | leniency | 0.654 | | rawRatio | 0.294 | | effectiveRatio | 0.192 | |