Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0WVM7G6XADVGB2GZFKF68

Run Details

Model:
o4 Mini
Duration:
35.6s
Cost:
$0.015833
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora stepped through the trembling ribbon of distortion and stumbled onto soil that felt more like living flesh than earth. Amber light pooled beneath a sky the colour of molten honey, stretching overhead in lazy ripples. She pressed a hand to the smooth scar on her wrist, her fingers brushing the Heartstone pendant pulsing warmly against her chest. Each beat of the gem echoed in her ribs. Isolde emerged behind her, silver hair drifting like a breeze that carried no wind. Her bare feet made no indentations on the ground. She tilted her head, pale lavender eyes tracing the horizon. “Where lustful vines cradle the fallen sun,” she murmured, voice weaving through the air like smoke, “the feast waits to claim every wandering hunger.” Nyx followed, a ripple of shadow that solidified as they passed the portal’s threshold. The faint glow of their violet eyes caught in the twisted trunks around them. They let a hand trail across bark that curled into spirals, leaves unfurling at their touch. A single leaf fell, black as night, landing at Aurora’s boot. Dark laughter drifted ahead. The scent of overripe fruit—sweet, metallic—clung to the air. Aurora drew in a breath that tasted of spilled wine and scorched sugar. She shivered. “Belphegor’s realm,” she whispered. “I never dreamed it would feel… hungry.” Isolde’s lips curved. “Every inch devours. Every breeze whets the appetite.” She stepped forward, silk gowns brushing the ground, petals unfurling wherever she walked. Time seemed pliant here; the distant echo of their footsteps stretched and folded. A low, resonant clang sounded to their left. They rounded a gnarled archway woven from living vines, half-veiled by hanging blossoms the colour of bruised plums. Beyond lay a courtyard edged by towering trellises heavy with fruit that gleamed like polished gems. Grapes bloomed to the size of fists, dripping juice that sizzled on the stones. Pomegranates cracked open before their eyes, arils spilling like blood onto the paved floor. Nyx’s voice floated between them. “See how the vines drip crimson. See how the stones soak it up.” They knelt and pressed a fingertip into a pool of fruit-blood. It shook, alive. “It’s hungry, too.” Aurora’s hand fell to the hilt at her hip. The slender, leaf-shaped blade of moonsilver whispered cold against her palm. The Fae-Forged Blade gave off a faint glow, its surface mapping the hunger in this place. A flicker of motion caught her eye. Helbound souls—pale figures chained at the ankles—hailed their own tormentors, offering baskets of fruit. One figure inched forward to slice open a grape, pronouncing its flavor sacred before sink­ing teeth into pulp and spitting seeds like curses. Isolde drifted closer to the souls. She cast no glance to their tormented eyes. “They taste devotion. Every piece binds them tighter.” She lifted her chin. “We must not taste.” The light shifted. Across the far wall, braziers flared to life, uncovering a banquet table that stretched nearly the length of the courtyard. Platters heaved with steaming roasts, fountains of honey, cauldrons bubbling with sauces that smoked in swirls of rose and saffron. The air thrummed with laughter, a chorus that rose and subsided like tides. Aurora’s stomach clenched. Every scent pressed in on her: roast boar dripping fat, loaves fresh from ovens that seemed to breathe heat. Her teeth ached. She glanced at Nyx, whose form rippled, as though the hunger here tried to claw at their shadow. “I thought gluttony was indulgence,” Aurora managed. “This…” Her voice snapped. “This feels like a trap.” Nyx rose. Shadow pooled at their feet, crawling toward the feast. “Traps are hungry, too.” They traced a path around a table leg. “They bait the senses, lure the traveller.” Their eyes glowed a shade tighter. “Don’t breathe too deep.” Isolde moved to stand before Aurora. She reached out, fingertips almost brushing Aurora’s shoulder. “Breathe,” she said, voice calm. “Breathe daylight.” Aurora willed herself to inhale, to taste only air. Her heart stuttered as she edged past the table. She skirted the diners—creatures with dozens of limbs, vanishing faces that reformed under each torch. One chef, six arms folded in reverence, beckoned her closer. Steam curled from a bubbling cauldron. A copper ladle rose, as if of its own volition. Aurora stepped back. The ground shifted. Vines writhed across stones, seeking her ankles. She shook them free, boots squeaking where fruit-blood met leather. Her pendant warmed to a steady glow, pulsing like a drumbeat in her chest. “Find the heart,” Nyx whispered. “Find where the Veil clings to the stone.” In the center of the courtyard a monolithic obelisk rose, carved with looping runes that bled faint light. It trembled as if feeding on the hunger around it. Aurora let the pendant guide her. It fluttered against her chest, then burned with purpose. She reached out. The air around the obelisk flickered, revealing a seam in reality—a vein of trembling light. She pressed her free hand to the carvings; sparks arced where moonlight metal met amber ruin. Isolde joined her. “These words bind the portal,” she said, lips brushing the rune for “Barrier.” She traced it with a nail. “Cut through desire, and they weaken.” Nyx shifted into an incorporeal wisp, sliding between banquets and braziers. They returned clutching a hunk of drifting shadow, pressed it into Aurora’s hand. “Use this,” they said, “to fuel the blade.” Aurora exchanged the weight of stone for the chill of shadow. She drew the dagger in one smooth motion. Moonsilver glowed bright. The air around the obelisk hissed. Vines recoiled, leaving scorch marks on the stone. She slit the runes with a single sweep. Each cut cracked the amber light, fracturing the shimmering seam. The laughter wavered, then faltered. The heavy scent of fruit turned sour, curdling around them. A distant howl rolled across the vineyards beyond the walls. The helbound souls curled inward, chains clanking as they backed away. The braziers guttered, sending sparks like moths into the sky. In the sudden hush, Aurora looked up. The seam in the stone pulsed—once, twice—then snapped. A ribbon of distortion curled inward, gulping the banquet table, the vines, the suffering souls. The courtyard lurched, as though the realm itself exhaled. Isolde took a step back; wildflowers bloomed where her foot had hovered. “Enough,” she said. Nyx’s shadow flickered. Their eyes were brighter than ever. “What remains will starve.” Aurora let the blade sink home, rune by rune, until the obelisk lay silent. The amber sky fractured, light pouring through cracks in the dome of Hel. She lowered the dagger, heart pounding. Sweat slicked her brow even though the air felt cold as dawn. All around them the vines slackened. Pomegranates wilted, grapes shriveled to husks. The banquet table crumbled to dust. Silence settled like a mantle. Aurora glanced at her friends. Isolde stood as still as a statue, silver hair drifting. Nyx shimmered, part shadow and part light. Then the world tilted. The distortion at their backs pulsed, ready to swallow them again. The glow of the pendant faded to a soft ember. Aurora’s fingers twitched on the chain. She swallowed. Her voice came steady. “We need to move.” Isolde inclined her head, footprints blooming tiny wildflowers behind her feet. Nyx whispered, half-formed mist, “And leave nothing behind.” Aurora shouldered the Fae blade. They turned toward the dying seam, toward the path home. Even as she stepped, she felt the faint pull of hunger in her bones, a reminder that this realm never truly let go of its prey.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.6
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.09% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1264
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"warmly"
count1
1
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"warmly"
1"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
1.11% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1264
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"tracing"
count1
2
word"silk"
count1
3
word"echo"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"flicker"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"traced"
count2
8
word"trembled"
count1
9
word"fluttered"
count1
10
word"flickered"
count2
11
word"desire"
count1
12
word"weight"
count1
13
word"chill"
count1
14
word"wavered"
count1
15
word"pulsed"
count2
16
word"lurched"
count1
17
word"fractured"
count1
18
word"pounding"
count1
19
word"silence"
count1
20
word"shimmered"
count1
21
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"tracing"
2"silk"
3"echo"
4"footsteps"
5"flicker"
6"stomach"
7"traced"
8"trembled"
9"fluttered"
10"flickered"
11"desire"
12"weight"
13"chill"
14"wavered"
15"pulsed"
16"lurched"
17"fractured"
18"pounding"
19"silence"
20"shimmered"
21"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences120
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences120
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences130
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1250
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount1119
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.61
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone1
Nyx9
Aurora18
Isolde8
Time1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Hel1
Fae2
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Aurora"
2"Isolde"
3"Time"
4"Blade"
places(empty)
globalScore0.696
windowScore0.667
65.73% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences89
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"seemed pliant here; the distant echo of their footsteps stretched and folded"
1"ovens that seemed to breathe heat"
2"as if feeding on the hunger around it"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1250
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences130
matches(empty)
76.75% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean35.71
std14.95
cv0.419
sampleLengths
067
157
255
339
437
570
635
736
844
930
1056
1143
1216
1340
1421
1559
1637
1713
1843
1934
2028
2132
2236
2333
2431
2539
2615
2713
2845
2918
3027
3131
3210
3319
3441
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences120
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs217
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences130
ratio0.062
matches
0"The scent of overripe fruit—sweet, metallic—clung to the air."
1"Time seemed pliant here; the distant echo of their footsteps stretched and folded."
2"Helbound souls—pale figures chained at the ankles—hailed their own tormentors, offering baskets of fruit."
3"She skirted the diners—creatures with dozens of limbs, vanishing faces that reformed under each torch."
4"The air around the obelisk flickered, revealing a seam in reality—a vein of trembling light."
5"She pressed her free hand to the carvings; sparks arced where moonlight metal met amber ruin."
6"The seam in the stone pulsed—once, twice—then snapped."
7"Isolde took a step back; wildflowers bloomed where her foot had hovered."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1133
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"slender, leaf-shaped blade"
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.0176522506619594
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.00353045013239188
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences130
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences130
mean9.62
std5.47
cv0.569
sampleLengths
020
116
222
39
414
59
610
724
814
914
1016
1111
124
139
1413
152
164
177
183
1921
2013
218
2218
2316
2414
2514
265
2724
283
293
309
3111
3216
337
3414
3523
366
378
3812
394
403
4120
4220
4313
443
4519
463
4718
487
494
54.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.36153846153846153
totalSentences130
uniqueOpeners47
29.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences112
matches
0"Then the world tilted."
ratio0.009
98.57% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences112
matches
0"She pressed a hand to"
1"Her bare feet made no"
2"She tilted her head, pale"
3"she murmured, voice weaving through"
4"They let a hand trail"
5"She stepped forward, silk gowns"
6"They rounded a gnarled archway"
7"They knelt and pressed a"
8"It shook, alive."
9"She cast no glance to"
10"She lifted her chin"
11"Her teeth ached."
12"She glanced at Nyx, whose"
13"Her voice snapped"
14"They traced a path around"
15"Their eyes glowed a shade"
16"She reached out, fingertips almost"
17"she said, voice calm"
18"Her heart stuttered as she"
19"She skirted the diners—creatures with"
ratio0.304
22.50% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount98
totalSentences112
matches
0"Aurora stepped through the trembling"
1"Amber light pooled beneath a"
2"She pressed a hand to"
3"Each beat of the gem"
4"Isolde emerged behind her, silver"
5"Her bare feet made no"
6"She tilted her head, pale"
7"she murmured, voice weaving through"
8"Nyx followed, a ripple of"
9"The faint glow of their"
10"They let a hand trail"
11"A single leaf fell, black"
12"The scent of overripe fruit—sweet,"
13"Aurora drew in a breath"
14"Isolde’s lips curved."
15"She stepped forward, silk gowns"
16"Time seemed pliant here; the"
17"A low, resonant clang sounded"
18"They rounded a gnarled archway"
19"Grapes bloomed to the size"
ratio0.875
44.64% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences112
matches
0"Even as she stepped, she"
ratio0.009
23.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Aurora stepped through the trembling ribbon of distortion and stumbled onto soil that felt more like living flesh than earth."
1"She pressed a hand to the smooth scar on her wrist, her fingers brushing the Heartstone pendant pulsing warmly against her chest."
2"Nyx followed, a ripple of shadow that solidified as they passed the portal’s threshold."
3"Beyond lay a courtyard edged by towering trellises heavy with fruit that gleamed like polished gems."
4"Across the far wall, braziers flared to life, uncovering a banquet table that stretched nearly the length of the courtyard."
5"Platters heaved with steaming roasts, fountains of honey, cauldrons bubbling with sauces that smoked in swirls of rose and saffron."
6"Every scent pressed in on her: roast boar dripping fat, loaves fresh from ovens that seemed to breathe heat."
7"She skirted the diners—creatures with dozens of limbs, vanishing faces that reformed under each torch."
8"A copper ladle rose, as if of its own volition."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she murmured, voice weaving through the air like smoke,"
1"she said, voice calm"
2"she said, lips brushing the rune for"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"Her voice snapped (snap)"
3"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
4"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.36
leniency0.72
rawRatio0.556
effectiveRatio0.4
73.1576%