Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0XCE7FQGQXGNP98R9BRVV

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Duration:
16.8s
Cost:
$0.003037
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air shifted first. It grew thick and heavy, smelling of damp earth, night-blooming jasmine, and something else, something metallic and cold like the air after a lightning strike. Aurora felt a prickle on her skin, the fine hairs on her arms standing up. The Heartstone pendant beneath her shirt grew warm, a steady, rhythmic pulse against her sternum. One step, and the mundane world of London fell away. She stood on a carpet of moss so vivid it seemed to hum with its own inner light. Before her, ancient oaks twisted towards a sky the colour of a bruised twilight, their branches heavy with leaves of silver and deepest indigo. Wildflowers, impossible in their variety and hue, bloomed in clusters around the base of the trees, their petals glowing with a soft, internal luminescence. There was no sun, no moon, only a diffuse, sourceless light that painted everything in shades of violet and silver. Eva gasped beside her, a sharp, audible sound of pure awe. "Rory... what is this place?" Nyx flowed into solidity beside them, their form a dense, humanoid silhouette that drank the ambient light. Their faintly glowing violet eyes swept over the clearing, taking in every detail. A whisper, like dry leaves skittering across pavement, formed into words. *The space between. A fold in the world's fabric.* Aurora reached out, her fingers brushing against the petals of a flower that shimmered like liquid starlight. It felt cool, impossibly smooth, like polished glass. She pulled her hand back, a shiver tracing its way down her spine. The air here didn't just smell different; it felt different. It pressed in, full and alive, humming with a power she could feel in her bones. "This is Isolde's grove," she said, her voice barely disturbing the profound silence. The sound didn't carry the way it should have, as if the trees and flowers absorbed it. They moved forward, their steps silent on the springy moss. No footprints marked their passage. The ground sealed itself behind them, pristine and undisturbed. The further they walked, the more the landscape seemed to shift and change. A path of smooth, grey stones appeared where none had been a moment before, winding between the colossal trees. The stones were cool to the touch, and carved into their surface were spirals and runes that shimmered and faded as their eyes passed over them. Eva knelt, tracing a line with her finger. "These aren't just markings. They feel... like instructions." *Or warnings,* Nyx's voice whispered from a patch of deeper shadow a few feet away. Aurora looked up, her gaze following the path towards the centre of the grove. There, the trees parted to form a perfect circle. In the middle of this clearing stood a single, massive standing stone, taller than any of the oaks. It was made of a black, glassy substance that didn't reflect the grove's strange light but seemed to contain it, a vortex of captured starlight. The air around it shimmered, a visible distortion in the fabric of reality. The Heartstone pendant against her chest was now hot, almost uncomfortably so. Its crimson light bled through the thin material of her shirt, a frantic heartbeat against her skin. As they drew closer, a sound began to permeate the silence. It wasn't a song, not in any human sense. It was a melody of chimes, of wind through hollow reeds, of water dripping into a crystal cavern. It was the sound of the grove itself, a harmony that resonated deep within Aurora's skull. It was beautiful, and it made her teeth ache. Then, they saw her. Isolde stood before the monolith, her back to them. Her silver hair, a waterfall of pure moonlight, fell to her waist. She wore a simple dress of woven leaves that shifted colour with every subtle movement. She left no prints on the moss, her feet hovering a hair's breadth above the ground. "You have brought the key," she said, her voice clear and melodic, yet carrying the same strange resonance as the grove's music. She didn't turn around. Aurora's hand went to the Fae-forged blade at her hip, the hilt cold and familiar. "I was told you could help me." Isolde turned. Her face was ageless, her skin pale as milk, and her eyes were the colour of pale lavender. They held no warmth, only a deep, ancient sorrow. Her gaze fell on the faint red glow from Aurora's chest. "The Heart of Dymas beats within your world. A door left ajar." She gestured to the monolith. "The Veil is thin here. A threadbare cloth. I can show you the tear, but I cannot mend it." She stepped aside, revealing the surface of the black stone. Where there had been a swirling vortex of light before, there was now a clear image. It was a London street, rain-slick and glistening under orange streetlights. But in the centre of the image, the air warped and buckled. A ripple of heat distortion, a shimmer in the air that was wrong, a wound in the world's skin. Faint, oily tendrils of amber light, the colour of the sky over Dymas, seeped through the tear. Eva took an involuntary step back. "My God. It's right there. In the middle of the city." "A seed of gluttony planted in a world of plenty," Isolde said, her voice a riddle. "It will grow a feast for a patient prince." Nyx solidified, their form coalescing from the shadows cast by the standing stone. Their violet eyes were fixed on the image. *The Prince's servants will be drawn to the scent. They are already hunting.* Aurora stared at the portal, a cold dread settling in her stomach. The wonder of the grove had evaporated, replaced by a stark, terrifying reality. This beautiful, alien place wasn't a sanctuary. It was a lookout post. And she was standing on the front line.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount988
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount988
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count1
3
word"shimmered"
count3
4
word"tracing"
count2
5
word"down her spine"
count1
6
word"could feel"
count1
7
word"profound"
count1
8
word"silence"
count2
9
word"pristine"
count1
10
word"perfect"
count1
11
word"crystal"
count1
12
word"resonated"
count1
13
word"resonance"
count1
14
word"familiar"
count1
15
word"warmth"
count1
16
word"glistening"
count1
17
word"stomach"
count1
18
word"stark"
count1
19
word"sanctuary"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"pulse"
2"whisper"
3"shimmered"
4"tracing"
5"down her spine"
6"could feel"
7"profound"
8"silence"
9"pristine"
10"perfect"
11"crystal"
12"resonated"
13"resonance"
14"familiar"
15"warmth"
16"glistening"
17"stomach"
18"stark"
19"sanctuary"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences72
matches
0"felt a prickle"
63.49% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences72
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences78
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords24
totalWords985
ratio0.024
matches
0"The space between. A fold in the world's fabric."
1"Or warnings,"
2"The Prince's servants will be drawn to the scent. They are already hunting."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount895
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.78
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone2
London2
Aurora7
Nyx3
Fae-forged1
Dymas1
Prince1
Eva3
Isolde3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Dymas"
3"Prince"
4"Eva"
5"Isolde"
places
0"London"
1"Fae-forged"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount985
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs23
mean42.83
std24.74
cv0.578
sampleLengths
069
186
216
350
464
530
682
716
815
979
1029
1163
124
1352
1426
1522
1640
1736
1885
1917
2025
2134
2245
95.52% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences72
matches
0"was made"
1"were fixed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs123
matches
0"was standing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences78
ratio0.013
matches
0"The air here didn't just smell different; it felt different."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount898
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"glistening under orange streetlights."
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.021158129175946547
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.0077951002227171495
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences78
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences78
mean12.63
std5.56
cv0.44
sampleLengths
04
125
215
315
410
518
624
724
820
911
105
1117
1213
1311
143
156
1617
178
1813
1910
2016
2113
2217
2310
245
259
2613
2719
2826
298
308
3115
3214
339
3418
3525
3613
3712
3817
3911
409
4118
4216
439
444
459
4612
4715
4816
4922
57.26% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3974358974358974
totalSentences78
uniqueOpeners31
46.95% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"Then, they saw her."
ratio0.014
62.25% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences71
matches
0"It grew thick and heavy,"
1"She stood on a carpet"
2"Their faintly glowing violet eyes"
3"It felt cool, impossibly smooth,"
4"She pulled her hand back,"
5"It pressed in, full and"
6"she said, her voice barely"
7"They moved forward, their steps"
8"It was made of a"
9"Its crimson light bled through"
10"It wasn't a song, not"
11"It was a melody of"
12"It was the sound of"
13"It was beautiful, and it"
14"Her silver hair, a waterfall"
15"She wore a simple dress"
16"She left no prints on"
17"she said, her voice clear"
18"She didn't turn around."
19"Her face was ageless, her"
ratio0.394
44.51% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences71
matches
0"The air shifted first."
1"It grew thick and heavy,"
2"Aurora felt a prickle on"
3"The Heartstone pendant beneath her"
4"She stood on a carpet"
5"Wildflowers, impossible in their variety"
6"Eva gasped beside her, a"
7"Nyx flowed into solidity beside"
8"Their faintly glowing violet eyes"
9"A whisper, like dry leaves"
10"*The space between."
11"A fold in the world's"
12"Aurora reached out, her fingers"
13"It felt cool, impossibly smooth,"
14"She pulled her hand back,"
15"The air here didn't just"
16"It pressed in, full and"
17"she said, her voice barely"
18"The sound didn't carry the"
19"They moved forward, their steps"
ratio0.831
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences71
matches
0"Before her, ancient oaks twisted"
1"*Or warnings,* Nyx's voice whispered"
ratio0.028
65.22% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Nyx flowed into solidity beside them, their form a dense, humanoid silhouette that drank the ambient light."
1"Aurora reached out, her fingers brushing against the petals of a flower that shimmered like liquid starlight."
2"It was made of a black, glassy substance that didn't reflect the grove's strange light but seemed to contain it, a vortex of captured starlight."
3"It was the sound of the grove itself, a harmony that resonated deep within Aurora's skull."
4"A ripple of heat distortion, a shimmer in the air that was wrong, a wound in the world's skin."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she said, her voice barely disturbing the profound silence"
1"Isolde said, her voice a riddle"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.3
leniency0.6
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.3067%