Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0XR2F1R1RRY4PEKJWQ1DH

Run Details

Duration:
32.4s
Cost:
$0.034930
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid back with a familiar groan, a sound that usually meant Eva had forgotten her keys again. I swung the heavy door inwards, my question dying on my lips. It wasn't Eva. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing, a spectre in a perfectly tailored charcoal suit. Rain hadn't dared to touch the fine material, and the humid scent of the curry house below seemed to part around him, leaving him in an oasis of expensive cologne and something else, something sharp and cold like ozone before a storm. His platinum hair was slicked back from his pale face, and his mismatched eyes, one the colour of warm amber, the other a pit of polished jet, fixed on me. He offered a smile that never reached those unsettling eyes. An ivory-handled cane rested under his gloved hand. "Aurora." My name sounded like a judgement from his lips. My hand tightened on the doorknob. "Lucien. You’re a long way from Mayfair." "Business brings me to all corners of this charming city." He gestured vaguely with his cane towards the cramped, book-choked interior of Eva's flat. "May I?" "No." The amber eye glinted with something like amusement. The black one remained impassive, a void. "Blunt. I suppose I should expect nothing less from you, Carter." "I’m not in the mood for games." I kept my body blocking the doorway, a flimsy barricade against a man who could likely walk through walls if he put his mind to it. A tabby cat, Ptolemy, wound his way around my ankles, then stopped dead, arching his back and hissing softly at the newcomer. "The cat has better manners than its keeper, I see." Lucien didn't even glance down. His focus was entirely on me. "This isn't a game. It's a courtesy." "You don't do courtesies. You deal in transactions. Favours. Debts." "And which do you imagine this is?" he asked, his voice smooth as silk sliding over a blade. I felt the crescent-shaped scar on my wrist pulse, a phantom ache from a life I’d left behind in Cardiff. I learned about men like Lucien from men like Evan. Polished exteriors hiding rotten cores. At least, that's what I told myself. It was easier than admitting the truth of the pull he had, the dangerous current that flowed beneath his flawless control. "I imagine it's you needing something you can't get from your usual sources." "Perceptive." He took a single, deliberate step forward, forcing me to either retreat or stand my ground. I didn’t move. The air thickened. "I am looking for a book. Your friend, I am told, is something of an expert in acquiring rare texts." "Eva's not here." "I am aware. Hence why I'm speaking to you." The statement hung between us. He knew she was gone. He had come for me. My heart hammered against my ribs, a frantic bird in a cage. "I don't know anything about Eva's business." "Don't you?" His gaze swept over me, lingering for a fraction of a second too long. "You live above a bar that serves more than just ale, you deliver food for a woman who trades in secrets, and you share a flat with a specialist in forbidden lore. You have a talent, Aurora, for finding yourself on the edge of the abyss." He leaned closer, his voice dropping to a confidential murmur. "I just want to ensure you don't fall in." "Is that a threat?" "It's an observation." The handle of his cane tapped a soft, rhythmic beat against the worn floorboards of the landing. Tick-tock. Like a clock counting down. "There are new players in the city. Uncouth. Unpredictable. They don't respect the old ways, the old agreements." I held his gaze, refusing to be the first to look away. We stood there, locked in a silent battle of wills on a sticky landing in Brick Lane, the distant wail of a siren the only soundtrack. The smell of frying onions and turmeric wafted up the stairs, a ridiculously mundane scent for a moment that felt anything but. "And this has something to do with a book?" I asked. "Everything has to do with this book." He finally broke eye contact, his gaze sweeping the cluttered hallway behind me. Piles of Eva's research notes, scrolls tied with faded ribbon, teetering stacks of paperbacks. "It's called the *Somnium Malphorae*. The Dream of Malphora." The name hit me like a physical blow. Malphora. An alias. A name I hadn't heard in years. A name I had used once, for a single dangerous job I’d taken to pay for this new life. A job Lucien had arranged. My carefully constructed composure fractured. "How do you know that name?" "I know a great many things." His smile returned, sharper this time. He knew he had me. "I also know that your friend is not merely looking for this book. She has it. And I need it." "I don't have it." The lie was thin, brittle. Lucien took another step, closing the distance between us until I could feel the heat radiating from his body. His heterochromatic eyes bored into mine. The amber one seemed to plead, the black one to command. It was a dizzying, disorienting combination. "Do not lie to me, Aurora. Not about this." His voice was low, laced with a raw urgency I had never heard from him before. "People are dying. Those 'uncouth players' I mentioned? They leave bodies, not calling cards. They believe this book is a weapon. A key. And they will tear this city, and you, apart to find it." He raised his gloved hand, not to touch me, but to brush a stray strand of black hair from my face. The gesture was shockingly intimate. My breath hitched. For a moment, the fixer, the half-demon, the terrifying figure of London's underworld, was just a man. A man whose gaze held a storm of things I couldn't begin to decipher. "I am not your enemy here," he said, his fingers lingering for a heartbeat near my temple. "You're not my friend, either." I pulled back, the spell broken. His hand dropped. The mask of cool indifference slid back into place. "Friendship is a luxury. This is about survival. Theirs. And yours." "Get to the point, Lucien." "Give me the book." "And if I don't?" He sighed, a soft, weary sound. "Then I cannot protect you from what comes next." He gestured behind himself with the tip of his cane, back towards the stairwell leading down to the street. "And it is coming far sooner than you think." A heavy, pounding crash echoed from downstairs. Not from the street, but from inside the building. The sound of a door splintering off its hinges. Shouts followed, guttural and harsh, in a language I didn't recognise. Ptolemy shot from my ankles and vanished into the shadows of the flat. My blood ran cold. Lucien didn't even flinch. He simply turned his gaze back to me, his expression grim. "It seems our time for negotiation has just expired."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"I pulled back [back]"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.341
leniency0.683
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.098
87.33% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1184
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"softly"
2"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.55% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1184
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"silk"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"flawless"
count1
4
word"ensure"
count1
5
word"rhythmic"
count1
6
word"constructed"
count1
7
word"fractured"
count1
8
word"could feel"
count1
9
word"pounding"
count1
10
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"silk"
2"pulse"
3"flawless"
4"ensure"
5"rhythmic"
6"constructed"
7"fractured"
8"could feel"
9"pounding"
10"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences75
matches(empty)
85.71% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences75
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"begin to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences101
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords2
totalWords1179
ratio0.002
matches
0"Somnium Malphorae"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount804
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.75
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva4
Moreau1
Ptolemy2
Cardiff1
Lucien6
Evan1
Tick-tock1
Brick1
Lane1
Piles1
London1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Lucien"
4"Evan"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Tick-tock"
2"Brick"
3"Lane"
4"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
55.66% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"sounded like a judgement from his lips"
1"something like amusement"
30.36% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.696
wordCount1179
matches
0"not to touch me, but to brush a stray strand of black hair from my face"
1"Not from the street, but from inside the building"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean26.2
std21.37
cv0.816
sampleLengths
032
13
286
318
41
515
67
726
81
926
1055
1128
1210
1318
1463
1513
1643
173
189
1934
2062
2119
224
2344
2460
2511
2643
2742
2811
2937
309
3142
3260
3360
3417
3511
3623
375
384
394
4043
4149
424
4315
449
95.91% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences75
matches
0"was slicked"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs130
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences101
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount809
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"cramped, book-choked interior"
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.03337453646477132
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.014833127317676144
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences101
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences101
mean11.67
std8.71
cv0.746
sampleLengths
020
112
23
314
442
530
610
78
81
99
106
117
1224
132
141
158
167
1711
1833
1922
2015
216
227
2310
2418
2520
2610
275
287
2921
3013
3117
323
333
3420
353
369
375
385
395
4012
417
4216
4346
4410
459
464
4720
481
495
62.38% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.4158415841584158
totalSentences101
uniqueOpeners42
46.95% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"At least, that's what I"
ratio0.014
5.92% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences71
matches
0"I swung the heavy door"
1"It wasn't Eva."
2"His platinum hair was slicked"
3"He offered a smile that"
4"My name sounded like a"
5"My hand tightened on the"
6"He gestured vaguely with his"
7"I kept my body blocking"
8"His focus was entirely on"
9"he asked, his voice smooth"
10"I felt the crescent-shaped scar"
11"I learned about men like"
12"It was easier than admitting"
13"He took a single, deliberate"
14"I didn’t move."
15"He knew she was gone."
16"He had come for me."
17"My heart hammered against my"
18"His gaze swept over me,"
19"He leaned closer, his voice"
ratio0.535
2.25% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences71
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid back"
1"I swung the heavy door"
2"It wasn't Eva."
3"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
4"Rain hadn't dared to touch"
5"His platinum hair was slicked"
6"He offered a smile that"
7"An ivory-handled cane rested under"
8"My name sounded like a"
9"My hand tightened on the"
10"He gestured vaguely with his"
11"The amber eye glinted with"
12"The black one remained impassive,"
13"I kept my body blocking"
14"A tabby cat, Ptolemy, wound"
15"Lucien didn't even glance down"
16"His focus was entirely on"
17"he asked, his voice smooth"
18"I felt the crescent-shaped scar"
19"I learned about men like"
ratio0.915
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The smell of frying onions and turmeric wafted up the stairs, a ridiculously mundane scent for a moment that felt anything but."
17.86% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"he asked, his voice smooth as silk sliding over a blade"
1"he said, his fingers lingering for a heartbeat near my temple"
2"I pulled back, the spell broken"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.073
leniency0.146
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.9292%