| 88.89% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "They materialized fully [fully]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 14 | | tagDensity | 0.643 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.111 | |
| 82.08% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 837 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "lazily" | | 2 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 837 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "vibrated" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "stark" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "footsteps" | | 6 | "crystal" | | 7 | "shimmered" | | 8 | "pulsed" | | 9 | "throb" | | 10 | "charged" | | 11 | "silk" | | 12 | "imposing" | | 13 | "desire" | | 14 | "chill" | | 15 | "echo" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 48 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 48 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 832 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 32 | | wordCount | 727 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.1 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Varga | 1 | | Gluttony | 2 | | Prince | 2 | | Belphegor | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Isolde | 5 | | Unease | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Aurora | 8 | | Nyx | 6 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Gluttony" | | 2 | "Prince" | | 3 | "Belphegor" | | 4 | "Pendant" | | 5 | "Isolde" | | 6 | "Unease" | | 7 | "Aurora" | | 8 | "Nyx" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.95 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 832 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 45.35% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 11 | | mean | 75.64 | | std | 23.35 | | cv | 0.309 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 97 | | 1 | 108 | | 2 | 89 | | 3 | 78 | | 4 | 95 | | 5 | 89 | | 6 | 43 | | 7 | 51 | | 8 | 63 | | 9 | 33 | | 10 | 86 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 100 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 88.95% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 53 | | ratio | 0.019 | | matches | | 0 | "“The Court watches the Court of Gluttony. The balance shifts.” She raised a hand, and a faint, shimmering distortion became visible only to her supernatural sight – a ripple in the air, a whisper-thin veil parting like smoke." |
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| 82.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 732 | | adjectiveStacks | 3 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "high, vine-choked canopy." | | 1 | "colossal, crystal-clear pool" | | 2 | "dense, vine-choked archway" |
| | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.03278688524590164 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017759562841530054 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 53 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 53 | | mean | 15.7 | | std | 7.17 | | cv | 0.457 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 33 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 38 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 24 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 47.80% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.37735849056603776 | | totalSentences | 53 | | uniqueOpeners | 20 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | | 0 | "It was the heartbeat of" | | 1 | "She’d found it in a" | | 2 | "she murmured, her voice carrying" | | 3 | "She raised a hand, and" | | 4 | "They came upon a clearing" | | 5 | "She dipped a finger into" | | 6 | "It felt cool, yet charged," | | 7 | "They materialized fully, their form" | | 8 | "she stated, her voice devoid" | | 9 | "She turned, her gaze sweeping" | | 10 | "they said, their voice a" | | 11 | "Her silver eyes held a" |
| | ratio | 0.261 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 44 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | | 0 | "The amber sky bledinto the" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter, her black hair" | | 2 | "Nyx, a shifting silhouette of" | | 3 | "Isolde Varga, silver hair like" | | 4 | "The air hummed with a" | | 5 | "It was the heartbeat of" | | 6 | "Vines thicker than a man’s" | | 7 | "Fruits hung heavy and impossibly" | | 8 | "The ground beneath their feet" | | 9 | "Aurora’s hand instinctively went to" | | 10 | "She’d found it in a" | | 11 | "Nyx, ever the observer, flowed" | | 12 | "Nyx whispered, their voice a" | | 13 | "Isolde stopped, her silver hair" | | 14 | "she murmured, her voice carrying" | | 15 | "She raised a hand, and" | | 16 | "Unease settled over them like" | | 17 | "The beauty was overwhelming, almost" | | 18 | "The sheer scale of the" | | 19 | "Aurora tightened her grip on" |
| | ratio | 0.957 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 8.93% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The amber sky bledinto the horizon, a molten gold that swallowed the stars whole." | | 1 | "Isolde Varga, silver hair like moonlight caught in a breeze, walked with the slow, deliberate grace of someone who knew every hidden path, her bare feet leaving…" | | 2 | "Vines thicker than a man’s arm snaked across ancient stone arches draped in glowing orchids, their petals pulsing like slow, bioluminescent hearts." | | 3 | "Fruits hung heavy and impossibly large, some the size of a child’s head, their skins shimmering with iridescent hues that shifted as they moved." | | 4 | "Nyx shifted, becoming a diffuse cloud of shadow, moving silently ahead, their incorporeal form slipping through the dense foliage as if it weren’t there." | | 5 | "Nyx flowed towards the dense, vine-choked archway leading deeper into the realm, their form dissolving into the shadows." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "she murmured, her voice carrying the weight of centuries" | | 1 | "They materialized fully, their form solid and imposing, towering slightly over Aurora" | | 2 | "she stated, her voice devoid of emotion" | | 3 | "they said, their voice a fading echo" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "she stated (state)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 14 | | tagDensity | 0.286 | | leniency | 0.571 | | rawRatio | 0.75 | | effectiveRatio | 0.429 | |