| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx turned slowly [slowly]" | | 1 | "Isolde's eyes glowed faintly [faintly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 64 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.063 | |
| 83.32% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1799 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "truly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 55.53% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1799 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "shimmered" | | 2 | "scanning" | | 3 | "could feel" | | 4 | "quickened" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "fractured" | | 7 | "stomach" | | 8 | "crystal" | | 9 | "unreadable" | | 10 | "desire" | | 11 | "flickered" | | 12 | "depths" | | 13 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.26% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 141 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1811 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 64 | | wordCount | 1234 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 2.19 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 5.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 27 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Nyx | 17 | | Tube | 1 | | London | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Leaves | 2 | | Fae | 1 | | Seer | 1 | | Isolde | 11 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Leaves" | | 3 | "Seer" | | 4 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.406 | | windowScore | 0 | |
| 52.60% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "spirals that seemed to shift when Aurora looked at them directly" | | 1 | "felt like a specimen under glass, pinne" | | 2 | "something like jasmine and winter" |
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| 34.35% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 1.657 | | wordCount | 1811 | | matches | | 0 | "Neither fully Earth nor" | | 1 | "not sharply, not like something from a nightmare, but with the slow, deliberate motion of plants following the sun" | | 2 | "not like something from a nightmare, but with the slow, deliberate motion of plants following the sun" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 141 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 81 | | mean | 22.36 | | std | 19.23 | | cv | 0.86 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 61 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 31 | | 5 | 35 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 48 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 51 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 77 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 38 | | 23 | 59 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 56 | | 27 | 27 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 50 | | 31 | 39 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 57 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 25 | | 39 | 73 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 55 | | 42 | 34 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 25 | | 47 | 44 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 28 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 217 | | matches | | 0 | "were following" | | 1 | "was going" | | 2 | "were leaving" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 141 | | ratio | 0.064 | | matches | | 0 | "The spirals weren't carved at all — they were grooves filled with something silvery that caught the fading sunlight." | | 1 | "She gasped, stumbling forward, and Nyx's hand caught her elbow — solid and cool, like touching polished stone that had been kept in a cellar." | | 2 | "The sun hung low on the horizon, but it wasn't her sun — this one burned with a softer light, casting long shadows that moved independently of the objects that cast them." | | 3 | "Not because they were strange — they were beautiful, bark spiralling in patterns that suggested movement, growth, intention." | | 4 | "The flowers turned toward her as she passed — not sharply, not like something from a nightmare, but with the slow, deliberate motion of plants following the sun." | | 5 | "The air tasted different here — sweeter, thicker, like breathing in honey and smoke." | | 6 | "The path curved around a massive oak — a real one, not the twisted beauties that lined the grove's edges — and Aurora stopped short." | | 7 | "Her silver hair cascaded past her waist, stirring though there was no wind, and her features held that same ageless quality as the trees — ancient and young all at once, like the moment between spring and summer." | | 8 | "Figures moved in the distance — chefs in elaborate whites, diners gorging at tables that stretched to the horizon." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1160 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "strange wind-blown quality," |
| | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.020689655172413793 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006896551724137931 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 141 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 141 | | mean | 12.84 | | std | 8.52 | | cv | 0.663 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 29 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 25 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 31 | | 32 | 32 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 25 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 60.52% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.3971631205673759 | | totalSentences | 141 | | uniqueOpeners | 56 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "She reached out, then hesitated." | | 2 | "She could have sworn the" | | 3 | "They stopped at the centre" | | 4 | "She gasped, stumbling forward, and" | | 5 | "She let go." | | 6 | "She took a step forward," | | 7 | "She looked up as Aurora" | | 8 | "Her silver hair cascaded past" | | 9 | "She stood in a place" | | 10 | "She gestured toward the path" | | 11 | "They'd taken perhaps a dozen" |
| | ratio | 0.13 | |
| 25.22% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 80 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose from" | | 1 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "The Heartstone pendant hung cold" | | 3 | "Nyx materialised from the shadow" | | 4 | "Aurora counted the stones again" | | 5 | "Nyx drifted closer to one" | | 6 | "The late afternoon light caught" | | 7 | "The spirals weren't carved at" | | 8 | "She reached out, then hesitated." | | 9 | "Nyx's whisper carried that strange" | | 10 | "Aurora pulled her hand back." | | 11 | "Aurora frowned at the standing" | | 12 | "The grass grew thick and" | | 13 | "She could have sworn the" | | 14 | "Nyx flowed across the ground," | | 15 | "They stopped at the centre" | | 16 | "Aurora's boots crunched against dry" | | 17 | "The moment her foot touched" | | 18 | "She gasped, stumbling forward, and" | | 19 | "The sky above them was" |
| | ratio | 0.87 | |
| 54.35% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "Before her, the trees opened" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 37.04% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "She gasped, stumbling forward, and Nyx's hand caught her elbow — solid and cool, like touching polished stone that had been kept in a cellar." | | 1 | "This sky shimmered with colours that had no names, aurora-like ribbons of violet and deep rose and something that shifted between green and gold depending on ho…" | | 2 | "The sun hung low on the horizon, but it wasn't her sun — this one burned with a softer light, casting long shadows that moved independently of the objects that …" | | 3 | "The ground felt spongy beneath her boots, alive in a way that made her skin prickle." | | 4 | "Nyx's form rippled, their silhouette blurring at the edges before snapping back into focus." | | 5 | "The path curved around a massive oak — a real one, not the twisted beauties that lined the grove's edges — and Aurora stopped short." | | 6 | "A stream wound through it, its water catching the colours of the sky and throwing them back in fractured rainbows." | | 7 | "Figures moved in the distance — chefs in elaborate whites, diners gorging at tables that stretched to the horizon." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx drifted, their form flickering between solid and translucent" | | 1 | "Nyx turned slowly, their violet eyes scanning the landscape" | | 2 | "Nyx reached out, their fingers brushing a low-hanging branch" | | 3 | "Isolde reached out, her fingers hovering just above Aurora's face" | | 4 | "Isolde returned, her expression unreadable" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |