Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0Y7BAW2D9M5056Q8SEW6Q

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Duration:
49.1s
Cost:
$0.007773
Provider:
SiliconFlow

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones rose from the earth like the ribs of some buried giant, their surfaces carved with spirals that seemed to shift when Aurora looked at them directly. She adjusted the strap of her delivery bag out of habit, though she'd left the thermal containers back at the flat. The Heartstone pendant hung cold against her collarbone for once, dormant. Nyx materialised from the shadow of the tallest stone, their violet eyes casting faint light across the autumn grass. "You're certain this is the place?" "The inscription mentioned seven oaks in a ring." Aurora counted the stones again. "Seven. Or what used to be seven." "Oak doesn't preserve that well. Not for centuries." Nyx drifted closer to one of the monoliths, their form flickering between solid and translucent. "These are old. Older than Richmond Park itself." The late afternoon light caught the carvings, and Aurora stepped closer. The spirals weren't carved at all — they were grooves filled with something silvery that caught the fading sunlight. She reached out, then hesitated. "I wouldn't." Nyx's whisper carried that strange wind-blown quality, like hearing words from across a great distance. Aurora pulled her hand back. "Why? What happens if I touch it?" "Nothing good. Fae boundaries are particular about permission." Aurora frowned at the standing stone, then at the space between each one. The grass grew thick and wild here, unlike the manicured lawns she'd passed on the walk from the Tube station. She could have sworn the temperature dropped as she stepped closer to the ring's threshold. "So we need an invitation?" "We need to knock." Nyx flowed across the ground, their shadow-form slipping between grass blades without disturbing them. They stopped at the centre of the circle and turned to face her. "Come. Stand with me." Aurora's boots crunched against dry leaves as she crossed the boundary. The moment her foot touched the inner ring, the amber light of late afternoon vanished. She gasped, stumbling forward, and Nyx's hand caught her elbow — solid and cool, like touching polished stone that had been kept in a cellar. The sky above them was wrong. Not the pale grey of London autumn. Not the deep blue of approaching evening. This sky shimmered with colours that had no names, aurora-like ribbons of violet and deep rose and something that shifted between green and gold depending on how she tilted her head. The sun hung low on the horizon, but it wasn't her sun — this one burned with a softer light, casting long shadows that moved independently of the objects that cast them. "Your hand." Nyx's voice pulled her back. Aurora realised she'd been gripping their arm hard enough to leave marks on their shadowy skin. She let go. "Sorry. I just — where are we?" "Between." Nyx turned slowly, their violet eyes scanning the landscape. "The grove exists in a pocket. Neither fully Earth nor fully Fae." The standing stones still ringed them, but the carvings now glowed with that inner silver light, bright enough to cast the clearing in sharp relief. Beyond the circle, the world opened into something that made Aurora's chest tight. Trees stretched toward the impossible sky, their trunks twisted into shapes that hurt to follow. Not because they were strange — they were beautiful, bark spiralling in patterns that suggested movement, growth, intention. Leaves in every colour of the sunset rustled without any breeze she could feel. And between the trees, carpeting the ground in rolling waves, flowers bloomed. "This is Richmond Park." Aurora's voice came out hushed. "This is — I've delivered to the houses on the edge of the park. I've walked through it." "Not this part." She took a step forward, then another. The ground felt spongy beneath her boots, alive in a way that made her skin prickle. The flowers turned toward her as she passed — not sharply, not like something from a nightmare, but with the slow, deliberate motion of plants following the sun. Except they were following her. "Don't linger on any single bloom." Nyx appeared at her shoulder, materialising from the shadow cast by one of the standing stones. "They'll try to keep you." "Keep me?" "They find mortals... compelling." Aurora quickened her pace, though she couldn't have said where she was going. The path ahead wound between the impossible trees, and she followed it because there was nothing else to do. The pendant at her throat remained cold, which meant nothing from Hel had touched this place. Small comfort. The air tasted different here — sweeter, thicker, like breathing in honey and smoke. Every inhale made her feel slightly light-headed, and she noticed that her boots were leaving impressions in the moss while Nyx left nothing at all. "You said you were human once." Nyx's form rippled, their silhouette blurring at the edges before snapping back into focus. "Centuries ago." "Do you miss it? Being... solid. All the time." "I am solid when I choose." Nyx reached out, their fingers brushing a low-hanging branch. Leaves shivered at the contact. "But miss it? Memory fades, Aurora. I remember being human the way you remember a dream upon waking. Fragments. Impressions. The feeling of sunlight on skin, though I can no longer recall what warmth truly felt like." "That's sad." "Is it?" Nyx turned their faintly glowing eyes toward her. "I experience things now that Aldric never could have imagined. Shadow has its own gifts." The path curved around a massive oak — a real one, not the twisted beauties that lined the grove's edges — and Aurora stopped short. Before her, the trees opened into a clearing bathed in that strange, shifting light. A stream wound through it, its water catching the colours of the sky and throwing them back in fractured rainbows. Willows lined the banks, their trailing branches stirring in that breeze she couldn't feel. And at the centre of it all, sitting on a stone that looked grown rather than carved, was a woman. She looked up as Aurora approached, and her eyes were the palest lavender Aurora had ever seen. Her silver hair cascaded past her waist, stirring though there was no wind, and her features held that same ageless quality as the trees — ancient and young all at once, like the moment between spring and summer. "You carry moonsilver." The woman's voice was music and wind chimes and something that made Aurora want to weep without knowing why. "And a heart that beats too fast for such a still place." Aurora's hand moved to the Fae blade at her hip, though she hadn't drawn it. The woman smiled. "Peace, child. If I wished you harm, you would not have reached this clearing." "Isolde." The name left Aurora's mouth before she'd consciously formed it. The Seer inclined her head, that smile still playing at the corners of her lips. "Aurora Carter. The Shadow who walks with you — Nyx, some called them, though names are fluid things between realms." Isolde rose from her stone seat, and Aurora noticed that where her bare feet touched the moss, no impression remained. "You've come seeking answers." "I don't even know how I got here. I mean, I know we walked, but —" "The path opens for those who need it." Isolde glided closer, her silver hair floating around her like she moved through water. "Need, not want. The distinction matters." Nyx shifted at Aurora's shoulder, their form darkening slightly. "We were sent. A pendant, a blade — gifts appeared without explanation." "Gifts." Isolde's laugh was bells and rushing water. "You mistake payment for generosity. Nothing comes free from my kind, Shadow. Nothing." Aurora's stomach tightened. "Then what's the price? For the pendant, the blade — why give them to me?" Isolde circled her slowly, those pale lavender eyes taking in every detail. Aurora felt like a specimen under glass, pinned and examined. "The Veil thins. You've felt it." Not a question. Aurora's hand moved to the Heartstone, finally warming against her skin. "Things are crossing over. Demons, or something like them." "Hel-spawn." Isolde stopped before her, close enough that Aurora could smell something like jasmine and winter. "Dymas stirs. The realm of Gluttony hungers, and its hunger bleeds through the cracks." "Why me? I deliver Chinese food. I'm not — I'm not a hero. I'm not anything." "We are what circumstance makes us." Isolde reached out, her fingers hovering just above Aurora's face. "May I?" The question was so unexpected that Aurora could only nod. Cool fingertips brushed her temple, and the world dissolved. She stood in a place of amber skies and endless vineyards, the smell of roasting meat and honey-thick wine filling her lungs. Figures moved in the distance — chefs in elaborate whites, diners gorging at tables that stretched to the horizon. And above it all, a presence watched from a palace of crystal and bone, its attention fixed on the crackling boundary between worlds. The vision fractured. Aurora gasped, stumbling back. Nyx caught her again, their grip steadying. "What did you show me?" "A truth. One of many." Isolde returned to her stone seat, her expression unreadable. "The Heartstone will guide you to tears in the Veil. The blade will cut through what you find on the other side. But neither will be enough without understanding." "Understanding of what?" "Of what you face." Isolde's eyes glowed faintly in the strange light. "Dymas is not a place of simple hunger. It consumes purpose, devours will. The demons who serve Gluttony don't simply eat flesh — they feast on the soul's desire until nothing remains but appetite." Nyx's form flickered. "You want her to cross into Hel." "I want nothing." Isolde's voice sharpened. "I see. I speak. What you do with the sight is your own choice." Aurora looked at the pendant, its crimson depths catching the grove's impossible light. The warmth against her skin had settled into a steady pulse, almost like a heartbeat. "How do I stop it? The tears, the demons — how do I seal the Veil?" Isolde's smile returned, sad and knowing. "The same way one empties the sea with a spoon: one scoop at a time." She gestured toward the path they'd come by. "Go. The grove will release you when you're ready. But remember, Aurora Carter — the Fae do not lie. When I tell you the path ahead is darkness and flame, believe that I have shown you mercy by not describing the worst." Aurora turned toward the standing stones, their glow dimming as the strange sun began to set. Nyx moved beside her, silent for once. They'd taken perhaps a dozen steps when Isolde's voice reached them, carrying across the flower-strewn clearing. "One more thing, Shadow." Nyx paused. "Aldric's mistake was ambition. Don't repeat it." The standing stones flared silver, and the world folded around them.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Nyx turned slowly [slowly]"
1"Isolde's eyes glowed faintly [faintly]"
dialogueSentences64
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.063
83.32% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1799
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count2
3
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"sharply"
2"slightly"
3"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
55.53% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1799
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"whisper"
count1
1
word"shimmered"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"could feel"
count1
4
word"quickened"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count2
6
word"fractured"
count2
7
word"stomach"
count1
8
word"crystal"
count1
9
word"unreadable"
count1
10
word"desire"
count1
11
word"flickered"
count1
12
word"depths"
count1
13
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"whisper"
1"shimmered"
2"scanning"
3"could feel"
4"quickened"
5"warmth"
6"fractured"
7"stomach"
8"crystal"
9"unreadable"
10"desire"
11"flickered"
12"depths"
13"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences94
matches(empty)
97.26% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences94
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences141
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1811
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions64
wordCount1234
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.19
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora27
Heartstone2
Nyx17
Tube1
London1
Hel1
Leaves2
Fae1
Seer1
Isolde11
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Leaves"
3"Seer"
4"Isolde"
places
0"Tube"
1"London"
2"Fae"
globalScore0.406
windowScore0
52.60% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"spirals that seemed to shift when Aurora looked at them directly"
1"felt like a specimen under glass, pinne"
2"something like jasmine and winter"
34.35% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.657
wordCount1811
matches
0"Neither fully Earth nor"
1"not sharply, not like something from a nightmare, but with the slow, deliberate motion of plants following the sun"
2"not like something from a nightmare, but with the slow, deliberate motion of plants following the sun"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences141
matches
0"noticed that her"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs81
mean22.36
std19.23
cv0.86
sampleLengths
061
119
26
320
431
535
62
720
87
98
1048
115
124
1327
144
1551
166
1777
182
1924
207
2122
2238
2359
2427
253
2656
2727
282
294
3050
3139
326
3314
342
359
3657
372
3825
3973
4020
4155
4234
4318
4414
451
4625
4744
4816
4928
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences94
matches
0"been kept"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs217
matches
0"were following"
1"was going"
2"were leaving"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences141
ratio0.064
matches
0"The spirals weren't carved at all — they were grooves filled with something silvery that caught the fading sunlight."
1"She gasped, stumbling forward, and Nyx's hand caught her elbow — solid and cool, like touching polished stone that had been kept in a cellar."
2"The sun hung low on the horizon, but it wasn't her sun — this one burned with a softer light, casting long shadows that moved independently of the objects that cast them."
3"Not because they were strange — they were beautiful, bark spiralling in patterns that suggested movement, growth, intention."
4"The flowers turned toward her as she passed — not sharply, not like something from a nightmare, but with the slow, deliberate motion of plants following the sun."
5"The air tasted different here — sweeter, thicker, like breathing in honey and smoke."
6"The path curved around a massive oak — a real one, not the twisted beauties that lined the grove's edges — and Aurora stopped short."
7"Her silver hair cascaded past her waist, stirring though there was no wind, and her features held that same ageless quality as the trees — ancient and young all at once, like the moment between spring and summer."
8"Figures moved in the distance — chefs in elaborate whites, diners gorging at tables that stretched to the horizon."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1160
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"strange wind-blown quality,"
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.020689655172413793
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.006896551724137931
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences141
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences141
mean12.84
std8.52
cv0.663
sampleLengths
029
121
211
319
46
513
67
723
88
911
1019
115
122
1315
145
157
168
1713
1820
1915
205
214
2214
2313
244
2511
2615
2725
286
297
307
3131
3232
332
345
3516
363
377
3810
3912
4025
4113
4215
4318
4414
4512
469
4718
483
497
60.52% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3971631205673759
totalSentences141
uniqueOpeners56
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences92
matches
0"She adjusted the strap of"
1"She reached out, then hesitated."
2"She could have sworn the"
3"They stopped at the centre"
4"She gasped, stumbling forward, and"
5"She let go."
6"She took a step forward,"
7"She looked up as Aurora"
8"Her silver hair cascaded past"
9"She stood in a place"
10"She gestured toward the path"
11"They'd taken perhaps a dozen"
ratio0.13
25.22% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount80
totalSentences92
matches
0"The standing stones rose from"
1"She adjusted the strap of"
2"The Heartstone pendant hung cold"
3"Nyx materialised from the shadow"
4"Aurora counted the stones again"
5"Nyx drifted closer to one"
6"The late afternoon light caught"
7"The spirals weren't carved at"
8"She reached out, then hesitated."
9"Nyx's whisper carried that strange"
10"Aurora pulled her hand back."
11"Aurora frowned at the standing"
12"The grass grew thick and"
13"She could have sworn the"
14"Nyx flowed across the ground,"
15"They stopped at the centre"
16"Aurora's boots crunched against dry"
17"The moment her foot touched"
18"She gasped, stumbling forward, and"
19"The sky above them was"
ratio0.87
54.35% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"Before her, the trees opened"
ratio0.011
37.04% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"She gasped, stumbling forward, and Nyx's hand caught her elbow — solid and cool, like touching polished stone that had been kept in a cellar."
1"This sky shimmered with colours that had no names, aurora-like ribbons of violet and deep rose and something that shifted between green and gold depending on ho…"
2"The sun hung low on the horizon, but it wasn't her sun — this one burned with a softer light, casting long shadows that moved independently of the objects that …"
3"The ground felt spongy beneath her boots, alive in a way that made her skin prickle."
4"Nyx's form rippled, their silhouette blurring at the edges before snapping back into focus."
5"The path curved around a massive oak — a real one, not the twisted beauties that lined the grove's edges — and Aurora stopped short."
6"A stream wound through it, its water catching the colours of the sky and throwing them back in fractured rainbows."
7"Figures moved in the distance — chefs in elaborate whites, diners gorging at tables that stretched to the horizon."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Nyx drifted, their form flickering between solid and translucent"
1"Nyx turned slowly, their violet eyes scanning the landscape"
2"Nyx reached out, their fingers brushing a low-hanging branch"
3"Isolde reached out, her fingers hovering just above Aurora's face"
4"Isolde returned, her expression unreadable"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
73.1395%