Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0Y7YB99MDV3YRGXAA8ZFS

Run Details

Duration:
18.5s
Cost:
$0.009367
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open before Rory finished turning the deadbolt. Eva's face went slack. "Christ. Hi." Lucien stood in the hallway outside the flat on Brick Lane, rain plastering his platinum hair to his skull. Water beaded off the shoulders of his charcoal suit. He gripped his ivory-handled cane with one hand while the other hung at his side, and his heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—fixed on her with the intensity of something that had been practicing this moment for months. "We need to talk," he said. Rory's hand stayed on the door. Behind her, Ptolemy yowled from somewhere in the flat, sensing the shift in the air the way cats did. The hallway smelled like curry from downstairs and the particular London rain that seemed to carry the grime of centuries. "No. We established—" "I'm not here about that." "Then why are you here?" Lucien's jaw worked. The rain fell harder against the window at the end of the corridor, creating a steady percussion that filled the silence between them. When he finally spoke, his voice came out rougher than she'd ever heard it, that French accent she'd once found unbearably sexy cutting through each word like broken glass. "Because Silas was attacked. Because someone's asking questions about you. Because I would rather walk into traffic than show up on your doorstep, but here we are." The words landed like stones in still water. Rory's grip on the door frame loosened. "What do you mean attacked?" "Move. Let me in before the entire building decides this is evening entertainment." She stepped aside. Lucien crossed the threshold with a slight limp she didn't remember from before, the cane taking more weight than it should have. The flat smelled like chai and old paper and Eva's constant paranoia about mold in the corner by the window. Books cluttered every surface. Scrolls leaned against the radiator like drunken soldiers. Ptolemy emerged from behind the sofa, took one look at Lucien, and retreated. Even the cat remembered him. "Silas?" Rory pressed, closing the door and engaging all three deadbolts with mechanical precision. Lucien lowered himself onto the arm of the sofa with the careful deliberation of someone managing pain. Water dripped from his cuffs onto the threadbare upholstery. He'd been to this flat exactly twice before, both times under circumstances Rory had spent the last four months actively trying to forget. "Three nights ago. Someone came through the bar's back entrance. They knew the security codes. Knew when his staff rotated. They worked him over quite thoroughly and left a message." "What message?" "That they were looking for someone. They described you." Rory's stomach performed an involuntary flip. She remained standing, arms crossed, putting deliberate distance between herself and the sofa. The space between them felt charged, like standing too close to electrical wiring. It had always been that way with him—proximity became a weapon. "Silas wouldn't tell them anything." "No. He wouldn't." Lucien's black eye seemed to absorb light rather than reflect it. "That's why I'm here and not dead. He protected you, which means you're in debt to a man who doesn't take kindly to debts. And which means I need to know what you've stumbled into." "I haven't stumbled into anything." "The work you did for Eva. The research. The thing you wouldn't tell me about because you said it was safer if I didn't know." Rory's jaw tightened. She'd made that choice deliberately, carefully, building walls between her two lives so that if one collapsed, the other might remain standing. Lucien had hated it. They'd argued about it during their last night together, voices escalating in his Mayfair flat until she'd grabbed her coat and left, neither of them bothering with the things that needed to be said. "Eva handles the research. I'm just a delivery person." "You're a liar." Not angry. Worse—resigned. "You're a brilliant liar, and I've always known it, and I've always respected the hell out of you for it. But don't lie to me now. Not when there are people actively hunting you." Thunder rumbled somewhere in the London skyline. The rain intensified, drumming against the windows with renewed violence. Rory moved to the kitchen area—three steps in this shoebox flat—and filled the kettle. Her hands needed something to do. Some ritualistic motion to anchor her while her brain caught up to the disaster unfolding in her living room. "How badly was Silas hurt?" "Broken ribs. Concussion. Nothing permanent, but the message came through loud and clear. They were professional. Measured. Not desperate, not yet. But they will be soon." Lucien shifted his weight, and she heard the sharp intake of breath he tried to mask. "I've been trying to track the incident back to its source. I have contacts. Resources. But I hit a wall." The kettle clicked off. Rory didn't move to make the tea. She stood with her hands braced on the counter, staring at nothing. "If you're asking me to leave—" "I'm asking you to let me help." The words came quietly. "I'm asking you to tell me what you're actually involved in. I'm asking you to trust me with something other than your body." That landed differently. Rory closed her eyes. When she opened them again, she turned to face him, and Lucien's entire frame seemed to shift at the sight of her expression. The crescent scar on her left wrist caught the light as she moved back into the living room. She sat on the opposite end of the sofa, maintaining the distance between them like it was something fragile enough to shatter. "There's a artifact," she began. "Something old. Something dangerous. Eva found references to it in some texts she acquired. She wanted me to help trace its current location because I'm good at the legwork. The delivery job at Golden Empress—it's perfect cover. People don't notice drivers." Lucien's expression didn't change, but something in his posture shifted. Recognition, maybe. Or the settling of pieces into a pattern he'd been trying to construct. "What kind of artifact?" "The kind that people kill for." "Then you're already in danger. You're in danger right now, sitting in this flat, and the fact that you didn't call me when this started tells me everything I need to know about what you think of me." "That's not—" "It is. It's exactly that." He stood, weight still favoring his left side, and moved to the window. Water streaked the glass, distorting the lights of Brick Lane below. "I left you alone because you asked me to. Because you said it was cleaner that way. That getting involved with someone like me would compromise you. So I respected that boundary. And now someone's hunting you, and you're still trying to do this alone." Rory's throat felt tight. The rain outside sounded like static, white noise swallowing the rest of the world. "I can't ask you to—" "You're not asking. I'm telling."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"The words came quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.194
leniency0.389
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.056
91.41% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1164
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"deliberately"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"deliberately"
1"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.04% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1164
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"intensity"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"weight"
count3
3
word"mechanical"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"charged"
count1
6
word"measured"
count1
7
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"intensity"
1"silence"
2"weight"
3"mechanical"
4"stomach"
5"charged"
6"measured"
7"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences59
matches(empty)
46.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences59
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences87
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1156
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
70.29% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount690
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.59
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory11
Brick2
Lane2
Ptolemy2
London2
French1
Eva2
Lucien10
Mayfair1
Worse1
Water3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Eva"
3"Lucien"
4"Worse"
5"Water"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"London"
globalScore0.703
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"rain that seemed to carry the grime of centuries"
1"smelled like curry from downstairs and the"
2"smelled like chai and old paper and Eva's"
3"sounded like static, white noise swallowin"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1156
matches(empty)
90.04% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences87
matches
0"been that way"
1"made that choice"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean24.6
std21.17
cv0.861
sampleLengths
014
12
264
36
445
53
65
75
855
927
1015
115
1213
1357
1413
155
1614
1749
1830
192
209
2143
225
2349
245
2525
2663
279
2840
2956
305
3162
3223
336
3434
3530
3640
3746
3825
394
406
4138
422
4374
4418
455
465
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs127
matches(empty)
11.49% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences87
ratio0.046
matches
0"He gripped his ivory-handled cane with one hand while the other hung at his side, and his heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—fixed on her with the intensity of something that had been practicing this moment for months."
1"It had always been that way with him—proximity became a weapon."
2"Worse—resigned."
3"Rory moved to the kitchen area—three steps in this shoebox flat—and filled the kettle."
99.85% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount697
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.040172166427546625
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.011477761836441894
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences87
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences87
mean13.29
std10.7
cv0.806
sampleLengths
010
14
22
319
49
536
66
76
819
920
103
115
125
133
1423
1529
1627
178
187
195
2013
213
2222
2320
244
258
2613
275
2814
2917
309
3123
3230
332
349
356
3613
3713
3811
395
4014
4135
425
4325
443
4522
464
4734
489
495
71.65% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.4367816091954023
totalSentences87
uniqueOpeners38
61.73% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences54
matches
0"Even the cat remembered him."
ratio0.019
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences54
matches
0"He gripped his ivory-handled cane"
1"She stepped aside."
2"He'd been to this flat"
3"She remained standing, arms crossed,"
4"It had always been that"
5"She'd made that choice deliberately,"
6"They'd argued about it during"
7"Her hands needed something to"
8"She stood with her hands"
9"She sat on the opposite"
10"He stood, weight still favoring"
ratio0.204
6.30% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences54
matches
0"The door swung open before"
1"Eva's face went slack."
2"Lucien stood in the hallway"
3"Water beaded off the shoulders"
4"He gripped his ivory-handled cane"
5"Rory's hand stayed on the"
6"The hallway smelled like curry"
7"Lucien's jaw worked."
8"The rain fell harder against"
9"The words landed like stones"
10"Rory's grip on the door"
11"She stepped aside."
12"Lucien crossed the threshold with"
13"The flat smelled like chai"
14"Books cluttered every surface."
15"Scrolls leaned against the radiator"
16"Ptolemy emerged from behind the"
17"Rory pressed, closing the door"
18"Lucien lowered himself onto the"
19"Water dripped from his cuffs"
ratio0.907
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"He gripped his ivory-handled cane with one hand while the other hung at his side, and his heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—fixed on her with the intensity o…"
1"The hallway smelled like curry from downstairs and the particular London rain that seemed to carry the grime of centuries."
2"The rain fell harder against the window at the end of the corridor, creating a steady percussion that filled the silence between them."
3"They'd argued about it during their last night together, voices escalating in his Mayfair flat until she'd grabbed her coat and left, neither of them bothering …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.056
leniency0.111
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.056
78.2206%