Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0Y91V8A5KFXTGJ5ZST0SH

Run Details

Duration:
4m 38s
Cost:
$0.003410
Provider:
Inceptron

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolt turned with a metallic clunk, then the lower two followed in sequence. Aurora had the door half-open before she registered exactly who stood in the hallway, and by then she'd already committed to the motion of swinging it wide. Lucien Moreau looked exactly as he always did — immaculate in a charcoal suit that probably cost more than her monthly rent, his platinum hair slicked back from that angular face. His heterochromatic eyes caught the flickering fluorescent light from the stairwell. One amber, one black. She'd forgotten how much that unsettled her. No — that wasn't true. She remembered. She'd just hoped the memory would have faded by now. "Rory." Her name in his French-tinged accent sent something unpleasant twisting in her chest. "What are you doing here?" Her voice came out sharper than she'd intended. Behind her, she heard Ptolemy meow from somewhere among the towers of paper covering the kitchen table. The cat's tail flicked into view, then disappeared again. "May I come in?" He gestured vaguely toward the narrow corridor behind her. "This seems rather public for what I have to say." "It's a public building. Lots of neighbors." But she was already stepping back, because three years of training in argument structure told her that letting him speak would give her more information than standing in the doorway exchanging pleasantries. And because some part of her — the stupid part, the part she'd tried to drown in work and alcohol and the particular kind of exhaustion that came from running package routes across London — still wanted to know what he had to say. Lucien stepped inside. He moved that way he always did, smoothly, like water flowing around stones. His cane — the one with the hidden blade, the one he'd once held to a man's throat in a back alley off Cheapside — clicked softly against the worn carpet. He surveyed the chaos of the flat with an expression she couldn't quite read. Every surface buried under books. Scrolls she'd borrowed from a collector in Camden stacked beside her laptop. Notes pinned to the wall in clusters, connected by red string in a pattern that made her therapist ask, very gently, if she was sleeping enough. "You live like this now," he said. Not a question. "I live like I've been busy." She crossed her arms, leaning against the kitchen counter. The Formica was cold through her t-shirt. "You didn't answer my question. What are you doing here, Lucien?" He turned to face her, and there it was — that look he'd given her in the parking garage behind the Golden Empress, three months ago, the night he'd told her he was leaving. The night she'd told him she didn't care. The night they'd both lied. "I needed to see you." "You needed to see me." She laughed, and it came out wrong — too high, too brittle. "You have my number. You know where I work. You've known where I live since—" "Since I looked you up after you stopped answering my calls." His voice remained level. "Yes." The silence that followed felt like it had weight. Like she could reach out and touch it, all those months of nothing. She'd blocked his number in October. It was February now. "Okay." Aurora pushed off the counter and moved toward the small window that faced the curry shop's signage across the street. The neon pink glow painted everything in her flat the color of old roses. "Okay. You needed to see me. You've seen me. What do you want?" She felt him come up behind her. Not touching — never touching, not anymore — but close enough that she could smell his cologne. Something with sandalwood and smoke. Expensive. She hated that she remembered. "I heard about the thing with Vasquez." Aurora's shoulders tightened. "There's no thing with Vasquez." "The police have him in custody. They found the files he'd been extorting from the Liu family. They found them in his office, neatly labeled, with a note stapled to the front that said 'for the police — A.C.'" She could hear the smile in his voice, though she still hadn't turned around. "That was clever. Using the old dead drop system. But the note — Rory, really? Your initials?" "It wasn't supposed to lead back to me." But she was already turning, because she couldn't keep looking at the neon and pretend this wasn't happening. "The note was stupid. I was angry. I wasn't thinking." "You were thinking exactly what needed to be thought." He said it simply, like a statement of fact. "Vasquez has been a problem for years. The Met couldn't touch him. You found a way." "I found a way because you taught me how to look." "I taught you the basics. Everything else—" He paused, those mismatched eyes searching her face. "Everything else is all you." She didn't know what to do with that. She'd spent months building up a careful structure of not thinking about Lucien Moreau. Not thinking about the way he'd appeared in her life like a complication she couldn't afford, or the way he'd stayed longer than she'd expected, or the way she'd started to rely on his information networks and his language skills and his presence in the corner of whatever grimy warehouse they were meeting in. Not thinking about the night she'd realized she wanted him to stay. "You're not here to congratulate me on my detective work." She moved away from the window, putting the kitchen table between them. A tactical retreat. That's what she told herself. "Why are you really here?" Lucien's hand came up to rest on the back of one of her mismatched chairs. His fingers were long, elegant — pianist's hands, she'd always thought, though she'd never heard him play. The cane hung from his other hand, and she remembered, with sudden clarity, the way he'd used it to disarm a man twice his size. The way he'd stepped between her and danger without hesitation. "Because I leave again tomorrow." The words hit her somewhere below the ribs. She knew, logically, that he'd been here before. That he'd told her the first time, in that parking garage, that he had to go back to Marseille. That there were people there — his father's people, the demon half of his family — who needed him. She'd known, and she'd told herself she didn't care, and she'd spent three months trying to convince herself it was true. "Okay," she said. Her voice came out steady, which felt like a small miracle. "Safe travels." "Rory." "Don't." She held up a hand. "Don't do that. Don't say my name like—like whatever you're about to say. We had something. It was—it was good, for a while. And then you left. And I survived. So whatever this is, whatever you're here to do, you need to do it quickly because I have work in the morning and—" "I was wrong to leave the way I did." The words stopped her. She stared at him, this man who never apologized, who never admitted fault, who she'd watched dismantle three separate criminal organizations through sheer force of will and intelligence. He was looking at the floor now, at the worn carpet with its pattern of faded roses. "I should have given you a choice," he said. "I should have asked you to come with me. Instead I—" He exhaled. "I assumed you wouldn't want to. And I was a coward. I told myself it was protection, keeping you out of that world, but it was cowardice. I didn't want to hear you say no." "You didn't give me the chance to say yes." "No." He looked up. "I didn't." The neon sign outside flickered. Somewhere in the flat below, a pot clattered, followed by the smell of cumin and garlic. Ptolemy wound between her ankles, demanding attention, and Aurora reached down to scratch behind his ears automatically. "I thought about you," she said. The words came out smaller than she intended. "Not in a romantic way. Just—you know. In the way you think about a mistake you made. A bad decision." "I was a bad decision?" "You were a complication." She straightened, meeting his eyes. "I had my life sorted. I had my job, my flat, my—my everything. And then you showed up with your secrets and your contacts and your stupid face—" "My face?" "Your stupid, annoying, perfectly symmetrical face, and you made everything complicated. I didn't have time for complicated. I still don't have time for complicated. I have a delivery route and a court date in March and a cat who needs feeding and—" He kissed her. Later, she would blame the neon light, or the exhaustion, or the three deadbolts that made her feel safe enough to let her walls down. But in the moment, it was just Lucien, close enough to smell that sandalwood again, one hand cupping her jaw with a gentleness she wouldn't have thought him capable of. His lips were warm. He tasted like expensive wine and something else, something she couldn't name. She kissed him back. It wasn't forgiveness — not yet, maybe not ever — but it was something. It was her hand fisting in his expensive jacket, pulling him closer. It was the small sound he made, halfway between surprise and relief. It was the way the world narrowed to just this: the two of them, in her cluttered flat, with the smell of curry drifting up through the floorboards and Ptolemy meowing impatiently for his dinner. When they broke apart, he rested his forehead against hers. "I leave tomorrow," he repeated. "I know." "I could stay." She pulled back, studying his face. The amber eye caught the neon pink. The black one stayed dark. "Your father's people—" "Can wait." He said it simply. "They've waited before. They'll wait again." "And what about Marseille? The whole—what did you call it? The realm of Avaros?" "We'll figure it out." His thumb traced along her cheekbone. "Together, if you want. Or not. I won't assume." The smart thing would be to say no. To tell him that she'd built something here, that she couldn't drop everything for a half-demon with a complicated family tree and a cane that held blades. To remind him that they'd parted badly, that she'd spent months being angry, that trust once broken didn't mend overnight. Instead, she said: "I have to work in the morning." "I know." "I'm not going to be easy about this." "I would be disappointed if you were." She laughed — a real one this time, not the brittle thing from earlier. "You're an idiot." "Probably." He smiled, and it transformed his face, made him look younger, less like the terrifying fixer and more like the man she'd started to fall for, all those months ago. "But I'm your idiot, if you'll have me." From downstairs, the curry shop owner started playing music — something old, something with strings. Aurora listened to it for a moment, felt the vibration through her bare feet on the cold floor. "Okay," she said. "Okay. But you're sleeping on the couch." "Fair." "And you're helping me with my route tomorrow. The East End runs are brutal." "I know the East End." "And you're explaining the thing with your father. The Avaros thing. I want details." He laughed, and the sound was warm, and she realized she could listen to that for a very long time. "Tomorrow," he said. "Tonight, I just want to—" He paused, searching for words, which was so unlike him that she felt her heart do something complicated in her chest. "I just want to be here. If that's all right." She looked at him, this impossible man in her impossible flat, with his expensive suit and his hidden blade and his perfect, stupid face. "Yeah," she said. "That's all right." Ptolemy meowed again, louder this time, and Aurora laughed, and Lucien smiled, and somewhere in the distance, the music played on.
created_at"2026-02-19T04:01:15.332Z" 2/19/2026, 4:01:15 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags29
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences75
tagDensity0.387
leniency0.773
rawRatio0.034
effectiveRatio0.027
80.02% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2002
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count2
2
adverb"gently"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count2
4
adverb"quickly"
count1
5
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"very"
2"gently"
3"really"
4"quickly"
5"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
75.02% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2002
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"unsettled"
count1
1
word"tinged"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"structure"
count2
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"traced"
count1
8
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"unsettled"
1"tinged"
2"flicked"
3"structure"
4"silence"
5"weight"
6"flickered"
7"traced"
8"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences111
matches(empty)
78.51% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences111
filterMatches
0"feel"
1"look"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences157
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2014
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions31
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount1379
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.44
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Ptolemy"
discoveredNames
Moreau2
French-tinged1
Ptolemy4
London1
Cheapside1
Camden1
Formica1
Golden1
Empress1
October1
February1
Lucien6
Marseille1
Aurora6
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Cheapside"
3"Lucien"
4"Aurora"
places
0"London"
1"October"
2"Marseille"
globalScore1
windowScore1
18.42% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"quite read"
1"felt like it had weight"
2"felt like a small miracle"
3"tasted like expensive wine and something"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2014
matches(empty)
81.74% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount4
totalSentences157
matches
0"moved that way"
1"was — that look"
2"hated that she"
3"smell that sandalwood"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs73
mean27.59
std24.45
cv0.886
sampleLengths
041
170
214
35
434
523
683
7104
810
933
1047
115
1232
1316
1432
1548
1635
177
188
1970
2036
2134
2211
2320
2488
2535
2667
275
2875
2916
301
3159
329
3349
3457
359
366
3738
3834
395
4037
412
4242
433
4471
454
4673
4710
485
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
67.72% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs252
matches
0"was sleeping"
1"was leaving"
2"wasn't happening"
3"were meeting"
4"was looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount17
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences157
ratio0.076
matches
0"Lucien Moreau looked exactly as he always did — immaculate in a charcoal suit that probably cost more than her monthly rent, his platinum hair slicked back from that angular face."
1"No — that wasn't true."
2"And because some part of her — the stupid part, the part she'd tried to drown in work and alcohol and the particular kind of exhaustion that came from running package routes across London — still wanted to know what he had to say."
3"His cane — the one with the hidden blade, the one he'd once held to a man's throat in a back alley off Cheapside — clicked softly against the worn carpet."
4"He turned to face her, and there it was — that look he'd given her in the parking garage behind the Golden Empress, three months ago, the night he'd told her he was leaving."
5"\"You needed to see me.\" She laughed, and it came out wrong — too high, too brittle."
6"Not touching — never touching, not anymore — but close enough that she could smell his cologne."
7"His fingers were long, elegant — pianist's hands, she'd always thought, though she'd never heard him play."
8"That there were people there — his father's people, the demon half of his family — who needed him."
9"It wasn't forgiveness — not yet, maybe not ever — but it was something."
10"She laughed — a real one this time, not the brittle thing from earlier."
11"From downstairs, the curry shop owner started playing music — something old, something with strings."
94.62% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1365
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount63
adverbRatio0.046153846153846156
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.012454212454212455
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences157
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences157
mean12.83
std10.61
cv0.827
sampleLengths
014
127
231
311
44
57
65
72
810
914
105
118
1217
139
1413
1510
1639
1744
183
1913
2031
2114
225
2312
2426
257
263
2715
287
2911
3034
318
325
335
3417
3515
3615
371
389
3913
406
414
4221
4314
4413
457
4617
475
481
495
46.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats21
diversityRatio0.35668789808917195
totalSentences157
uniqueOpeners56
66.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences100
matches
0"Somewhere in the flat below,"
1"Instead, she said:"
ratio0.02
28.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount48
totalSentences100
matches
0"His heterochromatic eyes caught the"
1"She'd forgotten how much that"
2"She'd just hoped the memory"
3"Her name in his French-tinged"
4"Her voice came out sharper"
5"He gestured vaguely toward the"
6"He moved that way he"
7"His cane — the one"
8"He surveyed the chaos of"
9"She crossed her arms, leaning"
10"He turned to face her,"
11"She laughed, and it came"
12"His voice remained level"
13"She'd blocked his number in"
14"It was February now."
15"She felt him come up"
16"She hated that she remembered."
17"She could hear the smile"
18"He said it simply, like"
19"He paused, those mismatched eyes"
ratio0.48
55.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount81
totalSentences100
matches
0"The deadbolt turned with a"
1"Aurora had the door half-open"
2"Lucien Moreau looked exactly as"
3"His heterochromatic eyes caught the"
4"She'd forgotten how much that"
5"She'd just hoped the memory"
6"Her name in his French-tinged"
7"Her voice came out sharper"
8"The cat's tail flicked into"
9"He gestured vaguely toward the"
10"Lucien stepped inside."
11"He moved that way he"
12"His cane — the one"
13"He surveyed the chaos of"
14"Every surface buried under books."
15"Scrolls she'd borrowed from a"
16"Notes pinned to the wall"
17"She crossed her arms, leaning"
18"The Formica was cold through"
19"He turned to face her,"
ratio0.81
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences100
matches
0"To tell him that she'd"
1"To remind him that they'd"
ratio0.02
51.67% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"And because some part of her — the stupid part, the part she'd tried to drown in work and alcohol and the particular kind of exhaustion that came from running p…"
1"Notes pinned to the wall in clusters, connected by red string in a pattern that made her therapist ask, very gently, if she was sleeping enough."
2"That there were people there — his father's people, the demon half of his family — who needed him."
3"Later, she would blame the neon light, or the exhaustion, or the three deadbolts that made her feel safe enough to let her walls down."
4"It was her hand fisting in his expensive jacket, pulling him closer."
5"To tell him that she'd built something here, that she couldn't drop everything for a half-demon with a complicated family tree and a cane that held blades."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags29
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"She laughed (laugh)"
1"he repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences75
tagDensity0.173
leniency0.347
rawRatio0.154
effectiveRatio0.053
81.4488%