Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0YBWVTJKHNP6KDWHGK85N

Run Details

Duration:
11.2s
Cost:
$0.000305
Provider:
Clarifai

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The chime of thedoorbell sliced through the quiet hum of the flat above the curry house. Rory froze mid-sweep, her broom handle clattering against the worn linoleum. Her heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic bird trapped in her chest. She’d thought the past was sealed behind her, buried under the weight of her new life, her part-time job, the suffocating walls of Eva’s cramped flat. But here he was. Lucien Moreau, the Frenchman, the half-demon fixer, the man who’d walked out of her life like it was nothing, leaving only a scar on her wrist and a hollow ache she’d learned to ignore. She didn’t move towards the door. Instead, she leaned against the kitchen counter, her breath coming in shallow gasps, trying to steady the frantic drumming in her ears. The tabby cat, Ptolemy, padded silently from the bookshelf, his fur bristling slightly as he sniffed the air near the door. He didn’t meow, just watched the intruder with wary, intelligent eyes. The chime sounded again, sharper this time, demanding. Rory’s knuckles whitened where she gripped the counter edge. She knew that voice, even before the door swung inward. It wasn’t just the timbre, the way it carried an effortless authority, but the scent that followed him – expensive leather, something sharp and metallic beneath it, like ozone before a storm. Lucien Moreau stood framed in the doorway, a silhouette against the dim hallway light. He was taller than she remembered, his tailored charcoal suit immaculate, the ivory-handled cane resting casually against his thigh. His eyes, one amber, one black, swept the small, cluttered room with a predator’s precision, taking in the stacks of books, the maps pinned to the walls, the single armchair shoved into a corner. “Rory,” he said, his voice low and smooth, sliding into the space like silk. “Or should I call you Laila? Malphora?” He stepped further into the flat, closing the door behind him with a soft click that echoed in the sudden silence. His gaze landed on her, and a flicker of something unreadable crossed his face – surprise? amusement? – before it settled into its usual mask of cool detachment. “I didn’t expect you to be here. Or anywhere, really.” Rory didn’t answer immediately. She watched him, the scar on her left wrist burning beneath her sleeve. The memory of him, of that night in Paris, flooded back – the heat of his body, the sharp edge of his words, the cold finality of his departure. “You didn’t come to see me,” she finally said, her voice tight, lacking its usual sharpness. “You came to see Eva.” She gestured vaguely towards the bedroom door, the unspoken accusation hanging heavy in the air. “Or maybe you just needed a fix.” Lucien’s lips quirked, a ghost of a smile touching his lips. “A fix? How delightfully melodramatic. Though, I suppose it’s understandable, given your… history.” He took a slow step closer, his polished shoes clicking on the worn floorboards. “I came to see you, Rory. To see how the girl who ran from her past was faring.” He paused, his amber eye locking onto hers. “You look… well. Busy. Buried under books and curry smells.” “Busy is one word for it,” Rory managed, forcing a brittle laugh that died in her throat. She pushed off the counter, moving towards the kitchen sink, her back to him. “Running a restaurant, studying law, dodging demons. The usual.” She kept her voice flat, but her hands trembled slightly as she turned on the tap, the sound of water a desperate attempt to fill the silence. “What do you want, Lucien? Another job? Another piece of information? Or just to watch the bird you scared fly away?” He followed her, his presence a tangible weight in the small space. “I want answers, Rory. Why did you leave? Why did you run? And why, after all this time, do you still carry that scar like a badge of honor?” He gestured towards her wrist, his voice dropping to a dangerous whisper. “It’s not just a childhood accident, is it? It’s a mark, a reminder. Of him. Of what you ran from.” Rory whirled around, her eyes blazing. “It’s a scar, Lucien! Just a scar!” The words exploded out, raw and angry. “A stupid accident with a broken window when I was twelve. Nothing more!” She took a step back, her heart pounding not just from his words, but from the sudden, terrifying surge of old feelings she’d thought dead. “You think you know everything? You think you can just waltz back into my life and demand answers?” “I think,” Lucien countered, his voice calm, infuriatingly calm, “that you’re lying. And that you’re scared. Scared of what you feel, scared of what you might become if you let me in again.” He took another step, closing the distance between them until he was mere inches away, his gaze intense, unwavering. “You ran from Evan, didn’t you? But you never ran from me. Not really. Not when it mattered.” Rory stared up at him, the scent of him overwhelming – leather, ozone, something else, something primal. The scar on her wrist throbbed, a physical echo of the pain he’d caused. “You didn’t run from me,” she whispered, the words catching in her throat. “You left. You walked away. You chose your world over mine.” She looked away, her throat tight. “You chose the darkness.” “And you chose the light,” Lucien murmured, his voice rough now. He reached out, not to touch her, but to brush a stray strand of black hair from her forehead. His touch was surprisingly gentle, a stark contrast to the sharpness of his words. “But the light can be blinding, Rory. Sometimes you need someone who understands the shadows.” He paused, his amber eye searching hers. “Do you still feel it? That pull? That… something?” Rory didn’t answer. She felt the heat of his hand on her skin, the ghost of his touch burning a path down her spine. The past wasn’t just a memory anymore; it was a living, breathing thing in the cramped flat, pressing in on her from all sides. The scent of him, the sound of his voice, the sheer, undeniable force of his presence – it was a storm she’d thought she’d weathered, but now it was crashing down around her, leaving her breathless and terrified and… achingly, terrifyingly alive. The door to her past had swung open, and she was standing right in the middle of it, with no way to close it again.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"He stepped further [further]"
1"she finally said [finally]"
2"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
3"She looked away [away]"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.64
leniency1
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.25
81.70% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1093
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"really"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
3.93% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1093
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"effortless"
count1
2
word"predator"
count1
3
word"silk"
count1
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"flicker"
count1
7
word"unreadable"
count1
8
word"unspoken"
count1
9
word"trembled"
count1
10
word"tangible"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count1
12
word"reminder"
count1
13
word"pounding"
count1
14
word"unwavering"
count1
15
word"throbbed"
count1
16
word"echo"
count1
17
word"stark"
count1
18
word"down her spine"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"effortless"
2"predator"
3"silk"
4"echoed"
5"silence"
6"flicker"
7"unreadable"
8"unspoken"
9"trembled"
10"tangible"
11"whisper"
12"reminder"
13"pounding"
14"unwavering"
15"throbbed"
16"echo"
17"stark"
18"down her spine"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences53
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences53
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences62
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1095
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount802
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.87
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva1
Moreau2
Frenchman1
Ptolemy1
Paris1
Lucien5
Rory7
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Lucien"
4"Rory"
places
0"Paris"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
17.35% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.826
wordCount1095
matches
0"not just from his words, but from the sudden, terrifying surge of old feelings she’d thou"
1"not to touch her, but to brush a stray strand of black hair from her forehead"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"knew that voice"
21.50% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs13
mean84.23
std18.97
cv0.225
sampleLengths
0104
160
2126
380
489
574
688
773
876
970
1065
1175
12115
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
83.04% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs114
matches
0"was crashing"
1"was standing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences62
ratio0.113
matches
0"It wasn’t just the timbre, the way it carried an effortless authority, but the scent that followed him – expensive leather, something sharp and metallic beneath it, like ozone before a storm."
1"His gaze landed on her, and a flicker of something unreadable crossed his face – surprise?"
2"– before it settled into its usual mask of cool detachment."
3"The memory of him, of that night in Paris, flooded back – the heat of his body, the sharp edge of his words, the cold finality of his departure."
4"Rory stared up at him, the scent of him overwhelming – leather, ozone, something else, something primal."
5"The past wasn’t just a memory anymore; it was a living, breathing thing in the cramped flat, pressing in on her from all sides."
6"The scent of him, the sound of his voice, the sheer, undeniable force of his presence – it was a storm she’d thought she’d weathered, but now it was crashing down around her, leaving her breathless and terrified and…"
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount800
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.035
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.015
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences62
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences62
mean17.66
std10.47
cv0.593
sampleLengths
016
111
213
326
44
534
66
722
821
911
108
119
1210
1332
1414
1519
1634
1714
1828
1916
201
2111
2210
234
2413
2529
2616
2720
287
2911
3027
3126
3210
3317
3414
3536
3621
3712
3841
3920
406
4114
4238
4318
4452
4518
4617
4714
4813
4917
52.69% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3548387096774194
totalSentences62
uniqueOpeners22
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences52
matches
0"Instead, she leaned against the"
1"achingly, terrifyingly alive."
ratio0.038
12.31% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences52
matches
0"Her heart hammered against her"
1"She’d thought the past was"
2"She didn’t move towards the"
3"He didn’t meow, just watched"
4"She knew that voice, even"
5"It wasn’t just the timbre,"
6"He was taller than she"
7"His eyes, one amber, one"
8"he said, his voice low"
9"He stepped further into the"
10"His gaze landed on her,"
11"She watched him, the scar"
12"she finally said, her voice"
13"She gestured vaguely towards the"
14"He took a slow step"
15"He paused, his amber eye"
16"She pushed off the counter,"
17"She kept her voice flat,"
18"He followed her, his presence"
19"He gestured towards her wrist,"
ratio0.519
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences52
matches
0"The chime of thedoorbell sliced"
1"Rory froze mid-sweep, her broom"
2"Her heart hammered against her"
3"She’d thought the past was"
4"Lucien Moreau, the Frenchman, the"
5"She didn’t move towards the"
6"The tabby cat, Ptolemy, padded"
7"He didn’t meow, just watched"
8"The chime sounded again, sharper"
9"Rory’s knuckles whitened where she"
10"She knew that voice, even"
11"It wasn’t just the timbre,"
12"Lucien Moreau stood framed in"
13"He was taller than she"
14"His eyes, one amber, one"
15"he said, his voice low"
16"He stepped further into the"
17"His gaze landed on her,"
18"Rory didn’t answer immediately."
19"She watched him, the scar"
ratio0.923
96.15% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences52
matches
0"– before it settled into"
ratio0.019
66.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Lucien Moreau, the Frenchman, the half-demon fixer, the man who’d walked out of her life like it was nothing, leaving only a scar on her wrist and a hollow ache…"
1"Instead, she leaned against the kitchen counter, her breath coming in shallow gasps, trying to steady the frantic drumming in her ears."
2"It wasn’t just the timbre, the way it carried an effortless authority, but the scent that followed him – expensive leather, something sharp and metallic beneath…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount10
matches
0"she finally said, her voice tight, lacking its usual sharpness"
1"She gestured vaguely, the unspoken accusation hanging heavy in the air"
2"He took, his polished shoes clicking on the worn floorboards"
3"He paused, his amber eye locking onto hers"
4"She kept, but her hands trembled slightly as she turned on the tap, the sound of water a desperate attempt to fill the silence"
5"He gestured, his voice dropping to a dangerous whisper"
6"she whispered, the words catching in her throat"
7"She looked away, her throat tight"
8"Lucien murmured, his voice rough now"
9"He paused, his amber eye searching hers"
70.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.16
leniency0.32
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.16
70.1670%