| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "He stepped further [further]" | | 1 | "she finally said [finally]" | | 2 | "She gestured vaguely [vaguely]" | | 3 | "She looked away [away]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.64 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |
| 81.70% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1093 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 3.93% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1093 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "effortless" | | 2 | "predator" | | 3 | "silk" | | 4 | "echoed" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "flicker" | | 7 | "unreadable" | | 8 | "unspoken" | | 9 | "trembled" | | 10 | "tangible" | | 11 | "whisper" | | 12 | "reminder" | | 13 | "pounding" | | 14 | "unwavering" | | 15 | "throbbed" | | 16 | "echo" | | 17 | "stark" | | 18 | "down her spine" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 53 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 52 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1095 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 18 | | wordCount | 802 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.87 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 1 | | Moreau | 2 | | Frenchman | 1 | | Ptolemy | 1 | | Paris | 1 | | Lucien | 5 | | Rory | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Ptolemy" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Rory" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 17.35% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.826 | | wordCount | 1095 | | matches | | 0 | "not just from his words, but from the sudden, terrifying surge of old feelings she’d thou" | | 1 | "not to touch her, but to brush a stray strand of black hair from her forehead" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | |
| 21.50% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 13 | | mean | 84.23 | | std | 18.97 | | cv | 0.225 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 104 | | 1 | 60 | | 2 | 126 | | 3 | 80 | | 4 | 89 | | 5 | 74 | | 6 | 88 | | 7 | 73 | | 8 | 76 | | 9 | 70 | | 10 | 65 | | 11 | 75 | | 12 | 115 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.04% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "was crashing" | | 1 | "was standing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 62 | | ratio | 0.113 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn’t just the timbre, the way it carried an effortless authority, but the scent that followed him – expensive leather, something sharp and metallic beneath it, like ozone before a storm." | | 1 | "His gaze landed on her, and a flicker of something unreadable crossed his face – surprise?" | | 2 | "– before it settled into its usual mask of cool detachment." | | 3 | "The memory of him, of that night in Paris, flooded back – the heat of his body, the sharp edge of his words, the cold finality of his departure." | | 4 | "Rory stared up at him, the scent of him overwhelming – leather, ozone, something else, something primal." | | 5 | "The past wasn’t just a memory anymore; it was a living, breathing thing in the cramped flat, pressing in on her from all sides." | | 6 | "The scent of him, the sound of his voice, the sheer, undeniable force of his presence – it was a storm she’d thought she’d weathered, but now it was crashing down around her, leaving her breathless and terrified and…" |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 800 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.035 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 62 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 62 | | mean | 17.66 | | std | 10.47 | | cv | 0.593 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 34 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 32 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 34 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 28 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 29 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 27 | | 31 | 26 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 36 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 41 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 38 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 52 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 52.69% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.3548387096774194 | | totalSentences | 62 | | uniqueOpeners | 22 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she leaned against the" | | 1 | "achingly, terrifyingly alive." |
| | ratio | 0.038 | |
| 12.31% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "Her heart hammered against her" | | 1 | "She’d thought the past was" | | 2 | "She didn’t move towards the" | | 3 | "He didn’t meow, just watched" | | 4 | "She knew that voice, even" | | 5 | "It wasn’t just the timbre," | | 6 | "He was taller than she" | | 7 | "His eyes, one amber, one" | | 8 | "he said, his voice low" | | 9 | "He stepped further into the" | | 10 | "His gaze landed on her," | | 11 | "She watched him, the scar" | | 12 | "she finally said, her voice" | | 13 | "She gestured vaguely towards the" | | 14 | "He took a slow step" | | 15 | "He paused, his amber eye" | | 16 | "She pushed off the counter," | | 17 | "She kept her voice flat," | | 18 | "He followed her, his presence" | | 19 | "He gestured towards her wrist," |
| | ratio | 0.519 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "The chime of thedoorbell sliced" | | 1 | "Rory froze mid-sweep, her broom" | | 2 | "Her heart hammered against her" | | 3 | "She’d thought the past was" | | 4 | "Lucien Moreau, the Frenchman, the" | | 5 | "She didn’t move towards the" | | 6 | "The tabby cat, Ptolemy, padded" | | 7 | "He didn’t meow, just watched" | | 8 | "The chime sounded again, sharper" | | 9 | "Rory’s knuckles whitened where she" | | 10 | "She knew that voice, even" | | 11 | "It wasn’t just the timbre," | | 12 | "Lucien Moreau stood framed in" | | 13 | "He was taller than she" | | 14 | "His eyes, one amber, one" | | 15 | "he said, his voice low" | | 16 | "He stepped further into the" | | 17 | "His gaze landed on her," | | 18 | "Rory didn’t answer immediately." | | 19 | "She watched him, the scar" |
| | ratio | 0.923 | |
| 96.15% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "– before it settled into" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 66.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 28 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien Moreau, the Frenchman, the half-demon fixer, the man who’d walked out of her life like it was nothing, leaving only a scar on her wrist and a hollow ache…" | | 1 | "Instead, she leaned against the kitchen counter, her breath coming in shallow gasps, trying to steady the frantic drumming in her ears." | | 2 | "It wasn’t just the timbre, the way it carried an effortless authority, but the scent that followed him – expensive leather, something sharp and metallic beneath…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "she finally said, her voice tight, lacking its usual sharpness" | | 1 | "She gestured vaguely, the unspoken accusation hanging heavy in the air" | | 2 | "He took, his polished shoes clicking on the worn floorboards" | | 3 | "He paused, his amber eye locking onto hers" | | 4 | "She kept, but her hands trembled slightly as she turned on the tap, the sound of water a desperate attempt to fill the silence" | | 5 | "He gestured, his voice dropping to a dangerous whisper" | | 6 | "she whispered, the words catching in her throat" | | 7 | "She looked away, her throat tight" | | 8 | "Lucien murmured, his voice rough now" | | 9 | "He paused, his amber eye searching hers" |
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| 70.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Lucien murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.16 | | leniency | 0.32 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.16 | |