| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.522 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 76.28% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1054 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "really" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1054 | | totalAiIsms | 30 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "furrowed" | | 1 | "tapestry" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "remarkable" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "unreadable" | | 6 | "cascading" | | 7 | "silk" | | 8 | "pulsed" | | 9 | "comforting" | | 10 | "weight" | | 11 | "could feel" | | 12 | "familiar" | | 13 | "perfect" | | 14 | "fractured" | | 15 | "enigma" | | 16 | "echo" | | 17 | "tracing" | | 18 | "resonance" | | 19 | "anticipation" | | 20 | "resolve" | | 21 | "churning" | | 22 | "flicker" | | 23 | "depths" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 75.89% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1049 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 68.32% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 38 | | wordCount | 857 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.63 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 14 | | Vines | 1 | | Isolde | 8 | | Varga | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Nyx | 6 | | Following | 1 | | Dymas | 1 | | Prince | 1 | | Belphegor | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Varga" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Prince" | | 5 | "Belphegor" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.683 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed more solid yet still possessed an unnerving fluidity, as if their edges weren’t quite defined" | | 1 | "felt like a trap, finely wrought and ex" | | 2 | "as if peering into a distant reflection" | | 3 | "quite define" | | 4 | "as if sensing a kinship" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.953 | | wordCount | 1049 | | matches | | 0 | "not from the current, but from an unseen, immense presence stirring beneath the surfac" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.90% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 22 | | mean | 47.68 | | std | 21.82 | | cv | 0.458 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 113 | | 1 | 58 | | 2 | 56 | | 3 | 62 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 41 | | 6 | 46 | | 7 | 69 | | 8 | 37 | | 9 | 53 | | 10 | 54 | | 11 | 33 | | 12 | 48 | | 13 | 69 | | 14 | 49 | | 15 | 42 | | 16 | 41 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 34 | | 20 | 37 | | 21 | 68 |
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| 99.78% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 129 | | matches | | |
| 66.67% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 75 | | ratio | 0.027 | | matches | | 0 | "The silence here wasn't empty; it hummed with a low vibration, a deep, resonant thrum that settled into Rory's bones." | | 1 | "She didn't tread; her feet seemed to hover just above the flower-strewn ground, leaving no trace." |
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| 90.43% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 862 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "single, dew-kissed berry" |
| | adverbCount | 38 | | adverbRatio | 0.04408352668213457 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015081206496519721 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 75 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 75 | | mean | 13.99 | | std | 5.75 | | cv | 0.411 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 29 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 26 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 19 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 31 |
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| 64.44% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.4266666666666667 | | totalSentences | 75 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 52.08% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly, from the depths of" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 95.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn't a cave, not" | | 1 | "It was both, and neither." | | 2 | "They stood a step behind" | | 3 | "she murmured, her gaze sweeping" | | 4 | "Her pale lavender eyes surveyed" | | 5 | "She didn't tread; her feet" | | 6 | "she stated, her voice like" | | 7 | "Their voice seemed to emanate" | | 8 | "It pulsed with a low," | | 9 | "She could feel its faint" | | 10 | "She’d never understood its origin," | | 11 | "It felt like a trap," | | 12 | "She didn’t eat it, but" | | 13 | "she observed, her eyes unfocused," | | 14 | "They hadn't come here for" | | 15 | "They extended a shadowy hand," | | 16 | "they said, their voice barely" | | 17 | "She felt a familiar thrum" | | 18 | "She looked to Isolde, who" | | 19 | "It was the colour of" |
| | ratio | 0.313 | |
| 45.94% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 53 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "The air shifted, growing heavy" | | 1 | "Rory pushed aside a curtain" | | 2 | "It wasn't a cave, not" | | 3 | "It was both, and neither." | | 4 | "The silence here wasn't empty;" | | 5 | "Nyx whispered, their voice like" | | 6 | "They stood a step behind" | | 7 | "Rory reached out, her fingers" | | 8 | "A faint warmth radiated from" | | 9 | "she murmured, her gaze sweeping" | | 10 | "Vines laden with plump, jewel-toned" | | 11 | "The air itself tasted of" | | 12 | "Her pale lavender eyes surveyed" | | 13 | "She didn't tread; her feet" | | 14 | "she stated, her voice like" | | 15 | "Rory glanced at her, a" | | 16 | "Isolde inclined her head, a" | | 17 | "Nyx moved further into the" | | 18 | "Their voice seemed to emanate" | | 19 | "Rory’s hand instinctively went to" |
| | ratio | 0.828 | |
| 78.13% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, surrounded by such strangeness," |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 61.69% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Beneath them, wildflowers bloomed in riotous colour, an impossible tapestry of blues, violets, and fiery oranges that carpeted the ground." | | 1 | "The silence here wasn't empty; it hummed with a low vibration, a deep, resonant thrum that settled into Rory's bones." | | 2 | "For once, their form seemed more solid, yet still possessed an unnerving fluidity, as if their edges weren’t quite defined." | | 3 | "Isolde inclined her head, a gesture that sent her silken hair cascading over her shoulders." | | 4 | "Nyx paused at the edge of the pool, their form rippling slightly, as if the water’s magic was agitating their shadowy essence." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "she murmured, her gaze sweeping over the scene" | | 1 | "Rory asked, her voice firm, trying to ground herself in purpose" | | 2 | "Isolde replied, her gaze finally settling back on Rory, sharp and knowing" | | 3 | "They extended, their fingers elongating, tracing the air" | | 4 | "they said, their voice barely a breath" | | 5 | "Isolde murmured, almost to herself" | | 6 | "Rory pressed, her voice sharp" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "she stated (state)" | | 3 | "Rory admitted (admit)" | | 4 | "she observed (observe)" | | 5 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 6 | "Rory pressed (press)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.435 | | leniency | 0.87 | | rawRatio | 0.7 | | effectiveRatio | 0.609 | |