Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0YD1WVXGZ00EZ50GQRXMZ

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Duration:
29.7s
Cost:
$0.000927

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into the dimly lit chamber of the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden, the air thick with the scent of damp concrete and something else—something metallic. Her sharp jaw tightened as she surveyed the scene. Flickering fluorescent lights cast eerie shadows across the walls, illuminating the remnants of a struggle. A body lay sprawled on the ground, limbs twisted at unnatural angles. Quinn knelt beside it, her worn leather watch creaking as she leaned in closer. The victim’s face, pale and lifeless, bore a look of terror. She noted the jagged cut across the throat, a deep crimson line that contrasted starkly with the gray of the station floor. “Quinn,” a voice called from behind her. It was DS Mark Thompson, his brow furrowed as he approached. “You’re not going to like this.” Quinn straightened, her eyes narrowing. “What do you mean?” He gestured toward the body. “The coroner’s report says the victim died from a supernatural cause. No signs of struggle, no defensive wounds. Just… gone.” “Gone?” Quinn echoed, her voice low. “That doesn’t make sense. Look at the blood. This was a fight.” Thompson shrugged, his expression skeptical. “Maybe it was a ritual gone wrong. You know how these underground markets operate. People dabble in things they don’t understand.” Quinn’s gaze flicked to the walls, where strange symbols were scrawled in what looked like dried blood. “Rituals don’t leave this kind of mess. This was personal.” She reached for her notepad, jotting down her observations. “And where’s the bone token? You can’t enter the Veil Market without one.” “Maybe someone got in without it,” Thompson suggested, crossing his arms. “Or maybe they didn’t need one at all.” Quinn shot him a look, her patience wearing thin. “You’re not seriously suggesting that someone just waltzed in here and—” “Maybe they did,” he interrupted, his voice rising. “You know how these things work. The Market moves every full moon. It’s chaotic.” “Chaos doesn’t explain this.” Quinn pointed at the symbols again. “These markings are protective sigils. Whoever did this knew what they were doing. They wanted to keep something in, not out.” Thompson frowned, glancing around the chamber. “So, what are you saying? That this was a setup?” “Exactly.” Quinn stood, her mind racing. “Someone wanted this person dead, and they used the Market to do it. But why here? Why now?” “Maybe they were trying to send a message,” Thompson suggested, his voice dropping to a whisper. “You know how the cliques operate. They don’t play nice.” Quinn shook her head, frustration bubbling beneath the surface. “This isn’t just about cliques. There’s something bigger at play. We need to find out who else was here.” She turned her attention back to the body, scanning for anything that might provide a clue. A glint caught her eye—a small brass compass, half-buried in the dirt beside the victim’s hand. She knelt again, carefully lifting it. The casing had a patina of verdigris, and the face was etched with protective sigils. “Is that what I think it is?” Thompson asked, peering over her shoulder. “Veil Compass,” Quinn confirmed, her heart racing. “It points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal. Whoever killed this person was looking for something.” “Or someone,” Thompson added, his voice low. “What if they were trying to open a rift?” Quinn’s mind raced. “We need to find out where this compass leads. It could be the key to understanding what happened here.” “Are you sure that’s wise?” Thompson asked, concern creeping into his tone. “We don’t know what we’re dealing with.” Quinn shot him a look, her determination hardening. “We don’t have a choice. If we don’t follow this lead, we might miss our chance to catch whoever did this.” She pocketed the compass and stood, her eyes scanning the chamber once more. “Let’s check the perimeter. There might be more evidence.” As they moved through the shadows, Quinn’s instincts kicked in. She noticed a faint trail of blood leading toward a darkened corner of the station. The air felt charged, as if something lingered just out of sight. “Quinn, wait,” Thompson said, his voice tense. “We should stick together.” “Stay close,” she replied, her focus unwavering. “But we can’t let fear hold us back.” They crept toward the corner, where the blood trail faded into the darkness. Quinn’s heart raced as she reached for her flashlight, illuminating the area. The beam caught on something—a torn piece of fabric snagged on a jagged edge of concrete. “Look at this,” she said, crouching to examine it. The fabric was dark, frayed at the edges, and bore a symbol she recognized from her research on the occult. “Part of a cloak?” Thompson asked, his brow furrowing. “More like a uniform,” Quinn replied, her mind racing. “This belongs to one of the cliques. They’re involved in something much larger than we thought.” “Should we report this?” Thompson asked, glancing nervously around the chamber. Quinn shook her head. “Not yet. We need to gather more evidence first. If we go to the higher-ups now, they’ll shut us down before we can connect the dots.” “Fine, but we need to be careful,” he warned, his voice low. “We don’t know who else is watching.” Quinn nodded, her resolve hardening. “Let’s head back to the surface. We need to find Eva. She might have insights into the symbols and the compass.” As they retraced their steps, Quinn’s mind raced with possibilities. The Veil Market held secrets, and she was determined to uncover them. The shadows whispered of danger, but she felt a thrill of anticipation. This case was far from over, and she wouldn’t rest until she found the truth.
total_cost0.0009272999999999999

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.422
leniency0.844
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.52% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount954
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"nervously"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"nervously"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Thompson"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount954
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"furrowed"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"chaotic"
count1
4
word"racing"
count3
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"scanning"
count2
7
word"glint"
count1
8
word"etched"
count1
9
word"raced"
count3
10
word"charged"
count1
11
word"unwavering"
count1
12
word"furrowing"
count1
13
word"resolve"
count1
14
word"determined"
count1
15
word"anticipation"
count1
highlights
0"furrowed"
1"echoed"
2"flicked"
3"chaotic"
4"racing"
5"whisper"
6"scanning"
7"glint"
8"etched"
9"raced"
10"charged"
11"unwavering"
12"furrowing"
13"resolve"
14"determined"
15"anticipation"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
94.14% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences54
matches
0"a thrill of anticipation"
1"felt a thrill"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences54
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences80
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords949
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount522
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity3.45
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn18
Tube1
Camden1
Mark1
Thompson11
Veil1
Market1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Mark"
3"Thompson"
4"Market"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
82.43% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences37
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like dried blood"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount949
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
95.15% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean26.36
std12.73
cv0.483
sampleLengths
053
159
224
39
425
518
626
749
819
920
1022
1131
1216
1324
1426
1528
1653
1713
1824
1916
2022
2119
2229
2322
2437
2511
2615
2741
2829
299
3025
3111
3230
3319
3426
3549
85.77% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences54
matches
0"were scrawled"
1"was etched"
2"was determined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs111
matches(empty)
35.71% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences80
ratio0.038
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into the dimly lit chamber of the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden, the air thick with the scent of damp concrete and something else—something metallic."
1"A glint caught her eye—a small brass compass, half-buried in the dirt beside the victim’s hand."
2"The beam caught on something—a torn piece of fabric snagged on a jagged edge of concrete."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount526
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.02091254752851711
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0076045627376425855
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences80
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences80
mean11.86
std5.46
cv0.46
sampleLengths
029
19
215
312
414
511
622
77
811
96
105
114
125
1320
146
1512
165
1721
1817
1919
2013
2111
228
239
2411
258
2614
2710
2821
296
3010
316
3218
3316
3410
359
3619
3716
3816
396
4015
4113
427
4317
447
459
463
4719
4812
497
80.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.4875
totalSentences80
uniqueOpeners39
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences54
matches
0"Her sharp jaw tightened as"
1"She noted the jagged cut"
2"It was DS Mark Thompson,"
3"He gestured toward the body."
4"She reached for her notepad,"
5"he interrupted, his voice rising"
6"She turned her attention back"
7"She knelt again, carefully lifting"
8"She pocketed the compass and"
9"She noticed a faint trail"
10"she replied, her focus unwavering"
11"They crept toward the corner,"
12"she said, crouching to examine"
13"he warned, his voice low"
ratio0.259
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences54
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into"
1"Her sharp jaw tightened as"
2"A body lay sprawled on"
3"Quinn knelt beside it, her"
4"The victim’s face, pale and"
5"She noted the jagged cut"
6"a voice called from behind"
7"It was DS Mark Thompson,"
8"Quinn straightened, her eyes narrowing."
9"He gestured toward the body."
10"Quinn echoed, her voice low"
11"Thompson shrugged, his expression skeptical."
12"Quinn’s gaze flicked to the"
13"She reached for her notepad,"
14"Thompson suggested, crossing his arms"
15"Quinn shot him a look,"
16"he interrupted, his voice rising"
17"Quinn pointed at the symbols"
18"Thompson frowned, glancing around the"
19"Quinn stood, her mind racing"
ratio0.944
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
80.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She noted the jagged cut across the throat, a deep crimson line that contrasted starkly with the gray of the station floor."
1"She turned her attention back to the body, scanning for anything that might provide a clue."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount12
matches
0"Quinn echoed, her voice low"
1"he interrupted, his voice rising"
2"Quinn stood, her mind racing"
3"Thompson suggested, his voice dropping to a whisper"
4"Quinn confirmed, her heart racing"
5"Thompson added, his voice low"
6"Thompson said, his voice tense"
7"she replied, her focus unwavering"
8"she said, crouching to examine it"
9"Thompson asked, his brow furrowing"
10"Quinn replied, her mind racing"
11"he warned, his voice low"
16.67% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Thompson suggested (suggest)"
1"he interrupted (interrupt)"
2"Thompson suggested (suggest)"
3"Quinn confirmed (confirm)"
4"Thompson added (add)"
5"he warned (warn)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.267
71.3376%