| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 40 | | tagDensity | 0.375 | | leniency | 0.75 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 73.59% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1704 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "quickly" | | 2 | "perfectly" | | 3 | "very" | | 4 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 55.99% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1704 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sentinels" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "sense of" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "throb" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "throbbed" | | 9 | "measured" | | 10 | "echo" | | 11 | "unravel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 130 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 130 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 154 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1717 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 48 | | wordCount | 1396 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.29 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Violet | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Rory | 18 | | Veil | 1 | | Nyx | 11 | | London | 1 | | Grove | 5 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Seer | 2 | | Isolde | 3 | | Fae | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Seer" | | 4 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.855 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 64.77% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 88 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Something between gold and green that made her" | | 1 | "quite match hers" | | 2 | "looked like braided ivy, and her bare fee" |
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| 83.52% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.165 | | wordCount | 1717 | | matches | | 0 | "not shimmering exactly, but thick, as though she were peering through antique glass" | | 1 | "not like a garden or a forest, but green the way a color might smell if colors had scent" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 154 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 57 | | mean | 30.12 | | std | 23.46 | | cv | 0.779 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 49 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 50 | | 4 | 37 | | 5 | 48 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 67 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 67 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 79 | | 17 | 82 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 27 | | 20 | 63 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 40 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 45 | | 29 | 47 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 45 | | 32 | 27 | | 33 | 82 | | 34 | 43 | | 35 | 70 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 32 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 26 | | 40 | 35 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 59 | | 44 | 55 | | 45 | 39 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 57 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 130 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 224 | | matches | | 0 | "were peering" | | 1 | "wasn't imagining" | | 2 | "were choosing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 19 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 17 | | totalSentences | 154 | | ratio | 0.11 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory noticed it first — the silence." | | 1 | "The Heartstone pendant rested against her collarbone, warm — warmer than it should have been this far from any Hel portal." | | 2 | "The air there looked wrong — not shimmering exactly, but thick, as though she were peering through antique glass." | | 3 | "The next — gone." | | 4 | "Massive oaks towered overhead, but their bark was the pale gray-white of birch, and their leaves — she squinted — their leaves were silver." | | 5 | "Wildflowers carpeted every surface that wasn't path or root — bluebells and foxglove and things she had no name for, blossoms with too many petals in colors that sat strangely in her vision." | | 6 | "Rory tore her gaze away from a cluster of spiraling white blooms that had been — she was nearly certain — rotating slowly on their stems." | | 7 | "The air smelled green — not like a garden or a forest, but green the way a color might smell if colors had scent." | | 8 | "And at the center — a pool." | | 9 | "The water — if it was water — was perfectly transparent." | | 10 | "She frowned; the reflection frowned a beat later." | | 11 | "She tilted her head; the reflection followed, sluggish, as if it were choosing to mirror her rather than compelled to." | | 12 | "Her fingers hovered an inch above the surface, and the reflection — her reflection — smiled." | | 13 | "Not a footstep — something lighter." | | 14 | "Her voice carried the same quality as the Grove's singing — felt as much as heard, settling somewhere behind Rory's sternum." | | 15 | "Something shifted in those lavender eyes — recognition, perhaps, or the echo of it." | | 16 | "Her fingers found the cold weight of the Fae blade — moonsilver, slender, the leaf-shaped dagger Isolde herself had sent through intermediaries two weeks ago." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1384 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "great silver-gray waves" |
| | adverbCount | 54 | | adverbRatio | 0.03901734104046243 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010115606936416185 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 154 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 154 | | mean | 11.15 | | std | 8.68 | | cv | 0.778 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 39 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 26 | | 43 | 24 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 27 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 61.26% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.4025974025974026 | | totalSentences | 154 | | uniqueOpeners | 62 | |
| 59.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "Just yielding, as if the" | | 1 | "Just that ambient sourceless glow" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 30 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "She looked down." | | 1 | "She pressed her palm over" | | 2 | "She'd read about the Veil" | | 3 | "She stepped through." | | 4 | "Her breath misted, though the" | | 5 | "It wasn't warm either." | | 6 | "It was nothing." | | 7 | "She turned in a slow" | | 8 | "They moved deeper." | | 9 | "She'd turned left twice and" | | 10 | "She wasn't imagining it." | | 11 | "It sat on the back" | | 12 | "It rose and fell without" | | 13 | "She knelt at its edge." | | 14 | "She could see the bottom," | | 15 | "Her own face stared up" | | 16 | "It lagged by half a" | | 17 | "She frowned; the reflection frowned" | | 18 | "She tilted her head; the" | | 19 | "She hadn't realized she'd been" |
| | ratio | 0.265 | |
| 66.19% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 89 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "The oaks parted like sentinels" | | 1 | "Rory noticed it first —" | | 2 | "This was a silence with" | | 3 | "Nyx murmured, their voice a" | | 4 | "She looked down." | | 5 | "These weren't boulders dragged here" | | 6 | "Something had placed them, long" | | 7 | "Nyx pooled into solidity beside" | | 8 | "Violet light flickered in the" | | 9 | "Rory shifted the strap of" | | 10 | "The Heartstone pendant rested against" | | 11 | "She pressed her palm over" | | 12 | "Rory studied the gap between" | | 13 | "The air there looked wrong" | | 14 | "She'd read about the Veil" | | 15 | "She stepped through." | | 16 | "The change hit her like" | | 17 | "Every nerve fired at once," | | 18 | "The pendant flared hot against" | | 19 | "The next — gone." |
| | ratio | 0.788 | |
| 44.25% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "As if she weighed nothing" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | technicalSentenceCount | 14 | | matches | | 0 | "Moss-covered monoliths jutted from the earth in a rough semicircle, weathered into shapes that could almost pass for natural rock formations." | | 1 | "The air there looked wrong — not shimmering exactly, but thick, as though she were peering through antique glass." | | 2 | "Every nerve fired at once, a full-body static charge that prickled across her scalp and down her arms." | | 3 | "The Grove opened before them like the interior of a cathedral designed by something that had never seen a cathedral but understood the concept of reverence." | | 4 | "Wildflowers carpeted every surface that wasn't path or root — bluebells and foxglove and things she had no name for, blossoms with too many petals in colors tha…" | | 5 | "Rory tore her gaze away from a cluster of spiraling white blooms that had been — she was nearly certain — rotating slowly on their stems." | | 6 | "The path, such as it was, wound between the pale oaks in a pattern that felt deliberate without being straight." | | 7 | "The oaks drew back, their roots arching above the ground in great silver-gray waves that formed natural archways." | | 8 | "The wildflowers here grew waist-high, a dense meadow of impossible color that swayed in unison, all leaning toward the center as if drawn by a magnet." | | 9 | "No larger than a dining table, its surface so still it reflected the silver canopy above with a fidelity that bordered on unsettling." | | 10 | "She tilted her head; the reflection followed, sluggish, as if it were choosing to mirror her rather than compelled to." | | 11 | "Silver hair fell to her waist, catching the Grove's light and holding it." | | 12 | "Pale lavender eyes regarded them with the calm, measured patience of someone who had been waiting for a very long time and had not found the wait especially inc…" | | 13 | "She wore a dress the color of storm clouds, belted with something that looked like braided ivy, and her bare feet rested on the carpet of wildflowers without pr…" |
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| 58.33% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx pooled, their form coalescing from the dim spaces beneath the canopy" | | 1 | "Nyx slipped, their shadow-form rippling once before solidifying" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx warned (warn)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 40 | | tagDensity | 0.175 | | leniency | 0.35 | | rawRatio | 0.286 | | effectiveRatio | 0.1 | |